Membership status: Member
Bio:
My list of favorite stores:
CONTROL BY helluvabell
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together
The sex scene was very realistic. Trust me!!!!!! That probably the only one I've read that came close. LOL
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I was hoping I was somewhat realistic! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets
Sweet first fight.
Author's Response:
You're the first one to say that! ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving
This is by far a great story. Renee is just crazy, I think she means well in her own wierd way. Charlie as always is a good father. E is a loving husband and Esme is a awesome monther-in-law.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter
Nice pictures. Great story too!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans
They need to be a little shaken up. They are complaining about being boared. Yes, its time. The bite was cute too!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your opinion! :)
I don't think Edward thought the bite was cute, but I'm glad you think so ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas
She knew she was still crazy about him since high school. She would have ended that marriage as soon as she realized if that was the case. Great stroy.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve
Awh, her feelings was hurt. Maybe next test, LOL
Author's Response:
Yeah, maybe! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon
Maybe Diabetic or pregnant!
Author's Response:
We'll find out in the next chapter! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats
I am so happy for them. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents
WOW, Edward is being real cool.
Author's Response:
That he is! ;)
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?
Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17
OMG, excellent story. Keep your interest going. I sometimes forget to review between chapters. I will go back though!
Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41155
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Reason Twenty-four
You did an amazing job. You gave a great attention to detail and outline the story very well. You didn't linger in useless points and you hightlighted the necessary one!
BRAVO
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Reason Twenty-Six
Someone is obessed. LOL
Can't wait to read the next chp.
Author's Response:
Someone is obsessed. I wonder who it is though...?
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Reason Twenty-seven
I hope they both survive. Someone needed to puch Tonya over that ledge.
I loved Eclipse, especially the part when E talked about he proposal. LOL
Sorry I am a true Team Edward fan. They did a great job on the fight scene as well.
I will be so sorry when this story is over. Sniff, Sniff!!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Reason Twenty-eight
Oh how I love this story. Please hurry!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue
Yes, I would love to see this through EPOV. I also and a sucker for HEA. You've done a great job with this. I will check out your writtings on FF as well. Thx and looking forward to your future stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with this story as well.
Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.
Banner by Mkystich
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144904
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
this is a twist of a story, I like it alot.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Jacob did some serious damage. He is a nut case. The police should have been watching out for her. They saw the pictures in his house. They knew he was crazy. The system failed her.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I loved the gift giving. It was monumental.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
WOW, that was intense. Way to go, this story is great!
Author's Response:
Thaml you:)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
That was my type of chapter. You go whom ever shot Jacob.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I love it James and Laurent lovers! LOL
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
You know Bella will kick her A*s if she comes back. She won't tolerate it twice. LOL, like I'm writing this story.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
I love it. All three at one time. Priceless!!!!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
It just gets better and better!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
That was so thoughtful of Bella & Jasper! Em and Ro are sweet as well. Edward is always my hero.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
That was so nice. I thought he had actually paid her college fee. However, I am glad he left her his estate. I knew he would do something for her. Great story and can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) He paid for her to apply to Harvard. He would have paid for her schooling if she had let him.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Oh my, I can't wait. I know they are in for a treat with Charlie. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I love this chapter. It was great to hear this through Charlies' POV. I think that was one of the best justers to ask him for the three girls hand in marriage.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
That was a perfect proposal.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Jasper did great!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Now that was an annoucement!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I started reading this this morning. I couldn't clean my house fast enough. I love this story. Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified!
Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!
XoXo
Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.
"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.
He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."
Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.
"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
YOU'VE GOT MY VOTES!!!!!!
Author's Response:
{Thanks for the vote! <3}
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
XoXo
Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Oh, I just love story. Such a great job writing it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.
Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!
<3 Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.
"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."
Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.
"What is your problem?"
"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.
"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
OMG, not Marcus didn't. Please update soonnnnn!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
This story doesn't get any better. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!
<3
Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit."
"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.
"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
OMG, I'm getting nervious. I hope this doesn't go bad. I wonder if Marcus can get Jack away from Bella.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
He is finally getting it, you snooze you loose. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
Awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Thanks for all of the love and support!
=)
Shel
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.
"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."
Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."
Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."
Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.
"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Wonderful story, can't wait to see E move to Seattle.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!
Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"
Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully. She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.
"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.
She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?
Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
I'm glad Edward put it out there that he wanted to someday marry her. They will make a very nice family.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!
Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.
"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.
"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.
"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."
He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."
Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.
"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."
"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"
"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
Oh I am going to be so sorry to see this story end. It is one of the best I've read!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
I can't believe that she would be that stupid to listen to someone she was already of suspicious of! Then she was dumb enough to confront him alone. Duh!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)
I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*
Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.
"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."
Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.
"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."
"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.
Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
You know, everyone are not mother material. Clearly she's one of them. I give her props on Bella's behave. I am curious about the documents though!!!!! Hum Edward didn't denied the accusation or was he just not going to entertain that thought?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."
She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."
The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"
Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.
"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.
Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33
Awe so much love and no way to say what she really wants! Ask him already to move in together or buy a house mutually located.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!
I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.
He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."
She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"
He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.
"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."
"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
I am getting sadder that this story is coming to an end. Great chapter.
Congrats on your awards. Well deserved!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
It doesn't get any better this this story. Thank you and I know all your future projects will be a great as this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
O.M.G. I am so sad to see this end. However, like always you've done a great job. I am looking forward to reading you next story. Thx
Author's Response:
Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O
Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
WOW, my heart stopped reading this! B has been through a lot. Way to go C, I hope he beat the SH*T out of P.
Author's Response:
lol.. Thanks for reading
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Interesting, curious to see how this will play out.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Shocking sweet Bella. LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Oh I love this Rose. This is the first time I've read a story where she is so sweet to Bella. Please keep her alive and safe. It will surely cause Edward to have himself killed. Aro is going to be a problem, I can see. I hope Bella can hold him at bay.
Author's Response:
thanks, I think Rose deserves more depth and I know the Bella in my story will be able to help her through her trouble past... they will need each other
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
That was very good. I can't wait to figure out the rest of this story. Its coming together in my mind now.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review. I am glad you are still enjoying the story, if you have any questions I will try to answer them
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
This is so interesting. I can't wait to read the next chp.
Author's Response:
aw thanks.... I won't keep you hanging too long
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OK with the CLIFFEE. That is no fair! LOL
Author's Response:
hehehehe.... I'd say sorry but that wouldn't be true.... I am soooo mean.... I wont keep you hanging long I promise
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Great story, it looks like something is truly brewing. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
yep.... brewing is the right word... hehehe Thanks for the review.... I won't make youwait too long for the next ch
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG, James is signing his death warrant.
Author's Response:
Yep... he sure is... I wonder who will be the one to end him... Aro? Bella? A Cullen or Jake?????? mmmmmmmm
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG, I am glad there is another chapter. You are killing me with these cliffees, LOL
Author's Response:
hahahahaha
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
So Bella will be all powerful. I hope she is turned soon!
Author's Response:
there is no end in sight I still have so many ideas for her....hehehe.... Thanks for reviewing
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
So, I know she can clone powers, can she clone their eye color or is it a mood thing? This is so neat that she has Aro's powers as well. She will be a wealth of knowledge. I guess she is considering her change as well. I hope she can have a child beforehand or at least get pregnant first like in Breaking Dawn. Can you imagine what kind of powers that child would have. LOL
Author's Response:
hehehe... the eye color is more to do with how connected she is to Edward..... I'm not sure if a baby is in her future but I haven't ruled it out
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG, excellent. I love this version. BRAVO, Bella is kick ass awesome. It doesn't get any better. I love Em playfulness. LOL
Jacob better get over it. She will make a great SHERO Vamp.
Author's Response:
WOW OMG!!!!! your way too kind...hehehe... yes I agree Jake better suck it up...hehehe Thanks for reviewing
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
WOW, this is going to be interesting.
Author's Response:
hehehehe.... Thanks for reviewing... you are a super star
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never
WOW, That should have had sweet revenge on him then. I guess because she blamed herself, she didn't understand that that was her closure.
Author's Response:
She is just feeling guilty as she is a sweet girl and even after everthing he did to believe she harmed someone hurts her.... thanks for reviewing
bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.
how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.
nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.
warning: dark edward and sexual abuse
Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why. Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see!
-Love Sinister :D
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice
WOW, this is an amazing story. The first of its kind. Hurry with next chapter.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: leaving hatred
You are killing me. Update sooooonnnn!!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
That child have popped out some babies.
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: tired of it
YOU GO BELLA! So happy to see this update!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
OMG, he is going to kill her!
Author's Response:
lmbo hahaha maybe
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
OMG, wonderful chapter. I feel so bad for B, but that is her life. She don't have one outside of E. It's been proven over and over again.
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: A Beginning
WOW, that was a fight! Now that prince hum! Fine as hell, you go girl.
Author's Response:
lol i love this review haha... and yes the prince is very fine... just wait until the wedding night! ;)
-love sinister!
Banner created by xrxdanixrx
Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q
Teaser Trailer #2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: BPOV - Inescapable Devastation
WOW, so he doubled cross B intentionally. Deal with the devil or loss her sister. He will probably make A suffer too!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir
I love it. It was a great chapter as always. I'm glad they've defined their relationship too!
Author's Response:
Yay!!! Awesome! Thanks, sweetie!!! I'm glad Edward was able to air out his grievances ;)
Thanks for reading!
~K
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty - The Devil Is In The Details
Rose is a royal Bi'Ch! I'm glad E and getting to go out with B on a normal outing. I hope things works out for his parents sake.
Author's Response:
I agree about Rose and I sooooo want Bella to meet the parents. I mean, even though she isn't his girlfriend...yet ;) I personally believe that Edward shouldn't have to tell anyone about his sexual perference and lifestyle. If it's making him a better person, what's the harm?..Only if I control this world...um, wait. LMAO!
Thanks for the reviews, Hun!!
~K
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten- Relevations
WOW, He is in for a ride.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Passive Aggressive
Interesting!!!!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Love it, she gave him a good lesson. Tables are turned. LOL
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
This chapter was too funny!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
That was wild!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
This is getting to be too funny!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
WOW, that was very intense. I wasn't sure Ed was going to make it. Some test!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen-Chocolate Brown and Leather Whips
O.M.G., no he didn't. WOW!
Author's Response:
LOL...he sure did...idiot? I don't think so. Thanks for reading, doll *mwah*
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne
That was awesome! All he wanted was to hear her say it. Great chapter and thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Awe, thank you!!! Yeah, knowing someone loves you and hearing them finally saying it is just...you know ;)))
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Have a great weekend!! xoxoxoxooxx
~K
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty Two - Risky Business
Great chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Four- Pushing Boundaries
Damn that was brutal on all parts!
Author's Response:
Oh, man, I hear ya, Hun!!! Thanks for reading, babe!!!
~K
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Five- The Harder They Fall
I'm glad that got over that hurtle!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go
A little warning would have been nice. I never laughed so fu*king hard, no punned intended. I couldn't get through reading this chapter I laughed so hard. Amazing, I have never read anything so funny. LOL This chapter definitely a 10, Great job!!
Author's Response:
Aweee!!! That's awesome. Thanks so much. Hun!! I am so glad that this chapter got the response I wanted...I kind of feared that ppl would hate me for breaking E=man's memeber ;)))
Thank you so much for reading!!
~K
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly
Well alrighty then E open mouth insert foot! LOL
Author's Response:
LOL..no kidding. I swear, if he wasn't so blunt all the time, I'm sure he would save himself a lot of grief!
Thanks for reading, Hun!!!
xoxo
~K
Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours
Like he said be proud of his choices.
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad
Send me some red velvet cup cakes, I can't cook for shit! Awesome as always chapter. Mudd in you face Rose the itch! I hope Eddie give them all a mouth full. Including that Nana. LOL
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty Two- Redemption
Hum, his time with his mistress running?
Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45295
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255190
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Very nice! I'm glad he found the collar, it was bothering me too!!!
Author's Response:
Yup...he found it...thanks for reading and the comment. I have a teaser for you...lml
The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.
“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.
“No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”
I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.
“Come here” he motioned to the bed,
I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair.