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The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47778
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Proposition

So he still has not told her what is going on this could back fire on him he needs to trust her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Sanctuary

Them are the kind of Lawyer that give the rest of them a bad name bunch of bottom dwellers

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Change

No way what now poor kids.  Did they get there activities on tape???  Is that there alliby???  I have been enjoying my time as a Velvet's Vixen

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Elphaba

It is never good when anyone dies but sometimes the relif is just to much to feel to bad about it.  Abby even feels that she is in a better place. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Harmony

It is a good thing that he got that out she made her choies

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Adjustments

I went and check that dress out wow that his so hot.  so I figured Bella was going to get hooked on the sleeping pills poor thing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Paroxysm

Oh Fuck no he did not!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Exacerbation

It is a good thing you had the prolouge or I would be throwing flames at your ass.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Realization

Thank goodness they are back on track and talking.  What was it with the girls in Rome with the different colored eyes????  Nice birthday present for Bella nice surprise.



Author's Response:

:)  You would have to be reading Lillie Cullen's A Lesson in Love to know about the girls in Rome with the different colored eyes.  EC Velvet and crew appear in her story as well. 

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Completion

I thought my heart was going to break when Bella was having her break down

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

Wow what an ending to bad you wouldnt let her have a baby I was wishing she would but life is still good and she has all those that love her and she is worthy of them all.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Fuck me control much wow what did Bella get herself into and how will things work out. It would be nice to be controled like that from time to time.  I cant wait to see what happens next.  What is Emmett going to do when he finds out??

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I would like to have me a sexy possessive bastard like Edward there is nothing wrong with it as long as you can still exspress yourself

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bossy to a point is good but wow he is on overdrive.  I cant wait to find out what he is talking to him about  More More More

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Emmett thinks he is the luckest guy in the world. will he find out that his sister didit so she could be with Edward??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Go school girl go.  I would be good not to have notty dreams tonight LOL 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He needs his ass kicked for alowing that skank to sit in her set. great chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I would say that everyone will know that Edward is in love with Bella I dont think he will be able to control his feelings.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yes that was good glad she is ok

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great chapter glad seth found her but i was hoping Edward would of followed a kicked his ass a little just because. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I thought for sure seth was going to get his ass kicked.  Does Bella relise she has Edward wraped around her finger???  So everything is back to normal and she is going back home?  How long can Edward keep himself in check??  Does Charlie have any idea what is going on?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

cave man is good from time to time. have a good time with your hubby.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What Tanya visiting?????  what the FUCK!



Author's Response:

Yup, she's visiting. Oh I wonder what is going to happen??? HMMM....lol. Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What the hell does he expect from her??  I wish she would not of left and wanted to be there when Tanya came no matter how uncomfortable it would make her because she could do a preg test on her own.  She wants Edward.  Please tell me she doesnt get in the car with the kid.



Author's Response:

Edward is madly in love with her. Yes, he has a funny way of showing it. I'm thinking of doing a EPOV next, not sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Please the visit I need to know that the bitch is a lieing and just want to get with Edward.  If she is preggers it is not Edwards?????  Thanks for clearing up the HEA I didnt know what it ment either now you put it up there I feel stupid should of know. LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think Tanya is a nasty skank and should be burried alive.  The chapter was great I love that Belle found the pills when is she going to say something and what about the condums.  Edward is a good guy.  So is Bella pregnut???  Please tell me Tanya is not.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I was so hoping Tanya had something and didnt give it to Edward Thank you.  I was pretty sure Bella was going to be pregers. Shit is going to hit the fan are they going to try to put Edward in jail I hope not.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I had a feeling Emmett would loose his shit.  Did they ever tell Emmett why it was there moms falt???  Hold on to your Ass Edward hope you have some left when Charlie is done with you LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Shot gun wedding  lol.  I think he is going to be caveward tripple I can see Bella needing to put him in his place.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am a forty something women with 5 kids and I am still a daddys gill also.  My favorite line is you can beat me threaten me or hate me.  That pretty much covers it.  OMG what is going on please not the baby.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I was wondering if it was going to be a shotgun wedding LOL.  Renee is very selfish isnt she I love Irina.  Edward what a way to talk to his mother in law to be should be fun around the holidays LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

holly shit what kind of shit is D trying to pull.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That kid need punched in the face for sure I wonder what Edward and Emmett are going to do to him.  Is Tanya behind it????  I am glad he did not get pissed at Bella. 

I am a foster parent also we have adopted 4 boys and we are in the prossess of adopting our little girl.  I am doing respite this week for a 2 1/2 year old little boy that doesnt talk just grunts what fun. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am so happy you are back I missed you.  What is the reason for this kid to say that he was the father who is paying him????  I am thinking it is Renee.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So sad when you find out your friend really isn't your friend. What is the crazy guy up to

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMFG someone hunt and destroy Renee NOW.  What did she do to that poor girl and cant wait to find out how she is going to come out of her shell.  OK so only 2 chapters and I am hooked.  I am needy hurry    Thanks

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please tell me that Rose is not going to cause a bunch of shit?  What did that Bitch Renee tell her she was there for?  Wish everone had freinds like the Cullen's  waiting for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews I finally figured the respond thing out lol. No Rose isn't going to be the cause of a bunch of shit, she has issues that will come out later though that are causing her problems. You'll find out what Renee told Bella in a later chapter I don't want to spoil the surprise ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OH god more quicker is now to soon LOL   Poor Bella what all did that sick bitch Renee do to her???  This is so sad and I cant wait to read more I am so hooked I feel like one of them people that cant look away for a car wreck but I know she will get better RIGHT?????   More More More

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Renee is a sick bitch and I am with Alice but I think I would use her like a speed bump over and over again.  Cant wait for the party I am almost afraid for poor Bella is she going to freak out or are some of the nasty bitches going to get mean with her when they notice Edward paying atention to her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What happened to Rose was she attacked by someone is that why she has changed??  So C &C let Edward into the land of man and how to get out of things LOL.  Lauran is not stable she is wacked in the head.  So Tanya raped Edward is that what happened??  How is Emmett feeling about Edward leaving his party to spend time with Bella??  How sweet poor thing.  I knew something happened sexualy with her thank god it was only be ogled at by a pervert and then her sick fucking mother speed bump that is what I am going to call Renee form now on.  Cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Jake was being a little creap wasnt her.   The three musketers to the resecue how cool.  OMG what is going to happen to this poor girl.  So excited for the puppy unconditional love something she knows nothing about once she figurs it out she will see it is all around her.  More More More

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OH you made my day speed bump(Renee) got what was coming to her and in a parking lot at that. I was starting to worry no I was thinking what the fuck why are they not helping her but AHHHH now it all makes sence that was great.  I am hungy for more more more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I knew thing were going to good to be true.  Phil needs to die with his balls in his mouth.  Please dont kill the puppy   Hurry and get to her guys HURRY HURRY

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You had me doing my happy dance when Edward punch that bastard in the nose and kicked him in the nuts the gut punch was pretty good to.  Thank you  Thank you for not hurting that puppy I dont know if I could get over it.  I wonder how Bella is going to be when she wakes up and will she understand why Emmett held her to get the shot????  More More More I am hungry for this story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It good to see Bella having fun.  Poor emmett he is in the poor me state.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good first day of school hope the rest goes as good as the first but I have a feeling it wont

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OMG did he kiss her oh my how will she react? How will Charlie and Emmett react?  How is this going to make Edward feel for her now because in his intervie he doesnt have them feelings for her ya right????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I thought for sure Emmett was going to have a fit over the kiss.  Alice is priceless she figure with Edward kissing Bella she got free rein with Jasper LOL.  I know this is kind of sick but I cant wait to hear about the abuse Renne did to Bella I think it is so I can HATE Renee more that I already do. So Charlie already has it figured out that Edward is in love with Bella??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That was a wonderful chapter Renee got what she deserved and I think Bella is going to get some of what she deserves Love.  Love Emmett and I cant wait for the father talk should be fun and then Alice reaction should be priceless.  I wonder how Bella will react to Edward wanting to take her out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I cant believe I have missed these updates.  This was a very cute chapter I love how Charlie and Carlisle worked out the game plan poor Jasper I cant wait for the date should be great.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am amazed Alice didnt come across the table at Vicky.  Rose is going to blow a gasket so what happened to her was she attacked????   Bella is so cute so happy Edward ended up holding her hand.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bit his toung LOL poor guy it was a great date and I love the flowers.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor girl Renee is one sick bitch I hope she has a nice big cell mate that works her over regular.  I did like the part were she didnt bit his toung that time LOL.  I cant wait to find out what happened to Rose to make her such a bitch I know it is something bad that is not her falt her and Emmett need to be back together Emmett and Vicky not working out for me. LOL  Please not answering your reviews do not make you a bad writer or if it does I am not sure how much better you could be I think you are wonderful.  Just get us another chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Will Bella be mad if she finds out that it was kind of a set up for Edward to talk to her about going into therapy???   No wonder Rose is such a Bitch trying to hold it all in I like Emmetts explanation about her being mad at him because he was not morning  and in pain like she was just because that is what she chose.  Emmett needs to relize that she did not do it to be mean to him she thought she was protecting him from the pain that pissed her off.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She is healing big step wanting to get to know her dad.  Emmett needs to get over being so mad at Rose and tell Vicky he just wants to be friends.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Please dont leave To The Extreme as a oneshot I need this story to be more so get on it LOL.

Bella told someone off this is great she stuck up for herself she is healling.  Is Jake going to get the shit beat out of him???  I am glad broke it off with Vicky and I am glad he has for givin Rose about the baby.  Bella needs to talk to him I think to help him move forward with Rose.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Therapy is going well for Bella but without the family and friend support she has it would work so well.  She is breaking out of her shell with Edward her home (I love that) and being more assertive with him.  Love Emmett but he needs to get it together and help Rose where is she????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I am so glad that Rose and Emmett are talking I bet that it was vicky that tp the house she is one pissed of girl.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG did not see that coming Tanya and Renee are both crazy must run in the family.  How old was Charlie when he got Renee pregers????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So many years ago and all they would have to do is look up the background and see that he was framed.  Renee is just plain nuts and so is Tanya.  I cant wait for more I love this story and cant believe there is not alot left.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Bella and Edward were getting pretty hot and heavy.  I am glad that Bella now believes that they truly love her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That was a big step she called him dad and know he has to have the sex talk lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Your kidding her grandfather are they good people????  So cool her catching the bigest fish loved it.  Edward is a smart boy he learns well.  So Charlie was going to give her the birds and bees talk LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

Great start sounds like it is going to be a great story cant wait



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Very interesting  I did love the part with Rose getting her butt spanked I have always loved Rose even if it was just to be mad at her for her shoting her mouth off so I enjoyed her getting a spanken for just that.  I cant wait till they meet Bella.  He did not tell Rose how he was feeling about Bella did he????



Author's Response:

I thought that Rose needed an attitude agjustment.. so I went with it..

 

No Edward has not directly told Rose about his feelings for Bella. But she is a smart women and knkows Edward well, so he really doesn't have to say anything.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts

It probly helped that Edward did some stress release for Rose before Bella got there and it didnt hurt that it sounded hot and helped break the tention with Alice giggling.  I cant wait for the weekend and they get some one on one is this when she figures out what is missing in there relationship?????



Author's Response:

See that was my reasoning..... a lot of people didn't get it. At this point I don't think that anyone realizes that something is missing just yet.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

Great history.  Alice is going to have a burning Ass???  Is Bella going to see the punishment?? I cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I can promise Alice will get it. But Edward wont let me say anything else.....  ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

OMG do I want to be spanked now or just watch someone be spanked I am so confused that was good.  I cant wait till they address Bella to find her reaction.  More More More



Author's Response:

I know what you mean to be spanked or not to be spanked......

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

Spank me so Bella is staying in the house now.  Thing should start to get pretty warm in this house wink wink.



Author's Response:

Well Bella stayed the night. It hasn't been determined if she will stay longer yet..... But if Alice has her way I'm sure your right.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

WOW Aro is one sick mother fucker and I think that is the nicest words I cant come up with for him.  Poor Rose she is a very strong women. 

When is due date on baby? and do you know if it boy or girl??



Author's Response:

Yeah I know I have some nasty things to say about Aro too. And the worst things is there are real men out there just like him. Trust me I know.

The baby was due March 15. The doc will induce Monday if it doesn't come before then. The sex is a suprise, but we are guessing a boy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

I would love to hear from you more but I think I prefur the longer chapters.  What a thing for poor Bella to go through and for her to think that she did not have it that bad poor girl all the guilt she packs around with her has to be unbelievable.  I cant wait for the family meeting should be interesting for sure.



Author's Response:

Family meeting will be here soon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

Why would Rose give up some of that fine ass of Edward to share with another women and now considering it with another?   I want to know what she ment by needing a session with Edward???  very interesting story.



Author's Response:

Who said anything about Rosalie wanting to share him with another?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

Yes for sure worth the wait.  I was wondering if Rose was going to pop a cork or not I am glad she was talked down off the leage LOL.  Alice is something else.  I cant wait for more and to see if Rose asks Edward to start dating???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

Alice knows what they need and it is some Bella.  Rose does think alot about herself doesnt she????  What does Bella think about this????



Author's Response:

Well Bella doesn't really know anything that happened in this chapter, because she wasn't there......

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

I think Edward is trying to please all of them and not thinking what he wants is important.  Good that Rose is getting stronger and relizes that she is a Bitch at times.  At least she is exceting Bella in all of there family things even if she thinks that it is to make her not want to be there when Rose just wants Bella to know everything about them.  I hope Bella cooks for them today they need someone who cooks and that is not the only reason that she sould join the family LOL



Author's Response:

Edward always was self sacrifising where Bella is concerned so imagine what it must be like when he loves 3 women..... I think that Rose is going to be a little better with every day. Bella is spending a whole day alone in the Cullen mansion, what shall she do?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Rose is so strong but seems so confused about why things are not going the way she wants them. 



Author's Response:

I think that she is just so use to getting her way with Edward that she doesn't know how to handle it when things go Alice's way. And I agree that Rose is a very strong women. I'm glad that I am able to get this across.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

This is going to be fun how could it not feel like cheeting???  I see if they are all in on it like going on a date they all go.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

I am glad Rose is taking thing well

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

I think the ladys in Edwards life need to get loving when and where they can LOL.  I am suprised at Roses reaction to Bella and Edward dating but I think she really likes the idea deep down inside because she knows Bella is ment for all of them.



Author's Response:

Thanks. You are so right about getting it where they can. I hope that Rosalie will come around, but the way there is sure to be drama packed.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

Ya I think its time for Rose to have her mouth washed out LOL.  I think Bella is liking the idea of a little spanking.  Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks. I have to agree that it might be time to step up the day to day punishments.....

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

I love Alice she is so kind and true to herself.  She just get so excited about thing it kind of drags you in with her lol.  Bella is hooked on Alice too.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

Wow that was an interesting lunch.  If that was the first time Bella got overwhelmbed it sure wont be the last time. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

It is good that Bella is being excepted by the family members.  Bella needs to have more confedence in herself.  I cant wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

WOW that is a different way to live interesting

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

Love the pic thanks so much.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Family Time

Got to love them kids lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Mom

Esme is a very wise women love her.  You have not mess anything up so happy to see your update thanks so much

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315708
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

wow now how is fuckin how????  LOL

Summary:

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Not everyone's life is easy, sometimes it's hard, Bella Swan knows this better than most. She's a broken girl. Her mother has died and her father beats her. Can the new kids save her? Will she let them? read what happens...THIS IS AN 18+ STORY DUE TO SOME OF IT'S CONTENTS.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142425 Read Count: 19249
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2023
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Fateful Day

OMG how much pain can one person go through.  The Cullens will help her????



Author's Response:

a lot, trust me I know...this story is sort of based on my real life.

yes the Cullen's will help her, but you have to read more to find out how.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Best Is Yet To Come

I would love to hear anything and every thing from Edward POV.  That was a very sweet lemon

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

This sounds like it is going to be fun to read

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning

That is funny what a way to meet your boss.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

Holly shit he is going down poor boy LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

I want to know what does he think of Bella????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Junior

I think Edward is protective over her???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Lunch

He called her sweetheart?????  Aro is a creepy dick.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Prove It

So when is he going to call her sweetheart again?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Family Time Part I

Shit that was making me pant LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Family Time Part II

That is sad My grandfather was like that it hurt my heart to see him.  Is Aro the one that was saying shit about Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: You Give Me Something

So does his perents know how he feels about Bella????