Reviews by VC Toliver
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752826
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

I was born and raised in Chicago and I've traveled all over Illinois.  But, I have to tell you, Lake Forest is one of the most beautiful places I've ever been.

Summary:

Outtakes from Lustful Awakings. Find out what happened behind the closed doors between Peter, Charlotte, Charlie, and Renee,or William, Catherine, Carlisle, and Esme. Might even be some Emmett, Rose, Garrett, and Kate. Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, slash, and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26618 Read Count: 27929
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 09 Sep 2010
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How does one do a banner?  Yours looks groovy and your story is good.  :)



Author's Response:

I don't know, someone made it for me through Mybannermaker.com I think.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the beautiful, bi-racial, Director of her church's Afterschool Program, has been faithful to her commitment to remain a virgin until she is married. Tallahassee Police Officer, Edward Cullen's charm and sex appeal severely challenges her resolve. AU/AH Rated NC-17 Adult Content

Trust, Loyalty, Commitment Story Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242523 Read Count: 16527
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I really like this chapter.  Good job!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  Hope you will read and review again as you feel moved.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Passion and Synchronicity

Oh my God!  I don't know why because I've read a lot of Bella and Edward fics, but this Edward is so dang sexy to me.  :)  I wonder who was following in the gold car.  Their first fight.  :)  Well, I'm sure there will be many more to come.  Keep 'em coming, lady!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Copward is rather sexy.  Glad you're enjoying it.

I'll be updating tonight!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

I really liked this chapter and I can definitely relate to it.  I was raised to believe if you marry outside of your faith you are unevenly yoked, as well.  My mother was a Jehovah's Witness and my father wasn't.  There were problems.  I loved them both, but they didn't have the type of marriage that I would want.  So, I can understand her father's viewpoint about building a solid foundation and the relationship being statistically unlikely to work.

On the other hand, being that Bella's parents are in an interracial relationship should make them both sensitive to people telling her that her relationship is bound to fail.  If he doesn't support her, that's going to make her more determined to stay in the relationship out of stubbornness.  She's a grown woman.  She doesn't need his blessing and he's going to lose his daughter over it.

As far was what Edward says...I just hope the anger management is working out for him...lol  It wouldn't help his case to get into an argument with her father.  The only thing he could really say is that even if Rev. Swan doesn't trust him, he should trust his daughter's judgement, at least.

Great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I know how it is to struggle against decisions that war against your beliefs, which is why I put this scenario in the story.  Charlie, unfortunately, had to be the character to bring to the story that dramatic tension.  He will come around eventually, believe me.

Thanks for reading and so thoughtfully reviewing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

:)  Very nice chapter!

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: From The Inside Out

Lady, this was a great chapter!  Hurry up and update!!!!  :)  Hey, would your betas mind another grateful writer to help out?  I had a lovely beta, but I'm looking for a little bit of a change. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Renesmee and Jacob have just married and Edward and Bella are free to enroll in yet another university, where they plan to follow a course of classical studies. Suddenly Edward leaves and Bella is confused and totally alone. However, she is sure of his love and fears that something terrible might have occurred. It has. Indeed something happened when Carlisle was in Rome in the 17th century and now all the Cullens have to pay for it. A Latin myth opens for Bella the road that might allow for her to rescue them.

 

 

 

As I am a disaster with inserting characters, they are: Bella, Edward, Carlisle, Aro, the Cougar, all the Cullens and the Hon. Salvi Donati.

 

 

 

I am thinking to stop posting the story unless I get some reviews. If readers don't like it, then so be it.  I am surprised because on Twilighted net and ff  net it was well liked. I now post Chapter 9, and see what happens.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24333 Read Count: 1394
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 10 Jul 2010
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Gone

The summary sounds so interesting!  I haven't even read it yet and I'm excited.  :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much. The stupid site did not tell me I had a review. I need to check my preferences.

I hope you'll continue reading and let me know what you think

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389593
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Girl!  Thank you so much for putting up that image of Boris Kodjoe as Laurent!  I never thought of that.  He is just a BEAUTIFUL man.  :)  I like that your story is a real story and not just BDSM stuff.  Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Welcome aboard and I´m glad that you´re enjoying it!  Thanks for R & R!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

Oh my goodness!  I didn't know you rec'd my story!  Thank you so much.  I'm loving this story by the way.  :)



Author's Response:

Of course I did, it´s a great story!  You commented on me using Boris, I´m so glad you added the banner, with your story being the first biracial Edward, I wasn´t sure from your description what he would look like, but you chose the perfect person!  Thanks for leaving me some love!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

I'm glad he punched him.  Bella's divorce is final.  Leah's too stupid to see that Jacob is playing her for what reason I'm not sure.  Why in the world would Bella need Jacob's money.  She's already wealthy.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

This is excellent, Tiger and JSjellybean!  I love the parts you added.  ;)  Can't wait to find out what happens next!  

xx

Cocoa



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

 

Thank you, Cocoa. I appreciate all of your help! It means a lot to us. Btw Tyggy let me hear it with the Ole knife LMAO  Hey I was tired. *giggles*

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

Summary:

 

 

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Long, Long, ago, in the deep southern bayous of New Orleans, a time when the world seemed so simple, A single mistake was made by a ravenous immortal during the night of carnival; a holiday we now call Mardi Gras. A simple amulet bathed in the power of a mysteriously, magical religion was used to interfere with what fate had written in stone. Its sole purpose was not to protect  the endangered, but to keep 110yr old Edward from finding his true mate. Watch from beginning to end how even with interference, what will be shall be. Nothing can stop true destiny. It is only a matter of time until our dear Edward finds his l'âme soeur. It is their Destiny

 

 

 

 

 

Warnings: Darkward...sorta. um  : Mild violence, mentions of voudoo, ghost and spirits, little gore,sex,alcohol, small drug use, fictional use of historical people, mentions of conjuring practices...

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10854 Read Count: 1797
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: L'introduction

This chapter makes me want to stay far away from Mardi Gras.  :)  Very good, Thaigher.  Can't wait for what's coming next!

 

Amy

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Awakening of a See'er

Very interesting beginning, Thaigher!  I can't wait for more.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love your story. :D I just wanted to give you a tiny heads up and it's not critical at all. When a judge sets bail the defendent is only required to pay 10% and he or she gets it back if they show up for the trial date. If they don't show up, then they have to pay the whole amount. Bail is just an assurance that the defendent will show up. It's not punitive because people are innocent until proven guilty. Although, I don't think this Charlie could pay $25,000 either, so it's not a big deal at all. :D I just thought you might want to know that for future reference.

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Why in the world is he not paying his rent or medical bills if he has that much money? Was he a dirty cop?

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great story! I think their relationship is so sweet.