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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
Renee is truly daft. She knew her DAUGHTER was likely suffering as she was, yet she was concerned about her relationship with Phil after she woke naked and chained wearing a chastity belt? I'm begining to think she really does deserve her fate. I can't wait for the next update.
Love your wicked minds ladies! I followed your stories here to the new site and I'm diggin' it.
Better get Greenaway, the author of Edward's Clan over here. If they took down The Training School, it's only a matter of time for her. Her story gave me nightmares! Her mind scares the bejebus out of me!
Big hugs and air kisses to my favorite writing duo!
Author's Response:
OH OH OH...She is already here...and we LOVE IT...she has most of her Edward's Clan one shots already up...look her up... Doesn't that story scare you to death...but my god she writes it so good.. I can't stop. I always tell people it is a cross between Twilighted and Pulp Fiction...Freaking wonderful.
ANYWAY...just had to let you know she is here...and we love it..
Thanks for reading our sick story... (WE LOVE THIS ONE TOO...and talk about nightmares...whew...)
Footroza
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
This Aro guy is a nutter. I noticed at the end there in the super cool tape that she had to listen to that he holds the key to her chastity belt until she weds, however, it said her body would carry only Father's children... so does that mean she may wed but any child she has will be Aro's?
So when does Edward show his face? Or will we not know him as Edward...will he have a different name or are the ladies the only ones who get their names changed?
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Ugh... Aro is soooo creepy. Kinda makes my skin crawl and vomit a little in my mouth. I feel really sick for the poor virgin girls that have the displeasure of being one his chosen ones. Bella...er...Elizabeth, come to your senses...find something to pick the lock on that disturbing belt and run! At the very least, drink the Koolaid! Death would be better than having that skeevy Aro planting his demon spawn in your body... and did he really say while the others watched? Is he really planning to pop her cherry in front of spectators? Would it be like dinner theater? And... this chastity belt... ewww... I bet her girly bits smell pretty rank and she's probably chaffed and gross. Ahhh... but my sick mind does enjoy your stories. Can't wait to see how this unfolds.
Author's Response:
I swear I spit my coffee out when I read this.. "Drink the Koolaid." fucking hell.. that is still cracking me up... I so think that should be the name of one of our chapters...hahahahaha...
and..."Dinner theater..." hahahahaha.. omg..that is classic... I can see it now... "Hey, Father Aro...nice thrusting...BTW..could you pass me the potatoes..." hahahaha..
Thanks for the wonderful review.. You made my day.
Hey.. I am reviewing your review...that's funny.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
So, is Father Aro a charismatic nut job that believes whole heartedly in the B.S. he thrusts upon his followers or is he really a charismatic pervert who likes to control the so called weaker sex? ... Or does the fact that he probably has a very small penis drive him completely insane and this is the only way he can score chicks so they won't laugh at his tiny member? He seems to like the virgins... they don't have anything to compare his petite size to. Sorry, just some theories and ponderings that were running through my mind as I was reading this chapter. Aro makes my skin crawl.
Thanks for the update. You ladies rule all things sick and twisted!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace
Wow... was Edward meeting his future wife or buying livestock? I'm shocked he was allowed to touch her with all of Aro's controlling creepy-ness.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
As I had suspected, not all the Volturi Order disciples are happy with their lot. Now, Carlisle and Esme, are they being kind because she is to be Edward's and they like her? Or are Aro's minions only tight asses when Aro's in the room?
No mirror in the bathroom? How does a person in the order make sure their hair isn't sticking up, no boogers hanging out of their nose, nothing stuck to their teeth, etc?
Still think Aro's a nutter with a teeny peeny! ;)
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
Ok... I get the fact Bella has been brainwashed. I understand Edward, being born into this, it's all he has ever known. Is Aro really that charasmatic? I would think that at some point a mutiny will occur. I also like to imagine that Aro has a small penis and this is his way of proving his manhood because he lacks length and girth. Could explain why he likes the virgins, they have nothing to compare it to. He's like the Wizard in the Wizard of Oz in my mind. All hype and in the end, he isn't really anything special. Only Aro is wicked crazy. ;)
It would be awesome if Carlisle decided to pump her full of birth control rather than her vitamins which I can only imagine being fertility drugs. Edward is his wife's child with Aro, there has to be some underlying resentment no matter what kind of front he puts up. Edward even thought to himself a chapter or so ago that he wanted to be her first, not Aro. So I'm thinking that not all the men are content with this life.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
*waiting for the ATF and CNN's Anderson Cooper to pull up to the gate of the compound. The ATF blaring a horrible song on repeat, probably something from RUN DMC, while Anderson tells us about how Aro grew up...He lived in the brothel where his mother worked...*
It seems to me that Aro has created this family to satisfy his inner sexual devient. Always new young freshies to sample.
How far away is Elizabeth/Bella's birthday? I'm confused about how long she's been there and how long til the big event.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Rebecca is Renee, right, I think? I can't really muster sympathy for Renee. Normally I wouldn't support punishing someone because of their stupidity but Renee kind of deserves it. Hello, the woman had plenty of red flags before she put herself and her daughter in a car and left Pheonix. So whatever her perceived transgressions may be... she kinda deserves the punishment.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
OMG... What is that pervie freak doing to Bella/Elizabeth?
It always confounds me how smart, seemingly normal people can get sucked into a cult. I know brain washing is a huge part of it... I guess since I've never experienced it, it seems unreal.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
Imagine that, Charlie happens on Felix of all people. Crossing my fingers hoping Felix will make a call. When Charlie does find them, I hope he leaves Renee's ass there.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
I think that the person who is watching is probably Aro or that guy Felix that Charlie ran into in the last chapter. It's pretty clear he didn't enjoy what he did to her.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Phew... I thought that Aro was going to perform the ceremony the good old fashioned way. This way was disturbing enough. Poor Jasper with a knife held to her. Doesn't Aro know that not every woman bleeds? I wonder how many innocents have been killed because they didn't bleed.
I wish that Edward and Bella were allowed a little more interaction. He seems so absent from the story.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Aro is so creeptastic. I knew no matter how freaking horrific Alice's experience was, it was too clinical for Aro's nature. I hope Elizabeth/Bella will stop taking her "vitamins". She could easily palm them or hide them under he tongue.
With so many "chosen ones", isn't their family going to start being horribly inbred at some point? It would be freakin' awesome if all this was for naught and Aro was sterile or something. All his chosen ones actually not his at all. Or maybe, Carlisle could have been substituting his seed with the actual seed of the new husbands.
Author's Response:
You are wonderful. I love your passion... Yeah.. he doesn't implant his seed in his own daughters.. and his children are not allowed to marry each other. But once the couple gives birth to Aro's child.. they are free to have more children. So there will always be more for him... ewwwww.. That was even hard for me to write.. hahaha. Thanks
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
I thought Felix might crack and do the right thing.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Uh oh... Bella is in for it now. Maybe she'll be lucky and Phil won't be the only one following her... Maybe her Edward was watching too and he'll save her... I hope!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Might not have been the chapter we were expecting but it was important nonetheless. We now know what has been happening with Edward and he found one of Charlie's fliers... awesome! Wish he'd showed it to Carlisle right away though.
Author's Response:
Oh she just knows the plot and what is happening in the story and is insisting I hurry up with the chapter she wants.. I hope she doesn't read this but she is going to be waiting for another 2 chapters LOL we just worked out what is happening for the next 2 chapters and it is the 2nd chapter.. LOL oh well... :)
Thanks for reading.. :)
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
It's a shame Edward feels as though he can trust no one. He really needs to show Carlisle and Esme that missing persons poster. He needs allies right now. They need to build up their ranks and have a good old fashioned mutiny.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Oh! At the end... is that Edward coming to find her?
Aro is so creepy and dilusional. 'Mirror mirror on the wall, who is the creepiest cult leader of them all?'
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
That Aro is one cool cult leader. And hey... it's lonely at the top. It's probably hard to meet a woman who would just love him for who he is and not what he is. Yeah, chaining a 15 yr old girl to your bed and beating her into submission is entertaining but it is also exhausting. Nobody really gets him, ya know. The punishments, the berating, the beatings, the belttling, having to make all the decisions for everybody, not to mention all the hymen breaking. He is a busy, lonely little man. Has he tried eHarmony? Oh that's right, they match personality profiles... they probably would not accept somebody with his unique personality.
SWM looking for a woman between the ages of 15 and 18 who enjoys canings, whippings, and shunnings. Must have intact hymen and also enjoy public humiliation. I own my own Ranch with armed guards on duty 24/7. Once you arrive you won't be able to leave!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
I knew Felix wouldn't let Charlie down. He wasn't able to shake his guilt over Bella. Let's hope Charlie lets him live so he can help rescue Bella.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Yep, Aro's cheese has gone and slid off his cracker.
Is no one going to question why Elizabeth was in Aro's room in the first place?
I hope Charlie and Felix can save these kids soon.
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Wow... I'm glad I wasn't chosen.
Aro is an example of what happens when mental illness is left untreated. He needs some psychotropic drugs, a padded cell, a lobotomy... a few hours alone with Charlie and Carlisle when they find out what he has done to their children. I know Aro is to have fathered the first born of most of his flock but I am still holding out hope that he is sterile and none of them are tainted with his genes.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515147
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
That cliff hanger was absolutely evil! Aro, the man we've all been waiting for, finally picks up the phone to reach out and touch someone, and the chapter ends. You two ladies are diabolical! Wicked I tell you!
Thanks for the update. I'm confined indoors because of the nasty winter storm we were hit with here in Pennsylvania last night. It's not the pretty fluffy snow, it's the heavy kind that bends trees and pulls down power lines and causes chaos on the road ways. So, thanks for the entertainment while I'm held hostage by the weather.
Amy
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
My favorite dynamic duo of fanfiction, thanks for another chapter! I truly do appreciate all the work you put into writing for us all. You keep us all entertained with your originality. You may borrow the characters but the universe in which they exist is all your own.
Now, I don't know if it was intended to be this way or if it was coincidental. This chapter, to me anyway, parallels the chapter in Eclipse when the Cullens and the wolves were preparing to fight Victoria and her new borns. Edward stays with Bella during the fight. In this chapter, Edward stays behind with Bella and Vicki while the others go to set a trap at Edward's house. Now, we know how that turned out in Eclipse, so will Edward and the ladies be ambushed by James and or Laurant while the others are at his house? We all know James is going to track Vicki with that blasted chip he injected her with.
Can't wait for more! Thanks again.
Amy
Author's Response:
You are actually the first person to pick up on that...WAY TO GO...that is totally what we were thinking about during the writing of this chapter...as to whether James will come....hummm..I'll never tell....just makes the next chapter oh so much more fun....
:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...
Love your...Batman and Robin....
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh man... I hope Edward can save the day before anything bad happens...evil cliffhanger....
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Thanks for the bonus update ladies!
You know what would be fitting? James dropping his phone in Edward's cabin and the gang tracking him with it. .... or Bella finding the trunk release...getting loose and driving the car off while he has his fight with Laurant and Heidi, completely unaware.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
James really isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer is he? He's desperate and making mistakes. Thank goodness. I only hope he doesn't harm Bella or Vicki before they track them down.
I knew he'd drop the phone!!!! ;)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
AHHH! So, did the calvary show up to save the day or were Bella and Victoria able to free themselves and then hit James with something? Wicked cliffhanger ladies!
Can't wait for the next update! ;)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Ladies, loved the way this chapter turned out. I can see Bella and Edward will be fine, however, I'm worried about Vicki. I don't think she has a strong enough mind to recover.
I would really like to read a prequal to this story. Bella pre James and maybe even Bella and James the early days.
I can't wait to read how y'all will wrap this tale up. Ya know... Are Bella and Edward going to go strictly vanilla or are they going to continue with the kink? Bella had gone through so much at the training school but she found herself there and even though she was a sub she found strength and thoroughly enjoyed the kink with Edward, but really, who could blame her for that. I think we all can admit Edward could dominate us anytime. Messy hair, bare chest, and crooked grin... we'd all drop into our submissive poses. ;)*
Thanks for the chapter update... I'll be on pins and needles waiting for the next one!
Amy
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625325
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
Aw man, they just got engaged... Edward was finally a happy guy, jeez.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
The crafty Esme has money buried doesn't she? Like a stash for each of them. I really would love it if Esme personally killed Carlisle and his creepy family members and buried them in the garden.
Ahhh...I was hoping Edward was just fooling for the benefit of the sadistic cavemen. It would be awesome if the 3 lovely men ended up in prison and were at the mercy of men who thought they had pretty mouths and cute tight butts.
Edward has redeemed himself to an extent but I just can't get passed the fact he thought it was okay to not only have Bella trained but let her be trained by her father and brother. I mean he realizes part of it was wrong but he never dwells on it in his thoughts that they were her FATHER and BROTHER. She learned kissing, blow jobs, anal, and her first orgasms from her father and brother.
Can't wait for more! My review is not aimed at you rmcrms5. I am totally wrapped up in your story. I just get frustrated with that Edward character. But if was the perfect guy, we wouldn't have much of a story now would we?
Thanks!
Amy
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50
Carlisle was the one at the door, wasn't he? I think Bella's HEA should include Carlisle on the receiving end of a good violent ass raping, repeatedly. He could be held against his will and 'trained'.
I agree with Edward that he has much to atone to with Bella. He needs to be more disgusted with himself, though, with reguards to the incestual training of her that he signed off on.
Edward and his brothers need to rethink how they let Carlisle run them. Carlisle is just one man. He maybe wealthy but can he really stand alone against 3 grown sons? Carlisle may have acquaintences but he has no friends. Nobody would come to his aid unless he paid them. If he were chained in the basement, he wouldn't have the chance to hire anybody.
Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
He should have known when he decided Alice would know where to find her!
Followed all of my favorite authors here to the new site and that includes you. I have a wicked mind and you feed it with The Perfect Wife. Tortured and abused Bella is a guilty pleasure of mine, what can I say?
Thank you for writing,
Amy
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow...Newton? In what universe could he ever be competition with Edward! I just seriously had a flash of Seinfeld... Newman.... Newton.
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I hope Edward and the gang are successful in getting Bella back to their place so she doesn't go out with Newton. I also hope Rose doesn't scare her away during the shopping trip.
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Jasper certainly has his work cut out for him countering Bella's annoyance with Edward.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Love me some jealous, over protective Edward. And really, what woman doesn't secretly love that in her man. I know Bella doesn't know they belong to each other yet, but come on, he's Edward.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Awww...The first session of Bella Barbie! Let's hope Edward can keep up his less annoying momentum he has going.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hmmm... I wonder how often Alice's visions will enable them to cockblock Newton? Oh, I dred the thought of them not being able to interfere in time.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Ewww yuck Newton! How did they keep Edward from killing him? Poor Jasper and Emmett must have been working over time!
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I am truly horrified that Edward ripped Emmett's shirt! How thoughtless! I am also excited that Bella doesn't need that much help from Jasper to be annoyed with Newton.
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Awww... their first real date. How will Edward screw it up? And will Bella figure out the scent that's been haunting her is coming from him?
Bella and Emmett are in a normal everyday realtionship with normal problems. Emmett's cousin, Edward, moves back to town. What happens when Edward and Bella meet? Will they be naughty or nice? Read on to find out! AH,AU,OOC, Lemons!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82358 Read Count: 21250
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Way We Are
I've read the whole story and now have come back to review...sorry, I was too caught up in it to stop and review. I can totally relate to Bella in this story. Living with someone who drinks night after night. Passing out or on the rare occasion sex does happen, it's completely unsatisfying. I don't even think drunks realize just how horrible they are in bed. I'm glad you had Bella voice what was bothering her instead of suffering in silence.
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Make It Work
Making it work... When people say this phrase about their relationship it always makes me think they are forcing a relationship that doesn't work. Our relationship isn't working for either of us but let's make it work. I know every relationship has trials and you shouldn't run when it hits a bump but if it's always the same issue you keep coming back to, it clearly isn't meant to be. Emmett, if he was truly happy with Bella and their life together, wouldn't need to drink so much. A little self medicating perhaps?
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I think Bella is the one who is pregnant. Tanya strikes me as the kind of woman who will take a lie all the way til she's proven a liar. I think she wanted the extra time so she could get pregnant so the result would be positive but in the end Bella and Edward's demand cut her time too short.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Marriages born out of an unexpected pregnancy always work out so well. So, when's the shotgun wedding going to take place?
Lovin' Irina.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Well that would just be idiotic to believe... I mean it happened while she was on the medication after her accident. If I remeber correctly Edward and Bella were together almost every single moment during her recovery. Edward would have to be an asshat to give into Damon's creepy childish behavior.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
It's Tanya, right? Damon shows up trying to cozy up to Bella...
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells
I hope Edward gets his head on straight and realizes that Bella was manipulated by Esme and at the time she made the only choice she thought she had. I hope that he doesn't reject her or his child. Hopefully they'll kill enough Volturi to be able to retire from the contract biz and live peacefully.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares
Edward Cullen, deadly assassin ... visits the zoo. lol!
I don't know how far you'll let Demetri get with his plan but I have a feeling because of him, the Volturi is going to self destruct.
Oh.. I can't wait for more! I fucking love this story!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo
Eek... I thought something was going to happen to Bella when he made himself sick. I'm freaked out by your a/n but... I have faith. ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make
Did all of the alcohol Esme drinks finally pickle her brain? I mean, I know that Carlisle is the root of all evil in the Cullen family... shouldn't she be taking her pain out on him and not her son that Carlisle single handedly ruined in her eyes? She's got some messed up logic. Scheming against her own with the enemy, sending an innocent girl to meet an almost certain painful death. I know there is a happy ending promised... I'm just trying to figure out Esme's twisted mind. She was a little cryptic when she spoke of her son. I'm thinking she means to get him killed. '...and the mother of the year award goes to...' lol ;)
Author's Response:
LOL, yes the alcohol and perscription medication has done a number on Esme. But so has the world she is in. She knew what Carlisle was when she married him, what he was capable of. When she saw her son following the same path as Carlisle, it killed her. Her mind is now a distorted, twisted mess of blame and pain (excuse the rhyme. lol) and in her eyes, her son is dead and gone. She sees the monster Carlisle created in her beloved son's place and feels she owes it to her son to give him justice. To kill the monster. It is crazy and insane, but that is exactly the state of her mind.
Yes there will be a happy ending and Im laughing my ass off about Esme's 'Award'. LMAO.
Thanks for reviewing and readings.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places
Poor Kate, the only person under Aro's control that isn't a monster. I hope she can be saved along with Bella.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
A baby is usually such a happy event especially for people who love each other. It's a shame because of circumstances and who they are prevents them from both forgiveness and happiness.
I understand why Edward can't rest until the threat of the Volturi is gone. Is his leaving really the right choice? Wouldn't it be easier to protect Bella and the baby at home on his own territory? That is where they will come for her and the baby. Edward's abbsence seems like a window of opportunity for them to slip in and take everything from him.
Esme made Bella think she had no choice and she gave her no time to think the situation over. I wish Edward would have talked to her and let her explain the events of that day but he'd been to hurt to listen.
Author's Response:
Edward doesnt believe he has any other choice. He has to hunt them down or they will hurt his son. Edward is more than confident that the Volturi could not infiltrate the Cullen Estate. It is so well guarded getting in is not really an option..... Now slipping out was easier. LOL.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995744
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
I loved how strong Bella was in this chapter. She not only apologized to everybody but she also confronted each of them for the role they played in the huge debaucle.
Carlisle was just so awesome. I loved how he stood up for Bella. I think he added a little something extra to the strength she was already displaying. Side note, I met Peter Facinelli at a charity event recently. He is truly a wonderful real person and extremely hotter in real life if that's even possible.
Edward, he's an ass but we love him anyway. Totally deserved the slap he got especially when we found out he knew he was wrong the whole time. I know he has issues of his own concerning Bella's health and safety because he loves her so much but so many bad things could have happened to her when he abandoned and ignored her.
I know you're setting them up to go to the party. I understand some what. I just think after the week they had it almost be better if they stayed in and were just Edward and Bella. A quiet romantic evening alone to reconnect and decompress.
Bella made some startling revelations about her mother. I'm surprised that she hasn't decided Bella was worth her time since she's with Edward freakin' Cullen. I had a mother who was similar. She wasn't as cold as Renee but she usually showed up as the doting mother when any of her kids were in the spotlight, usually to try to ruin it with backhanded compliments and diva style hissy fits. If you need any help in developing Renee's character or the relationship dynamic between absent mother and insecure child... I have tons of material for you.
Author's Response:
Hey there TD, Thanks so much once again for your valuable insight and review of PLU, I may just have to call on you at some stage!
Thanks again, Sweetie
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Hehehe Looks like Edward and Bella's relationship has hit the tabloids. How is our shy private Bella going to handle the spotlight? Are her parents and old friends going to start being more attentive to her since she is with a hot sexy movie star? Will she have more stalkers? And will this info make James step up his game with her? She really ought to move into Edward's asap. His home would offer her more safety and privacy.
Author's Response:
TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29
“P-pardon?” Bella felt faint. This is bad! This is really, really bad!
Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’
Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.
Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you. It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.
Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.
She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents. Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.
My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life?
Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.
What had she done?
Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.
“y-yes?” she whispered.
“Bella?”
“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Poor Bella, will she be a media darling or the most hated woman in America for taking Edward Cullen off the market? I would like to think that the majority of female fans would like her because she was like them not some starlet.
Author's Response:
*shrugs* who knows? we'll see...
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
So, Bella's creepy assed ex-neighbor Jim is the outcasted James.
I'm hoping that Esme's tears were tears of joy.
Author's Response: yes and yes - thanks for the review!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
So nervous about when and where Jim and Jacob will turn up.
Hope the papparazzi don't catch them in their Dom/sub attire when they go to the play party.
Will Charlie come for Christmas and will he behave himself and not embarrass Bella? Still can't believe what he had said to her on the phone when he found out about her and Edward.
Author's Response:
Hmmm - thanks for the review and I giggled when I read about the paps catching them in D/s outfits!! Next week, sweets...
Michele
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I know she's his collared sub in this D/s relationship, however I think most of the fault lies totally on him for what happened at the party. He didn't tell her that the other women there might behave as they had and it was in poor taste to have Vanessa on her knees before him when Bella came back from the restroom. Of course Bella would be jealous and feel her position in their relationship threatened.
Author's Response:
What she said - great comments - thank you so much for this review!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Could it be intuition? Is Jacob going to make his move while Edward is at Yosemite?
Author's Response:
I am so bad at keeping secrets
:)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
Jeez... we gotta wait all week to find out what the dasterdly duo is gonna do to the girls? Pizza arrives at 7... Anderson won't be around until 9... The guys are 4 hours away and out of cellphone range. EEK! Atleast Bella is armed and dangerous with her pepper spray. Oh God, I'm feeling the same foreboding Edward is.
Author's Response:
you have a way with words - thank you for your review
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Bella was right, Edward is going to be impossible for awhile.
The Cullens need a vacation. They need to get away and regroup and just be together after their traumatic event. Especially since the press is probably going to be hounding them.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45
This chapter kinda hit close to home for me. You did a very good job with the broken home, absent uncaring mother, alcoholic father and shy quiet daughter. I never lashed out at my dad once I grew up... I did however, unleash on my mother. I wonder if Bella and Renee will have any face time in your story? I thought that maybe Renee would want to weasel her way back in when she found out Bella was with 'The Edward Cullen'. I'd like to see Edward and Renee go toe to toe. lol
Author's Response:
thank you so much, and she will swoop in at some stage, I'm sure!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I'm so glad that their Christmas turned out to be a happy one. Even with Bella dropping the BDSM bomb on Charlie.
I'm a little freaked that they are going to try another munch so soon.
Author's Response:
have a little faith in me...and them...
thanks for the review
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Even though Bella is shy she seems to charm the socks off everyone she meets. I think Jamie left Cullen Crest with a bit of a crush.
With nobody in the guard house...is it wise for them to practice bdsm infront of a window?
I'm not sure how I feel about the munch and her training for it. They were both so upset after the last one and all of Bella's wrongs that she was punished for were Edward's fault. Now about her being "green" to perform various sexual acts with Edward in a room full of people... I think the prospect of thinking and talking about it might be arousing to a lot of people but actually doing it may have her saying "red".
Is Renee going to make an appearance in this story? I think Esme would like to have a heart to heart with her.
Alice better tell Jasper before both her and Bella's asses are fire engine red. I know she's not telling him because she doesn't want him to cut himself off from his family but she is his priority and he seems closer to the Cullens than his own family anyway. Jasper is going to be pissed when he finds out his brother is handsy with Alice.
Author's Response:
there actually was a guard on duty - he just can't see them from the guard house - although the risk was there...
as for the party, let's see how the second practice goes first - if Edward doesn't think she's ready or she doesn't then they are going to have to safe word right? (they'd better!).
You have hit the nail right on the head with your comment about thinking and doing something "dark and dangerous"! I'm so glad you got it, some people didn't. (thank you).
Renee will make an appearance but not until a little later on. She'll be around.
Alice - what can I say? I'm not sure how Bella is going to play this - but I'm hoping for her sake (and her asses) that she makes Ali see reason...
Thanks for all of your comments and questions Duchess, I hope that I helped in some way.
Till next time,
Michele
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Bella, as a sub, is held accountable for every mistake she makes. Who holds Edward accountable? I know he is her Dom but he is also her boyfriend. The point is she was always going to tell him if Alice didn't come clean on her own. Edward knows Bella almost better than she knows herself. How did he think ignoring her was a proper punishment? She could have totally relapsed into the not eating, throwing up and stuttering mess she was not so long ago. And Esme, the mother who ALWAYS knows best, who made promises to Charlie, not offering Bella any comfort. Carlisle seemed to be the only one who could see past what Bella had done and offer her compassion and warmth.
I hope she pulls back from Edward for awhile. I hope she sleeps in her sub's room and leaves him out in the cold. They are not just Dom and sub. They are Edward and Bella in a romantic relationship too.
Sorry, I'm usually Team Edward and I usually could care less about Bella but this Edward makes me angry and this Bella has dealt with enough growing up and being ignored.
Author's Response:
Hey there D,
Thank you as always for your heartfelt comments and insight. Edward and Esme did screw up here, big time, and there will be repercussions to their actions. I've got Bella's back as well as Edward's. The kids will be okay.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Actors get into the business and strive to be the best they can at their craft and with that popularity comes fans, press, paps, and gossip. Being at the top of that profession must be like being on a freaking roller coaster. There has to be a high having fans, being someone that everybody is talking about or everyone wants to talk to. Then again, everybody thinks they know you, they want a piece of you, and you have almost no hope of a private life that is just yours and doesn't belong to the public at large. You're just exposed. Can't go out to dinner like a normal human being without fear of conversations being over heard and misinterpreted. I get it why Edward is so in love with Bella. Bella had admitted in the beginning to being a fan but she didn't treat him like a celebrity. Edward knows he could have been a trash collector and Bella would love him just the same. Finding genuine people must be a rarity in his position.
I'm glad that they are doing therapy together and that they want to work on building a stronger relationship despite the obstacles.
Jasper...mmm... I hope that Jasper and Alice work through their issues. I think that Jasper and Edward need to realize that everybody needs someone outside of the romantic relationships to confide in. It doesn't mean they don't trust Jasper or Edward. Alice and Bella click. They became fast friends and have fun together. They love and trust each other and offer each other what Jasper and Edward can't possibly give to them. A sisterly bond. Yeah, they get in trouble together but isn't that what best friends do? Alice is Bella's Thelma to her Louise. They shouldn't put themselves in danger but what's a little mischief?
Now.. Jacob ... How can they prosicute a hostage for defending herself and other hostages? Jacob was armed and even if he wasn't his physical size was enough to over power the small women. If she is charged what kind of message does that send? If you are a victim don't defend yourself or you could go to jail? I would hope that a judge would see the facts and toss this out. Especially before the world finds out about Bella's past. All the gossip could break her... well if the fact that Jacob died and it was her defensive actions that caused it doesn't break her first. Paul has got himself a lot of work ahead of him. Poor guy. By the way... loved that you made Paul a therapist. The biggest hot head of the wolf pack.
Author's Response:
Aaah Duchess, I love that you are so passionate about this story! Your comments and reviews are always welcome and they make me think about what I'm about to write - this here is a thank you from me to you with love.
PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6
OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE
"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"
Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.
"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?" Jasper said.
Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.
Jasper smiled at her. "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."
Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."
Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice. She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control. Seeing him looking ill at ease was new. There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.
She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.
Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.
Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view. Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them. They had also taught them to stick to their guns.
This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place. Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with. She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.
Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them. They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest. Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!
He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his. Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves. Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.
Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had! Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name. Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.
Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with. He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else. Someone better.
So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated. He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college. The first one was on finances. Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.
He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character. Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.
It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on. He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was! Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice! His Alice! Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.
How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!
Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet. His face was a cold, furious mask.
"Jasper please! If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down! I can't reach you when you are like this! If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there! If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.
"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother! I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!" Jasper spat out as he held her.
Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes. "Jazzy, you are scaring me..."
This wild man wasn't her Jasper...
Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.
Suddenly she was free.
Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could. Her whole body was trembling.
"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..." Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.
Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.
This was all her fault!
"Come to me..." Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.
Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.
Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.
"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.
"No. You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.
Her eyes searched his intensely. The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.
Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.
He cursed and rubbed his head.
Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!" She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.
Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself. Alice giggled and winked at him.
"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!" She said with determination.
"Gladly, Darlin'."
"Okay, I'm going first. I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me! Do you promise?"
Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.
"I promise."
Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off. I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way. The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room. He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him. I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.
Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode! That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD! I. will. Kill. Him.
Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.
He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise. I won't freak out on you again."
Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean. The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again. He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."
SON OF A BITCH!
Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.
She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz! I know better! I was raised to know better than that! With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect. You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty. And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better. Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'. Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.
His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.
"Jazz..."
"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen. Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again. Especially not me! God, Ali, I love you so much! Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck! It's too much to even contemplate! Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you? When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then! As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you! And about how I was going to take care of you this time! I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'. I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."
Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.
"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock. You own me mind, body and soul. If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out. Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it." Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.
"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love. I am sorry too. No more secrets."
Their kiss was a relief. For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving. Lips touched, brushed, nibbled. Tongues dueled and teased. Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.
Alice panted into his mouth. "Can I get my clothes back?"
Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."
Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"
Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."
Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"
Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.
Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!
"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest. Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.
"Alice?"
"Yeah?"
"Supervised visits only..." Jasper kissed her forehead.
"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.
She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session? She had heard that Gap was having a sale....
Everything was right with the world after all.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
I hope that you liked it!
Love
Michele
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Edward's homework from Paul, masterful. Loved when she got pissed and told him not to contact her that she was going to bond with her girls.
That brings me to why she was pissed... Edward, Edward, Edward. "Bigger" really? You can't have sex with your woman then tell her because she had put on roughly 5 pounds that you need to pump some more iron. Tsk, then to drive the point home, because lord knows she's not insecure enough, you say you'd like her to be bigger? That's implying she's already BIG. Was all the blood still in your dick instead of you're brain? That has to be it.
I knew the authorities couldn't possibly prosecute Bella for Jacob's death. I just hate that they are going to have to endure a media shit storm reguardless.
Renee rears her ugly head as soon as their is a hint of scandal in a gossip rag. I enjoyed Bella standing up to her. I also liked that she put the call on speaker so Edward could get a taste.
Last but not least, Charlie calling Edward Hollywood... freaking hilarious.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
You know, I just don't know how Bella does it. I know the life style is a personal choice, a personal preference. But to have someone else dictate every aspect of how you live your life, even if he is Edward-Freakin'-Cullen, I couldn't do it.
I love that he is going to try composing and that he is not completely confident in the choice although he is thrilled at the prospect. He had to reach out to everyone close to him for reassurance.
Alice's freak out over Bella wanting expensive designer gowns shipped to them was hilarious. I think they needed that levity after the tense weeks they had. So... are the girls also getting jewelry lent to them from Harry Winston? I'm sorry but even Bella should be excited about being dressed by a world famous designer and having hair stylists and make up artists primp her. Wearing ridiculously expensive jewelry... Being on Edward's arm, him dashing in a tailored designer tux. She should feel like a princess. The red carpet would be really scary with all the press and fans but being such a huge organized event it should be a controlled environment.
Can't wait for next week's update. ;)
Author's Response:
Oh my - you know it! Harry will be lending her some finery and we will experience their mad shopping skills in a couple of weeks time. I got some great ideas from a friend of mine and I will post the photos on the extras and out takes
Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society. He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent. Enter Bella Swan. Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both? All EPOV. Starts darker, quickly turns humorous. Language, lemons and some violence.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Edward was an ass but yet still totally hot. Wonder if Bella will be happy he wanted to "keep" her?
Author's Response:
Haha yes, that's a pretty good way to describe him! He still manages to be charming somehow, I adore him. Bella...well you'll see!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Can't say I'm upset with what happened to Jacob. I never really liked Jake. Totally Team Edward.
Author's Response:
Haha that's good! I'm clearly Team Edward and I had a WHOLE lot of fun killing Jake. :)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Love snarky Bella, dead cockblocking Jacob, and last but not least, horny Smugward.
Wonder how he'll find an alternate way to feed his new charge?
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed all three of them. Having Corpsecob cockblock them made me giggle quite a bit. Smugs definitely has his hands full with Bella, she's not the biddable girl he imagined ;)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
OMG. Bella explaining Buffy and Angel to Edward was freakin' hilarious. Ninja vampires... I think I peed my pants. ;)
Author's Response:
This remains my favorite chapter of this story. I had the best time looking at Buffy through his eyes and it really was amazing how I could rip apart a show I truly loved like that. I love that I made you laugh!
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Awe, Edward was so sweet to get her blood from the hospital for her special diet and the dvds because the shows were something she'd enjoy. The style of clothes might piss her off though.
I guess if you've got to feed on blood to survive and you can read minds, taking the abusers, rapists, and murderers would be a way to try and keep a clear conscience.
Can't wait for Bella's reaction to Edward's lil experiment there at the end.
Author's Response:
Haha yeah, he's already changing for her without really realizing it. Of course he's doing it all in the name of getting laid, so he thinks :)
Yeah, it's hard to quibble with what he's doing when you really think about it. It's wrong but also has its merits.
I hope you like her reaction :) I did!
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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...
Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.
Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?
Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Doesn't Aro ever watch movies? When the villan keeps the captured hero alive to taunt them instead of doing away with hero right away, the villan always loses.
Author's Response: LoL yes, I know, it's predictable....but Aro is above everything, and who said he was going to lose?
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Well, taking a bullet for his daughter is one sure fire way to impress Charlie Swan. Plus he'll have a cool scar as permanent proof of his devotion... lol
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It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36-Goodbye Orlando
I'm worried about Bella's talk with Julian. Have I mentioned I hate Julian? I'm worried he's not who Bella thinks he is and bad stuff might happen. God help Julian if he harms Bella!
I'm glad Edward had to spill in the end, he would have burst if he didn't tell somebody.
Author's Response:
maybe it was accidently on purpose? hmmmm. Thanks for reading.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind
I like the premise so far. I wonder what's new with Bella?
Side note... Thanks for using 'intents and purposes' I swear if I read one more fic using 'intensive purposes'... lol ;)
Author's Response:
Duchess: Thanks! I hope you stick around for more. My pet peeve is "per say" instead of "per se". I'll be posting more chapters real soon.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Of all the Airports in the World....
Uh oh... who's the tall man...and how involved are they? Poor Edward!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian
I'm with Edward...I hate Julian. He sounds like a Ken doll with a super gay name... lol... Just kiddin'. But I still hate him.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate
hmm...Bella is kinky
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-WTF?
Poor Edward...can't wrap his expansive vampire brain around the fact that his shy innocent Bella likes it kinky. For the record, I still hate Julian. I hope Edward can make big enough waves in their relationship to break them up. Meanwhile, he better get some bdsm books and get a playroom ready. If he thought sex with her would be difficult before...
Author's Response:
Edward does have some learning to do...Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Consenting Adults
Hmm...Maybe Bella still has feelings for dazzling Edward. She smiled and promised. Still hating Julian.
Author's Response:
Could Bella ever be truly over Edward? That is the question! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here
Boy, Edward sure has some blinders on. Emmett was actually giving him good advice and he tried to explain the probable scenario to him. Still hating Julian...what can I say, I'm team Edward always.
Author's Response:
Duchess: You're not alone in your hate for Julian among the reviewers...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-The Road to Hell....
Come on Edward grow a set. Man up. You had her, she was yours but noooo...geez, I hate Julian.
Author's Response:
When did you start hating Julian? LOL. So close....Thanks for continuing to read and review.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Research
Mmmm. Edward is starting to push a little wedge between Bella and Julian ...have I mentioned I hate Julian? ;)
Author's Response:
Maybe once or twice...lol
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?
Poor Edward. He needs to loosen up a bit and get comfortable with using dirty talk. "Bella, would you do me the honor of having intercourse with me?"...Not very sexy at all. Will Edward be making his own cfm playlist for the Florida trip?
Author's Response: Oh if edward just knew how to loosen up...well then I guess there would be no story...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections
Yay! Loved the confessions and make out session in the book store!...Still hating Julian, I wonder if Tanya could distract him for awhile? There is going to have to be something about Julian that comes out and makes it easier for Bella to dump his ass.
Author's Response: Thank you D! I can't imagine why u don't like julian...lol
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-At Last
Ohhh...Edward is almost a man...he's growing up so fast.
Author's Response:
Lol. That sounds like something Emmett would say...lol.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down
I hate Julian and now I hate Bella. She doesn't even try to reassure Edward and now Julian is probably going to need help when he's out of the hospital... *grrr*
Author's Response:
I blame snowboarding!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38-Hanging On
I vote that Edward rips Julian's limbs from his foul body just because he can...lol
Why doesn't Edward just go to Bella instead of cooling his jets on bench? I'm not saying they should have sex in Julian's apartment but if their relationship is over and they are just friends, why doesn't Edward go visit?
Author's Response:
I think he's trying to give her the space and time she requested but he is obviousl conflicted. It's not his nature to stand back like that. Let's see how long E can be so restrained?!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40-Thank You Alice
I know Bella is "nursing" Julian because she cares about him and feels guilty especially since he doesn't have anybody but something has got to give. This chapter was great but then she'll leave again to go home to Julian and Edward will be devastated again.
Author's Response:
I know..that damn pesky Julian just won't go away....thansk for reading and reviewing TD.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella
Poor Esme is going to be horrified when she finds out that her pies are nasty!
So, Bella is preggers huh?
Author's Response:
You think Esme's pie is nasty? Better not let Emmett hear you say that.....lol j/k.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44-Not Again
I really, really don't like Julian... Thanks for finally giving me a real reason! I think I understand why he didn't want children because he obviously didn't have great parents himself but he didn't need to be so harsh with Bella about it. I am officially starting TEAM I HATE JULIAN
Author's Response: Lol. You're not the only member...thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46-Bad Company
Aww...Emmett. I suppose Edward's siblings have some what of a score to settle with him. As much as Edward never wanted to see their intimate moments in his mind, he still has seen them. I wonder if Emmett had walked in on them on purpose. One doesn't enter someone else's bedroom without an invitation. If your knock is unanswered, you walk away. Or, maybe, Emmett is just clueless and walked in on them.
Poor Bella. I know she is open about sex but she was caught on her knees by Emmett. She will never hear the end of this. It will be a topic brought up repeatedly for centuries to come.
Author's Response:
Duchess: I suspect Emmett had an inkling of what was going on. Lots of teasing in that Cullen family...lol
***NOW COMPLETE***
Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
Hey... easy on cable guys. I'm a cable company employee and you have no idea what those guys go through in a day... lol.
So, when is Bella gonna realize Edward is single and ready to mingle?
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Odd, he can read her thoughts.
Author's Response:
I thought it would intreging if he could. What can I say, sometimes things just strike me. Thank you for reading it.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Love that Edward has never been with Tanya and the thought disgusts him to the point of thoughts of projectile vomitting. When I picture Tanya, the strawberry blonde, my mind always conjours Lindsey Lohan... while she is beautiful, the things she does make her repulsive. lol
Author's Response:
Holy cow! Now everytime I think of Tanya, I am going to picture that! Too funny! Thank you that really made my night! And thank you for reading and reviewing it!