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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625363
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

What a beautiful chapter! So glad that Carlisle allowed Edward to keep Bella! That was very scary! I know Bella can reach Edward again! I still think that Esme should plant Carlisle in her garden.....six feet under it!LOL It was a lovely story about her garden, thank you for that!

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

I wouldn't want to be Demetri when Edward and his brothers find him! Poor Bella, she really deserves a break! I think the only way they will ever be free of Carlisle's ways is to put him six-feet under Esme's garden! I don't know who Edward will find her, maybe she will find a way to escape! Wondering why she didn't refuse to leave with him from school!? Good chapter.

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Carlisile finally got what he deserved! So happy that Esme is free to live her life! I knew that Edward would find Bella in time! I'm glad that all of the bad guys are gone! Bella has been thru so much! I know it's hard for her to face everything that has happened but I hope that she realizes what all she has to gain in the love that Edward feels for her! These two have been thru hell and back, it's time for them to experience alittle heaven--TOGETHER! (I hope!) Really Great Chapter!

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Thank you so much for sharing this with us! You are a truly talented writer! So happy that Esme found the true love that she very much deserved! These characters went thru so much and persevered triumphantly! You made me feel every emotion possible reading this story! It was intense at times but you carried us thru! BRAVO! 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked the story. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Reality Check

Holy Cow! This is some fucking amazing shit! Can't believe Bella walked in on that! Also, can't imagine what is going thru her mind right now. I must be alittle fucked up myself, because I'm thinking....please don't make Edward wait too long!!LOL Too much went on in this chapter to point out all the good parts. Just know that you all are fucking amazing writers and story tellers. Your words are never dull or boring! WOW!

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

WOW! I wouldn't want to be Mike right now!LOL Carlisle surprised me this chapter! I'm wondering just how much he knows about everyone else's shit! I'm not really worried about what Emmett and Alice is going to think about Edward's feelings for Bella, but Jacob is another story! He will want his money and the job finished! Edward is going to have to tell Bella about everything, but I have a feeling that she is going to love him regardless. Love can be a nasty fucked up thing! Great chapter! (aka:tbonemom0512)

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Dark Abyss

Holy Shit! What a cliffe!! I should have known with all of you that it wouldn't be as easy as paying Jake off!LOL I wouldn't want to be Mike right now, I know that Edward is seeing nothing but RED! I'm afraid that Bella is going to find out the truth behind why she and Edward met. I know that Edward will do everything he can to protect her. I'm wondering if Alice is seeing all of this play out? These characters are twisted and fucked up and I LOVE them. Good chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373470
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

WOW! What can I say except....that was fucking perfect! Word for word PERFECT! That was so beautiful! Loved how they took their time to explore one another's bodies. I liked how Bella was bold and just went with her feelings and didn't hold back. I know it had to be awkward for those men to be in there, but Edward helped make it as perfect as it could be with them in there. They are truly in awe of one another! Thank you for such a wonderful chapter! We had been antisipating this one and you definitely didn't disappoint!

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Perfect. This chapter was perfect.  Once again, I'm so glad that Bella was able to bring along Emmett and Angela.

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

I appreciate this version of Bella so much! She is strong, bold, beautiful, and a huge heart of gold! Was glad to see that Charlie did have some love and compassion for his daughter! Understandable that some men don't really know how to relate to their daughters. I cried for Renee, hope that she won't be too lonely. Excited for Alice and Jasper! And I love reading how Edward and Bella are learning about one another in new ways! Great Chapter!

Reviewer: Sookie10 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

Carlisle's respect for Esme is beautiful! I hate that the young couples are going to have to be separated for awhile, but I understand the reason. Bella is so understanding and kind. I hope that Edward, Jasper, and Emmett's journey is successful, and I hope all three return soon and safe. Good Chapter!