Penname: Indianprincess28 [Real name: Shannon
Member Since: 17 Mar 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 29 year old mother of two. A wife of a united states solider. I work and go to school for my masters drgree. We move around all over the country because my husband is in the Army. I love the world of fanfiction and anything to do with vampires. I write Poetry and have even had some of it published.


Lame pick up lines from cheesy men and how to get away from them. 


Man: Where have you been all my life?




Woman: Hiding from you.



Man: Haven't I seen you someplace before?




Woman: Yes, that's why I don't go there anymore.



Man: Is this seat empty?




Woman: Yes, and this one will be if you sit down.



Man: Your place or mine?




Woman: Both. You go to yours, and I'll go to mine.



Man: So, what do you do for a living?




Woman: I'm a female impersonator.



Man: Hey baby, what's your sign?




Woman: Do not enter.



Man: How do you like your eggs in the morning?




Woman: Unfertilized.



Man: Your body is like a temple.




Woman: Sorry, there are no services today.



Man: I would go to the end of the world for you.




Woman: But would you stay there?



Man : If I could see you naked, I'd die happy.




Woman: If I saw you naked, I'd probably die laughing.



Man: Hey Baby Whats up?


Woman: You're time



Man: That dress would look great on my floor in the morning.


Woman: I didn't know you were a cross dresser...thanks for clearing that up.




Pick up lines from women 



Woman: My friends have a bet going and i wanted to see who was right...maybe you can help me? She says boxers. She says briefs, but i think you go comando!


Man: stunded in to silence because he has never had a woman use a good pick up line before so he shows that he is indeed not wearing anything and offers to buy her a drink.


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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624982
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

I am so freakin happy that I found this story again. I was so pissed when it was taken off of FFN. I am now all caught up and I can't wait til you post the next chapter. I have a feeling that it is Carlisle. Why can't Rose cut his brakes while he is at the hospital or something. Gad I hate him! He is such an ass. I liked the chapter with Esme's garden and her explanation. If she had something to kill Carlisle or escape I would like to think that she would have used it by then. Please post again soon. I will let my friends know where they can find this story.



Author's Response:

Glad you found me and still like the story.  It's come a ways since last summer.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh god I loved this chapter! I have been reading for a couple of days now when I get the chance. I have to tell you that although it is sad about the abuse Bella had to endure, I am so happy that she has her dad,brother Em, Edward and most of all Alice among the rest in her corner. Please update soon. I truly love this story.

IP28

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter. Poor Jasper and his queasy stomach. Edward seems to be a little better about holding down dinner. Maybe Jasper should have asked the dads and Alice before taco night. This was great. I have to say that i am so loving this story. It's so hard to not badger you about updates. I just can't wait til the next.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Edward. I can understand how his ego would take a hit. In her defence Bella has been through hell with the mother she had and her step father trying to...well you know. I feel bad for Bella because she didn't know how to kiss. I sure hope they can both get it right next time. Please post again soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 67388
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh it was so sad to hear about Angel. I am glad that Jessie found her and was able to save her. I do wish that you could do a chapter or an outtake about when Angel's so called father arriving. I would love to know what happens. Please update soon.

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Please say green eyes. Everyone else always gives brown eyes. Please update soon. I am not sure how long it will take me to get internet hooked up in my place after i move in. I loved this chapter....question...Are Rose and Emmett going to try for a baby soon? Will Esme and Alice join the club at being a half breed like Bella and Rose?

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995715
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Easy.....Jacob and James are going to make an appearance and go after Bella. I sure hope that the girls beat the shit out of them before anything happens to Bella. Loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it - thank you so much

xoxo

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

OH MY GOD! She called him Mr. Cullen instead of Mr. Masen. WTF! Did she forget that she was in 1918 and he was still the human son of Elizabeth and Edward Masen Sr. and not the vampire son of Esme and Dr. Carlisle Cullen? Oh wow I can't wait to see what he says to her Freudian slip. She has already made a couple of comments and slipped up a few times. I sure hope that she can fix this. Bella is kind of an idiot when you think about it. *huffs and shakes head* I sure hope that it isn't for some stupid reasoning like ' if i save him now in the past  and he stays human and i am already here then we can be together.' That's crap! She was born in the future so what happens when she saves Edward and she disappears? Or better yet she is forced back to the future and there is no Edward to meet because she saved him in the past? I really hope and pray that she would not be that stupid. If she is then she is royally screwed and Alice needs to show up and beat her human ass lol. Great chapter can't wait til the next update.



Author's Response:

Bella did have a little slip of the tongue there, didn't she? Oh, Bella! *shaking head* What are you going to do now? Lol!

Your questions about Bella's plan are valid... and she is thinking about that... she'll be trying to explain herself a little better in the next few chapters, so hopefully even if you don't agree with her, you'll understand where she's coming from. :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh I loved it! I also loved the fact that you didn't give one of them the name Renesme, I hate that stupid name. I hope that Edward can work through his issues or he will screw everything up. Can't wait til the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading i try not to use the same baby names in my stories. i like to ever keep them changing! look for edward to make big improvements on his issues they have only started improve.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Tanya is such a bitch! I sure hope that she is ripped limb from limb. Great chapter, I can't wait til the next!

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

God I love this chapter! I only wish that Tanya could be torn limb from limb for how she treated Bella and disregarded Edward's feelings about mating. I hate that she made Bella feel so small and unimportant. I can't wait for you to update again. I love all of your stories so much. I was frustrated for about a week with this site. I couldn't read any of your stories or the new chapters. It was killing me! I wanted to throw my computer out the window. Thank god for who ever fixed the problem i had before. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

great chapter. I was so happy when i  saw you had a new chapter up. I hope that Bella gets pregnant again before she is changed, a boy would be nice to add to the family.



Author's Response:

Keep reading you just might get your wish! Thank you for your reviews!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Although sad I have to say that when i stumbled on to this story and of what I have read I love it! I am so glad that you are doing this from Edward's point of view. Too many stories of the ff world are told through the eyes of Bella. You are doing a wonderful job and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen next and more importantly how the Cullen family will deal Edward falling for a sick Bella. Will Rose accept Bella more freely becuase of her illness? We all know how Alice nad Emmett will react! How will Esme feel knowing that Edward has now found love? So many emotions......How will Jasper handle it all? Please update it soon, I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

I've come to terms with the fact that I write well in a man's POV. lol. Out of my nine stories, only one was written from Bella's POV. Hmm.. what does that say about me? I don't think I want to analyze that right now. ;)

All your questions will be answered as more chapters are posted. There are also outtakes that will help answer them. I can post them if you like.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am all caught up now! I don't know who would point out unusual behavior of Edward, but this is ff. This is your story. Don't let anyone make you feel bad or wrong for how you write your chapters. I loved it! Plus who is to say that SM was not thinking something along the same lines? She left the smut out of her books and kept it rated PG13. I think it is possible. He only made out with Tanya. Its not like he screwed her. Great job and I look forward to the coming chapters!

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is getting so damn good! I can't wait til you post more. I am loving this story. Please update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

Glad to see the new chapter. Man that was hot! I loved it......and now i need to drag my husband to the bedroom. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job guys!



Author's Response:

Delighted to hear our work is...inspirational! lol   No better compliment to be had. :D 

Thanks for reading and letting us know how it affected ya!!!   *mwha*

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh how sad. I have tears rolling down my face right now. I understand how Bella could think that and Edward is an ass for not telling her. I know he was lonely and wanted Emma to have her mother but damn. He screwed up everything he could have had with Bella all because he didn't talk to his family who could have given him an objective opinion. I sure hope that Edward can pull his head out of his ass and realize that Kate does not deserve another chance. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

YES! Emma was found and Kate is in jail. I hope that Edward and Bella can show Emma through love and encouragement that Kate was wrong and they love her. Great chapter once again. Please post again soon.

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32991
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh i love this story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was such a great chapter. I wish Bella could understand that Edward loves her, but I guess that will take her awhile? Please update again soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. I am a little worried about Charlie what with James, Victoria and who i am guessing is Laurent? I sure hope that they do not go after him to get to the wolves. I am also worried about Bella. I sure hope that she can someday find that she can be normal like everyone else. I love how Edward is so patient and loving with her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh how sad. Poor Bella. Damn Edward for breaking every ounce of trust that Bella had in him. I hope he can some how fix what he did. Please post again soon. Great chapter as always.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OH MY GOD! James! I know it has to be James! I am glad that Bella came out of the darkness, but i hope that Bella and Edward are alright when they get to the farm. I have a bad feeling that James is going to take Bella from Edward. Please post again soon, I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

Creep by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Bella has no one, no family, no friends, she feels worthless and when the one person who had ever shown her kindness humiliates her it's the final straw. But what has Edward Cullen, another loner, got to offer her and will she be willing to accept?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3515 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 14 May 2010
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say that even for a short one shot it was wonderful. I only wish you made a second chapter so i could know what Edward wanted to do to Tanya. LOL. I have gotta admit i am loving dark Edward and Bella. I only wish there was more of it to read :( Oh well, hopefully you will update another story soon. Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing - i think i will add a second chapter at some point regarding Edward's plans for Tanya. Glad you enjoyed it.

Chrissie x

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

"If your a bird I'm a bird." The Notebook. Great chapter by the way. Can't wait til the next update.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

God i am so happy that the story is now all caught up to the prologue. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update again soon. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts knowing that the kind, beautiful, sweet Bella found his son in Seattle and he was not returned because of Victoria's drug problem. I am on pins and needles.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Oh i can't wait! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.

On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well. 


Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!

~Shel~


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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.

"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."

Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face. 

"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"

"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."

The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.    

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I sure hope that Bella can at least do joint custody or something with Edward. Victoria needs to be killed slowly and perferabily in a lot of pain. I know that Bella and Edward will end up together down the road...I just hope that it happens soon. Please update again soon....I am dieing here to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

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Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Well well well. I am glad that Esme took control of Emmett and i can't wait for Edward's reaction. Please update again soon. I am dieing here!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i found this story last night and i love it please update soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love that you update almost everyday. I sure hope that Edward can get his head out of his butt long enough to realize that Bella is a lady and has never been teased or treated other then such. I am so glad that Carmen was there to help him understand that Bella heard him making fun of her. I think that if it was not for Carmen, Edward and Emmett would be in a whole lot of trouble. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was so cute. The ending was just right. I loved how Alice gave Bella great insight and advice to her little Edward Problem. I sure hope they can fix it soon. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It may not have been pretty, but it was an honest living for her. It sucks that she didn't take Emmett up on his offer, but at least Alice is now involved. I love this story and the almost everyday updates. Please post again soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh poor Rosalie. I truly feel bad for her. Alice and Bella i am sure would at least be cordial to Rose. They may be good girls, but they do chores, ride horses and seem to be more down to earth then what Rose thinks. It seems like she has them built up to impossible standards in her mind. And while she is being noble in wanting to tell Emmett all about the danger coming his way, she may just have to bite the bullet and approach him with the girls present. Great chapter! I loved it. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

OK now i am in tears. That was so sweet of Jasper. I understand why Alice did what she did. I am sure that any one of us would do the same thing for a child. Great chapter. Please update again soon!

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129699
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have already read this story on ffnet. This story alone drew me to all of your others on ffnet and here. Out of all of them though this one is my fave. I just had to write a review on here now that you are posting it on here. I may just read it all over again. Love it! I can't wait for a few of your updates on a couple of your other stories.

IP28



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much :)

Isabella Swan by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12282
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2010 Updated: 08 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really sad, yet a great beginning. I can not wait to see what you have next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I hope you stick with this. =)

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nails, you have done it again. This story is AMAZING! I can not wait to read the next chapter. *Bouncing in my seat and clapping my hands* Please update again soon.