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Single mom of 3 teenage kids who loves twilight and loves reading fan fiction.
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
Wow you want to hate Renee for bringing this on to her and bella. man she truly believed and bend to their will to save herself. I am thinking does she truly want to be there. Will she not cross them due to worry about coming back to this room. will she help bella or forget baout her and live to make phil and the father happy. this story keeps you on your toes
I don't come on this site too much, I have to think of a better way to know you have updated. Fan fiction is so much easier to get around
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
Man it is sad to see what brainwashing really does. to see it through her eyes. 5 1/2 weeks to got through torture. she is such a strong girl. where is her dad. where the fuck is renee. that is right saving her on ass stupid bitch. man what a way to have someone think they deserve all this just for someone to love them. man it is twisted. so hopefully bella will say she is elizabeth and we get on with her training. god help us all we are in for a ride.
thanx
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
So I am curious, when she is given to her husband is the father allowed to touch her. so is she suppose to please her husband and the father.
whose kids does she have the fathers or her husbands. i love the story
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
The thirteen of September was when Bella would make the journey to becoming a woman. Women were soley on this earth to reproduce. Her job was to keep her body fit and clean knowing when it is perfect time to reproduce. But it was up to fate to decide weather she was the chosen one. Our one time together would be the truest test. It was my job to be the first to copulate with them on their wedding day, their sixteenth birthday. I was always the first to partake in my virginal daughters. If they were not pure they would be killed on the spot. They needed to bleed. It was an honor for them to save themselves for me. Once my seed had been planted, they then would be handed over to the care of their husbands. I would not be with them again.
I have a question regarding this section. So does Aro sleep with every 16 year old? And are they suppose to get pregnant? So techinal Aro sleeps with them in hopes of them getting pregnant? or he just does it to make sure they are a virgin? then after they marry and only sleep with their husbands. Do husband and wife have kids together? or is aro the only one to get the women pregnangt? So Aro got esme pregnant and edward is the son from that conception. so are esme and aro together or is she with someone else? do the husbands have more than 1 wife? Lot of questions sorry. love the story truly twisted, what a mind you have. keep up the great writing
Author's Response:
OK where to start...hahaha. Aro sleeps with all virgins before their wedding. He believes that virginal conception lead to a purer child. He is only with them the first time, if they get their period, he is finished with them. If they get pregnant...they raise the child in the ways of the Father. Husband and wives are free to have other children, but only Aro's children are the chosen few. He is trying to create a PERFECT race. Only one wife per husband. I can't really give anymore information at this point....all will become clearer as the story goes on.. Just think...if you are in the dark...what about poor bella...hahaha
Thanks for enjoying the story.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
wow i don't even know how to respond to that.
i know her body has taking its toll but it seemed she was fine in the last we saw her and then 4 days out , iv and catheter. wow poor bella.
she doesn't even rember much. man i wouldn't want to be her. obivously she doesn't even know who her parents are anymore. so which means she has forgotten about charlie, how sad.
i don't think i would care for her bath. to be scrubbed like an animal. you think she would need tending too so she wouldn't get an infection. her last bath was not like this one. her last bath aro got a little to excited just as he did when she touched his cheek. he has too many lustful thoughts himself when it comes to elizabeth. well i take it edward and elizabeth will meet next chapter since he is her future. the 2 choosen ones will come together.
thanx for writing
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace
HAVE A GREAT EASTER
WISH YOUR DAUGHTER LUCK IN COMPETITIONS.
WILL BELLA HAS MEET HER MATE. SHE IS REMBERING BITS AND PIECES OF HER LIFE SHE DOESN'T REMBER SHOULD BE INTERESTING. ESME GOT TO LOVE HER. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE WEDDING. TOO BAD THE GROOM DOESN'T GET TO SLEEP WITH HIS WIFE FIRST. HOW WEIRD IS THAT. GOT THE HIIBEEJIBES THINKING ABOUT IT. LOVE IT ALL, THANX
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
I get puzzled. i am thinking they where making sure she is able to carry a baby. they are probably giving her medicine to make sure she can get pregnant. it seems they should be letting her get pregnant the naturally way and not cheating. but oh well it is a story. I think esme is feeling bad she has to go thru the same thing that she did. but at least once it is done he will have no claims to her and she will marry into her family to her son. I wonder how bella will feel when it is her daughter and 16 comes and he sleeps with her. wow. part of me wants someone to save her. i wonder if edward is fully behind this cult. hope you update soon. love it
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
wow, edward is taking the lashes I am guessing in Bella's place
Man aro is such an Ass. either way he will make Elizabeth pay. I can't wait for the union to take place. I am dying to see how their marriage goes. I am not sure how I feel about her being with Aro. I don't understand how anyone can accept another man impregnanting there wife.
love it
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
well i am glad bella choose wisley. that was a very tough decision. and to watch wow i do not know if i could do that. well it seems she needs to get ready to except the seed of aro. i wonder if she understands that she sleeps with him before her own husband. wow now that is one hell of a wake up call. to know another man your father impregnanted your wife. and your looking at her stomach for what 9 months. man that is wrong in so many ways.
i can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
well i am glad bella choose wisley. that was a very tough decision. and to watch wow i do not know if i could do that. well it seems she needs to get ready to except the seed of aro. i wonder if she understands that she sleeps with him before her own husband. wow now that is one hell of a wake up call. to know another man your father impregnanted your wife. and your looking at her stomach for what 9 months. man that is wrong in so many ways.
i can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
thank god for esme. i see they want bella in their family. i believe she sees her as a life perserver. theu want to save her and she is saving them at the same time. she will be good for them and edward. i am so pleased esme told her what to say and she followed thru with it. love that her tummy grumbled on que. wonder if she will get more memories and rember who she is. love it
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
poor elizabeth(bella). I am glad she has esme. so it seems at one time esme was the chosen one. now it is elizabeth. i am hoping but don't know how she can and will protect elizabeth. but hopefull if elizabeth does all that is asked and she stays out of the way maybe aro won't bother her. but i doubt that will happen. seems aro has it in for elizabeth. but really he is going against all that he teaches. at first he gave himself lashings for having thoughts about bella. what is the difference now. it seems his urges have increased. oh my the force be with you bella. stay close to esme. i hope carlisle isn't mad at esme for what she is sharing with him.
love it
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
my goodness these people need help. man oh mna looking at it you wonder how the hell they got to where they are. brainwashed how sad. i couldn't even imagine having someone tell me what i can and cannot do. man oh man i feel for these women. thank god alice seems to want to help bella. i feel bad that aro hurt her. i almost feel bad for bella because maybe others might not like her because aro makes a point to say she is special. a whole year to be ostersized. man i would take off not in the mood for noone to talk to me for a year. that sucks.
love the story. i am dying for the wedding.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
boy that was just wicked. ahhhhhhh i know felix has to feel bad. he had a connection with bella. she doesn't deserve what her mother brought on her. she deserves a fighting chance. will felix be the one to give it to her. will he work with charlie to save bella. poor charlie my heart breaks for him. a man who had his daughter taken from him. and renee didn't even have the courtesy to tell him she was leaving with bella. that just sucks. man renee sucks as a mother. man i wish charlie the best of luck.
love it it was good to hear charlie's side, thanx
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
well i think it was felix who trained her and who meet up with charlie in the bar. i think he had a special place for bella in his heart and it broke him we he finally broke her. i think maybe he might want to make a mends. and he would know how to get around that place without bein gcaught. i think alice will be good for bella, poor edward being away from his family. i can't wait till he is back and he and bella could be together. or a least get to know each other a little better
love it
Author's Response:
Interesting idea.. LOL yeah not giving anything away... just curious what you all think....
Thank you for reviewing..
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
well that was an eye opener. carlisle has been through alot in his life. he is still going through shit. man he has to be wondering if it is all worth it. he is a father now and he just wants to keep his family safe. i am to believe he is in for the fight of his life. i believe he is up for it but he will need his family behind him.
love it
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
oh I think I get it. He has sex with all the girls at 16 before marriage. and if they get pregnant then they are considered to be the chosen ones. is that correct? kind of like a higher anarchy of some sorts. do they get any preferential treatment? i highly doubt it. i am curious if there was someone else besides Jasper. Part of me believes there was someone else in the woods. i so love the story thanx for writing
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
ahhhh this chapter so clears up alot. i honestly thought he have sex with each one of the girls and wondered how the men where okay with that. so now i know carlisle injects the sperm in each one of the chosen ones. man what a wedding. you would think you would know before hand if you weren't a virgin why put your self through the cermony as having the person your to marry slit your throat. that is wrong on so many levels. omg poor bella she is finally coming out of her training. it took so long to break her and it seems the brainwashing did not stick because we are rembering grandma swan and knowing this does not feel right. but where to f=go from here. she needs to confide in esme but i fear that puts esme at risk. oh bititng the finger nails down what to do. I love it. thanx for writing
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
well aro sure is one sadistic fuck. i swear he knows what he does and he does it well. i believe he just wants to see how far he can provoc people so he can make them suffer. man someone needs he to have his just deserts. and i think it will be a cold day in hell before elizabeth lays beneath aro. i am hoping the cullens ban together and take him over and stone him before he ever touches a hair on her head.
love it
Author's Response:
He has gotten very POWER Crazed hasn't he. Ultimate Power corrupts Ultmately. (or something like that...) It reminds me of Hitler and the likes. It is almost like the more crazed they get.. the more power they have. STRANGE.. wow.. did I just equate Aro with Hitler... humm I guess I did. scary.
WE are glad you are enjoying the story.. We love writing it for you guys. Thanks again.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
OMG i am thrilled. I know Felix is good and he really meant no harm. but he has to make this right. charlie loves bella and you knwo she is a good girl. too bad felix doesn't know not all are behind aro a 100%. i would think that maybe just maybe he could get some to leave with her for a better life. i even think jasper would be going for a trip out of heaven right now. i think there are a few cracks. hmm what will charlie do with the information he has been given. i hope he goes in smart and doesn't get himself hurt. love it
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will
OMG my first thought is that he will see a poster of bella and that her father is looking for her. it seems his family is not up for this life that father is instilling. i worry for their safety. i am hoping that others gather and just slit aro throat and move on. but where there is one monster their is another wanting to take over. they just need to get there family out of dodge. i can't believe what he did do rose. it almost seemed as if he didn't want her getting pregnant at all. he is a cruel man. yes aro wnats elizabeth for himself. the cullens better be careful. theya re all endanger. love it
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
man i think i would just say kill me now. man oh man i feel for her. if i could i would kill aro then phil and head out of dodge. poor bella she was a strong one. the brain washing took so long but still did not last. i am praying charlie gets to her in time. bella pray we are with you
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Wow, elizabeth is MISSING. yes she is
man oh man edward what will you do. you need to know that you can trust your parents. he needs someone to trust.his whole family is at risk. i am sure esme and carlisle have figured out by now that aro wants more from elizabeth. so where did she go. oh dear i am so afraid for her. too much too many questions. what to believe when everything you thought to be real is turning out to be a lie. and you all accepted it all on blind faith. love it
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
omg i can not believe you left us hanging like this. wow there are so many conculsions you can come up with this. is it charlie who found her and edward. or is it aro and his men to finish the job off or is it carlisle who has come to save his son. my goodness how much pain can two people endure. love it and can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
OMG I so want Aro's head on a platter. my head is spinning. man he needs to get his. they group needs to come together and take over and start living their lives. they are all so brainwashed. man oh man it kills me. i am hoping edward gets the balls to come clean with his parents and trust in them. and hopefully carlisle and esme will be honest with him and they can come together and save bella. man i feel for her. i am glad she faints it gives her body a repreieve from psycho man. aro your days are numbered i hope
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
OMG what a way to string us along. i am thrilled that edward was able to figure out where bella was. now we know aro swings all ways. man that man is such a freak. james wants aro it seems. poor edward is giving his life for someone he loves. i am hoping i understand that he tells aro he doesn't believe and he is shunned. i am hoping they kick him out but i am thinking that is me dreaming and they will kill him. but if by chance they kick him out of the commune then he goes into town and finds charlie and gets the help for bella that she needs. but what will happen to his family. man i wish he would confide in them and they could all work together.ahhhhhhh it is painful
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
wow charlie is where his daughter is. that is amazing. i didn't think it would happen. i am glad felix has finally made himself known. i know he felt something for bella. he knew she didn't belong. her dad loves her and wants her back. now these fools in this compound need to get their heads from their asses and help bring down aro. but we all know theay are so brainwashed. how sad to think this does go on everyday and their are people living this life. thank god not for me
love it
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
omg i so want aro dead. dead is too good. i want him to suffer. i am not sure how but man he so needs to suffer the way he makes his people. he is such a sick fucker. man oh man charlie where are you. i expected or wanted edward to be a little more physical. but i guess he is still under his power and couldn't protect himself or bella. poor bella she has been through so much. god renee if you thought about others happiness besides your own maybe you guys wouldn't be in this mess. oh my blood is boiling i can not see straight. i can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens to out favorite couple and Aro.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
thank you felix
i sure hope it is not to late. you and charlie need to work together and get her out. too have all those people lives on your head if something goes wrong that would suck.
i can't wait to see if these two can come together and pull of the save of a life time
love it
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Man you guys can search get someone blood pressure up. wow what a chapter. carlisle man i feel for you. i am surprised you are walking. but you are a family man and would do anything for them. i am so hoping or can't wait until we get to hang or throw stones or gut and beat aro within a inch of his life. man that man needs to die a slow death. maybe we make a whole and stick him in it and put snakes and deadly bugs in the whole cover it up while he is still alive and let them bite him. then let him whither away in the hot sun. maybe give him some sort of drug that makes it so he feels everything but can't move or speak so noone can hear his cries. oh i want this man dead. he is one sick mutherfucker. i love that carlisle wants felix and charlie to get edward and bella out. that was smart. in the meantime someone on the outside knows the shit is about to go down big time and they can help carlisle get his family out of this sick cult. maybe take over the compound. oh looking forward to the future. poor alice and jasper. they all have so much to ge through so much therapy to go thru as well. love it
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus
go charlie go. the protective father is coming out in him big time. i love that he stood up to felix. i am hoping that they do not leave edward behind. he fought so much for bella and protected her with his life. he deserves a chance to be happy and have a chance. protective servies will not help him he will be back on the premises and they will kill him in front of everyone to show how serious they are about there rules. love the update, thanx for writing. love it as always
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514751
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
I am so looking forward to hearing what Aro has to say. This has been an adventure to read this story. Man James gets away with so much. I can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Wow what a way to meet up with an old friend. poor bella having to relay all the personal crap on Jacob. How funny to find out he was the chef and carlisle house. Even though it was undercover that is a hoot. Well this story has kept me on my toes and I suspect it will keep me on my toes. can't wait for the next chapter. love it.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
OMG, OMG tell me it isn't james. how the hell did he find them. wow I am just shocked. man will there world ever be safe. I guess not. I can't wait to read the next chapter I am dying here.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
WOW, It seems a little stupid for james to actt hey way he did. I am curious as to how james was his puppet. so you have to think what is laurent up to or what was laurent up to. and now thta he is gone and pissed heidi off did he know of all of his palns and did he think he would really get heidi to help him now. what is heidi mixed up in all of this? what is her hand in it all. man they are all so twisted. poor bella and victoria thinking they would get away from james. I truly forgot that james chipped Victoria. Obivously noone knew he was a sicker fucker than what he is that he would chip his property. man james truly needs to be treated and he treats his slaves but 10 x's worse to hopefully get what he deserves. I don't know if I could think of a punishment bad enough for him. When will the others know they are gone. i am dying here.love it, thanx
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Okay so I went ahead and signed up. I do not know anything about paypal it took me a couple of cards and 3 email accounts later, but I finally signed up.
Okay back to the story. I am curious did it really take edward till 3 am to notice the girls where missing. the last I remeber it was morning and they gotten up and he left the girls alone to visit. so it would have been mid afternoon when he last checked if they needed anything. I can't imagine him not checking on her for that many hours. they can't stand to be away from each other. James man I want to gut him. I can't wait to see what happens next. thank you for writing. love it
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Poor edward
poor girls, hang in there bella and victoria
I am shocked someone is getting sloppy to be leaving behind a tracking device, maybe the cock cage was cutting off james blood flow and he couldn't think straight.
love it all
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
OMG James is one sick fucker. Heidi should have never teased James. You would have though Laurent would have warned heidi about james. but then again laurent thought he had everything taken care of. now he is dead and james is in charge for now. Man i cna't wait to see what happens to james when he realizes who knocked him out and what they are going to do with him. i realize jacob is a cop but will he let the gang have a little fun with james before he takes him in.
love it all
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
I have truly loved all about this story. I have read all pov. this was truly a rollercoaster at times. At times I would have strung James up, most of the time. My hate for him was undeniable. the emotions one felt when reading this story was unbelievable. at times I could not read it at work cause I would be so pissed. Or sad. This was alot of fun and enjoyable. thank you for writing this story. I look forward to any stories in the near future. love it thank you
i am glad the girls went back to school. i am glad bella and edward are still together. i love that they re-opened the school. it is good carlisle and esme are taking a more hands on approach and interviewing the applicants. I really believe one day that bella and edward will be back. i think that rose and em being instructors there are great. i have loved it all. thanx
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625009
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45
wow. makes you wonder what type of man carlislie is or was. was he always a monster. he always fancy renee and bella. but was it always in a sick way.
i am not looking forward to when he finds out bella and edward did the deed. i am only thinking she is not on any birth control. it only takes one time. will a pregnancy keep carlisle away from bella. i can't wait to see what happens next. it was nice to see a glimpse of child hood and how nice edward was and how loving he was and he rembers. james always a prick
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
i am glad things are still going well with bella and edward
i am taking it the guest are his cousins and uncle. Bella is about to be made a pawn. I bet carlisle will not be to happy to hear that edward and she have had sex and are engaged. I believe carlisle still has the adoption paperwork for her. I can't remeber him signing over bella to edward yet. this man is truly sick.
so far the rest of the sick bastards got what was coming to them. But the boys need to ban to take on daddy dearest, will they do it.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
OMG MY heart is beating so fast. I don't think I breathe at all while reading this chapter. I so want edward to kill his father. The boys need to get together and take that fucker out. Man demetri and marcus are a piece of work. I would die to know that people out there just might be living this nightmare. Great story but man how sad and sickening. Bella stay strong and trust in edward that he knows what he is doing. he wants to save you he loves you. oh my heart is breaking. AHAH I am frustrated. Carlisle I so want you strung up by your balls and have your penis shoved down your throat while you gasp for air while esme is shoving something up your ass not sure what but man that women needs some justice for all the shit she puts up with.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
I will just say I was a little nervous. I think more than a little nervous. I was scared to read this chapter. he has worked so hard to get to where he has and man this could have gone a whole other way. i totally understand why he did what he did. It had to be believable. if he would have talked to her maybe not so much. the basement edward is a smart cookie. i am very proud of him. i bet his leg hurts after all that spanking. I sure hope he made a big enough stink with bella that carlisle backs the fuck off. I am so proud of bella for finally telling edward that carlisle planned on taken her nad is wondering if he still is planning on taking her. he is truly one sick fucker. I have someone for carlisle to meet. He is actually edward/masen in the Buried Amongst the Begonias and man that edward is one fucked up boy. I sure Masen edward alter would love to have some fun with carlisle. i would love to hear carlisle scream for mercy and beg for his life. unfortunately masen doesn't like beggers. Maybe for once these people can live there lives. carlisle what happen to you that you treat women this way. Your whole family does so i am wondering what type of sick fuck was your dad. I so love this story. I am glad bella knows why edward did what he did
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife
Wow you go esme. They are all very strong women. I know Bella will probably have several jornals and maybe even a novel or two. I am very pleased that bella was signed over to edward. I am also glad demetri and marcus are gone. they gave me the hibie jebies. I would have nightmares if they had gotten ahold of bella.
man carlisle and charlie are and where a bunch of sick fucking pigs. What makes a person become a person like that. taking someone's will away.
thank you for writing. love it
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
omg my heart is beating so fast. man what was demetri thinking. if edward already popped her cherry then him fucking her shouldn't matter. i know going against carlisle is bad but then again alice was raped and she was still let intot he family because jasper wanted her. edward is to be her husband so what is the big deal daddy dearest.
love it all i hope that beat the living shit out of demetri and loses a few teeth and gets something shoved up his ass.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
wow, wow, wow. what a chapter. i didn't expect carlisle to be the one to show up. man he truly was a demented prick. he really love renee and maybe he would have been good to bella but man he was demented. 30 years of her life esme gave and carlisle was willing to throw it away for bella/renee. it seemed he wanted to give her the world. what makes renee so much better than esme. did he ever love esme. she did give him 3 boys was that worth anything. man bella has alot to understand. i guess after all we ahve been thru for her to ask to be let go man what a slap to the face. but she wanted so much from her life and everything was taken from her even her virginity. she had been violated by her own brother and father and solt to be the perfect wife. knowing she has been watched her whole life. i have to think edward would understand she feels so lost and so not sure. he loves her and always has. but is it enough for her to actually marry him. maybe if he lets her go she will come back when she is ready to actually love him. man what a hell of a ride. i haved loved it all
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I am amazed how far everyone has come. Wow edward let her go. I am shocked. I had a feeling he would but still shocked. That had to hurt like hell. But I guess if you really think about it did he really love her. I am glad the boys went to therapy. I say they needed it. they all really needed it. So bella moved back to phoenix with her aunt and uncle. I am glad she gave up charlie's sex money for a good cause. go esme travelling good for her.
I had a feeling it might be edward she was dating or getting ready to. i am loving the kids in the families life. they all deserve so happiness in theor lives. can't wait for the epilogue.
love it
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
Love it. Finally a wedding that will last and is starting out on the right foot. the both got their dream jobs and the gate is down. I am thrilled esme got someone to love and cherish her-estatic. she deserves it they all do
can't wait for whatever you decide to do next, it has been a great ride
thanx
Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
well james and charlie got what was coming to them. probably more should have happen so they would know what the torture was like for these poor girls. but there was no heart or soul for these two pigs
alice my heart goes out to you
love it
love all the stories for this one, thanx
Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
well i am thinking maybe bella is like half human and half vampire
she is able to do things to edward that she shouldn't be able to unless she was changed
love it
Author's Response:
True.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
wow the wolves are descending. this is getting good. too bad bella doesn't know she has made a life altering decision. she will soon enough
man oh man she will not know what hit her. i am curious to see if the wolves make a move and how bella will react
i love that your writing again. i can't wait for your book to be released. if you do a book signing in la i will defentiely want to be there. can't wait
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I think i might be a little confused. is charlie aware of billie and the pack? if so is he aware of the cullens as well? it seems as if she considers billie her uncle. but it doesn't seem that she knows about the pack. i wonder how she is going to take the news. edward and bella's relationship is rather new, hmmmm
love it
Author's Response:
Don't worry, answers come in the next chapter. It's halfway finished. :)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
i can't wait for the next chapter.
so i am taking it that charlie knows all about both worlds. somehow renee got mixed up in the world and was taken from bella and charlie. wow at first i thought maybe somehow bella was pregnant from kissing. huh isn't that what are parents used to tell us, you'd get pregnant from kissing. so me and my friend at work where fighting over that section. so it seems maybe bella is a hybrid. she is changing from kissing edward. again love the chapter and can't wait for the update
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
wow i had a feeling she would choose paul. i am surprised i thought that when they imprinted that they would be what that person wanted them to be. it seems bella loves edward and not paul so really paul should have stepped down. i like that sam is trying. i believe he knows paul has not really imprinted. seems as if he is doing it as a revenge tatic. looking forward on where you go next with this story. i am stumped and i hope they all see that bella is not choosing paul and her heart is still with edward
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Bella's self-sacrifice will be addressed next chapter. And what you know of imprinting is correct, so what is he trying to accomplish?
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
well i am looking forward to seeing if bella is continuing to turn vampire or what is causing her to hear edward and why the missing pieces in edward's reading of minds and alice's visions. something is clouding it. hmmm makes me wonder. i am wonderign if bella could be half and half.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it~
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
wow the beast and edward are very interesting
bella is a lucky women to have him. they both truly love and respect her and are dying to have her fully
her mewing for her mate at the end seals it
fate love it
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Sins of the Past-Carlisle's Outtake
didn't see that coming mind blowing
Author's Response:
Glad you liked!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
i am dying to read the showdown between charlie and renee
am very curious why charlie has the strange feeling as to what the problem is
love the story
Author's Response:
Next chapter is going to be a mess...such a pain to write to get all the emotions right.
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153109
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth
i love her taking on this story and being so open with the idea.
love her dreams
Author's Response:
I always thought that Bella is such a complicated person who always sees the goog in everyone.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
I am not sure if i like the term baby girl. maybe it will grow on me. alice and edward okay kinda of hot. i am just so used to seeing edward and bella. but i love the way that alice perceives edward. i love that she is happy he has found his missing piece and realizes it and is thrille dfor him. she accepts and loves him completely.
love it
Author's Response:
I thought Baby Girl was sweet.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts
well man walking in on someone somewhat kind of awkard but he doesn't let it be.
she is getting a taste for their life. she is not being judgemental
alice is so cute with bella
love it
Author's Response:
I love Alice and Bella
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems
well alice spent way over her allowance. i don't know if i would have agreed to such punishment. seems a little extreme.
poor bella walking in on said punishment wow. i am surprised she didn't run. but ya alice is right. if edward wanted to bring bella in to the fold bella needed to know went goes on in the household. even though she doesn't know he has feelings for her. Akice does and thinks she would be perfect. as bella says it seems their happy home is misssing a piece. could she be that missing piece. she does get along with them well. she did not run after seeing what was happening
love it
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain
man over 30 smacks seems a little extreme. If i joined the family I would want to revisit the displinary punishment clause there.
how funny edward wakes up as rose is getting herself off. well nice of him to finish for her. i love all their chemistry
love it
Author's Response:
I have read that it is safer to increse the number of times you spank and use less force. Then trying to do fewer spanks with more force.
Yeah Rose waking Edward up that way seemed like it would be fun......
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception
love the story i hope you keep writing it.
in one breath it seems bella was okay with the punishment. but then after she has time to think about it she almost seems upset with him for hurting alice. but in the first she sees he takes no pleasure from it and sees that it pains him to be spanking her. when he is done he is truly sorry. if bella got to see the punishment she should have seen that he got her off afterwards. that their is good and bad. they are not suppose to be keeping anything from her.
poor Rose, Aro truly is a monster of a father in this story. Man the things she went through noone should have to go through. i am glad she was smart enough to cut her self to be able to talk with Carlisle and explain everything and have edward be there for her. i am pleased that the priest knowing how her father was married them. it could have been worse and the priest could have been on her fathers payroll or scared of him and she would have been sold to royce. yuck i bet her father was pissed that he lost out on a million dollars. i wonder if she has any kind of relationship with her family today. she wsa raised in a totally different environment.
will you be bringing in jasper or emmett in your story? i know they wouldn't be for the girls cause they are already married to edward but they could be friends. but i guess all the other girls are actually sisters huh.
love the story can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It is a complicated matter and the emotions that Bella is going to feel is also going to be very complicated. I didn't write Edward getting Alice off as a secret because they were hiding it, but as more of a private thing between a husband and a wife. I mean they didn't invite her into the bedroom to watch them have sex right. I never thought that it could be taken as them hiding something from her.
Yeah Aro is a monster. And your right no one should have to go thru what Rose did, but the sad thing is that girls go thru things like that everyday. Rose is very smart and she was brave enought to get help, and there was someone there that was able to help. Some aren't that lucky. I would hope that any priest would not get involved with someone like Aro, and when came to in a true life or death situation would have the strength and courage to help.
Soon you'll find out Aro's reaction, you'll just have to wait for it. I promise a lot of drama with that one. No Emmett and jasper will probley not appear in this story, only because I would have no clue how to put them in a situation where they couldn't be a part of there soulmates lives.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal
Congrats to your cousin on the baby boy. i think boys are easier than girls. thank god I only had one girl and 2 boys.
well the story was worth the wait. alot to take in. poor bella listening to rosalie and her heartbreak story. it seems we haven't heard the worst of it yet, OMG. We have to hold on. The pixie is pure adrelaine rush wheeeeeeee got to love her. I so love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. love it
Author's Response:
I know right my daughter is 6 going on 16...lol
There is more to Rosalie's story, but it's not all bad... I love Alice she is crazy.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved
I almost want to hear Bella's POV of all she has learned and how it has effected her. Also the feelings she has for each one of them and how that is effecting her. what she truly wants from life and where does she go from here. does she take a chance and live?
Rosalie still has the rest of her story to tell as well. we haven't heard all of it. not sure what more she can say
i am surprised Aro and his family disappeared like that. you would think a bully like him would have put up more of a fight.
love it, can't wait for the next chapter to see what all people think and want
Author's Response:
I'm sorry to say that there is more to Rosalie's story but nothing as bad as what we already know.
There is a little more to Aro's story that Edward wasn't aware of.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open
well I am surprised at what her final part with her dad was. I think i understand it more. Seems she finally stood up to her dad. she is a brave women. I felt bad for her seeing edward and bella. I was even more surprised that bella said something to rosalie about what was going on in the library. I cna't wait for more
love it
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression
This was a tough one. both women wanting his attention. man rosalie is intense. the way she needs to deal with her emotions wow how edward does it is amazing. man got to give it up to the man. H eloves bella but is willing to surpress it for rosalie. I agree with Alice he is the man and he wears the pants and he needs to pursue what makes him breathe, what makes him happy. so bella wasn't raised in the lifestyle but never say never. I wasn't raised in the lifestyle but if I meant someone i was head over heals with i would think about and weight all the pros and cons. he is selling her and himself short. I love the story. I am glad edward told rosalie to go to sleep. he was going back to alice. love it
Author's Response:
Thanks. There are so many things going on in Edward's head, hopefully soon he'll get his head on straight.
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge
I loved hearing from Alice. Man alot of shit went down. It seems alot of eyes where opened as well. I think it is good for bella to see what truly happens. But it does seem she is taking it all in stride. I am glad rosalie is stronger and is starting to heal. Poor edward he just seems like he needs a break.
love it
Author's Response:
I think it's a good thing that Edward has to work a 36 hour shift. He'll be able to put everything aside and go into doctor mode. But who knows what kind of trouble the girls will get in.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback
now that was alot of back ground on bella. i defentiely wouldn't have guessed that back story.
i love that he tried to open up to her a little. he enjoys being with her. ohh i get frustrated and wanting someone to say to her that they want her to be with them. that they are all feeling a pull to her. she is better with them
oh i love it
i think i would prefer weekly. love the story and want to read more. thanx
Author's Response:
Hopefully things will start to work out with everyone. They are all really messed up arn't they. I agree that Bella needs them as much as they need her.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone
i am thrilled that bella seems to be finding a way to help out and fit in. they got to spend a little time alone and all seemed to go well. i love that she is trying not to judge and listen to her heart and feel and go with the flow. she is really attrative to edward and he seems to have a lot to offer a women. love it all
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire
wow you have alot going on in your life. i am sorry for your families loss. i truly hope that your cousin heals and is still able to enjoy his passion of cars. congrats on your daughter turning 7 and your vacation.
love the story. i have been waiting for the two of them to tell each other their feelings. yeah. i can't wait for this to come out in the family meeting. i know alice will be thrilled. i am glad edward is seeing where this goes. he should know he needs to see things thru she makes him happy. i am thrilled and can not wait. communication is the key. he says he will be honest with all of them. you cna't ask for more. love it thanx for writing
Author's Response:
Thanks!
The meeting should be fun don't you think. There will be lots of drama and I personally love the drama.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing
love it. i am glad rosalie now has come to the conculsion the past is behind her and now she needs to fught for the family sitting in front of her. they all love her and they all want it to work. now she needs to want it and move forward. how funny if bella get's preganant first. sorry i am jumping ahead they haven't even brought that up. i love it and can't wait for more. thanx for writing
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table
i so love getting this update in my inbox. man has rose come along way. i am so proud of her. these guys defentiely have alot to work through but i have my hopes up. alice is such a spitfire look out. i love that she sees that bella fits in the family like a puzzle piece. she sees that bella makes edward whole. that she will be a good edition to the family. that she won't just be another body taking time with her husband but an ally and a friend a new wife and maybe a mother. she is what will complete their family. she is waht they all needed in a way. she needed them as well to complete her and finally be able to love and accept love. yeah it is new for her but like they say communicationis the key and with it none of them can go wrong. they will be able to have their happy life by being honest and loving with each other. i so love it and can not wait for the update. thanx for writing. yeah i am happy, love it
Author's Response:
OMG... You crack me up. I'm really glad you liked it. You have them all down pat, it's great to know that you see the characters exactly the way I see them.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Family Time
i really do love this family
it is very intresting to see the dynamic of how well they all work and live and love so well together
i am hoping and it seems bella is enjoying the family that she lets hersef be loved and be apart.
i was shocked by renesme hitting edward but it seems she was upset he was claiming her ella, loved it.
maggie and her outburst and stomping of her foot and hands on hips with edward and bella was great
love this family and can't wait for more. thank you for updating
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your continued support.
Renesmee and Maggie's reactions are both thing that my daughter has done in the past. I couldn't resist taking those memories and sharing them in this unique way.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day
well the talk would worry me a little. it seems bella didn't believe in the same punishment rules as the girls and i am right there with her. i wonder if she has to agree tot he rules or can she have her own. i love that what alice does for all those women and children. a great cause and they deserve a chance. love it
i hope the lunch goes well. it seems edward has the hots for bella like being a 14 yr old boy all over again. love it
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions
it is a process to move this story along. loving it every step of the way. wow when her eyes meet his when he was holding the baby, love it. kind of glad she is coming to the conclusion that she wants a family and with edward, wow.look out bella things are changing. i still predict that bella will be pregnant with edward's child before the other girls. love it all
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing
reneesme is adorable.
what a chapter. i think things are going well for bella. it is sad that she still doesn't see herself staying. it seems at times she does but she is so scared he doesn't want her
edward has quite the family dynamics. i guess it could be overwhelming and also so intriguing. bella has a lot to learn. seems it has sparked a maternal bone in her. i kind of see bella having the first child for edward. i so love it and looking forward to more
“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan
cute, bella is so strong and doesn't let her sight be a hindrance to her. love papa c in this. loved it when he called them his bitches
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning
love it bella is a spitfire
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
man that boy needs to be knocked down a peg.
i can't wait for bella to give it to him, what a prick
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions
she could have gone harder but i love the strong she devil she knows what she is doing
he so needs to be whipped into shaped I hope she can. he seems like a lost hope.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Junior
Love it and I am so glad Tanya got transfered
man she got what she deserved. too bad she didn't watch what she said, but she would have been going anyway
can't wait for lunch with Aro
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752831
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell
come on edward wake up, she is right in front of you and for how long.
i just started and i love this story. i am glued to it. i will be taking it with me to read in between my wait at the twilight convention tomorrow. yeah
love it
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I"m honored it will keep you company as you wait at the convention. I'm so envious. I'd love to go to one!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment
i love your end note, edward needs to get his head pulled from his ass
the guys have all seen it why did they not say something sooner. i am glad andy has made it back to the land of the living
love it
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
i love mama d she is great
i know it was a rough day hell a rough month for bella but she is strong and i am so proud of her. she makes a good doctor
love the chapter, love the story
love it
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J
alice and jasper , jasper is taking a chance.
man edward needs a beat down
love it
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out
the bar wasinteresting. you go bella kick grabbyhands ass. so proud of her
the girls sure do know there stuff. they know what to do to get under their skins. poor edward having a chubbie all night poor paining blue balls. well i am hoping he learned his lesson and is getting his head out of his ass.
i so love this story
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For
well edward has come through in my book
i am so glad he went and waited for her at the hospital instead of getting pissy that he was stood up. they both have jobs that take alot from them time wise and emotionally. man edward you out did your self
love it
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection
i so loved there first date. he put so much thought into it. he knew what she would like and went for it and turned out to be awesome. I had so much fun on going on the date with them
thanx
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum
Well bella heard for her self what type of guy trevor was and is. watch out ladies
so now a big red target what will we do. I am thinking why can't the girls stay together for safety or what about esme and carlisle. he does go to the hospital. got to keep her safe.
i love it all
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected
the ring is beautiful, love edward
i laughed so hard in this chapter. i so love all of them
i love this story
watch your backs girls
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings
wow, training has been a blast and alot of hard work they sure do bust there asses. i am so proud of my boys.
well the last person i expected to see at the bar is tanya and edwards mom. for some reason i thought she was died. my bad
poor bella i wish she would of waiting to see whta was going o like she did with lauren instead of making such a rash decision. then she leaves on a train to boot silly girl. love it
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster
well that was defenitely action packed. now I know why Tony was helping scum but. he was trying to protect his son. i am glad he warned bella but man he made it worse for himself and his son. now what
the guys got there in time. my heart broke when she throw the ring at edward. for once he wasn't being the player just wrong place wrong time. i don't think it will be the only time for that to happen as much of playboy that he was.
love it
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation
i think it is cute melissa and jake. seems he might have a bit of a crush on melissa. man to get a years worth of salary for a weeks worth of work. i know she is putting herself out there got to love it
i do not understand why the kids did not finish out there 2nd week. won't they get in trouble for leaving the way they did?
love it
Author's Response:
Well, actually it ended up being a break between the end of the first part and the beginning of the second half at a new location. They had down time, which is why the girls decided to make the trip. So, no trouble, they were just waiting for the rest to start the next week.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed
ahhh i never expected that story. gossebumps and the chills
elizabeth you did a good thing by keeping your son safe and turning him over to your sister. i know edward had alot of questions nad was really hurt by all her actions but it seems like he got alot of answers and they are in a better place. poor bella never did anything to elizabeth. i am glad she said sorry to bella. well maybe one day edward and bella will be in on the family mantle and their kids as well.
road head you go edward. OMG 300 hundred million or billion holy shit prenuptial thats fer sure. you know edward wont make her. love it
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment
their night together is getting closer.
i can't believe how good bella can shoot. i love the first part when edwards tells her not to worry she will get better.favorite part. knew jacob would be having fun with melissa, way to go jake. so i am glad they are trying to help Tanya. i am glad that she is accepting the help. she deserves a break. i sure hope she doesn't get mixed up with the wrong people.
love it
When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love? Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55115
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
poor edward
man pregnancy hormones, she has it bad
i feel for all of them
they all need to hide till there born
Author's Response:
Oh yeah! I took this from some of the hormones that I had when I was pregnant.
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Just found your story and I am giving it a read
I am liking it so far
can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking your time to read this story :D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
wow
that was hot
too bad she didn't say hi
loved it