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Obsessed fan and lover of all things Twilight (but aren't we ALL?) LOL
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
This story is twisted... perverse.
I like it.
*grins*
You two have very interesting imaginations....
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Oh thank God Alice is here! Is she Edward's biological sister in this fic?
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
GAH! Poor Felix. he seems to be letting Bella's situation get to him. i wonder if he ever thought about the families of the girls that were brought to Aro's compound before. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
Could Edward be watching her? Could that be their little "electric" spark they always seem to have?
Either that or it's Aro and .... uh ohhhhh.
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
Happy anniversary TSO.
Chapter was great. i'm very interested to see what's involved in the "ceremony". Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Your imaginations are... interesting. Guess I should have known after reading TTS huh? LOL.
I think group counselling might not be a bad idea. That was warped.
Question for you. Why was Edward allowed to escort her to the ceremony?
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
GAH! Father Aro is psycotic! Bleh, what a pervert!
Is it a bit depraved that I love this little fic so much?
LOL
Author's Response:
We love to hate him.. don't we.. ??? Thanks for the review.. We love that you are enjoying our twisted tale of woe.. hahaha..
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Hmmmm, perhaps that Charlie should give up looking for his little girl because it will only get her hurt or killed if he doesn't (which he won't do).
Just a guess. Poor Felix. He did some horrible things, I hope he finds some redemption and happiness in this fic.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will
LOVE that Edward is venturing out. I wonder if he'll see one of Charlie's flyers?
Ohhhh... can't wait for teh next update. Father Aro is creeeepy in this one. And Edward is going to be enraged when he figures out what has been going on.
Great chapter!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Oh silly Bella trying to escape! What was she thinking? If it was that easy to get out everyone would be jumping the fence!
Phil is creeptastic. I love how sinister he is. What a jerk, LOL!
I also wonder why Edward has been MIA since his little trip out of the compound? Hmmmmm. That strikes me as very, very suspicious. Can't wait to see what happened when he was out there!
Until next week ladies...
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Oh God. Poor Carlisle. My heart broke for him. I am still wondering what happened when Edward ventured outside of the confines of that place....
And ewwwww. Alice is pregnant with Aro's spawn. Double ewwwwwwwwww. Edward is Aro's spawn. Bleh.
Well, now that I'm finished whining like a 15 year old..... :-)
Your grammar was actullay really good in this chapter! So three cheers for you and thanks for getting it out to us today instead of waiting.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Gah. You guys are seriously killing me with your cliffies and general effed-up VO debauchery!
I knew Edward would find a flyer. I knew that Aro would make Elizabeth suffer for her behaviour and I knew he would try to prove his power to every person in Carlisle's family (especially Edward).
But this is keeping me on pins and needles. Great work. RL is a pain in the arse... sorry to hear that you guys are so bogged down. Hope things lighten up for you soon.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
UGH, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh! What a sick bastard he is.
I hope it's Edward or Carlisle on the other side of that door. Poor Bella.
I also hope that by the end of this fic Aro gets a taste of his own medicine. Death is too simple and easy for him... ugh.
And his camera... eeeeeewwwwwwwwwww. Nuff said about that.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Gah. C'mon Charlie. Get r done.
Thanks for leaving us on the edge of our seats.... again.
Eagerly awaiting the next
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Lovely chapter. It's horrible that they're in such pain, and the dried blood is gross... but I'm glad they're together. Hopefully that light is help...
Happy Holidays to you! Thank you for the lovely gift...
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Next week? I certainly hope so! I got 13 (yes 13) alerts this morning in my inbox about this update! LOL! Even the server is excited that you're back.
So now, the shit hits the fan. Let's see what/who comes out of this alive, shall we? Oh, and can we please get rid of Alice's spawn baby? EEwwwwwwww.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515106
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
It was great! i'm so glad you updated, I just checked not even half an hour ago, and then I got a hunch to check again and ... there it was!!!
I love that Carlisle wants to take care of James himself. I really hope Jake looks the pther way with this one.
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
LOVE to see that James is getting what he deserves. You said you wanted to write the long AN at the end of this chapter because you were still happy... does that mean bad news for our fave couple then in the next?
I love the fact that you're opening a publishing house! What a huge undertaking! I look forward to learning more about it...
Author's Response:
nahh no way wouldn't do it to you.. just sad it is over... 18 months is a long time to be writing a story...
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Oh thank GOD!
*wipes brow*
Very happily awaiting the ending now! you guys did a waonderful job with this one. It's probably one of (if not the most) extreme fanfic I've read, but I love(d) it!
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625310
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
OK, I literally gagged on my drink with this one. Charlie is a sick bastard and James (as always) is that but whole lot of creepy added to it too.
Edward seems good for her. I'm crossing my fingers that he's not like his father.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Ooooo! I LOVE protective Edward! I love that he kicked Jame's ass too. Hopefully he gets to have a go at Charlie and Carlisle before this fic is over.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Awww, that was cute! I'm glad they're all therapy. Would love to hear what the 2 year break was like for Edward too.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Contest Nomination
LOL! I love that you would like for us to tell you just HOW fucked up this fic was! Bahahahaha!
In all seriousness it was great. Will you/ are you writing more?
Best of luck in all your categories!
~Hitchy
Author's Response:
I heard it enough while I was writing TPW from the "haters" so why not hear it from the "lovers" now? :)
Edward is the star quarterback, Bella is the coach's daughter. Falling in love can be bittersweet, but what happens when tragedy tears them apart and fate throws them back together years later?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146742 Read Count: 17966
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I like the tension in this fic and am really enjoying the fact that you changed their physical descriptions. Edward and Bella's romance would be the same no matter what they looked like. And it's refreshing to read about small physical differences.
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
They're cute! I hope Edward isn't scared off by Charlie, but I have a feeling he's going to be a big roadblock.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
That kiss was hot! And sweet, and hot again! Loved that. They don't say much to each other, now do they? Hmmm. Hopefully they'll talk at lunch tomorrow.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Finally boyfirend and girlfriend. I would be happy if there were no tragedy at all to break these two apart. But I'm absolutely positive there will be so... off I go to read some more.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
NO PROTECTION?! Damn it. Not fair. She's going to get pregnant and then everything will go to hell.
Crap.
The lovin was hot, but I couldn't enjoy it without the protection... *pouts*
World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately. Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front. How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad? Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?
Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Savoring Every Moment
Oh! I hope he makes it back to her! Please don't kill him off... I don't think I'll be able to take it!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Secretive Provisions
replying more to your comment than the chapter (which was beautiful BTW)
Your writing is really good. It's not choc full of vulgarity or profanity, but it's witty and sweet and interesting. I read FDKK as well, just finished it actually, and thoroughly enjoyed that.
Cheers to you, and keep it up! I love what you're doing!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations
Loved this chapter. |These two are good seperately, but GREAT together.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start
OMG, you made me cry with that one! "Dada," ---- and I turned into a babbling mess!
Lovely! I can't wait for 26 and the Epi!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together
I hope we get to see them in the future during the epi. I would love to know whether or not A/J and E/R had kids
That was a very sweet little chapter.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
That was beautiful... and I'm crying! I started to bawl when you spoke of Esme dying, and then continued until the end. Thanks so much for the lovely story!
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752925
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment
I love the way you wrote Bella's reaction here... very well described. I could almost feel it.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out
Hmmmm, trevor is a nice kink in the story. edward needs a healthy dose of competition. bu let me guess, is he an attending? It would fit so well.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel
SWAT stuff was great! You write Edward really well. Just enough roughness to man up all of his sweetness.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I'm halfway with the people that think she's overreacting and the other halfway is thinking she's right. but there's also that tiny bit that hates/loves to watch them suffer!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps
fingers are crossed for these two... time for Edward and Bella to get a few things right
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection
GAH! So sweet! I loved it! More of that coming I hope!
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373386
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
I'm making a guess here, just a stab in the dark. Is Edward "Tony"? too cute if that's the truth. I can't wait to see how he explains his philandering ways to her if he is...
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
Gah, I think I haave a cavity after that, it was so sweet! I loved it though. King Charlie's reactions were hilarious!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
Well, well, I wonder what Lady Denali has in store? Whatever it is I certainly hope Bella stays safe and she earns her own beheading! OOooo, may be Edward could do it... he did behead a redhead in Eclipse! LOL
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
Oh MY GOD, She's got to be pregnant, and he's leaving her alone on Tanya's last night in the house!!! This is NOT good!
Tell Edward to go back!
*bites nails witing for next update*
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath
I'm so glad she's pregnant! I hope that whatever happens or whoever tries to hurt them doesn't harm the baby.
And I'm glad ou mentioned something about having to abstain from sex when she is sufficiently pregnant. They did believe in that back in the day (oh, if only they knew!)
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
I had a feeling that the runours would get started anyway. I wonder who Tanya has on the inside now? How else would she be able to sread the rumours?
Very interesting. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
Oh yeah, that's more like it! I'd really love to see bella be the one to catch her, but I seriously need Edward to behead this redhead too.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises
How sweet! I hope those two are around when the "you know what" hits the fan, because I'd love to see Jacob kick some royal butt after someone tries to harm his sister!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown
Girls - Emeline, Ellyn, Amelia, Ayleth, Reina, Catalina
Boys - Rowan, Bryce, Tristan
Ooooh! I love picking baby names! The first 4 girls names are English, the last two are Spanish (Reina means queen... something to think about!)
The first two boys names are English and the last is Spanish.
Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next update! Will you be usung our name suggestions for Alice's baby too?
What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?
NC-17 All Human/OOC
Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I LOVE that description of Carlisle! He sounds H-O-T!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
Wow, talk about sexual tension! you sure know how to write it my dear! Whew! I need a glass of cold water myself!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
“Yeah, maybe next time you won’t get performance anxiety. Good night, Carlisle.”
OMG that was the best cock-blocking line EVER! Love it!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bliss
Ummmm, I need a cold shower after that one! I'm an enormous Daddy C fan myself. I think he's just as hot as Edward's character actually. Well done!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Busted
BUSTED! very appropriate title! I wonder if it was Charlie or Esme... hmmmm?
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revelations
Wow, the barrier free shower sex was hot! I wonder if either of them thought about STD's though...
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Anticipation
You're trying to kill me with this fic aren't you? Shower sex, carpet sex, closet sex...
And the list goes on and on and on!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
I'm actually really rooting for Bella to end up with carlisle in this one. That's a first! Well done!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Awww, they're so cute! I hope it works out somehow.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995735
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
You are cruel to leave us hanging with that! Gah!
Author's Response:
sorry!!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
Gah! I can't believe you left it there. I'm waiting on baited breath for next week. Saturday can't come quickly enough!
I hope that everything will work out for Rosalie, she has to be pregnant right? If those two sick f*ckers do anything to jeapordize that Emmett would kill them. Well, maybe he should anyway....
Great chapter. See you next week.
Author's Response:
not too long to wait now - thanks for your review :)
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I thought you got the action and suspense just right. I loved the way that you had the girls be the strong ones, and not the men completely coming to their rescue.
Your hard work paid off!
Well done! *pats PLU on the back*
On to the next...
Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17
Banner by rpattz1990
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159083
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Hmmmm, part of me does not like that Alice's baby is Edward's. I don't know why, but it just feels wrong.
Other than that, it was a good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men. Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position. Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?
Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series. Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway
I like it! Very different to think of them in the racing world. I actually really like that you jumped forward quite a bit with time too. it helps advance things pretty quickly.
Off to read next one.
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections
Uh OH, they were outside... did stalkerazzi get a hold of that moment on film?
They're so cute though! And I LOVE that you're writing Jake as kind of a jerk. It's about time someone did that!
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls
"But, I love her..."
fave line form this chapter! Such a mature statement, said with immature grounds... very sweet
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole
"Let's put it this way, Aro. Either I fly to the next race, or you find another driver. I. Am. Not. Leaving. Her. Period."
"In that moment, another large chunk of the wall that had built up around her heart to protect it crumbled into rubble, leaving a large Edward shaped space, just waiting for him to choose to walk through."
Are you planning to pay my dentist bill ofor the cavity I just got form all that sweetenss? LOL!
Very cute. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings
Great chapter, I like the Bella was sort of the one to make the first move... it's usually Edward.
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
Awwww! TOO cute! I am seriously going to need to see a dentist after I`m done reading this fic!
Another great chapter!
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
*rinses...*
*burshes again*
*rinses with mouthwash*
GAH! Cavity number 5 or something form this fic! So sweet! I love it! These two are going to be somehitng hot AND soulful when they finaly hit their stride physically. And I look forward to every last word of it!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries
Once again, so sweet! I absolutely love this fic! Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor
OK, so since she's strawberry blonde I'm going to guess that it's Tanya. I hope they're not involved. Sister maybe... or an ex? Good friend, but lesbian (she looked Bella over and said Edward had good taste).
Can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, what't the title of your Original fiction piece?
Author's Response:
My original fiction piece is The Children of Creation. It hasn't posted yet, but will on the 15th or 16th. Thanks for asking. As far as Tanya's relation to Edward, check out the chapter called Mr Cullen's Neighborhood for a reminder. It was mentioned in passing...;)
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus
Poor Bella, so shy!
I'm certain compatability won't be a problem for these two but I'd be interested in seeing whether or not she loosens up a bit.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event
Awww. These two are so sweet. I'm happy for them. I hope she talks to him about her past though. He needs to know what a jerk Jake was to her and how he demeaned her. If she doesn't tell him about it edward won't know what to avoid... and that will be problamatic, I'm sure.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers
I actually like this Tanya, she seems like a riot!
Sorry to hear about your RL troubles. I'm really glad you were able to keep writing, but if you had to take a break I don't think anyone would blame you. You've been keeping us entertained for so long, you deserve a little time to yourself!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation
BAHAHAHAHA! Bella the ball buster! I love it!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards
Great chapter. That was worth the wait. Have fun with your family!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal
:-) They're so cute! I can't believe you cranked out 5 chapters this week! That's crazy woman! I bow down to you. The chapters I write for my fic are usually about double the size of these, but I am strictly limited to one a week. Haven't been able to push out more than that.
Can't wait for the ones to come. I love this little fic and have rec'd the shit out of it for you.
Until next time...
H
Author's Response:
Awe well thanks for the reccing! Normally I only get out about one or two chapters a week, but this week I had a lot of backup to get out since my finger was injured and I couldn't type for a week. Not only did I do five chapters of this, I also did a 5,000 word entry for All Hallows Eve Contest and 1,000 words for my original story. It must be true...I don't write cause I want to...I write cause I need to! LOL
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge
Oi. Two chapters in one day and all that love and angst. I loved every letter of it. I'll be sad when this fic comes to an end. These two are adorable.
I can't wait until James gets his though. What a *insert expletive of your choice here*!
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255079
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Loved the chapter. I felt Bella's humiliation and totally got why Edward had to do what he did. It was a very emotional moment for me when Bella called 'RED'. I'm so glad that she did. And her discipline worked out for the best - she got it.
BTW here's the FULL EP playlist, courtesy of one of my twitter pals @VanessaInPinks http://lamiabellaragazza.tumblr.com/post/10338377935/full-ep-playlist
Enjoy!
Hitchy (@Hitchy_)
Author's Response:
Oh Thank You..Thank You...Thank You...for the playlist ...your the best...
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Well, I started readng this a few days ago and I am so glad that I found your fic. I read People Like Us and followed her rec... it was definitely worth it! You're doing a great job here!
I also rec'd the fic to a friend... she's starting this weekend so we can talk about all the naughty bits when our hubbies are not around, LOL!
Can't wait for your next update. No worries about the holidays. We're all busy...
~Hitchy
Author's Response:
Who is your friend,, just so I can give a shout out ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Thanks for a great chapter! Happy Holidays to you!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
I loved the tension in this chapter. I can't believe that people were telling yo that you had too much smut. I have actually been singing your praises to others for the fact that you've managed to create a wonderful Domward and subella fic WITHOUT overdoing the smut. You have a plot amd sotyline that you stick to, in addition to their romance and lust. You're doing a wonderful job, don;t slow your roll, or quicken your pace, juts let it happen as it has been because it's been wonderful. If others don't like it, they should write a fic of their own and leave you to yours.
Cheers to you. Glad to hear that you're feeling better!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the well wishes ....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
I like that Edward is getting to know about Bella's past and observing her relationships with her family and friends. It can only help Bella for him to know more about this side of her.
I would love to see Bella's limits and find out what else she has relaxed a bit about. I also wouldn't mind a refresher on Edward's to see where they both stand in the give and take of things.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Yeah! smutty goodness is back! LOL!
I'm not sure about Irena. She might have an agenda...
I think Edward reacted appropriately to Bella's peen kiss. She 'works for him' and if he didn't ask her to do it, she shouldn't.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
She does work for him...lol...I never thought of it like that...lol...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml
Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”
I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”
His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”
“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face.
“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”
“Yes Sir”
“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.
“Tyler, how is the night going?”
“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”
Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”
Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
i liked this one too... although I think Edward should have made sure that Jessica was somehow n=made accountable for her actions against Bella.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
OK, so the chapter was great. What is the significance of the bells? Did you mention that already? If so, I missed it. I should probably just google it...
My questions for your interview (which I really, really hope you do, by the way):
For Jane: Why did you choose this particular style of submission (all day, every day)? What are the benefits for you?
For Aro: If you had one piece of advice to give to Bella, specifically for her as Edward's submissive, what would it be?
Thanks again for a great chapter!
(By the way, I love Jane. I'd love to see more of her in this fic)
Author's Response:
The bells are slave bells. They go back to Gorean Legends. Every slave on gor wore bells. The bells varied by the type of slave you were and your rank (house slave, field slave, sex slave...ect) they also varied by your ranking within that group. Submissive’s took that legend and they wear bells as an outward sign to others of their submissive nature. They can be worn in a bracelet, necklace on clamps...but most commonly in the form of an anklet. It is very common for a Dom to give his sub bells to wear. Not everyone who sees the bells will know of their meaning, but there are some who will, and now you are one of them. And they say that FF is a mindless hobby with no educational value....lol....
I got your question, thank you...and I have a question for you. Is it weird to actually like Jane in a fic?
Thanks for reading ... I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Loved it all! Can't wait for your next.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment. I have a teaser for you....lml
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Oooo. A collar and a leash, huh? SOmehting tells me that it might not be for Seth, lol!
Great chapter. nice to see the calm before the proverbial storm. These two need some down time.
Excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading ..I have this weeks teaser for you...
“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.
Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”
At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”
Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”
Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”
Why?
“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”
“What is it?”
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Lovely chapter. It's nice to hear them talk about finances and other issues that can really trow a relationship for a loop if they're left to fester and aren't addressed.
Hope you have a lovely weekend too!
Author's Response:
Thanks and I sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you...lml
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
You asked me a question in your review reply about whether or not it was odd to like Jane in a fanfic. It is for me. This is the first likable Jane I have come across. She is magnificent. The rest have been completely unlikable - for many predictable reasons.
I liked the chapter, but Bella's foreboding nightmare concerns me (which I'm sure you're glad of!)
More questions for Aro and Jane? Hmmmmm.
For Jane: If you could give Aro one piece of advice (to him as your Master) what would it be?
Fro Aro: Why are you so opposed to changing the sign in rules at the club? We know what Edward thinks... but I want to hear your reasons from you.
Author's Response:
glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.
“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.
“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”
Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”
She shrugged “Someone had too”
I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.
The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Wow thia was a loaded chapter. Lots to digest.
Caning? Are you really going there? That will be such an interesting process to watch. I am really curioous to see how Edward plans to handle it.
And Paul... He made me laugh! Poor Edward and Charlie!
Leah made me mad, though. Bella's been trying to get hold of her and Leah is finding excuses as to why it's not good enough. Bella may have gotten busier, but Leah's going to have to learn to deal with the fact that she is no longer Bella's top priority.
Great chapter! Loved it.
Author's Response:
lol .... am I going with caning ?? hmmm...I guess you will have to wait and see.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I'm with Edward. I hate the son-of-a-bitch too. Ugh. James is disgusting.
So... her family is all feeling really guilty. I guess that's kind of a good thing, even though I feel badly for them. It was Bella's fault for not relying on them more. She might have paid for it with more violence if she had told them and James found out. What a messed up situation to live in.
I can't believe he had the nerve to touch Edward. What a fucking douche.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
So Bella was alone and kind of an outcast, and James still dated her. Boy he sure does know how to pick the vulnerable ones, doesn't he.
I lvoe that Edward is taking the time to learn everything that he can about her. She's such a mystery sometimes. her perception of the world, and most definitely herself, is a bit skewed because of the way she grew up and the abuse she endured. I'm loving Forks. Don't mind if we stay here for a while.
For Alexia Cross and Justin McNear, things are not what they seem. Both were born and raised in hidden, gated communities. A place where time virtually stands still and marriages are arranged by parents before a child’s 18th birthday.
Alexia is destined to be her community’s first spinster. In a last ditch effort, a husband is found. The only complication? He has no idea he has been betrothed. Will his history of dating outsiders help or hinder his relationship with his future wife?
Justin McNear searched outside his church for the woman of his dreams. Returning home after failing, he knows he needs to rectify his life and his faith. Can a woman he’s never met make him whole again?
Will this couple end up mocked by their own faith? Follow Alexia and Justin through the trials and tribulations of finding, falling, and surviving each other's love. It’s never easy saying “I do” to someone you don’t.
Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 1129
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith
I really like your original idea. How often do you update?
Excellent so far. Can't wait to hear what these two have to say or do when they are alone!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith
Wow. not bad for some weddng drama and both of their first times. I'm glad to hear that he was 'pure' for her too. I thought he had slept with someone.
Doing great so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it and reviewing! Next chapter will be up in a few days, I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith
That towel exchange was mortifying! How embarassing! And the mother, asking about oral? I had to bite my lip to keep from laughing out loud.
I actually really like that their religious beliefs encourage them to try for a child right away. It's such a refreshing change from most of the other things I read where most people are trying to do the exact opposite.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
Author's Response:
Thank so much for giving it chance! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story. It's entered in the orginal contest. So when voting begins I hope you remeber it.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith
Well, twins on their wedding night? Hello firtile Myrtle! Yeesh!
Loved the chapter. Can't wait ot see what England, abstaining for a month and pregnancy with twins brings for these two!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you are enjoying this story. Updates will comence once the contest closes. The voting is already under way, if you think it is worthy, please vote for it on the home page. Don't worry this story will be finished one way or the other. I never start anything I won't finish. Thank you again!
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
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Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Waxward & Sexward
Hey, that was groping, not heavy petting! LOL! These two seriously need to relax and go with the flow a bit.
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Alice puts Bella in for their photoshoot and how Edward handles seeing her in it ;-)
Author's Response:
i'm having difficulty concentrating on the next chapter. Hopefully I will finish tonight. RL has kicked my butt for the last 4 days. Thanks for the review!