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Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183789
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache
Of course you haven't lost me, at least! This is one of my favorite stories... I can't wait when you update.... (I was so anxious today, I read this at work today!).
I can't wait to see how the rest of Edward's cluster f$%& plays out... so far you haven't let me down. Although I must admit I hated the break up... I cried... hard (I'm a sap, I cry easily).
Thank you for a wonderful story and thank you for the update!
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal
Well... thanks for undating. Perhaps they should switch roles for a bit, then they'd each understand the others perspective.
I was looking forward to them getting 'together' more in this chapter but what you have done is much more realistic. I look forward to seeing where things go from here.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase
Could Edward be any more of an idiot! Good grief! You did that on purpose to spoil our urgent need for them to finally have make up sex. Perhaps you want them to have the D/s talk first...? I trust you to get us there.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On
Excellent chapter... can't wait for the wedding. When are they going to have the difficult talk, onavoidinge they've beeing ?
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family
I teared up just a little... but then I always cry at weddings.
I hope she see Renee and gets that and the D/s stuff sorted out in her head... with a baby coming (wonderful), she needs to get them all in a good place
As always thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)
I'm glad they are giving up the d/s stuff. One, it would be difficult with a baby on the way and a baby in the family. I also think it wasn't something that would come very easy for Bella now. Great chapter, I look forward to more honeymoon.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed
I sobbed my heart out... again! Wonderful story... can't wait for the epi.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora
Well... that was fun. Poor Bella, morning sickness sucks! I guess it doesn't really surprise be about Carlies reaction...
Thanks for the update, I always look forward to more. I'll be sorry to see the story end.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper
A baby boy... amist all the excitement. Sorry that he will be the only one. I'm sure they made a beautiful baby and should have many but life is like that sometimes. Why did Emmett punch Edward? Because of the fib? Great chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip
I wonder what Edward left for Bella? I sure hope we find out. Thanks for the update.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
That was fun... I'm glad Bella put the smack down on Edward and Emmett! Poor Carlisle. Rose is a riot! I hope JJ is ok... thanks for the update.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die
The first half... very HOT! The second half... confusing. I can wait to see whats on your agenda! Thanks for the update.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes
That was a lot to digest. I cried hearing about Esme, she was so supportive of the family.
Double standards are notorious of Dad's with daughters! Thanks for the update.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings
Thank you for a wonderful roller coaster of a story! I will be looking for new adventures from you.
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Jasper's OT
Hmm... that is very interesting. I am surprised that Alice is so opinionated with Bella and Edward... she is almost as kinky and they are. Other than that I found the history of these two very interesting and sweet. Thanks.
Date: 20 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Bella's Journal Entry - Sun June 14, 2010
She (you) is an amazing writer to put so much thought and detail into this.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Ladies Luncheon
What do I think of Esme? Well I think she is being very presumptuous in picking a location for their wedding before he even asks her. If I know Bella she is going to want a very small, much more intimate gathering... not a uber expensive side show; especially as it's not her first wedding.
Very interesting insight into her personality... not sure I'm her biggest fan.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland
Great chapter but I more and more dislike Alice and... to a lesser degree Esme.
I hope somehow you work in a lesson for Alice so she learns there is more to life than what she thinks but I won't be upset if that is not your plan.
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Thanks so much for the update... I have missed this story. I can't wait to find out how the party goes.
I will check out your original romance.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom
Awww... great chapter. They declared themselves. The outtake on our blog answered a lot of questions. I can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Interesting insight... poor girl to be unwanted. Thanks for the update, I really enjoy this story.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
OH NOOOOO.... you can't leave us hanging there!
I am very surprised that Edward didn't go back to the house sooner, he ususally worries more. MORE PLEASE!
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!
Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards. See banners below.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward
Wow... that was fun. I think Bella needs to lay off the booze, she gets into trouble when she drinks. Loved the karaoke.
Author's Response:
Spring break is almost over. I don't think there will be any more drinking, but there will be more silliness. Thanks for the review!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains
Excellent start... It has me hooked.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope it keeps your interest.
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark
Another excellent chapter. I love the Mike incident... how embarassing! I can only guess at the unsaid B has with men. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks again. The reviews inspire me!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass
A heart warming chapter! I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! I really appreciate it.
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations
I can't wait for LRM for the sweet 16 party...
Damn can't they ever catch a break. Why do a lot of guys lash out at people they love when they are angry about something else?
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
that is a male trait... he's worried about Bella, and then hurts her feelings. he's a doofus. Thanks!
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches
Can't they ever catch a break... leave her alone for 5 minutes and that a-hole accosts her! I hope you go into how Edward wrecks him!
I'm glad Edward enjoys the calendar... I'm sure he'll enjoy it more when he is alone... LOL.
As always I look forward to more... more ... more!
Author's Response:
yes Edward enjoys the heck out of that calendar. Thanks very much!
It has been an utter loss to Twilight fans that Stephanie Meyers did not finish Midnight Sun. I know I was devestated and could not let it end where she did. That is where my obsession began and it ended with the next three stories from EPOV. Sorry, but I couldn't help myself, I needed to know how it ended. But what came as the biggest surprise to me was how it did end... I never would have guessed after writing for the next three books it would have ended this way.
So join me on this most intriguing journey of Edward's. I promise some surprises, some good, some not so good. I do promise to give you an end, one hopefully you will enjoy.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74360 Read Count: 3200
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Balance
Excellent! I always thought Edward would want to make sure Billy didn't say anything to Charlie. It would also be a way for him to stay close to Bella. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. It was nice of you to review this story here, too. Just to let you know the first chapter of my next book Dark Moon is in the que waiting to be posted over at Twilighted. I reconized your pen name from that site where you also left kind reviews also. I hope you will follow these stories until the end they are something I have worked on for a long time.
Thanks again for reading.
France 1830
After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I'll say... bad bad Edward. That is going to come back and bite him in the ass... I'm positive. I can only hope that she is really dead and doesn't come back.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Woah! Intense. Can't wait for chapter 1.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Intriguing! I'm hooked... I look forward to more. Thanks for the update.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
B gets more interesting each time she opens her mouth. I love speculating what you have in store for E & B.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Loved the dialogue in this chapter... very engaging. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as RL allows.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Wow, that was unexpected but HOT! B is really daring in this story. Thanks for updating.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Bella is a hoot... does she even know what she wants? Love it, I look forward to more.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Great chapter! I hope Edward get to kick Alistair's butt, but not kill him... he deserves life with Maria!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
I'm anxious about Alastair... I think he will be causing a lot of trouble, Marie too. Thanks for the update.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
I guess they didnt' think to lock the door! Oops... I wonder what the fallout will be. Thanks for the quick update.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
You are most definately NOT wasting your time... I love this story. I'll be nice and not comment further.
I love how Bella is disappointed that she didn't get a proper proposal... I hope Edward tries to make it up to her. ;-)
Thanks for another update... I'll try not to be too spoiled.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Maria didn't deserve a beating for telling the truth... great chapter. Let see if she becomes a better person for it.
I'll try to not be spoiled with 3 updates so close together. Thanks.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I know that not telling Bella about Tanya is going to bite Edward in the a$$! I hope Alice and Jazz can work it out. Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update. I look forward to the wedding... I wonder if that is when Bella finds out about Tanya, hmmm before or after the vows?
Happy holidays to you and your family... I hope for more in the new year!
Author's Response:
I should have put this in my A/N but I forgot. I will not be writing the wedding scene. Mainly because I hate writing weddings, its boring and secondly weddings of that time were different and I really don't want to make a mistake. That and it would take more research than I have time for. That and I want to get on with the story line. There are a few chapters that NEED to happen before another "plot line", I guess you could call it, comes into affect.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Well... I glad he fessed up!
Boy does that girl have temper... LOL.
Great chapter... Happy new year!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
A aloof and unfriendly Alice is an anomaly... I sure there is more to the story. Isabella is being just a little (LOL) spoiled and immature, I hope she grows up (at least a bit) soon.
I do love Edward in this story, he is so ... indulgent.
Thanks for the update... Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
This is the first response I got where someone does not like Isabella. It refreshing to hear. Yes, Isabella is somewhat spoiled and immature, but that is part of her character. However, things may or may not change...only time will tell.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
That is a very different Alice... but an intriguing person. Great chapter... Thanks!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
That was a pleaseant introduction. I had a feeling that Bella would try to make her feel welcome. I am surprised that Alice is so aloof, but then I think you said that your Alice wasn't going to be much of a character.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
I so glad Kate fit in the family so well. Lovely (but short) chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard
What a lovely chapter, I am so glad that everything went well. A littly boy, what a blessing!
I loved the Carlisle section... he is sometimes neglected in Bella and Edward stories.
I do wonder about Jasper and Alice... there actions (or inactions) are ... confusing.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
I wondered if it was James... I try not to speculate too much in stories. I'd rather be surprised.
I wonder what Edward will do when he figures it out?
Great chapter.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue
Thanks for the terrific story... I've enjoy it from the start! You're talented, keep up the good work!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
I hope the man in her bedroom was a protector!? This story has a life of it's own... leave it to Jessica to make trouble.
Great chapter!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
Well... that was exciting and scary. I'm so glad someone was at home to help her. Excellent chapter... enjoy your visit, update when you can!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
That was a hell of a shocker! I'm surprised she didn't share that piece of information with someone. Although for Edward to leave her in England for 2 years says something about their relationship. I look forward to the epi.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
Cliff hangers! Ahhh... they are so fun! I hope Kate is ok... and they get her back quickly! Thanks for the update.
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
Wow... I wonder why Edward never tried to get together with Bella (after she turned 18 anyway)? I hope that will become clear eventually. I look forward to more.
I can't wait to see what Bella does to Jake.
Thanks for nice long chapter.
Author's Response:
He´s a Dom and that´s not something he can just spring on her... also he just recently began having these feeling of wanting to have something long term and for love and not lust... Soon all will become clear... Thanks for reading and reviewing...
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
Happy Birthday!
Welcome back... I had despaired that you had abandoned this story, I was so disappointed.
I love the chapter and can't wait to see what you have in store for pet.
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
They are so good for each other. That was a very very HOT chapter.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
What an funfilled chapter... I can wait until they get together.
Thanks for your consistent updates! Have a wonderful Holiday season.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
What a terrific update and so much happening! Wonderful... I must admit I wasn't all that surprised that Will turned out to be Jacob. I love Seth... he is so cute. I'm glad Charlie was very supportive of Bella. I'm sorry Leah is such a good companion for "Will".
As always, I look forward to more... and Bella and Edward interactions.
Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Happy New Year to you too! You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Could the 'hard ass bitch' be Rose? Or someone else. I can't wait to find out. The chapter was... very HOT. Please don't make us wait too long for the test scene. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Right you are! It will be Mistress Rose to the rescue! Lol! Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
That was an awesome chapter; informative, and long! I liked that you didn't rehash the entire first phone conversation, but gave her feelings about it instead. I can't wait to read the outtake and perhaps see the rules for the test session. Thanks for the update and the schedule for the next.
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
Excellent chapter, but don't you think Bella would not have gotten upset if he just told her he wanted to make her first time special? I mean they did talk for hours, why didn't he?
I can't wait for the next chapter to find out why the phone was ringing! Its nNever a good sign when people don't let up.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Wow... that was one hot chapter! I can't wait for the big reveal. Are you going to have the scene from Bella's POV next? As much as I'm looking forward to them "meeting" I'd love to read that. Thanks for a terrific chapter, update as RL allows.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
That was AWWSOME! I wondered how they were going to come to the conclusion at a family dinner! I just can't wait until the next chapter... it should be incredible.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
What a roller coaster chapter...! Just Wow! I can't wait for the next discussion. Thanks for the update.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
What a beautiful job you did for B&E... making it so special! I love both of their inner ramblings, so insecure, so normal. Thanks for the update, as always update as soon as RL allows.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the love! Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more! Check em out!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
As always... that was awesome! I naturally can't wait for them to be together (in the same room) again.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!
Krazi
xoxo
FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!
Hope to see you soon!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Great chapter... I loved how you put a few little phrases from Twilight into the dialogue! Excellent. Thanks for the update.
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
I wonder who is at the window? Great chapter... I loved the Edward Mojo conflict. My little (not quite so little) sleeps in that same place and won't let my husband anywhere near me... it is so funny! Thanks for the update.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Boy she sure knows how to cut off her nose to spite her face! I can't wait to see how this goes.
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
Well that was HOT... I wished we had a glimpse of the conversation they had... Or have they? I realize the physical goes a long way toward reuniting they but discussion is important too and they both tend to learn from it as well... Don't they?
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...
Well... I for one am very curious as to why they are with peter et al... As for the punishment... I reserve judgement as he himself said he was partially to blame.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!
Krazi
xoxo
Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.
As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.
“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.
“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”
Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”
“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”
“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.
No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.
Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only. “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”
“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.
“And what color are you now, Isabella?”
Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.
Trust me, Isabella!
You need this!
I need this!
We need this!
I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”
My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.
“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”
Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub. After several profiles are searched she interviews two. Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out. Is he the right one? BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons. AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story. The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com. The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest. Thank you to all my loyal readers.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48038
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend
Good chapter, but I would like to see more verbal interaction. Perhaps that will come with them getting to know each other more.
I'm sure both there backgrounds will be reveiled eventually.
Thanks for the update and happy holidays.
Author's Response:
I agree with you on the verbal things I want to utilize the verbal too, and I have to find a way to get there and keep what I have in mind going as well. Thank you so much for your honest input I greatly appreciate it all. Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hope to see your review after the next chapter is posted.
Kasi~
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene
Well... that was HOT! I realize that it was a "test" weekend but would really like to see more dialogue between the two. I hope that as time goes on they get to know each other personally as well as sexually. Otherwise your story is wonderful and well written and interesting. Thanks for the posting schedule... it really is helpful. Thanks.
Author's Response:
As of right now the next chapter for sure is all gettig to knwo the real Edward and the real Bella and waht things traspired in their lives to make them who they are today. Ther eis a lot on info comein in the next 1 to 2 chapters but no worries my friends the hot smoking lemons will be right here ready to play.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: A Sub Search: Epilogue
What a wonderful and unique love story. Thanks for all your hard work... I'll miss the updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I will miss my followers from this story a lot. Please take a momnet to add JessAndTAT to your authors list, and when we start our new story, you can catch it, I promise it will have some hard core lemons eventually. But it will be full of fun, suspense, adn of course a nasty mystery stalker who will enjoy watching Edward, and maybe even kidnapping him too...LOL I am so exxcited for it, SO EXCITED.
Kasi~
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town
I loved this chapter... them getting to know each other. Still mostly as D/s on the outside, but still lovely. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Just like last chapter you have mail, the same way as last time. Let me know if I have to resend...Kasi~
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night
That seemed really intense! Edward was really out of it... I wonder how the conversation will go? Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
The conversations and main discussions will take palce on the trip home. Thank you for reading and reviewing. the teaser is being sent to you via email on the contact me button on your twcs profile if you do not have it by tomorrow please contact me I will get it to you.
Kasi~
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hump Day
That was fun... I was happy that they had a conversation, trying to get to know each other. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.....Belive me when I say there are some mean things that Isabella will be doing in the future with that cast she made...LOL...poor little subward will be tourtured quite sweetly
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip
There weekend should be very interesting! There unexpected meeting was very interesting. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story...I love reviews they make me smile. I am emailing you the teaser for the next chapter via the contact button on your twcs profile.
Kasi~
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Naked Day
I understand her need to have him fail to make sure she was willing and able to punish him. I hope his revelation goes well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing you are so sweet to review. Thanks...Kasi
PS sent you the preview through email like I always do.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound
Well, I'm not sure I understand Bella being so...allof with Edward regardless of her inner conflict. Except for that 1 slip (that she orchestrated to happen), he was a perfect sub for the entire weekend... she punished him... that was just mean. I hope he puts something in the journal abou it.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I had a really tough time making her seem liek a bitch, but it is importaint for the story. I hope that you will remain a loyal reader and have faith in me to make it all good in the end. There will be more angst, but the happiness will come. The journal will help and so will Peter and Charlotte.
I have sent you the teaser via the contact button on your twcs profile, check your email. See ya soon with the next update.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans
I'm not sure how I feel about Bella's indecision... she is such a strong person why is this so tough? Have I missed something?
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
She is a strong Domme, but she has a very weak spot when it comes to love. The next chapter tells a lot.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 12 Preview………………..
My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire. I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night. I can not believe I did something so stupid. I need to fix this, and make this right.
Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater. It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over. Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better. Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet. I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.
Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table. The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen. I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven. Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal. Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night. I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo
A few more tears for me this chapter. I feel so bad for them to want to be together as more than Dom and sub but her not knowing how to do it. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Have faith in Master Peter and Charlotte, they will help them find the way. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner.
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 13 Preview………………..
I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship.
We were kind of weren't we?
I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France.
I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The Holiday, a Date, and Master Peter
I hope they can make it work... but I kept thinking Mike was going to crash the party. I guess he will make another appearance eventually. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I have not decided how much of a part that mike will play in the story, right now I am concerned with workign with Edward and Bella's relationship.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Chapter 14 Preview………………..
“Come in, I need to grab a couple of things. Your mom left me a message on the machine reminding me of dinner tomorrow night at your parent’s house. Do you want me to join you?”
“Of course, I want you to be there. I think you should spend the night with me and all day tomorrow and than tomorrow night we will go together to dinner.”
Bella smiled at me, almost shyly. This is a whole new side of her that I have never seen before. Bella is such a beautiful woman; she has the body of a twenty year old. Bella is smart, witty, and completely gorgeous, she is a triple threat. I smile back at her and take her hand I pull her into a hug.
“Bella, I am so glad and honored that you want to spend time with me. Thank you, my love,” I whisper in her ear.
With a sigh into my neck she threads her fingers into my hair and places an open mouthed kiss on my neck below my ear.
“Oh…baby, I cannot wait until you are screaming my name,” I tell her.
Threading my fingers of my right hand into her hair, I move her head so that our mouths connect. After several minutes of kisses so hot, we are close to combustion, we break apart with ragged breath.
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures
I had a feeling something would happen with the Mike issue soon. He is totally deranged, why they would let him out of jail is a mystery. I hope they catch him quickly. I enjoyed the sexy times....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. There will be more sexy times coming. Unfortunetly all people are considered innocent until proven guilty by a court of law. No worries Mikes job is done, he has helped push B& E together, and I will be ending his time in my story very soon. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense!
Enjoy….Kasi~
Next Chapter Preview………………..
Upstairs, I see that Edward is still asleep, but has a worried look on his face. I sit on the edge of the bed and trace my fingers along his side. As soon as my skin touches his, I see the worry disappear from his face. The connection that I feel to him is scary, and has weighed a lot on my mind. I know that I love him, but look at what it is doing. He is not safe, because of me. I sigh and kiss his forehead, get up and head to the shower.
The hot water feels wonderful running over my skin. It is nice to relax a little and let the tension run down the drain. I hope that I can manage to stay calm and relaxed today. I am so tired of being stressed out. I am not sure I can handle much more of this. I wash my hair and condition it, scrub my body with my loofa and favorite body wash. Stepping out of the shower, I look up and see the sexiest man in the world.
“Edward,” I say in a breathy tone.
“You look so beautiful, my love.”
“I look like a drowned rat,” I joke.
“You my love are the most breath taking rat, I have ever seen. I want to lick the beads of water from your skin,” he says.
As Edward walks over to me, I can feel the gooseflesh travel across my skin where his eyes are roaming.
“Edward, breakfast will be done in about twenty minutes.”
“Maybe what I want for breakfast, I cannot get from the kitchen. Maybe what I want is wet and in front of me.”
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules
Well... with everything bad happening it's good that they are doing something positive. Wonderful chapter... I look forward to Mike getting caught, I can't wait to see how it happens.
Author's Response:
I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story. I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be. I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me. I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon. Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends. I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future. Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 16 pre-view.
EPOV
I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.
“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night. Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?” Bella asks.
“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting. I will be home by two,” Peter replies.
“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”
“Yes, that works well. Are you prepared for tonight?”
“Yes,” Bella replies.
With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.
We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte. We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately.
“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.
“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared. Be in the playroom in one hour. Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”
“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath
I'm glad almost everyone is ok, I guess Mike got what he deserved.
I can only think that Bella has a set of rings and plans on proposing to Edward (a role reversal), I hope that goes well.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. The reviews truly do mean a lot to me. The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process. My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed. Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.
XOXO, Kasi~
Chapter 18 preview…teaser
“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.
“I was just coming in to get Bella. Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”
“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.
“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess. Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.
“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek. “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.
“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed. See you both in the morning,” I say.
I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door. We walk hand and hand to the living room. Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure. He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest. Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New
What a lovely way for mistress to show her devotion to Edward... well done.
I would love to just know what their life together was like in the future, children, jobs, home, other family etc, making this lifestyle fit into it.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I will be sure to show them in say 1 yr, 5 yrs, 10 yrs, down the road. I think that will be the easiest way to do it. I have only one other request to show the wedding. I think I will do that as a memory. Thank you for the story love, and the review.
Kasi~
When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm. Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OK... I'm hooked. I hope to see more soon!
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
What beautiful introduction to the Cullen family... I can't wait for the back story on Millie.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It's official ... I love this story. I look forward to more.
Merry Christmas!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Beautifully done... lovely.
I can't wait to see how the HEA works out.
Happy New Year!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
A beautiful ending... I would have liked to see a bit more of Edward's presense, but otherwise I loved it.
Thanks and Happy New Year.
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
You are evil! Lucky girl to have such a swift labor... she'll be in trouble if she ever has another child!
Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Great chapter... she seems to be maturing in a good way. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
You had me very worried a couple times in this chapter!!! Then when Edward stood up to Carlisle... that was awesome. Leaving us with a cliffy...not so awesome. Thanks anyway for the update. The wedding can't some soon enough.
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Well Edward is cooling his tyranical tendancies and learning to compromise with Bella a little. The business with Carlisle is just a manipulative. Thanks for the update.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Lovely chapter, I am so glad Bella is going to try to have a relationship with her Dad... after all it was mostly Renee that kept them apart.
I don't blame Edward for being really pissed at his family... I hope they learned a lesson.
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I hope you have a good reason for Edward to be a total shit... I'll try to be patient but it's seems senseless angst.