Reviews by lizutte
Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27772
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

S*** I'm crying. Loved this story - started it yesterday and today I'm finished. I just have to go see if you have written something else.

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Jared Outtake

I truly loved your story and I'm looking forward to the sequel.

 

Love

Lizette

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189019
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

Damn.... I thought I was lucky enough, that my "slowness" of reading would be rewarded with an update...... put it looks like I wasn't slow enough.

Just to put it out there - and I have yet to read the other reviews - LOVED IT.



Author's Response:

Haha I update every Monday, so you don't have too long to wait :)  Sorry bout that!  I'd be faster if I could but my real work gets in the way, which I highly disapprove of, let me tell you!

I'm so glad you loved it!  Thank you :)  I'll see you next week with more!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211600
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

just loving this story - i hate it when I start reading a story that I love and knows that I'm nearing the the last updated chapter - just hate it.



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified! 

Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!

XoXo

Shel


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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.

"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.

He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."

Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.

"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."    

 

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

another great chapter - i think i took the last five in this round - and this story is still great great great great great 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Shit... well we all knew it - but Edward please do come to her rescue.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

I am so in love with this story. I kept back from reading it for a while, but found that I was driven to it and I love it. Hope you will update really soon.

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

you can't do that - please?

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Adesse Olympus Banner

Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 30119
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Fu***** loved this story. Have never been that happy about Jake - but I cried when he died. And the end. Well the whole thing was just perfect. Thank you so much.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it.  Your review made my day totally rock.  Thank you so much.

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Updates updates updates:-) I'm in bed sick, so imagine how good a surprise it was when I saw that this story had an update I haven't read - YEAH.

Summary:

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Just something i thought of, inrpired by Chicago tell the stories of six wmen all on trial for killing their beloveds

 

 

Please review


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1301 Read Count: 2621
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Verdict

Honestly didn't like it that much. If you had written a more complete story about those stories, instead of just using the song, then I think it would have been a great idea.

Summary:

Entry for TLFN Contest. Bella stopped fantasizing and acted on her crush. However, it was a bit of a catastrophe. Was she victim of a cruel joke? Is this a poor summary? Find out. M for language, grapefruits, facepalms, and stupid texts. E/B, AU/AH

Banner by Kassiah (inside chapter 1)!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5707 Read Count: 619
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Happy F@&!ing Birthday, Edward

F***ing hillarius. love that Edward is this shy and stumbling guy.



Author's Response:

thank you! :) it was fun to write.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Could you please update really soon? Pretty please?

I'm dying to kno how Esme takes the news and to get to the real point - E and B in session - wink wink.



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in good time ... Patience Grasshopper...lol....Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

nice chapter - it is on the way I can feel it:-)



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

You SO have to update soon..... Loved this.

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184507
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Taken

Please do update soon - pretty please? with sprinkles on top?

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place

I had a feeling, that was where there was. I hope that you will come with an update soon - because I need to know how B is doing. Fuck the money - she can give them to Renee in my head. She will do okay anyway - and Renee won't have them for long - but Quill? GOD I want to kill that fuck.

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase

Okay - so I hoped, that in this chapter the fining of Bella would happen - it didn't - so hurry up and come with the next - I can't wait.

Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught

Yeah off course it would be Charlie and Jake making the end of Renee

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

I loved it. I would also love to see the continuation of it - if that is something you have done og thought about doing.....



Author's Response:

I am so incredibly sorry. I can't believe I didn't respond to your review, I try to be so prompt about it.  Thank you, thank you for the nice review.  I am really glad you enjoyed it.  I am tossing around some ideas for continuing this story, but don't have anything concrete yet.  I will definitely keep it in mind though.

Summary:

Bella is asked out on a date by fellow student, at Seattle University, Jacob Black. She's somewhat eager to go out with him, having felt some kind of physical attractiont to him.

But what happens when she takes down his number incorrectly?

Bella and Edward had an unusual meeting just over a year ago. When Bella took down a friend's phone number, incorrectly, she proceeded to text Edward instead, forming a fast friendship with him and eventually falling in love. A year later and once again their relationship is via text and email as Edward is gaining some valid work experience while helping those less fortunate, in third world countries. Edward has big plans for his return and Bella has a secret which may throw a spanner in the works.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20337 Read Count: 6726
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2012
Reviewer: lizutte Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I actually think this would be a great full story. Loved it.

 



Author's Response:

Maybe one day. Thank you for the review.