Reviews by aabc
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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

As much as I don't like this turn of events, I am proud of Bella for being independant and doing her best to put on a brave face.  She is also keeping to her agreement even though it is more painful than the amnicentesis. 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

As much as I hate them being apart... it's probably a good thing for her to learn to take care of herself. 

I am surprised that Edward hasn't done more to apologize to Bella for doubting her... it was a very shitty thing to do.  I think Carlisle ought to hit him again to smarten him up some more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

The letter had me crying my eyes out!  I gotta give her credit... she's not ready to have him back... but I do hope it's soon.  The baby needs both parents whenever possible.  They love each other and Edward will no be able to earn her trust again if they are not together. 

Enjoy your break!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I'm so glad they they finally had a talk!  His family is still a problem, but I think they will work it out.

Great job!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

She set him up!  Good thing she pregnant or she would have really been "sorry"!

I'm glad to see them together again... I've missed their interaction.

I guess the baby is coming soon... can't wait.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Lovely ending... you reap what you sow.  I'm glad Charleigh appears to be very level headed and that Edward can be reasonable.  Great story!  I will miss the updates.

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Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124856
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well... I really like your tenacious Rose.  She's cool.  I look forward to more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start... I'm hooked!  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I guess Rosalie was correct!  What an awful Charlie.  I also thought that Rose or Edward was keeping an eye on Bella... is one of them aware of whats going on?  I know I'll just have to wait and see how you shake it out.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi, and thanks for your sweet review! Edward's watching @ night but not during the day.  Hopefully the next chapter will make more sense. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor B... how did she end up all alone in the woods?  I'm glad everyone is involved with her and care what happens to her.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review!  Hope the next chapter explained the whole woods thing well enough!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was an excellent chapter... Daddy C being all wonderful, Bella being all scared and confused.  Charlie being an a##!  Edward saving the day and giving her just a hint that he is different.  All hell is going to break loose over this.  I CAN'T wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Daddy C...I like it!  Do you really wanna know what happens next? Esme makes popcorn!  (no, really, I'm serious)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She is so frighten... it's sad.  Poor thing doesn't trust even a little affection from our dear Esme.  I must admit I'm surprised that Alice is keeping such a low profile.


I look forward the crap hitting the fan when she wakes up, her missing school, Charlie looking for her... etc.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

That was intense... I wonder what thoughts were going through the judges mind, will we hear from Edward about that?  I'm sure Renee is going to continue to get herself into trouble, but I can't wait to see if Charlie actually talks.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Yes, we will hear from Edward (And Alice and Jasper) in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was even more intense.  I guess I don't blame Edward for losing it, I would love to know the thoughts going through Charlies head.  I hope there is not fall out from this.  I'm so glad the judge didn't fall for Charlies I'm the chief of police so I must be a good guy BS. 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward's not very good at keeping his head where Bella's concerned.  He, Alice, and Jasper will be able to tell their sides in the next chapter.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I can't wait to see how all of this plays out.  I wonder what Charlie is going to do to seek his revenge on them.  It should be exciting.

Summary:

 

 

 

Summary:  Dr. Masen sits and has coffee in the commons of the university every day the weather is nice.  What happens when he meets the woman of his dreams in a most embarrassing way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4135 Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 21 Mar 2011
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Same Time Tomorrow

Very entertaining story... Is there hope for more?



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked it. Not sure if I'll add on to this, but maybe.  Thanks so much for the review.  Each one left really means the world to me, thanks!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

Answer: The beach.

This is an intriguing story concept... I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you find my story intriguing and hope you enjoy reading it. The beach is a nice place to go and relax! The next update will be up next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

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Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427905
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Very interested seeing how this story progresses... More please.

Oh, and I'm not a fan of Rose and Edward pairings.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Conversation

That was just a teaser for this talk...  AHHH... I am glad that Bella is put off by the idea at this point at least.  Great chapter!  Thanks for the update... more please!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping

OUCH!  I hope Edward appreciates her pain.  That was a great chapter, but not near enough E&B!  I look forward to more.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

I am loving this fic!  I can't wait to see how these conversations go.  I do wonder what Bella is thinking, but think I perfer it to be a mystery for a bit longer.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Expectations

Hmmm.... it thought that was why she hadn't told him to call her Bella.  He's been nothing but totally formal with her (except that one "sweet girl" comment).

He is a little toughy about her.  He want her so badly! 

I would like to hear from Bella but the no knowing how she feels is interesting.

Alice is just Alice, nosey and somewhat annoying.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 **Playtime**

That was an excellent chapter... I wonder when he will make love to her... and I do hope that is what he does, at least the first time.  He is so sweet and patient with her I really can't see him doing it any other way.   You are doing a great job with this story.  Its HOT as hell but tender and caring also.  Thanks for the effort you put into the story.  More please... as soon as RL allows.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Panties

He really is very sweet to her... I like him.  I know RL is going to catch up with them eventually, but I am enjoy them getting to know each other.

Thanks for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31183
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

OMG you are brilliant!  I can't believe how this is working out... please don't keep us in suspence too long...  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

I would have thought hat Edward would ask her a very key question... "is there anything else I should know" then have his tantrum (not that I blame him).  I hope it doesn't take long for him to come to his senses.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

OMG!  That was a terrible place to leave us!

I can't image what they did to try and "help"!  I certainly hope that they truly can't ruin his "high". 

I can't wait to see what's waiting for Bella.  I also have a feeling the x's will make an unwelcome appearance... eventually.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Take Two

I'm happy they she didn't make him suffer... it would make her suffer as well... so why bother.

I have a feeling something bad is going to happen on this "last job"... I'm anxious!

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Excellent chapter!  I loved it.  I thought the rule of thumb with and engagement ring was... if it is given as a gift (i.e. birthday or christmas) it doesn't need to be returned; but if its given during a normal day at a proposal it can be. 

I hope her final client surveillance goes ok... I must admit I am worried.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

That was fabulous!  I'm a little surprised by the ending but enjoyed it immensely!  I hope to see more stories from you in the future.

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Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112999
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines

I'm intrigued with this story... I'm sure this "bet" will not end well. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) Sorry for the delay in my response! 

I hope you're still intrigued with the story! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

The bet ... Oh lordy. I wish I could say which way it would end, but, alas ... You'll hafta read on and see! 

Thank you for reading! :) 

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

I am enjoying your story... I hope it's not too angsty, but will see it through regardless. Thanks for the update, I look forward to seeing Cullen fall... in love.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) I'm sorry it took me so long to get a reply up! 

I'm glad you like the story! I hope you've continued reading and that you still enjoy it! I don't plan on having too much angst, and I always try to balance it out with some humor and fluff too. And the lemons ... We can't forget the lemons, LOL. ;)

I look forward to seeing Cullen fall too! It'll be a beautiful mess! 

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Playing With Fire

I look forward to the compliation (I donated weeks ago).

Great chapter, Edward is not going to know what hit him... is he.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) My replies were lagging, but I plan on staying caught up from here on out - It's my 2012 goal! ;)

You've already seen Edward's outtake if you have the compilation! I'm excited to hear what you think! I'll be posting that one as well as Bella's first outtake on here tomorrow, so I hope you have a chance to let me know your thoughts on the back story so far. I know there wasn't too much given away, but they'll get a bit more detailed as they go. 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Edward is in for a wild ride, that's for sure. Bella won't go easy on him! ;)

Thank you for reading! 

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Fine Line

Jasper is being the smart one of the 2, this is going to blow sky high before it's done.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) I apologize for the delay in response! 

Jasper tries to exercise his intelligence, but unfortunately Edward can be very persuasive, and relatively pushy, so I'm not sure how far Jasper will get when it comes to showing him the light. We'll see though. ;)

There will be fireworks .... And that's all I can say without giving away too much. 

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 225243
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm enjoying your drabble... I look forward to more.

MALEVOLENT by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

He manipulated and tainted everything he touched and I wouldn't allow him to touch me so I ran. "You can run Isabella but you can't hide, do you hear me? You're mine Isabella, you're mine!" He's found me... Warning: extreme Darkward. Read at your own risk.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42123 Read Count: 61612
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2011 Updated: 16 Jun 2015
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Forever is just the beginning

He is all over the place.  I wonder what he's going to do next... doesn't he know that old adage ... you get more with honey than vinegar?

I look forward to more... soon please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Two Pacts

Does Edward have multiple personalities?  One minute he wants to be gentle the next he's being very rough.  I can't wait to see how it all plays out.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Under His Control

I'm loving this story... I am hoping the Bella can convince Edward to help her regain her feelings for him ... gently.  I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Countdown

So is she or isn't she? 

What does Edward think?  I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and see :P

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Soon

I can't figure out what he wants from Bella?!  He wants her but so cruel... if he does change her... he's going to be in BIG trouble.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: This is how Love is suppose to be

A reprieve from violence... perhaps Edward wants to try to play nice for a bit.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Flee & Pursue

It was a joke... I don't have stong feelings toward him one way or another.



Author's Response:

Lol. I believe you..... I tried to contact you but the site gave some message about the feature being disabled due to abuse? You were the 100th reviewer so you get to choose a sneak peak of the next chapter or the chapter after that. Let me know if you're interested. You can contact me at LegendaryDiamond@live.com :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Crap!

Dum da dum dum...oh shi+!  How's he going to handle this...and Shawn...?  Is Shawn a vampire slayer? 



Author's Response:

LOL. Vampire slayer? No one has ever asked that questions. Since you think so highly of Shawn I suggest you skip the next chapter when I update. Thanks for reviewing by the way :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The DVD

At least they are talking... Edward is a smart if nothing else, he should be able figure out how to keep Bella without breaking her. He just needs patience.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Heartbeat

My I'm not sure how he will take all that... I look forward to finding out.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella

Wow she is daring isn't she ?!  Who is he going to kill now?  I think his temper is going to hit the roof!  I do wonder what is in NZ.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chance Encounter?

Hmm... is Shawn a good guy or a friend of Edwards or worse.  I look forward to more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: MALEVOLENT

Hmm I don't think Shawn is the bad guy... I can't wait to see what you have planned.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Happiness

I was just thinking that... Poor Shawn.  Poor Bella!  Se have that on her conscience too.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: MALEVOLENT

Well... It is probably Edward, but I guess it could be Shawn too.   I'll wait for you to fill in the blank.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Not want a "huge ass chapter" you've got to be kidding!  I love your really really long chapters, they made my week!

Great chapter!  I love how Bella is adjusting, but what will happen now... did she lose the baby?  I'm not sure if that is a bad thing or just a sad thing... it remains to be seen.  I do know that Bella wanted that baby... so I'm sad for her, if in fact she lost the baby.

I'm rambling... sorry.  Update asap... PLEASE!



Author's Response:

Okay - so no long chapters - BUT  - you will get an update this weekend. Does that make up for it?  I love your rambling :)

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

More drama in their little town.  That kind of thing happens everywhere unfortunately... it's discusting!

I wish the heck Edward would make up his mind... Bella has given him every (and many) indications that she wants a relationship beyond friendship... Get with the program, Edward.

As always... more asap please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

Time will fly for them... then they will have the summer to really be together and learn about each other. 

Snowmobiling is very fun, especially when there is a lot of snow.  The trails in Vermont and New Hampshire are terrific (when there is snow).  They can be like 6 lane highways in the backwoods.  Great fun!

Drunken Bella was really funny.   I'm sure Edward will never hear the end abpout his PA.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

It was probably for the best that he left, but he was still a huge coward for leaving without discussing it with Bella, openly and honestly.  I guess he's being canon Edward and making decision unilaterally for both of them.  Just because he's older doesn't make him smarter or wiser. He has done more damaged to an otherwise distrustful Bella... not the right way to handle things.  I look forward to whats in the note.

Cried my eyes out... again.  Tissue warning next time please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I certainly hope that Professor Watson-Smythe doesn't become too much of a problem.  I like to see that Bella isn't letting the interest he and the young men at school are showing her go to her head!  Great chapter!  More when you can please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

I'm glad she didn't lead on poor Ned. 

Another excellent chapter... I'm glad the Esme and Carlisle told Alice and Rose to stay out of it... they were not helping.

I look forward to see what happens next!

Sorry about your car... what a bummer!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think Jasper was an ass to question her at the dinner table with guests (Billy and Sue) present!  He could have waited until it was just Esme and Carlisle or Edward there so as not to advertise his distrust. 

I'd like to think that Edward will take time without his Dad's warning.  I wonder what they will all think when they find out she's pregnant....

Great chapter, thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Summer Time

That was lovely... Bella meeting some of her Dad's old friends.  I wonder what they have saved for her.

I'm not sure if the system works the way you have written, but it's a terrible thing that friends of the family couldn't locate that little orphan girl.

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

I guess I would kind of be embarrased if I was caught too...

I like the idea of them "courting".  I just wish they would both stop jumping to conclusions and listen first.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

I just love how things are going for Bella... it is sad that she lost the baby, but perhaps it wasn't meant to be.  I hope she doesn't have too many or intense relapes.  I'm sure if she lets herself, she will make them all proud.  I wonder if they will ever find out anything about Charlie (her dad)?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

I am so excited to see a new story from you!  I was missing PLU today, and low and behold here is a new story to follow.

I like what I see so far, thanks!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for coming back for more! I miss PLU as well, but these characters are getting their own voices. Next chapter up soon. xoxox

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmm... Edward is a horny little devil isn't he?

A little background on Edward, it should prove interesting. 

I'm glad they found her, but am curious why she is petrified of dogs.

I love your new story... and all of the characters.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor Bella to lose the baby that she wanted to much, but it wasn't meant to be. I hope this doesn't discourage her too much and that she can eventually trust more.  I am glad to see that Emmett and Jasper are being supportive.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Middlebury College is a very prestigious private school... and very expensive.  The campus is lovely and it's a standing joke that (from where I live in NH) "you can't get them from here"  you have to go way south to go north to get there around the mountains.

Dartmouth is only about 10 miles from Hartford VT, across the bridge into NH.  It's an Ivy League college also private and very expensive.

I like how Bella is fiesty, and that Edward likes it when she is.  I can't wait to see what's in the box and the story Emmett has to share.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

I am happy to see her anger leave, but I am disappointed that Edward hasn't written to her.  I know it was for the best but he should show his sopport for her by writing back.  Congratulating her for her victories.  I'll stop whining.  Great chapter, I can't wait to see her deck him (then kiss him) when he gets home.  It's what I would do... I think.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

Man he just doesn't get it!  Why the heck would he says that to her... that is so insensitive.  He deserved the kick in the ... you know.  I look forward to seeing how he gets out of this mess.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

A jumble of stuff going on in this chapter... I look forward to Edward "courting" Bella.  I hope he gets May May's approval.  This should be a roller coaster.  Love the story!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Ahh... finally!  I hope they can continue to have some more good happy times.

My sister has been to the lodge several times and there is an relative still there but not 1st generation.  She says it's wonderful.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

Great chapter, Im so happy they are doing well... I hope no more terrible angst is in their immediate future, but only you know for sure.

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father

I found myself crying my eyes out on and off through this chapter.  My dad was not a cop but he was in the military for over 25 years.  When he died they did the gun salute and handed my Mom the flag... it is a very touching.

I like that his old friends want to be a part of her life... I hope that something like this couldn't happen in real life but it probably does.   They should have been able to find her in the foster care system.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Moving on

This chapter had lots of fun and love, but lots of worries too.  What is the ahole professor Mark up to... I hope she gets to kick him in the nuts or something equally good (then fired). 

What with the nightmares?  Is she having prementions of bad things happening to Carlisle and Esme?  Or are they flashbacks? I know I'm going to have to wait and see but it is worrying.  More please!!!!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am so glad she is not going to keep this to herself any longer.  I'm also glad her friends are not looking light at the problem.  Great chapter, I hope they have something evil planned for the creep.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Here comes trouble....

Roscoe is AWESOME!  I have a 1/2 Aussie and he is wonderful and soooo smart.

That poor girl just can't catch a break... I hope she is wrong about things being ok, she deserves a normal happy life.

How did Mark get private health information?  He could be in trouble for that as well.  Or did he get that information from one of the few people in Hope Springs that is against her?  Like one of those women that Edward spurned or the young man that drugged her?  Or did he break into her private college file?  I can't wait to find out as the story plays out.

I have a feeling that Mark will not be given any kind of chance to explain, given that he followed her home and attacked her in broad daylight!  With witnesses.

I loved your homage to "Pretty Women", although it didn't end up being very funny to her audience.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

Little drama this chapter ... nice for a change. I. So glad the creepy teacher thing was resolved quickly and quietly. I'm glad Roscoe now has a playmate ... Aussies are great dogs!

Author's Response:

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Moving on - Enough is enough!!

Well... I just love how the family helps them both get their heads out of their butts.  It is unfortunate that they can't seem to work out the issues in the same town.  I hope they have finally learned a lesson here.

I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

It was perfect!  I love how happy and full of hope Bella was! 

As for AFLO, I've been looking forward to it since PLU completed...

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

I loved "The Book Club"! 

Great chapter, I love them being so happy together.

I can't wait to see what Charlie left for her.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Making Plans

That was a roller coaster of emotions! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the "little drama"?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!

I just love their family dynamics... and the fact that they never do anything easily.  I will miss this story when it is complete.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Another well done story... I enjoyed it very much and look forward to your next project.

I wonder if it have time to reread PLU?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263186
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

I had to read the last paragraph many times before it sunk in that Edward knows those people!  They have something to do with his past and have hurt him terribly.  Which is how Harry/James used his name to do all those things.  I just hope that he doesn't think that Bella knew anything about it or anything like that. 

I wonder who has the hand on his shoulder?

Jeez this story is just wonderfully infectious!



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights

Lovely chapter, it's a shame that someone is going to ruin their happiness.  I hope the drama etc is short lived.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 22 of His Cimmerian View.  There aren’t a lot of questions about things going on, other than the arrival of Uncle Harry and of course Sue’s return.  The story only has roughly 10 to 12 chapters left and through 26 are written and 27 is more than half way completed.  BPOV out-take is coming along nicely but man alive is it HUGE over 22K word count right now and it is for sure a tissue warning.  As for the few questions we have gotten, we have answers... We want to be clear that Emmett filed a paper that is giving Bella custody until the court hearing so right now no one can take the twins away from her, without first going to court.  We also had someone ask about the title of the story over at TWCS, it is the same as it is at FFN... however at TWCS I have found it is easier to look up the author and then find the story, the story search is not super simple like it is at FFN.  We are the same names both author name and story name at all sites we post at.  On a side and personal note, I am very sorry for the delay of this... after I posted the last chapters on Thursday morning, my mother passed away.  Unless something gets in the way the only thing that will be delayed is this review reply.  The next chapter is ready to go... minus mine and Nikky’s final read through anyway.  I want to thank you all for the kind words shared on Facebook already and thank you for the prayers and well wishes.  If you haven’t joined us on Facebook, please do so there are lots of fun discussions and of course sometimes extra teasers and info too.  Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Thanks everyone have a great week.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 23: teaser subject to changes during beta process…

It’s New Year Eve and the twin’s eighth birthday.  Seth and Leah shared a party yesterday at Chuck E. Cheese and they loved it.  Esme, Chas, and Angela all took the day off and came to help out at the party.  Aro brought Sulpicia and their son, Sammy, who is ten.  Sammy seemed to have taken a liking to Leah, as he stayed mainly with her the entire time. Esme and Zafrina both said it was cute and sweet, but all I wanted to do was kill the kid.  Bella even laughed at me and gave me a look when I let out a growl at little Sammy when he pulled Leah away while she was talking to us. I looked back at Bella and shrugged my shoulders, because I wasn’t really sure where the over-protectiveness came from.

Then there were the moms or whores as I call them.  I got hit on a lot.  Almost every mother of a child that had been invited was dressed like they were having a night out on the town, not taking their child to a classmate’s birthday party.  Some even said that I was really nice to help Bella and her kids out like I have been.  I felt like I was going to lose it as they made her sound so beneath them and that she was simply a charity case.  Thankfully, Bella kept me calm and stopped me from screaming at them.  As soon as school is back in session, I’ll be making it very clear to everyone what Bella and I are to each other. The fact that this was a place for children, and that it was Seth and Leah’s first real birthday party, stopped me from performing a very hot, public display of affection with Bella.  I know for a fact I would have enjoyed it, and I’m sure I would have made Bella enjoy it, too.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: First Times

The beginning of the chapter... wonderful.  I'm so glad they are together together now.  He was so sweet and patient with her.

I knew something had to happen soon with Rose, I think Royce is going to hurt her eventually.  I'm sure Emmett will try to help but I hope he is done with her.

I hope they find Harry soon and put him away for good!  I am so proud of Seth trying to protect Bella.   I wonder what the paperwork was he was looking for? Is it important?

Thanks for the consistent updates!



Author's Response:

Well after this chapter how will we ever get better?  I hope that you trust me when I say, it will!  Many of you want Aro to get his hands on Uncle Harry before the police do.  I will not say who gets to Uncle Harry first; because well that would just ruin the surprise, but I will say this... his capture is already written, so feel free to speculate.  There are some seriously some great chapters coming up, but Nikky says I need to warn you all that some of them are rather drama and angst filled.  There also may or may not be a few cliffhangers in the near future, oh heck who am I kidding the next two chapters are rather cliffy in nature.  The next chapter has a big surprise within and MOST of you may be very shocked.  Nikky, Jess, and a few others who have already read the chapter during BETA processing seem to think that the next chapter may generate a lot more reviews.  We may even get some from people who have not reviewed before now, because it is quite a twist.   There is your warning.  Nikky and I have been called diabolical for the plot twist that is coming, so we sure hope you all like it.  I will say this out of all the readers and reviewers we have, only one time has someone guessed a good portion of the plot and got it right.  We of course didn’t tell them, because well then they would know it would ruin the story telling process.   We had a few question about Sienna’s ability to place a phone call since she is deaf.  Deaf people can make phone calls using a Telecommunication Device for the Deaf (TDD).  Special telephone services have been developed to carry the TDD functionality even further. In certain countries there are systems in place so that a deaf person can communicate with a hearing person on an ordinary voice phone using a human relay operator. There are also "carry-over" services, enabling people who can hear but cannot speak ("hearing carry-over," a.k.a. "HCO"), or people who cannot hear but are able to speak ("voice carry-over," a.k.a. "VCO") to use the telephone.  Couple of questions came about Charlotte’s nick-name of Chas, in our story Charlotte was the youngest raised by her father among her several brothers and she was quite the tomboy growing up.  Char is a girlie name and therefore her brothers tagged her with Chas, because it is manlier.  Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we are proud of it, and are grateful to our loyal readers.  If you have more questions or want to discuss some of the story line, feel free to join the group on Facebook you can find us by searching for: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT FanFiction.  Kasi (&Nikky)

PS….Enduring His Cimmerian View is now POSTED... Please go read and review.

Chapter 25 Teaser:
“Pajama day is when you stay in your pajamas all day and eat lots of bad stuff, watch movies, and play games all day long.”  Seth and Leah nod their heads at me and Bella gives me a small half nod with her smile.  “Okay then, pajama day it is in our house.  I just need to make a few phone calls. Why don’t you all get your robes and slippers on, and I’ll meet you for breakfast as soon as I am done.”  Seth and Leah hug me before walking out of the bathroom to get their slippers and robes.

After they leave the room, I look to see Bella biting her lip, and I know she’s worrying about something.  “I’m sorry that she wet the bed. She’s never done that before.”

I walk to Bella, wrapping my arms around her. “Baby, its okay. She’s upset, and her body is reacting to that, so don’t worry about it.” I kiss her head and push her hair out of her face.  I hiss as I see the large bruises that go all the way up one side of her face.  “Baby, how are you feeling? Are you in pain?”

She shrugs her shoulders and tries to give me a smile.  “I’m not sure. I...”  She stops and rubs her head.  “I feel like I failed them.  He hurt Seth, and I should’ve been able to protect him better.  I’m upset that it was Uncle Harry that broke into our apartment the other time.  I don’t understand why he did that, or what he was looking for.  How could he do that to Seth and Leah?  I mean, I know that he doesn’t really like me much, but they’re his sister’s children.  I thought he would love them.” 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

I try not to guess plots to much... cause I'm usually wrong.  Wow you put a lot of twists and turns in this story!  I hope Edward can console and reassure Bella that nothing is going to change... just that they will be a real family.  And that the kids can have a Dad they can be proud of.  I am very worried about Paul... I hope he doesn't get to Bella.  I am also looking forward to what's going on with the Bitch Rose.  Is she part of the con?



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?

What a terrific rollercoaster chapter!  So much to think about...   Have to digest it for a while first.  You did a great job of pulling pieces together.   I love this story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks again and again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  As the story comes closer to an end, it seems we have a lot of questions or comments that are geared toward answers already given in the story.  So we decided to give a little background to clear up the misconceptions and questions. 

Edward Masen: Father is dead, mother is bi-polar and left him in the care of Esme and Carlisle.  Mother is alive, but whereabouts are unknown.  Edward met ‘Tanya’ in college, they had a short affair and she left, after being caught in trying to get money from him.  Edward then shut down and treated all women as if they were not worth his time.  He refused to date or trust any women and he instead only was with a select few at Aro’s club, where he paid for sex.  Edward owns the restaurant where his parents used to take him to eat at, before his father died and his mother went off the deep end.  Edward is also one of the youngest English professors at UW. 

Bella Swan: Bella was born the child of single mother Renee Higbottom.  Renee met Charlie during one of his planned scams to get money.  Renee was very rich, as were her single father.  Charlie ended up impregnating Renee, but he was already married to Sue Clearwater.  Renee paid off Charlie and Sue to leave her and her child alone, but then subsequently died of breast cancer when Bella was three.  Renee’s father fought for custody, but grand-parents rights are not acknowledged in the state of Washington, therefore after Renee’s death the state went in search of Charlie Swan.  Once he was found Bella was placed in his and Sue’s care.  After Bella went to live with Charlie and Sue, she was treated iek a slave and was never allowed even normal things such as schooling, food, new clothes, and every other basic thing as parents we give our children without second thought.  Bella grew up starved for affection, so once she got to take care of the twins she gave all that affection she has been starving for to them.  Her love of the twins is unconditional as is their love for her.

I hope this helps answer a few questions and clears up a few things.  I’m not sure why, but we have several who think Sue is Bella’s real mother, and that is not the case at all. 

Thank you again so much for all the wonderful heartfelt reviews you all leave for us.  It is amazing to us that we have managed to instill such a deep devotion in our readers to our characters, and we are blown away by just how much emotion our readers feel for our characters.  I know that the character names belong to Stephenie Meyer, but these characters and the way they are in this story are in fact ours, she owns the names and appearance descriptions, but the attitude and demeanor and words are all ours.  Thanks, Kasi (& Nikky)

TEASER Chapter 28: Subject to changes during beta process.
I am so proud of Seth and Leah this past month has not been easy on them, but they have held their heads up high and got on with it.  There has been some name calling at school.  Now I know kids can be cruel but the things that they are saying, is coming from older mouths first.  Things no parent should be saying in front of their children.  Bella and I have addressed the school regarding the problems, but we’ve been brushed off like nothing is going on.  Mrs. Crown the principle said that people will talk.  She went on to point out that I was after all, Seth and Leah’s father, and I was shaking up with their big sister.  The way she said it, implied that Bella and I were doing something wrong.  After her rather rude little speech I called Caius and explained the whole thing to him.  To say that he was angry is putting it mildly.  He went as far as taking the principle in front of the school board, and she was put on a written warning.  Not only is her job and tenure in jeopardy, but her career as a whole is.  Since we have proof that she knowing let kids and adults harass the kids, she was warned that a lawsuit would be filed if the behavior continued.  Her biggest mistake was she was aware what the twin have been though these past five months, yet did nothing to help stop the harassment.

Caius informed me of another school that had room for more students.  It was little school that only had a little over one hundred students.  It went from kinder-garden to fifth grade and each class had mix of around fifteen children per classroom.  It was a private school, and ranked in the top ten of all schools in the state of Washington’s education program.  There was a sister school that managed the grades sixth through twelfth, also ranked in the top ten.   Both schools are quite prestigious and expensive, but cost is of no matter.  There are a few nice things the school is located close to where Esme and Carlisle live, but that also causes us transportation issues for to and from school.  Both Bella and I have talked about this and we all talked about it in family therapy.  Seth and Leah asked to just finish out this year of school where they are before deciding.  We agreed that this was the right choice for right now.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil

Wow! That was exciting. I am so glad that Bella fought and didn't just give up when Peter grabbed her. Excellent chapter. I look forward to your surprise in the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come.  I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far.  And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she?  Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh.  I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter.  A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter.  Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise.  Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out.  There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat.  I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue.  She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun.  I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are.  Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them.   There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31.  Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up.  See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...

Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night.  I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in.  “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”

She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”

I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her.  “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.”  I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye.  “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you.  The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers.  Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band. 

“Baby, what’s wrong?”

She looks up at me and frowns.  “I was just thinking about my past.  There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.”  Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it.  “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me.  Her friend... he gave me a muffin.”  Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts.  “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?” 

My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head.  “Yes, baby, it was me.  I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”

Bella shakes her head at me.  “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you.  I wanted you to come back and take me with you.  At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch.  If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here.  They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”

I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly.  “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them.  I will not fail you or my children again.”

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start

No idea what the "do right now" things was... I even went back and reread it... do tell.

I'm so glad they are having a baby together... that is so exciting.  I can't wait till they get a hold of the Monster... I hope you have Jane do a number on her first.

Good luck with the move.



Author's Response:

Hello, thanks again for reading and reviewing this story.  Nikky and I put a lot of work into these chapters; as well do a large group of ladies who have become not only our sounding boards, but trusted members of our team.  I was shocked that the backlash on the pregnancy was not larger than it was.  I was very skeptical about making Bella pregnant and ironically Jess2002 (WHO HATES IT THAT EVERY STORY BELLA GETS KNOCKED UP) said it had to be done now, because (knowing our future plot line) it was the perfect fit.  So if you are one of the (so far) two negative reviews about the pregnancy we’ve gotten, please know that your reaction was shared at first.  After we thought it over it was easy to see that it however enhanced the love story between Edward and Bella.   The gender of the baby is picked, as well as the babies name.  The story is quickly approaching finalization, and with it I feel a sense of loss. 

There haven’t been many questions, but there have been several comments about things that are complete misunderstandings.  So I figured I would list some of the ones I remember off the top of my head.

Edward wants to marry Bella, but he hasn’t yet proposed. 
Edward has been looking for a ring, and trying to his best ability to find out where his mother’s jewelry is. 
Edward is very rich, and doesn’t have to work, but like most people who are rich a great portion of his funds is wrapped up in investments, so not always does he have access to super large amounts of money. 
Edward’s father was quite a pianist and left Edward a rather large inheritance, as well as before his mother left she made sure to leave him money in a trust. 
Elizabeth knew she was ill and left thinking Edward would be better raised by Esme and Carlisle. 
Alice is not a blood relative of the Cullen’s, or Masen’s. 
Jasper and Rosalie’s parents died and in the will they left guardianship of them to Carlisle and Esme. 
Sue and Harry’s parents are dead, harry murdered them.
Bella’s biological parents are dead. 
Rose was always allowed to act out and as if she was better than everyone else. 

The next chapter is one you won’t want to miss for sure.  Before you sit down to read it, you may want to get a cold drink (not promoting booze, but I needed some writing parts of it), a few tissues, and be sure to tell yourself at least four or five times before you start reading – “Kasi and Nikky are happily ever after writers...”
Thanks again for the story love, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 30 Teaser, subject to changes during BETA process.

Seth and Leah have taken to home schooling well; both are extremely bright children. Lucy resigned from her temporary position at the school, and is now helping us teach them at home.  Between the five of us: Lucy, Esme, Zafrina, Bella, and myself, the twins are receiving an excellent education.  They’ve both been a little more edgy lately, and upset about what happened with Sue. It’s been causing both of them to have more nightmares than usual.  Samantha’s advice was simple: just keep helping them feel safe and secure in their home.  We’ve talked about it several times, and I think they now understand that the school did something wrong.  I also know that they believe we will keep them safe.  

Mrs. Crown has been fired over her behavior, as were four other staff members.  This led to the papers getting ahold of the full story of what happened at the school.  When the story first came out, all that had been said was that there had been an attempted abduction. Since then, though, someone had talked – my guess would be Mrs. Crown – and it’s been all over the local news and in the papers.

 Thankfully, Seth and Leah’s names have been kept out, but reporters did manage to get some of the story behind Sue, Charlie, and Harry.  They were also able to gather some information on Bella, like the fact that she raised her siblings from birth, but they did not focus on this.  They focused, instead, on how Bella had to have known that her Uncle and parents were hurting and killing people, and hid it instead of going to the authorities.  

They talked about how when she worked, she left the children unattended and neglected.  That one line hurt Bella the most, and I had a hard time trying to calm her down. Of course, it also upset Seth and Leah.  To say I was ranting and raving over the phone lines to just about anyone who would listen, was an understatement. I had to take several deep breaths and remind myself that I supposed to help reduce the stress, not add to it.  

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Faith Within

That was exciting!  I was hoping that Jane (or Edward) could have gotten a hold of her... or that she would be humilated in some way.

I love Dr. Seuss... the writer, Theodore Geisel, was an alumni of Dartmouth College.  Just a little bit of trivia.



Author's Response:

Well it seems that most everyone is happy that Sue is caught, but many of you are unhappy that she wasn’t tortured first by our dear Jane.  No worries our little Jane will eventually be paying Sue a visit.  Many seem to be worried that Sue will escape or get away; well rest assured that we have no intent on letting that fruit-loop free.  She is toast.  It seems that less people are disgruntled by Bella being pregnant, now that chapter 30 posted.  As the next few chapters post, I am thinking most if not all people will understand why Jess told us it was the perfect fit.  Nikky and I have added to but not really changed much of the original story-line.  I love when you all make suggestions and we’ve already written it into the story.  The next chapter has a few suggestions in it, that oddly enough were written before they were suggested.  I know that some of you are sad that this will be coming to a close, but there will be MANY – MANY more out-takes to come.  We actually discussed some future plotting things today and have a whole other out-take to add to the Enduring His Cimmerian View, in Edward’s POV to boot.  A lot of you want a Jane’s POV and well we have decided that it will be the next one released, do I hear the cheering already?  Yep... pretty sure I do... LOL.  We really want to say THANK YOU again and again, for reading, reviewing and loving this story so much... it has become a HUGE part of our lives and we both put a lot of work into it, as well as the wonderful group of gal’s we have keeping us from looking stupid. 

Thank you, and we will see you with the next update.  Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Chapter 31 teaser, subject to changes during beta process.
Tomorrow we are scheduled to be in court.  Since it is the same day as my birthday, I have refused to do anything but celebrate us getting full custody of Seth and Leah.  I am thinking positive.  Bella has refused to let my twenty-ninth birthday go by without doing something.  Seth and Leah soon joined in and I lost the battle.  So tonight we are having a family dinner, and everyone is going to be here.  Bella decided that I should also receive my gifts tonight from everyone.

I watch her making sure everyone has drinks before she sits me in the middle of everyone.  Seth and Leah come up to me first.  Seth hands me small box, and Leah hands me two envelopes.  I open the envelopes first.  The first envelope contains a certificate for being the best dad, signed by both Seth and Leah.  The second envelope holds a homemade birthday card from them.  I whisper out an emotional thank you to them in their ears, before opening the box Seth gave me.

As I open the box, I see it’s a necklace.  It is platinum with dog-tag like disks of metal hanging from it.  The first tag says ‘Dad’.  I look at the next which says ‘Seth Masen’ on it as I turn it over I see the other side has his date of birth.  The next has ‘Leah Masen’ again the back has her date of birth.  The last tag is blank and I look up questioningly.

“It’s for when Bean’s born.”  I look up at Seth and Leah and pull them both in for a hug a kiss the heads.

“Thank you Little Man and Princess.” I watch them go back at sit down, after we share a few more hugs.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family

Wow... so much happend in this chapter.  I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  I am very sorry for the lateness of getting this review reply to you.  I always write them out and Nikky sends them to everyone on FFN and I send them out to everyone on TWCS and Twilighted.  With the move, I am without internet, so needless to say we got a bit of a delay.  We are hoping that the delay will not cause an issue in the normal posting, however we may run late getting chapters 33, 34 and 35 posted.  This has put me behind by more than a week, so I hope you all are understanding in regards to the situation.  The reviews have been wonderful, and Nikky tells me that there haven’t been a lot of questions.  The next chapter will be loved and hated, but trust in the fact that Jane has a plan for Sue.  Thanks for being such loyal readers, we love and appreciate every wonderful review and comment you all leave us.  HUGS!  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Teaser for 32 subject to changes during beta process

“What do you want Pet?” Sue sneers out.

Bella look at her, and I nod my head in encouragement.  “I want to know why?  Why you didn’t love them?”

Sue shakes her head.  “That’s easy, because they were meant to be mine and Charlie’s, but instead they had to come out being HIS.  Every time I looked at them, all I saw was that stupid fucker.”

Bella looks at her shaking her head.  “Well I was Charlie’s child and you didn’t love me.”

Sue laughs sarcastically, and she shows her teeth as she makes a face.  “NO, you are right about that.  I don’t love you, I never have and I never will.  I wanted something that was mine and Charlie’s, I deserved that.  What I didn’t deserve was for your whore of a mother to intentionally get pregnant to try and steal my man from me.”

I chuckle out loud at Sue’s delusional attitude, and Sue growls at me.

“There are only two people I love in this world that is Charlie and Harry and you took both away from me,” Sue says caustically as she turns her glare at Bella.

“I want to know what you were planning to do with Seth, and the baby that belonged to Tanya, what was your plans?”

Sue laughs at Bella’s question in her evil sarcastic way.  “You really want to know?  Well I’ll tell you,” she says with a now huge happy smile.

 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Wedding Bells

What a beautiful wedding and reception... all the love flowing was wonderful.

I hope we get an outtake of Jane with Sue.



Author's Response:

As things are winding to a close Nikky and I wanted to take this opportunity to say that we are very grateful for all of your reviews and the time you put into reading our story.  Our next plans are to work on the several POV’s that you have all asked for.  The Jane POV will for certain be the next POV chapter we post. 
As for the next story we plan to write, well Nikky has this uncanny ability to get a tiny idea and go freaking CRAZY with it and so now she has already hammered out a decent start on a new story...  AND what a story it will be... How about a story of a virginella who loves to dance, and an olderward who lives in the BDSM lifestyle – we know been done before right?  Yeah well knowing us... do you really think it won’t have a few twists?  Besides as wonderful as we write bad guys, you know you can’t wait to see what kind of crazy this will bring on.  This BDSM story will of course have SEX in it, but it will not be all about sex, nor will the next chapter of HCV. 
A couple people have mentioned that they hope the whole next chapter is not just full of a bunch of sex acts, and honestly HCV has never been about a bunch of sex acts.  Yes there have been some explicit scenes in the story, especially regarding Edward when he was attending the club, but this story has never needed sex to be readable... and our next story will be the same way.  We also have a stalker story on the burner, and the BDSM may turn into a really big drabble or one-shot.  Either way you’ll be seeing MUCH more from Nikky and me. 
I am also writing a story with Jess that will start posting fairly soon under the name JessAndTAT that will be called Bases Loaded. 
I don’t think that there are any loose ends yet to tie up, other than Rose, and you will learn more about her in the Epilogue.  If there is something else you want to know let us know right away and we will get it answered and or addressed in the Epilogue.
As always and again, thank you so very much for being such wonderful and loyal readers.
Kasi (&Nikky)

Teaser for Chapter 34: Subject to changes during Beta process.
I look at Bella who is sound asleep, in bed.  I smile pushing her hair from her face. I rented us a villa and we haven’t left the bedroom for longer than half hour all weekend. I know that things will change today.  She still has no clue about where we are.  I chuckle remembering the car ride here and how she looked around trying to work it out.  All she knows is that we are still in America.

My phone beeps I pick it up and read the text, seeing that my first surprise will be here in just over an hour.  I get out of bed head to the kitchen to make Bella breakfast in bed.  I play music as I fry her eggs and bacon, being really careful of my delicate parts, since I’m not exactly dressed.  Ha, the naked chef has nothing on me.  Once breakfast is ready I head back with a try and place it on the bedside table.

“Baby it’s time to get up,” I whisper in her ear. 

I watch her smile as she stretches and wakes up.  “Hmm, no – to tired.  Come back to bed and cuddle with me, or better yet help me wake up the good way – like you did around three this morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, but stop to kiss her before speaking.  “As much as I would love to take you again baby, over and over – I can’t right now.  I have a surprise for you and you need to eat your breakfast and get washed before it arrives.  Because once it’s here I’ll be taking you out for the day and you will finally know where exactly we are at.”

She opens her eyes wide and smiles at me.  “You got me a surprise?”

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times

Family is so important to Bella and Edward so it only makes sense that the kids and the family joined them. I also loved the future involved and how the all have such a great support system around them.

Great chapter, I will be so sorry to see this story end.



Author's Response:

Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete.  We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short.  When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both.  Nikky has written hers and I have written mine.  Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on.  I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS.  We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten.  THANK YOU!  Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it.  Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

What a great way to end the story!  I want to tell you that I truly appreciate all your hard work and look forward to new projects. 



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

OK, I'm curious... looks fun. 

Bar Room Angel by vodkavamp76 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. Bella finds her own piece of heaven with the man who saved her, but has she truly escaped the clutches of the man who preyed on her?

All Human, Bella & Edward.  Rated NC17 for language/lemons/some violence. Expansion of a one shot I posted on Fanfiction.net but then expanded due to reviewer request.

Reviews on Fanfiction - 138 so far!

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168665 Read Count: 27965
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Mar 2016
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well, that was a lovely visit with Charlie. And every town has a bitch... Right? 

Great chapter!  Love the story.  More please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad Bella got support from Kate, I hope it continues.  That was a fun date, it hope she makes him dinner next time... I'll keep reading a find out.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I just discovered this story!  I love it.... 

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44071
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Sub space?  I hope this doesn't discourage him from taking her on. 

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He is so good to her, but his attachment to her is complete.  I hope it goes well and he can keep his patience.  I'm glad the family is to supportive.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad people are enjoying my Edward. :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hope they can channel her drawing ability into a way for her to learn to communicate.  I think encouraging her saying "Edward" may help her find her voice and know that it makes him happy to hear her talk.  I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

That's a good idea - encouraging her to talk.  Have to think about that one... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think Edward's thoughts are heading in the right direction... he's putting things together.  I wonder if he will do some research on his theory and see what he finds. I hope that Edward will have perhaps have a early childhood education come and give him some tips at how to start teaching her... it might help.

I can't wait to see what James has to say.



Author's Response:

Hmm...interesting  about research.  I don't even know where to start witih research about abuse like this.  Of course, I'm not a sociologist. ;) Thanks for the review!