Reviews by fr_larsson
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

Loved the chapter, as always, =) loved the introduction of Edward,

Happy Easter, Linda

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

Loved the chapter, =) as always,
i find him creepy, like the Crypt keeper =/ but that´s just my imagination...

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Loved the chapter, =) as always,
and if you´re demented and crazy, well, then i´m one of the same club *grins*

This is your story, your AU, and i love the ride you´re taking me on, hope you feel the love some of us have for this story.

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. We really enjoy our readers.. We are so glad that you are having a good time with this.. (even if it is creepy... lol.)  But that's why we are here.. To suspend disbelief...and what better way than a crack head cult leader... PERFECTION...hahaha

 

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Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Loved the chapter, =) as always,
glad to see Alice but
he sure is one creepy b*stard

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Loved the chapter, the return of Felix,
and the update of what Charlie has been doing.

best wishes, Linda

 

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Loved the chapter, glad she´s got Alice,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Loved the chapter, the progress and Happy Anniversary wishes, even if it´s a little late, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Loved the chapter, and Good Luck wishes to your publishing =) and i love the site,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Loved the chapter and he really is deranged LOL

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Loved the chapter, wonder what Felix left for Charlie..

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Loved the chapter, the progress and their stolen moments =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Loved the chapter, poor Bella, how is she going to get out of this?

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

Loved the chapter and Edwards epiphany, wonder what happened to Bella..

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Loved the chapter, Carlisle´s backstory was really gruesome, poor sod, wonder where Bella is?

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Loved the chapter, gruesome and i feel sorry for Bella, wonder who it was coming through the door... *hmm* looking forward to the next chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

Loved the chapter, =) as always, love the progress and EPOV

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

*aaah* << sounds of dispair =) Loved the chapter, oh, what action, and who would have thought James could be bargained with? and Edward to the rescue, at least he found her *sigh* longing for the next chpt.

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Love the chapter, =) the update and the progress, and Mistakes sound like something i would love to read, =D

best wishes, Linda xoxo

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Love the chapter and the progress, =) and the answers Charlie´s getting,

best wishes, Linda xoxo

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

*wow* he sure has gone over the deep end =/ have to hurry along to the next chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda oxxo

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

Love the chapter and the progress, at least they have each other =/

best wishes, Linda xoxo

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Love the chapter and the progress, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

*wow* looove the chapter, the rescue, wonder how Carlise & co will survive now that Aro is on the lose =/

best wishes, Linda

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514676
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Love this story, and can´t wait for the next chapter, =)

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Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Loved the chapter, can´t help but get nervous and anxious about the GPS though...  *bite my nails*

Looking forward to the next chapter,
best wishes, Linda

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Loved the chapter, what a cliffie! =)

Can´t wait for the next chapter,
best wishes, Linda

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Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Loved the chapter, =)

Best wishes, Linda

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Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Loved the chapter, and the poetic justice, =)

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Love love love the chapter, and the ending, =) i loved the journey,
thank you, for that,

best wishes, Linda

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624983
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Love your story,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

Loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Loved the chapter, i´ll follow this story everywhere, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

Happy Easter, Linda

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Loved the epilogue, and this story, =)

best wishes, Linda

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the chapter, and the insight to Alice and Jasper.

best wishes, Linda

Bella's Gift by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Bella only wants one thing for her birthday. She has always been the strong one. She’s been dreaming of a tall, dark & handsome man who can take charge. Could he be real or is he only a dream?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5269 Read Count: 2734
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved this one-shot,

best wishes, Linda

Summary:

Hate is a passionate emotion.  It can drive people to do things they never thought would do.  Hermione and Draco's hatred collides and explodes into hot, steamy passion.  Our entry for the Birds & Bees Writing Challenge.

Impassioned Banner


Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2769 Read Count: 2198
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Impassioned One Shot

Loved the first chapter, =)
hatesex is always fun,

best wishes, Linda

Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89650
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

loved the heated-angry-smutty-fluff, and that
she told off Emmett, you go girl *smile*

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

Sorry about my delayed response. I am glad you are loving the story, hope you'll continue to read and review.

 

xoxooxoxox

Mynxi & Jasper

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41876
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

Loved the chapter, as always, =)

can´t wait to see what he´s going to do to Mike.

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Dark Abyss

Loved the chapter, biting my nails as I wait for next chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Blazing Suns

Loved the chapter, =) love the reunion, the fluff and his progress,

best wishes, Linda

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

loved the first chapter,

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

:) thank you very much, i hope you enjoy the rest :) xx

Abi xx

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Trapped

loved this chapter, too.

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

:) im very happy your still enjoying it :) xx

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

still loving it =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

Love Darkward, loved the chapter

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings

Loved this chapter, too, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

Loved this dark chapter, too. =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

Liked it, a lot, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball

loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

Loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

Loved the chapter, as always, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

Loved this chapter, too =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control

Loved the chapter =)  (what a surprise hehe)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

Loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

Loved the chapter, as always, =)

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

Loved the chapter,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you very much, the next chapter is coming in like half an hour :) and thank you very much for all of your mugs, sorry i didn't reply to all of your reviews, i was waiting for you to finish. thank you very much for reviewing each chapter, it makes me very happy :) xx

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

Loved the chapter, =) as always,
can´t wait to see what Edwards former love was like, *curious*

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

hehe you shall know soon :) thanks for the review and for the mugs :) and I would like to welcome you, I love new readers :) xx

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

=) loved the chapter, and the fluff-lemon

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you, and cheers for the mugs :) x

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Doomed

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Trust

Loved the chapter, =) as always,
can´t believe that she´s falling for Jacobs words.. silly Bella..

Happy Easter, Linda



Author's Response:

i knw but she will learn her lesson :) and thank you i hope you have a good easter too :) xx

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Fighting the Monster Within

Loved the chapter as always, =)

I don´t trust Jacob, but Bella seems to..

Best wishes, Linda

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you very much for the mugs, and for the review :) xx

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

Loved the chapter, as always, =)

i have faith in you and the story.

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you very much linda, i'm glad your enjoying it :) and thank you for the cups :) xx

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Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts

Loved the chapter, =) as always,

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

Loved the gruesome chapter, i keep telling myself that they´ll get whats coming, she will get her revenge LOL otherwise i would be miserable w this torture, =) i have faith in you.

best wishes Linda

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two

Loved the chapter, the progress and i wonder what Aro is up to.. *hmmm*

best wishes Linda

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri

=) loved the chapter, as always, loved the return of the monster and the progress,

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you so much, and thank you for the mugs :) xx

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Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

Love the chapter and the progress, =) glad he´s letting the monster come out and play,

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

yup the monster is out to play :] hehe xx

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

Love the chapter and the progress, =) as always, love her ability, wonder what´s going on.. . I´ll wait and see,

best wishes, Linda xoxo

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Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Mute

Love the chapter and the progress, =)

best wishes, Linda



Author's Response:

thank you sweetie :] xx

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Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude

Love the chapter and the progress, sorry to hear about your bad news, hope everything will be fine,

best wishes, Linda xo



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie, and I'm doing alright thanks, I still have to wait to get all the results back :/ thanks for the love xx

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Like a Moth to the Flame

Love the chapter, =) the update and the progress,
glad Edward has a plan,

best wishes, Linda xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie :] xx

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Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Final Piece

Love the chapter, the planning and what will come, =)

best wishes, Linda xoxo

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Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Oblivion

Wow that was a twist i didn´t see coming, =) Love the chapter and Bella´s surprise,

 

best wishes, Linda xoxo

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

Loved your story,  =) love the ending and i´m glad you got a happy progress, too <3 Sorry to hear about your Scoliosis but i´m glad you´ve found something that helps.

All the best, hope to read more from you,
Linda xoxoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

A one shot story following ExB from the time they met, to their happily ever after. Set for Valentine's Day and for Breath-of-Twilight's Countdown on fanfiction.net

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5690 Read Count: 302
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved your story,

best wishes, Linda

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob

Loved the first chapter, you can tell Edward leaving her
didn´t make her better.. Not his intention, i bet =)

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Cameron

Loved the chapter, =) and the mystery-messager.

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Alex

Loved the chapter, =) and the building of anticipation..

best wishes, Linda

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella

Loved the chapter, =)

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chris

Loved the chapter, =) the progress and intro. of Edward,

best wishes,Linda

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jacob

Loved the chapter,  =)

best wishes, Linda