Reviews by troberts
Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

So does Jake have a crush on her or just friends??? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'd Rather Be With You

I think he did a pretty good job of telling her he liked her but not how much he really liked her like he loves her.  When they got to his appartment he carried her over the threshold so he is already thinking about marrying her?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Stepping Forward

Rose is a riot lol.  I am glad Bella talk with Jake.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Undisclosed Desires

So is he pissed because she had Jacob take her to see her dad???  Rose is a naughty girl lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I've Got You Under My Skin

Thank goodness they kissed.  Does he know that she is a virgin?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: At Last

That was sweet and steamy.  Angela is cool I hope no one freaks out because she seen them.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Charlie

I am so glad that Charlie was doing better and they had a good visit it is very important to feel some kind of closness even if he doesnt remember who she is he knows he loves his daughter I am glad she is ok with that.  When are they going to tell Esme and Carlisle about the two of them or are they going to get caught???? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Everything

Great dinner so they still have not said that they love each other????  I was worried that you had forgoten us I am so glad you didnt.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Complications and Awkward Conversations

That is true love he is worried about her and her period how sweet.  He thinking about what she will look like when she is preggers rubing her belly????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Element of Surprise

So when is she going to tell him about the pill????   I knew things were going to good for them that some kind of shit was going to happen. James ya I dont like him creepy bastard.



Author's Response:

All in good time :) He is indeed, and he's only going to get creepier.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Bella is a ball buster she is amazing.  About time she figured out what love was.  Is James going to cause more problems or is he done????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes

That was wonderful fluff still cant believe the will power it is taking for them not to go all the way wow.   I wondered when Edward would see the tape he held it together pretty good I think and yes about time for some I love yous.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Emmett

So glad to see you update I have missed these two.  Emmett got to love him.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303550
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMFG I see a lot of nasty things to look forward to cant wait

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Fuck yes I am enjoying in I through my underwere away and just sit on a towel LOL THIS IS FUCK HOT  will be drooling waiting for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

fuck me please lol



Author's Response:

lol, I guess you like it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

time for them

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

No wonder they had to get each other off after there date with Mike and Tyler they wernt that interested.  Edward and Jasper having there own fun interesting  I like the sucking and fucking no mater who is doing who LOL  I am a dirty dirty girl



Author's Response:

lol, I am a dirty girl too!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

fuck for four hell ya



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So are they coming out of the closet or would that be only part way out of the closet because they have boyfriends to OH just call in half and half LOL.  They all fuck like rabbits I like it I want to be a rabbit LOL



Author's Response:

lol, they would be half and half, I guess! BTW, that made me giggle like a school girl. I would love to be a rabbit too as long as I could be a rabbit with one of them *sighs*

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

If it works dont fix it LOL.  Renee needs to be bitch slaped hard many times even if you dont agree with what your child does they are still your child and you should love them no  matter what what counts is them being happy and safe.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

FUCK that is all that comes to mind and I need a cigeretr



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So I fuckin hate Renee and I love Rose and I feel Bellas pain so sad.



Author's Response:

I'm jut going to say ditto:) Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

what is up with Alex????  



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bellas Mom is fucked in the head that is what her problem is.  Glad Esme knows .  What is up with the perv Alex????



Author's Response:

lol, Esme is awesome!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Very understanding I would want them in my corner. 



Author's Response:

Me too

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Renee better wise up and stop being such a baby not getting the attention wah wah.  I think Renee needs a little gang banging and I bet she would like it to invite the church ladys to watch that is not nice sorry.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for that visual!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

At least most of them have came around and Renee kind of has also I would still like to bitch slap her hard.



Author's Response:

Oh, trust me! It's all coming together nicely *chuckles evilly*

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This is what you call a whole lot of fucking going on and we like it.  Shit just throw away my underware LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank goodness Renee came around now I dont have to get a hunting party together to go bet her ass. LOL



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Alex is a creepy bastard that beats his wife someone please knock the FUCKout of him



Author's Response:

Yes, he is.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow I knew Alex was a creepy bastard to bad she didnt hurt him bad.   Kate will be safe and Alex is going to try and get revenge on Bella??????



Author's Response:

I know:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

What the fuck the guy is crazy you dont fuck with Bella



Author's Response:

Iknow!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

How much shit can one person indure.  Alex is dead and kate gets to come home but what cost to Bella?????



Author's Response:

I know:(

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

what a way to meet the parents all beat up



Author's Response:

I know. Not the best first impression to make.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Just when I put new underware on LOL



Author's Response:

lol, maybe I should put a warning up at the beginning of the chaps:) *warning: will cause you to need new panties*

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

They had better sure as FUCK say YES



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

How could they say no it will be an interesting wedding and more interesting honeymoon

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So the cat or should I say cats are out of the bag lol.  Bella is an amazing women.  It is good that everyone feels like they sould protect Bella hope Mike and Tyler dont do anything they will feel bad about.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So the cat or should I say cats are out of the bag lol.  Bella is an amazing women.  It is good that everyone feels like they sould protect Bella hope Mike and Tyler dont do anything they will feel bad about.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Like mother like daughter what ever works for them.  Thing are not boring



Author's Response:

Yep :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Yes I would say that is a very merry xmas lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

so much going on trying to keep up lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

so it is a free for all  sounds like a hell of a good time



Author's Response:

thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

how exciting

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I find it very stimulating LOL

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

sounds very interesting

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated

he is down and dirty and getting his little club going

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That is a very interesting start to a story I cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Sinful Pleasure

He is an evil prick isnt he.  Tanya is a ho nothing new there LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Devil in Disguise

Just blow Mikes brains out sounds good??? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Fallen Angel

Cant Alice see that this needs to go a different way and kill Mike.  I think I want Mike dead LOL

Summary:

3rd Place Winner in the "A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words" contest.

Boy with the Guitar


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1030 Read Count: 328
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Boy with the Guitar

When did he tell her his name????? cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank for reading. He didn't tell her his name. We don't know how/why she knows it.

 

 

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Love Rock N' Roll

OMG cant wait for more.  So Edward just looks young because his actions are not of a 17 year old that is for sure.  Jake is just a prick he wanted her to just take what he gave her and she was to be happy about it.  More More More



Author's Response:

Edward looks 17, but is a little older (old enough to live in upperclassman dorms, but young enough to not be legal to drink...you'll find out next chapter.)  He's more mature than Jake, who is a jerk and will cause a few more problems as the story continues.  Thanks for the review and you'll be getting more soon enough!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Where the Boys Are

Love Rose nothing like a good punch in the face to make things clear LOL  So glad the baby is OK and that Edward is back.  Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Rose cracks me up in this because her and Emmett think the're being sly, but they weren't fooling Bella and Edward.  Next chapter will be interesting with Esme's reaction and Bella's release from the hospital.  Thanks for the review hon!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Serious Talks Ahead

I was almost shocked when some of the comets that Esme said I knew she would come around



Author's Response:

Esme was shocked and did react badly, but she made up for it rather quickly and will continue to.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Thousand Words and the Picture to Go Along with it

love the first heart beat that is so cool and he is such a good guy wanting to be there to suport her all the way even if her dad has a gun LOL



Author's Response:

I was in the room when my sis found out she was having a girl and that sound echoes off the walls and it takes your breath away...its an amazing moment. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jingle Bells

The thing I didnt like about Charlie this time is he had no reaction when she told him that Jake cheeted on her.  I know it is a knee jerk reaction for Carlie he is her dad and loves her he will come around right????



Author's Response:

He knew Jake cheated...that didn't come across as well as i thought.  It's that situation where if she had brought him home he could have pulled him aside and threatened to kill him if he ever hurt Bella again and then they would have been good again if Bella was happy.  Edward and the baby was not the xmas surprise he expected.  He'll come around .

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

nice ride Renee was really cool about it that is funny.



Author's Response:

well it is a lot like the wedding news in the book, Renee was supposed to flip out so Charlie was the good guy, but that didn't happen. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

But why did her blood presure drop because she was run down??  So glad Charlie showed up and maned up.  Love Edward and he is more man than most.



Author's Response:

When women are pregnant, their blood pressure drops as they have more area to pump the blood to and by overexerting herself, it caused her to pass out  because of the drop in pleasure.  Edward is something very  special.  Thanks for the love hon~

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: The Best Revenge is Good Sex

Very cute dress.  Poor Edward it will all be worth it in the end LOL.  My cussin is due in june and she is doing the same sort of thing  a person is afraid to set something down in the wrong spot.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

So happy the baby is here what is up with Jake he is just plain stupid  he is luck Esme is the only one to knock him around alittle go Esme go.



Author's Response:

mama bear in action again!  Jake is gonna get his too but we needed mama and baby to be well first

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions

Edward has balls of steel to stand up to his mother and mother in law what man



Author's Response:

I know...he is a brave man, but if he stood up to Charlie, it isn't a stretch that he'd do it for his girls!  Thanks for the love, its great hearing from you.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Decent Proposal

That is what is call a wonderful exceptance

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Jailbait’s Double Standard

What a great ending to a great story thank you.

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161882
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG what happened to her??????  Why is that fuck head trying to get her to answer that ? when he knows she wont?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Were they sent to help her????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What Happened this is killing me not knowing I am going to cry.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OK so she was raped and her dad the cop did not make her go to the hospital bad dad I know he did not want to up set her but  duh

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor thing riped away from the only safty she feels now what she broke her leg on top of it all.????????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Something has to help because the way thing were being handled with her were not happening. this is kind of a spin on tuff love something has to happen to break down her walls

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

How sad rape victums feel shame and they did nothing wrong stick with her cullens.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She better start eating.  I like the coach wise man?  Love Edward tell Lauran to back off basicly that was good

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow that was not who I was expecting shocker but it is a Newton so he has to be bad LOL.  He is one sick fuck. Now what is going to happen.  Thank goodness she is talking again.  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

it makes my heart hurt now she can begin to heal



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thank god no one is to stand by the sick fuck.  Thank goodness she saved all the evidence to put him away and throw the key away.  It is a good thing her family has grown so much she is going to need them all.



Author's Response:

Yes, she will.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So glad she is talking it is going to take a lot of work from all of them to help her and Charlie because he is a victum also.



Author's Response:

Very true:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Let the healing for all begin. Poor girl thinking people would be mad at her.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OH not she did not just say that to Bella Lauren is going down someone needs to slap that Bitch hard and many times.



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope to god it is Edward behind her.



Author's Response:

Next chap will be up soon:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So much to work through it is going to talk a long time



Author's Response:

Yes, it will.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It is nice that she if finding her voice again thanks to Emmett he will help bring it out LOL



Author's Response:

I think that's what Emmett does  best!

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55117
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research

Sounds like it is going to be a great story cant wait for chapter 2



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This one is my baby, so I'm stoked to see it getting this response already.  This story will be going up at a pretty steady pace so fear not!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster

Love the lemony goodness.  waiting for more



Author's Response:

Glad you loved it, that was the first lemon I ever wrote and when I first posted it I was so nervous but obviously people like my lemons because they keep reading my stuff!  Working on chapter three now.  Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: An Officer and a Gentleman

So was Jess trying to set Edward up with Lauran?  I was so happy that Edward was there for her.  Why didnt he ask her where she wanted to sleep?  I cant wait for next



Author's Response:

No, Jess was just excited to be able to show off her connections to Lauren...these two aren't trouble makers in this one. When you ask about him not asking about where she wanted to sleep, did you mean at the end...becasue when he asked if she was joining him in her room that's what he was doing.  I'm home from work which means more chapters are coming!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Cleaning Up and Baring All

Thanks it is not hard to support a great story.  I love Edward POV very much I cant wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

Awe...*Blushes and toes foot into the ground*  EPOV is a lot of fun to write in this one...

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

Yes I enjoyed it lots of good back ground on both of them  I dont like Charlie that is for sure.  On a personal note my parents deviorced when I was 8 when I was 10 we were within 50 miles and would not come see us tell my mother if she wanted him to see us she needed to bring us to him ya we did not see him he was a prick kind of like Charlie.  Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I had fun with their background.  Charlie has lots of issues and he took them out on Bella, but more on that later...

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree

The dress is so cute. the neclace is so Alice.  What is wrong with Bella? Can she have kids?  You are having fun writing this story and it shows I am loving it keep it coming



Author's Response:

Thanks...I really do love this baby!  Bella's issue will be revealed very soon and I'm off for the day now so more chapters will come!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Another Country Heard From

No not Esme  Love Leah that is what you call a best freind  Thanks



Author's Response:

Yeah...I went after Esme...you'll see more in the upcoming chapters.  My girls are a lot like Leah, that's where the inspiration came from.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

How could someone not leave some love after that one tears of fear for Esme and then tears of happness because Bella is back showing her love.



Author's Response:

I've been on both sides of that so I wanted to show how much it means to be there for someone and to have someoen there for you.  Bella loves him so it was never a choice for her and the whole Esme thing is what makes them see how short life really is.  Thanks for the love, as always~

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Someone to Watch Over Me

So she feel like if she is not there with him he wont love her???  This is also a growing exprence for her she can serv time in a hospital not a fun thing.



Author's Response:

Bella's had people turn their back on her for a lot less so with someone as important to her as Edward is she's not chancing it.  It's not that he won't love her, its that he won't think her worth it.  Having that kind of self view is hard and that is a failing of Charlie as well as past boyfriends.  It will be a learning experience for them both.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Way Beyond Empty

Feeling lots of Love great chapter



Author's Response:

Yes it was.  Lots more love and it will continue on.  Thanks for the reviews and I can't wait to see what you think of the rest!

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

victim

 

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Goodbyes

So thankful for the chapter it was great the closness that Esme and Carlisle feel for Bella is so strong they are wonderful people.  Been so excited for this trip.  Dont get lost now ok



Author's Response:

Definitely looking forward to the reaction I get from the next chapter, since it'll be super long, and super exciting! ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember

I agree with Edward James must pay for what he has done to Bella.  I am so happy that she was able to get grove on LOL



Author's Response:

He definitely does!! He'll get his...and when he does, he'll thoroughly suffer!  haha!

enjoy the next chapter! More loving ahead! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Uh-Oh

NOOOOO she sent a pic to Boston that does not sound good how will James get a hold of it.  OMG I hope she is pregers.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Inevitabilities

Holly shit I was afraid of that James is one unstable fuck he needs to be youthanized put him out of our lives.  I am so happy about the baby and glad that Edward is just as happy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Cullens

Love the story I hate James what freaky creep. 

Summary:

Edward watches Bella from the two apartments on either side of hers. What happens when Bella discovers a peephole and pays him a visit? All Human, OOC "Mentalward" Contest Entry. Contains Adult Content and Lemon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5415 Read Count: 722
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Pinholes and Passageways

Shit they were both playing the same game PRICELESS. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review!  I'm glad you liked the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

Sounds like it is going to be great.  Cant wait till Tony and Bella see each other on there wedding day.  Waiting



Author's Response:

Thanks...I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

so Alice has figured out that Bella is the girl that Edward fell in love with??  Please tell me it was not Lauran that Edward is going to bed Yuck!!!  Waiting for more