Reviews by Teri
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

THIS WAS AN ABSOLUTELY GREAT STORY. I LOVED IT!!

Author's Response:

Awww thank you We are glad you enjoyed it :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315744
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Well I started on your story yesterday and could not put it down,  Here I thought you were ending it with the happy ever after but then you gave it a New Moon, but with a really big twist.  Way to go, absolutely LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

You are such a GREAT writer.  This was a wonderful chapter.  I absolutely love your story!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

You always outdo yourself. WHAT A CHAPTER. I really expected some blowout from that little 18 years old grabbing onto Edward and that photo being taken with Edward & Bella, but you surprise me there. Loved the way they all found out about the new playroom. Funny. Can't wait for the deliveries. Just can't wait. Love it!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Woah hot & heavy

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh I am soooooooo ready to do body shots.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Finally, here we go

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love your imagination.  Just wished they would do it already.  Poor Bella.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I still cant get over the fact that you made Alice a sub funny with her personality



Author's Response:

Please tell me why you think so - when I thought of this story, I thought that the way she is in tune with Jasper would make them the almost perfect d/s couple.

I really want to know, okay?

Michele

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really liked this chapter.  They are really coming together.  Oh what a play on words.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh so good

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hmm Nella trying to be a dom for 1 time?  Wondeer how that is going to work out.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh that was  very entertaining

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I just love the way Edward and Bella play.  Still wondering what Jacob will have in mind.  Love it.



Author's Response: Aaahh Jacob - you'll get a glimpse next week - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Really love the story.  I am puzzled why Esme would start crying over Bella making breakfast unless she wanted those things for the Thanksgiving dinner or if she wants to be the only one doing the cooking.  You left a cliffy for us and I hope you don't wait too long to put us out of our misery.  Love it.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review teri, she didn't cry over the breakfast, well it was breakfast and the prep for dinner...not long now for the update!

promise

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh this was a great chapter.  Love the way Edward is trying to stay with Bella for Christmas and love the idea of Bella's nightie. Thanks & can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review Teri :)

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Well, this was quite interesting.  I am not a Dom, but I think Master Edward was a little rough on Bella for her first play party.  I can't blame Bella for being jealous.  I am pretty sure that if the tables were turned Edward would be quite jealous.  Oh well, I guess then I would make a very poor sub.  Great chapter and love your story.



Author's Response:

I agree with you.  thanks for the review and your comments

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Maybe Edward has a feeling that something bad is about to happen. Either from her ex which they don't know that he is in town or something to him. A premonition of sorts. In actuality I think he just hates leaving Bella at all. Love you story.

Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Well I can see that you are certainly setting up for the next dramatic and I imagine intense chapter. However, I don't understand the last two paragraphs. Is Bella starting to get an uneasy feeling of something bad to come?

Author's Response:

Um, let me go back and see what the hell I wrote - hang on. - okay, she opens the door and sees.....J and then she realises that all the angst that Edward was feeling held some weight because the shit is about to hit the fan.

I didn't word it too well, sorry about that!

:)

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I don't have words strong enough to say how suspenseful this chapter was. What a great piece of writing. You had us on the edge of our seats. Bella was so incredibly calm and smart. Love it!

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I thought for sure that Bella was the one who would turn out being pregnant. Guess I was wrong. Love the way Edward keeps her in line, but I also love Bella's sauciness as you put it. Love the story.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Michelle,
I love your story. Edward is definitely the most sexiest Dom I have ever seen and so protective. Love it.

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I am really sorry to hear about your sister's loss. My prayers go out to your family.
I love the chapter and love the way Bella still teases Edward and his responses. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

thanks Teri, I'll pass this on to Fiorella.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

What a powerful chapter. Here I thought it was going to be all fun and game for Christmas. Can't believe that Charlie was okay with the bdsm. Hmmm. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

well I started writing fluffy, good stuff and then Charlie just had to come out!  Thanks for your review

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I understand how Bella wanted to be honest with Charlie, but still am surprised that he is okay with it. Love the gifts that Edward and Bella received from each other for Christmas.

Author's Response:

He doesn't really have a choice does he, she kind of threw down the gauntlet when she told him about their lifestyle - kind of like 'this is me - what are you going to do about it?'

thanks as always for keeping me honest.

:)

Michele

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Every time I think you may be ending this story with no where to go, YOU SURPRISE ME BIG TIME. WOW! what a suspenseful chapter. I really feel sorry for Bella. I think all women would keep a secret for a best friend and Bella did actually make Alice promise to tell Jasper before they left on their trip. I think it was very mean of Edward to just go off and not say anything to Bella. She is very fragile and I think h sometimes forgets this fact. Don't know if would like to be called Little Girl, but I guess to each their own. BUT I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE STORY and CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE. Thank you.

Author's Response:

T, you make my day, you really do! Thanks for your comments and review

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

It was beautiful. I loved the way that Bella is standing up for herself and Edward. Way to go Bella.

Author's Response:

Thanks T - Yeah our Bella is growing up xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

THIS WAS SUCH A GREATTTT CHAPTER! Love this fiesty Bella and Edward what a stubborn a-hole. But you just have to love them both. Just love it, was hoping the chapter wouldn't end.

Author's Response:

thanks so much T

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

OMG, I thought everything was going very smoothly and then you throw the homicide in at the end. I don't know what they are thinking, because that is crazy. Oh the Paps are going to have a field day with this one. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

oh T, you should know me by now - i'm all about the drama!! this is for you with love from me for being such an avid supporter :}

 

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Loved the party and Bella's and Edward's outfits. Very appropriate being Halloween and all. I thought for sure that Edward was going to propose marriage to Bella around midnight, but of course, I am not the writer and you are always surprising us. Thanks and really look forward to more.

Author's Response:

thanks so much T. The proposal will come - just not now.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

When you write a story, boty do you write one. Most people leave the wedding as their ending to the happy ever after ending, but not you. THIS WAS GREAT. The wedding beautiful and then the fight and then this very unexpected event. You know how to really SPICE up your stories that the reader cannot for one minute stop reading. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER and I hope some day that you will put this story to print so that everyone can read your OUTSTANDING work. Simply AMAZING.

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Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I love the way the tables have turned for Bella. Everything is looking up. Switching places over the weekend was great and I would love to have Edward giving me a massage. I really do hope that you enjoy your concert tomorrow night. Now don't go getting into any trouble like trying to run on the stage or anything. We need another update and we don't want to see you get arrested. Thanks for the story tips.

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I was just going to say that they are really having their ups and downs. Just when you think they are getting it together and just loving each other they go and do something stupid (Bella this time). Love the end of the chapter where Bella is considering adding "Mr. Bristles" and "paddles" to her hard limits. Funny. Can't wait for more. Happy Thanksgiving.

Author's Response:

thanks so much Teri. Happy Thanksgiving to you as well

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

This was a great chapter. We can all see how Bella is maturing in this lifestyle and I love the idea that Edward will be realizing his musical aspirations. Absolutely love your story and find it really nice of you to encourage other writers. Thank you.

Author's Response:

thanks so much T - and i love reading new stories. I know how nervous I get when I put out a new chapter each week. I spend hours agonising over each paragraph. Too much? not enough? Why would he say that? Why DID he say that?.... So I know how much it means when I get a good review, so I try and read new stories and see how they go.

See you next time.

Michele

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

What a chapter you gave us! First the episode with Esme and Riley was great and then Edward's reaction. Funny. The reward scene was extremely entertaining (hmmm). You just want to love Edward and Bella is really coming together quite nicely. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Florella,
What a beautiful chapter. I love the way Edward and Bella are really turning into one person. I agree with you about rushing things. In the past I have read wonderful stories which seem to fall flat towards the end. So I appreciate your perfection. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and know that the New Year will be yours for the taking. I don't know what summer storms are so I guess I will be looking up where actually you live. I look forward to reading anything and everything you write so please let us know what other stories you have in store. Thank you for such wonderful entertainment. Your story is by far the best out there.

Author's Response:

Hey there Teri,

thanks for your great words of encouragement and the review. I live in Cape Town, South Africa and my nonBeta Beta, Fiorella lives in Brisbane Australia, so we are a long way apart from each other!  The summer storms that Fee gets are like lightning storms - lots of noise, humidity and relentless heat!!

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Michele,
I wish you a very very Happy New Year. With your update and wonderful writing you have definitely started my New Year with a BANG. I hate to see Bella and Edward having to get together on a negative note, but at least they made lover first. Bella needs to burn Mr. Bristles though. Are you visiting Africa or do you live there? I live in Miami and would love to have a white Christmas some year. Can't wait for more. Thank you.

Author's Response:


Hey T - thank you so much for your review - I live here in Cape Town - I've never even left the shores! But in my mind and my imagination, I have traveled far and wide!!  I would also like to see snow some time - these hot relentless days are quite draining.

Next Chapter will be up soon - it's going to be a long one

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

First of all I am so sorry that you are going through so much tragedy. I will be more than thrilled to donate to your cause.
On a much lighter note, I want to thank you for my wonderful b-day present. You had Edward propose in this chapter. Yea. I just love the way these two are getting together and that their love is going stronger each day. I cannot for the life of me understand how people could find anything derogatory in your story. I FIND IT TO BE ABSOLUTELY THE BEST OUT THERE. Thank you.

Author's Response:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TERI!! I'm glad that Edward could make your day :)

I hope you have a great year, Honey.

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

This was such a beautiful chapter. I just love the way you write each and every character, especially the main two. I look forward to each and every one of your updates because it brings me so much joy and hmmmmmmm other things. Love it!

Author's Response:

Thanks Teri, I love your reviews and comments xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

What a great chapter. Loved the ending with Esme and Carlisle finally making up, but was really surprised that Rose was pregnant. What a nice Christmas they will be having.

Author's Response:

Hey T - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

This was such an emotional roller coaster chapter. It had everything. I knew that Alice was going to wind up being pregnant by what was going on at the party. Can't wait to see Bella and Edward's wedding and HONEYMOON. Love it.

Author's Response:

Awww - you are to smart for me! Thanks for the review - more drama next chapter - and a play party ....

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I don't know whether my review came through or not, so I am writing it again. IN ALL OF THE STORIES I HAVE READ, I HAVE NEVER, ABSOLUTELY NEVER READ A STORY WITH AS MANY CHAPTERS AS YOU HAVE THAT KEEPS ON GETTING BETTER WITH EACH CHAPTER. Others seem to dwindle down after a while and sometimes get stale, BUT NOT YOURS. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!!!! Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much T - maybe my characters and I are growing together! (or I've made you as crazy as I am!!!) xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Love the road trip. What a great idea to get Edward's thoughts on other things. I have no idea who Bella's mother is going to turn out to be, but she should be thrilled that it isn't Rene. But still don't understand why she is going to be upset. Hmmmmmm. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hey T - thanks for the review and comments = all will be revealed in the next chapter and you aren't wrong!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I can't believe Bella held it together like a pro when everyone else around her just vanished. Great chapter, but can't wait for the big day for B & E.

Author's Response:

Two weeks, Baby - sooner if I can get it all done and if ALL OF MY CHARACTERS CO OPERATE!!!!! Thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

This was a great chapter. Loved the scene they did together and absolutely love the wedding coming up. I really don't think that Edward should keep the strippers a secret from Bella (because everything always seems to sneak out). Am really wondering what is in the letter, but I know we will find out in time. Thanks for writing and can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hey Teri, Thanks so much for your review and comments. Yeah, it's never good to keep secrets - I'm sure he will tell her. The contents of the letter will come out soon, too. xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Great chapter. I am so glad that everyone is well and it seems that Edward will be up to his tricks in no time. What a pair.

Author's Response:

You gotta love 'em!  Thanks for the review T xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

A GREAT GREAT CHAPTER. LOVED IT.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I love the sentence "she could be having like a litter." Really funny. Can't believe they are having twins. Really good.

Author's Response:

thanks for your review T xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Well I thought your other chapter was great, but I see where you left out all of the end of this chapter. Oh this is so exciting. Can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response:

thanks T!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

I thought you put a lot in this chapter. Their plan sounds wonderful and just perfect. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

This was areally a fun chapter to read. Loved the way Bella has finally come into her own person. Edward was hysterical. Bomb, bullet proofing, what a hoot. Juat wait until the babies are born. Oh my.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Woa. Great chapter and I love the way you show the family working together and then this Irena issue cropping up. I think there will be some real time problems up ahead and love the way you are making us climb this hill with you. Can't wait for more. Please hurry.

Author's Response:

Loved the review - I'm typing as fast as I can- promise. xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OMG what a chapter. You write so much better than I could ever dream up. They were both so mature with the handling of Ms. Ross. It seems to me that Bella is getting fiesty. Can't wait to see what she does with Ms. Ross when they finally meet in person. Hmmmmm.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Oh the uncles were an absolute riot. Loved the chapter. Edward is so sweet with all of his helping Bella all of the time. Just love the story.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

What a great chapter. I cannot find the words to tell you how great it was. From Nicholas' birth and Edward's reaction to the award. Loved it.

Saw Breaking Dawn and loved it, however, I really think they could have spent a little more time on the honeymoon especially since the movie only last for 1 hr & 45 min.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

OMG I can't believe this is the end. I LOVE THIS STORY. What an amazing author you are. I can't wait to read your new stories. Happy holidays to you and yours.

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It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64145
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY AND AM WONDERING IF THIS IS THE END OF IT.  THANK YOU.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

Really good story. Can't wait for more.

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

WOW!!!!  Such suspense.  Hope Masen and Bella are okay and that Emma gets over her anxiety and starts treating Bella and Masen as they deserve.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Woa Bella is really one big mess. Hope she gets her act together. Between having a baby and one big little sister giving her a hard time, poor Bella.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG, you had me crying at work. I love it. What a great writer you are.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well hopefully she moved to another bedroom or the living room.  I am really enjoying your story so far.  Thank you.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hmmm, I can't believe she feels so threatened by Edward when he is anything but nice to her. She is a handful. Can't wait for next chapter.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

Well I think that it is great that Edward cares enough to take Bella back home, but I am afraid that this is the first place that bastard will go to look for her. I guess we shall see.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

This is a really beautiful story. Love it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk

I'm overwhelmed and I am not even there. So much suspense. Hope Alec doesn't come after her. Love your story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it! I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

Oh I just love your story. Edward is so wonderful and I am glad that they will be staying with the Cullens.

Author's Response:

So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Katie 

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

I just love how you write Edward being so caring, but I dread the time when Bella starts therapy and he sees that he is not needed as much as he thinks he should be. Love your story.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Katie 

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

This was such a good chapter. Poor Alice. I just love Edward more and more.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

I love your story. Just read your bio and I think you are a beautiful person. I myself am single, but wanted to help a child and winded up adopting foster girls. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the sweet review! And how awesome that you could help 4 children! Thank you for sharing your story with me!

I hope you like the next chapter :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

Well I really thought it would go over better with Charlie. After all if it were not for Edward Charlie wouldn't even know where she was. Poor Bella, I am wondering what happened. Maybe she saw the guy at the mall???? And poor Edward.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

I was so afraid that that bastard would show up. Hopefully, they will catch him soon, but I have a feeling not before he terrorizes Bella once again. I just love how Edward takes care of her.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

This was such a sweet date. They really did need this getaway. Love the chapter and can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

Well here's to a great chapter and hoping that you will get your Christmas wish of Edward delivering a present to you in person. Okay come to think of it, maybe all you need is Edward and forget the present. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Karma Police

Thank goodness. I was afraid that the people who killed Alec would be looking for her, but it looks as if all of the bad ones who had anything to do with this kind of thing were arrested. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

Their first fight. Hmmmm. Loved the outcome and I am glad she is going with him even though I wanted her to stay. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dosed

What a beautiful beautiful story. Simply loved it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

They are just so good for each other. Maybe by the time Edward has grey hair they may be able to go all the way. Love the chapter and the entire story.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

Oh sad chapter. Hope things get better.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

Great chapter. Sorry all of those bad things happened to you in real life, but really appreciate the update. Take care.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

What a beautiful chapter. Hopefully, everything will fall into place with the both of them.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

WHAT A GREAT, GREAT, ABSOLUTELY GREAT CHAPTER. It is about time and I am so happy that everything is working out for them.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl

Great chapter. I loved the part where Seth is playing cars with Edward and he lets him. Cute.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

Wow, I didn't expect this. I certainly hope they catch him.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Worker Bees

Oh this is so great. I am hoping that the douche bag will be caught at one of the borders. Love the way everyone is warming up to Edward, who really deserves it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue

AWWWW - I LOVED IT!!! Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Marie, I am so glad that you have come over to this site with your story. I really like this site the best and it fits a GREAT story which you have and the GREAT writer that you truly are.

Author's Response:

Hey Teri,

Thanks for the vote of confidence!  We'll see... I keep posting here, but not too much traffic.  Hoping it picks up.  Next chapter should be up Monday!  M

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12, Pt. II

I thought about this story after reading it on another site and think I see what is coming. First of all Edward leaves and gets Bella another attorney and probably stays completely away from her. In the meantime, Bella will break up with Jacob and will be really upset that Edward is sending her to someone else. Then Bella will have a problem with James and maybe Little B will get taken by him (okay maybe that is a little drastic). I love your story so much I couldn't get it out of my head. Can't wait for more. 1 Week way too long to wait. Just kidding. Thanks.

Author's Response:

Hey Teri,

I love your version of events... it could be fanfan fiction! M

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14

Oh I just loved the way Bella and Edward made up. Wasn't expecting that and can't believe that reaction from Kate. Hope that changes. Love them finally being together and boy were they ever together.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

I have a feeling that their love is going to get very complicated. I feel sorry for Edward and just want to hug him. Carlisle is a jerk so far. Love it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

I can't believe how one-sided Rose is being. Whether you agree or not you need to stand by your friend. You can at least say some things, but I believe that she was way tooooooo hard on Edward (of course we all love Edward), but everyone deserves a second chance. I love them together. Absolutely love the story.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20

OMG, you have us so much in suspense. It was bad enough that Edward lost his job and that Tania is a bitch, but now James is trying to get joint custody. Guess that means that James is having someone spy on Bella's house to see that Edward is staying there. Poor Edward and Bella. I think this is going to blow up in their face.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

This just breaks my heart. Edward and Ness are so broken over this. And even after everything Bella did to Edward he is still so sweet with his messages. My advice for Bella be sure you know who the new babysitter really is. Hmmmmm

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

Edward is really angry and I am afraid he may lose it. Bet it was James or his people who turned in Bella. I am so glad that Jake's truck was found in Trenton. The killers should have left it in Phily. Their mistake. Hope things will be getting better, but you promised that they would.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

This was soooooooo sad. I may be Team Edward, but I hated seeing Jacob die. I am confused, what has Bella decided to tell Edward. I really don't like the sound of this satement. I didn't read where she made up her mind about anything unless she has decided to move back home, or maybe it is the Will having her Dad get Vanessa if anything were to happen to Bella. Hmmmmmm.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

First of all the lunch with the Judge is an opening for Edward to do the work he is meant for. Secondly, the table fight - just too much, but at least Alice let them both have it (which in my opnion she is definitely justified). Finally, Bella calling and telling Edward that she loves him, but I have a feeling that when she comes back that she will be telling him that she will be moving to Forks, and I will CRY. Happy Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27

Well, as always, you threw me a huge curve ball. I did not for one instant think she was pregnant. I was so afraid that she was going to move back to Forks and break it off with Edward. 1 in a million. Wow! This is great. I just hope the hearing goes just as good. Maybe the cops will come in the middle of the hearing and arrest James for Jacob's murder. That would be the icing on the cake. Cannot possibly wait a week for more. Just great!