Ok I will go easy on you since you have had hell week.  I was going to ask if you were sure you wrote this chapter because it didn't sound like it came from you.  Not that it was bad but different.  I know some authors do that, they let their beta's write a chapter just to see if we will know the difference and I dont think that is write.  If the beta's wants a chance then she needs to write for herself under her own name.  Ok sorry for my rant.  As for the chapter, I miss the Dom in Edward.  I know he did get upset at her not adjusting well with his money and I like that part of him.  But the whole thing with Esme and her cursing and all the joking around just didn't sound like you.  But I ugess you want us to view her different since they are getting into the lifestyle now too.  Anyway it was definitely a different chapter.  Thank you for the time that you put into it.  I am sure that was really frustrating that you had to re-write everything. 

Wow long chapter indeed.  I took a couple potty breaks. lol.  I was surprised at a few things, first Bella didn't use her Butterfly at all.  Second she didn't get to vent and scream at Charlie because of tossing her aside to take care of another kid.  Yeah that is a hot topic for me since it happened to me too.  Damn men. Anyway, I love how Edward was losing his shit with the papz's being at his house after NY.  It was nice to see him lose control sometimes.  Great chapter and I always love a long read.  The rec you gave, I am already following almost all of them, so I guess we have good taste huh?  lol.

I really liked this chapter.  I am so glad that the scene they did at the party was not too detailed.  I was really worrying about the intercourse infront of people.  That is just a hard limit for me.  Anyway yes I am dying to know what was in the letter but I am sure it was nothing good.  I think that maybe Edward will be hurt that she didn't let him read it instead of his father.

First I am so sorry that I have negleted this story but it is NOT because I am bored its just that there is so many stories out there that I cant keep up anymore. lol.  I am following over 170 on this site alone.  ok as for the chapter it was EXCELLENT.  I think Edward was being a real ass but I LOVE that he was able to break down and cry.  I wanted to cry when he  thought he couldn't get an erection.  Because I knew it was all mental plus side effects from the meds.  I loved this chapter.  I know they will get back there and I cant wait.  Now for FIORELLA  I hope you are better and I LOVE that you take the time to give us the REC'S  I have already put them on my alert so I can start reading them sometime.  Now you wanted a rec also and its a friend of mine and this also is Edward as an FBI agent I dont know if its like the one you are looking for but I have read this story completely and it is WONDERFUL.  I did wish there were more lemons or more details I should say but even without I think it is a great Story.  Its called Prom Night by Piper528 http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=4756  If you do read it let her know I sent you please.  She doesn't have very many readers because I just introduced her to TWCS so please help her out.  Thanks.

I just found this story and it is VERY interesting. but I cant help but ask, why do you only have the one story posted here and not all of them?  I see you have a lot posted on Fanfiction and I love TWCS so much more because you can post pictures right into each chapter if you want and they are not as strict with rules. 

This is a very unique story and I am very interested in finishing it.

Hhhhmmm I was not expecting a wall so that his sperm did not go into her.   I was thinking maybe if he got her pregnant that they would let them live  and not kill them but I guess there will be no babies for them.

I knew when he told her to leave her purse that something was going to happen.  Damn he should have thought of what she needed inside. 

ok this is not what I expected. You didn't even show that Edward seen what that guy did to her neck. Like there was no reaction from him at all.  I know you dont want it to be sappy but he didn't have any reaction. If he didn't have feelings for her then why would he have run to her when his men said something was wrong.  I just think you should have written something about him seeing what the guy did to her neck.

wow well we knew that they were going to be pissed when they knew what happened to the girls.  And now its Edwards turn to get pissed when he sees Bellas neck.  I hope you can update sooner. I was worried that you were not going to continue this story.

I loved it. Edward gives her pleasure in her dressing room. Cute.  lol.  I was surprised when Edward went ape shit on Michel though. lol But hey it was funny, he was kissing her way too much.  I was really shocked that he left Bella unprotected though especially after he knew that she was in danger.  Ok also I seen two words that you didn't write the definition for so I dont know what they mean, one is Child Joker and the other is Roundheels.  So can you please explain those for me? 

uhhh oohh it looks like Johnny is going to kill Michel.  Bella will be upset. 

Thanks for the update.

Ok that was sneaky of you to make us think she just let him fuck her and she just met him. LMAO.  but DAM that was good sex. lol.  It was totally hot.  So yeah I cant wait to see more.

THat was amazing. I am so glad they made up and now plan to have another date.  I love how sure Edward is of himself. I love how he doesn't let her go when she tries to get away from him.  I cant wait til the date to see these hotties in action.

This chapter was funny and romantic.  Poor Bella and her A/C but hey they made the most of it. And Emmett and Jasper sure are being mean by teasing Edawrd about his date.

Finally a lemon. I am excited to see it progress into more passionate ones. And see them both lose control.

WOW!!! uuummmmm well I loved the lemon although it felt too short. But I hate the way he pulled out of her to cum on her and then just gets up and leaves. What a dick.

WEll that was an interesting way to meet the man of your dreams. lol.  I cant wait to see more.

Sneaky BElla and funny Emmett. I should have known he would have crept up and listen in on the conversation. I would have screamed too. LMAO.  Ok it seems Tanya is possesive of Edwards sexual abilities. lol. I would be too. But oh well we all know its Bella turn so Tanya must move over.

I like this story alot but I feel like I got cheated in this chapter because really it was just the same thing in BPOV.  So I am looking forward to the next chapter.

OMG LMAO I didn't forget about Tanya.  I knew exactly what was going to happen.  Well that's what he gets for wanting two women.  So now where is Bella going to go?????  I hope Edward takes care of Peter.  Oh and you said in the last chapter that you had chapter 10 at your beta's already.  I was wondering where is chapter 9????

She LEFT??? But they were getting along so good.  I expect Tanya will be big trouble in the future. Gosh I cant wait for this love story to start showing.  I mean the physical part, its always the best. 

I really love this story but its very disturbing that the updates are so far between.  My mom just recently discovered your story and she loves it too. Her pen is PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine and she is 65. LMAO she loves to read Dom/Sub stories so...... Anyway I hope your real life is ok and maybe we can get more updates faster.  I didn't even remember her seeing his playroom. Last I remember she was running out of his house but I thought it was about what happened with Tanya.  Anyway I guess I will have to go back and re-read.  Take Care.

So does this mean we are going to be getting regular updates now????? Ok Jasper, who knew?  I thought it was Edward.  Well I am sure Edward is going to be pissed about his car.  But what did he expect.  I thought it was pretty funny actually.  Poor Jasper is going to get a new asshole turn into him. LOL

Wow Jake is such a jackass.  Why even tell her if they were over allready?  That was just to hurt her more. uugghhh some guys have no brains.

I am liking this story.  I seems that Edward is the only one that is Humane in there well besides Carlisle.  I cant wait til he sees Bella and see where this story goes.  I love reading Dom stories so I think this is going to be fun.

Wow that Bella and Jacob sure did a mistake in kissing infront of them.  I knew it would only cause more trouble.  Bella sure is a spitfire.  I love this story already.  Please keep writing.  I just found this story by random searching and I love it.

Well at least we know that Edward thinks she is beautiful.  I hope he doesn't hurt her for her first time but I am thinking that is what he is going to do.

Well its not what I expected.  I dont really think its necessary to repeat the same thing in different pov's but I guess in some cases it is. I mean it was a lot of the same thing only in BPOV.  He at least gave her an orgasm but still I was expecting him to deflower her right away.  But even the orgasm she had seemed of very little details.  I mean she didn't even moan or squirm around.  I dont know I expected him to talk to her more to get her to her orgasm. You know kind of walk her through it.  I am just trying to help, I hope you dont get offened by my review.  I cant wait for more.

I was shocked that Edward was there waiting for Jacob, they are very smart people that is for sure.  As for Bella the poor girl is going to suffer a lot I am sure for what she did to Jasper.  I am sure that Edward is going to be very cruel to her but I am anxious for when he starts to finally treat her nice. And to get some nice lemons.

Well at least Edward admitted that he has feelings for her. But we already knew this.

I am sorry I thought I had reviewed this chapter.  Yes I liked this chapter better. But again. I think there is not enough action with Bella and Edward. I mean He is supposed to be a slave driver but yet he isn't doing anything to her. I would think he would have shared some of his feelings for her at least to himself or given her a taste of some of the pleasures that he can give.  Also I am very surprised that he has not deflowered her yet.  I mean she only has a couple days left and I would think he would have saved her from letting the masters do it.  Please dont take offense to my review I am just expressing my desires.

LMAO I knew she was going to leave him chained to the bed.   I am so glad that Edward and Bella are finally going to be iin the picture.

wow the Volturi Brothers are demons.  I sure hope Edward can do something to help her.

Well that was wonderful. At least he gave her pleasure but it was sad that she thought it to be Jacob.  I felt bad for Edward. So I cant wait til the next chapter to see what happens next.

for as much as Jasper said he hated his father and what he did to the slaves it didn't stop him from becoming just like him, did it?

I love this chapter because he had the chance to save her and prove to her that he would not let anything happen to her.   I am so glad that Jasper lost his memory. lol  I know that sounds bad but he is a better man now than he was so it was good for him. 

Well its about time that he deflowered her.  I would have liked for it to be missionary so that they could see each other.

Well it looks like Jacob went too far with his jealousy.

Well its about time those assholes of the Volturi got their payback for all the torture they put those girls through.

Well she speeks a little.  I tried to look up the italian word Aiutatemi but I found no translation.

wow I wish I knew how to get on the forum, I hear about it from a lot of stories but I haven't figured it out yet. lol.  So I dont have many theries yet as to what it going on except that maybe Bella was maybe raped or a submisive and ranaway.  As for Edward I dont know.  Jake well he seems to have schizophrinia.  I dont think I spelled that right. I sure hope he doesn't come back.  YEAH they finally had a little kiss.  I cant wait for more.

I think this is a very sad story full of pain and suffering and I think they both need a little love to lighten up a little.  I mean he hasn't even kissed her yet.  So I think they need a little lovin to get through the pain together.

its about time. Gosh I am so ready for them to have a physical relationship. Edward sure went through some rough shit. I am glad they found each other.

This was so hot. I am sooooo glad that they pushed their relationship a little. It was so HOT what they did with the kissing and the naked chest together. I loved it.

OMG I just started this story and I am loving it already.  I cant wait to get to more.  I wonder though how on earth Edward thinks people wont be able to smell the smoke on him?  I hate smoke and I can smell it even over cologne.  lol.

lol Dick twitch. That was funny. Well at least he has balls. I mean he had the nerve to feels her ass and to ask her out so that is good.

Well I loved the twister game that was awesome.  As for Jake, I knew he would try something.  Too bad she couldn't even call Edward cause Jake broke her phone.  I just hope he is not following her.

That was a great first time of making love. He didnt last too long but it has been a long time for both of them so hopefully he will do better later.

this is great for someone that doesn't have pregnancy history. ok you asked for a story and I will give you one. God honest truth.  I was about 4 months pregnant and I was cramping and bleeding, I went to the doctor and he asked how big my bloodclots were that I was losing and I told him.  He said I had already lost the baby.  I was devestated because I had already had a miscarige the year before.  Well I went back for a check up and they did a blood test when I got hom I called for the results the next day and they told me I was still pregnant.  I went to the Dr. again and asked how can that be, he said I must have been pregnant for twins.  The rest of the pregnancy was complete bed rest. It was terrible.  I had a girl.  When she was about 3 we seen her talking to herself and we asked her, "who are you talking to?". SHe said, "I am talking to my sister Leah". Our mouths dropped open. We asked her what does Leah look like?, she said, "she looks just like me".  We were spookedby the whole thing. She continued to talk to Leah for about a year then it finally faded.  True story.