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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
Oh you have really given us an exciting and suspenseful chapter. Hopefully, you will also be giving us a Christmas gift by letting James be arrested during the hearing. Come on, you can do this. You have all of the POWER.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29
Oh Marie,
What an exciting chapter! I am so glad that James was carted off. I had a feeling when the Judge paid attention to Edward's name that he was the same judge who wanted Edward to work on that project with him. But of course, you threw that monkey wrench that we didn't see coming about Carlisle. I just hope that he is okay or maybe he is taking care of Mary and I also take it that that is where Edward is. Happy holidays to you and I am so happy that it has worked out for Bella, but would be more comfortable if Edward were with her now.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30
Oh Marie,
You are just too much. Everything was going along just fine and then you had to drop a bomb at the end of the chapter and leave us hanging. I guess that James just wants to call Edward and congratulate him or wish him a very Happy New Year! Ha, ha. HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and thanks for the update.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31
Oh Marie,
This was such a beautiful and sensitive chapter. I absolutely loved it and cried at work. The way you put words together cannot be described. How touching. I LOVED IT.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Oh Marie,
Here I was thinking that this was going to be such an easy-going chapter and you just had to blow the lid off. Too much excitement! Of course I will vote for your story. Thank you for such great entertainment.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 33
Oh Marie, your story is so beautiful. I feel sad that it is finally coming to an end. I have to tell you that you are probably the ONLY author that I know keeps their word. I absolutely hate starting to read a story and really getting into it and then the author stops writing for whatever personal reason they have. BUT NOT YOU, you bring us absolutely to the end. I have a girlfriend that loves Twilight and I am going to turn her on to your story because like me Twilight is just too elementary school for her. I can't wait to hear what she has to say. Thank you so much for all of YOUR HARD WORK and anything I can ever do for you, please let me know.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1
Oh Marie, this is absolutely beautiful. Love the way Edward hasn't changed his language and love the way that Little Bell has picked it up. I know that's not right when it's your own child, but it was funny to read. I think that will be Will's first word besides Da. They are such a cute family that I want to cry because it is finally coming to an end. Please let me know when you are going to write something else. So when are you ever going to be published - I don't care how many times I've read something I would buy it. Thank you.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255190
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
Oh I see all hell breaking loose. First Bella is going to be made at Edward for not telling her everything and then Edward will be made at Bella for planning something on Saturday. Too much, but I love what Aro did.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
This was a deep chapter. Seems as if there is a lot of cleansing going on with everyone.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
I still don't understand why Bella does not rat out James. However, I don't think that it is James who broke into Edward's home. I think it has something to do with Heather (maybe she is with James, who knows only you do). But I still don't like the way Edward uses sex as a punishment. I think he was mean at the end. After all Bella didn't know what was going to happen when she took the clip off. Happy New Year and thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Your right only I know...lol.... and actually Edward doesn't use sex as a punishment ,,, he uses his conrtrol over her as a punishment. I supose you could say it's the same thing, but he uses what he has to work with. His POV is up next and you will see what he was thinking when he did what he did...you will also see Bella's reaction ...lol....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”
“Don’t say that!”
I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”
Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”
Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”
“No…” why the hell would I think that?
“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
I wonder if Edward was jealous that Bella turned to Jane rather than to him. Don't know why he is so upset. Stand your ground Bella. Great chapter. Hurry back.
Author's Response:
You almost got it... but don't worry the next chapter should be up in a few days,,, thanks for reading ...louise
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Hmm. I think James is lurking somewhere out there watching and waiting for Bella. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml
Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.
“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.
“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.
“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.
“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I am really glad that I started reading your story and can't wait to read more. Unfortunately, I also had an experience with a thumb boy (how embarrassing). Love the story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you started reading too...and I hope it's not the same thumb boy ...lol...
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love the chapter, but am surprised that he had Bella sign the contract before asking for her limits.
Author's Response:
I'm going to use your question for the OT interview that will be coming up soon...if you don't mind?
Author's Response:
I'm going to use your question for the OT interview that will be coming up soon...if you don't mind?
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Well I had a funny feeling when Seth's collar was missing and Edward seeing a white van near Bella's house. I have a feeling that James or some other not too kind person is lurking in the shadows. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
You think something is up??? hmmmm, guess you will have to see...like I said my story is a slow boil so I guess time will tell...Thanks for reading and thanks for the comment...lml
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
That was very intense and touching. I still have that same feeling that James is out there somewhere and will be coming soon. Love Edward.
Author's Response:
I love Edward too...He is like my perfect man..lol ...thanks for the comments ...lml
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
You scared me. I thought for a minute that James had her, but I KNOW it is just a matter of time before he surfaces. Still think he is watching the house and had something to do with Seth's collar being in the front yard and that is what Seth was barking at. Love your story. Thanks for updating and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. Becasue it is a Thursday post, I have a teaser for you...lml
“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.
“I turned it off”
“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.
“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.
“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Well I have to say that Bella deserved it. Even though she did a wonderful thing by helping Sally, she had everyone very worried. She should have known better also about turning off her phone. I think Edward punished her just right and wasn't too harsh. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I think he did the right thing too...Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml
Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”
“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.
“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”
“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Well I feel sorry for Edward and know he did the right thing, but the part about the car seat is just wrong. It was essential that Bella get Sally and the children away asap and this was a matter of life and death. You don't have time to worry about car seats in this case. Edward needs to chill about this part. But as far as the other things she did wrong I definitely agree with him. Love your updates and realy appreciate that you don't take too long with them. Can't wait for more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
The car seats was a legal issue that he brought up, and a legitimate question, although you are the only one who brought up that point ...Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml
Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”
“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.
“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”
“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Well hand signals I use on my dog, but I think it goes well with Edward and Bella. That way he doesn't have to say anything and Bella is pretty sure what he wants her to do. Hopefully, her punishment will be over soon and she will be able to have her turn.
Author's Response:
Hand signals are basic and will come in handy often as you will see in later chapters...lml
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
I loved the dancing part, but now she has to ask his permission to use the bathroom. Now that is too much. Oh Edward you have lost it.
Author's Response:
Fear not, he has his reasons...and he loves her, don't forget that. So he wants what's best for her ...ok enough said ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml
While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.
“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.
“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”
“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”
I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.
“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.
“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Rose's story was really sad, but does happen. This was a funny chapter. Hopefully Bella will come totally clean about her past with Edward. I didn't think for a minute that Edward would be upset about the banana. After all Bella is just trying to help Alice to make sure she gets all of her protein. Now after reading this chapter I have to go and get mine.
Author's Response:
Yummy....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml
The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.
“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on.
Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”
She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”
Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”
Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Great chapter. Thanks for the info.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading ...glad you liked it ..lml
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Oh my such torture Bella is going through. Hope the reward will be worth it (which I am pretty sure it will be). Looking forward to the party.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you...lml
When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.
“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.
“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her
“You do. Are you hungry?”
“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”
“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”
“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled.
“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear
“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”
“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
The dance floor orgasm was the best. I will have to remember that one. Loved him singing to her (that will get you every time). Oh poor Lauren and Jessica. Not.
Author's Response:
i know I want some of those dance lessons...lol
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I knew that sound had something to do with James and in reality I think Edward should have known. I shouldn't have read this chapter at work though. Can't wait for more. Thanks.
Author's Response:
lol ... don't get fired ..lol ....Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml
After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.
Fucking great…
She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.
“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.
“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.
“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Great chapter. Loved the way Bella came back on Tania. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Tanya is a bitch and a half and Bella has not heard the last from her...lml
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Well maybe they played a game of cards for those 10 minutes. Hmmmm. Oh the web you are weaving is just too much. We don't know if it is the ex or if it someone from the club. I tend to go with the ex, but you always seem to surprise us. Love it. Happy Thanksgiving to you for making ours so enjoyable. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Yes .. a game of go fish...he was trying to sink his hook ...lol ...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml
We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.
“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.
“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed
“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”
“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.
“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”
What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?
“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Well I am so glad that Bella finally told Edward about her rape. Edward has come a long way with his anger issues. I have a feeling that we haven't seen the last of James. Hmmmm
Author's Response:
I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of a lot of things...lml
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Great chapter. I like your advice about the wine and family. I think I will take you up with that along with a shot of tequilla. Happy Thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
I'm a jaegermeister kind of girl, straight from the freezer....
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I am happy you had a nice holiday and your update made it even nicer for me. Love the story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Well I think the punishment Edward gave Bella for her 2 unauthorized orgasims was really fun. Edward is coming around with the money thing and is being very caring. Love it.
Author's Response:
He's getting there ..lol ....thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml
A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.
The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.
A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”
I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”
“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Oh Bella is such a tease. I love it. Hmmm, I am wondering who is really skimming from the Club.
Author's Response:
She got him back for all the teaseing he did to her ...lol
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
I thought Edward handled it fairly and intelligently. Bella deserved this punishment. Loved the way he ignored her for a while making her squirm.
Author's Response:
Some times it takes more then a talking to in oder to make someone understand what yu are trying to say...thanks for reading ..louise
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Well I guess I shouldn't have read this chapter at work, but I did. Too turned on now! I loved it, but read it again when I get home. Have fun baking and as always can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
lol...is your co-worker worth jumping?..lol ... ok sorry...lol .. that was uncalled for...lol ..but you made me laugh...stop reading at work..lol...your boss will think you have a thing for him, because of the panting ...lol...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...
Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.
“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.
“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish
“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”
“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment
“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Oh poor Bella! Someday she will listen. I think she might have trouble sitting at poolside, maybe the whirlpool will be best for her.
Author's Response:
She was naughty...
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I hope you have a wonderful holiday and I understand all of the festivities you will have to attend. I am sure that I speak for everyone when I say that we all appreciate you taking the time to send us updates. Thank you and I loved the chapter. Now I have to go and try and find one of those clips. Hmmmmmm.
Author's Response:
Do you want a link?...there are cheap ones, and then there are better ones...
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
The pinky mouse story was disgusting. Because of the alarm now poor Bella will have to wait even longer for any release with that contraption on. I think it was mean of Edward to make Bella eat the pate. I love the way you write Emmett. Happy holidays.
Author's Response:
I think it's hot, him making her eat something she doesn't like...lol ....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Well there it is again, a cliffy. It seems to me that Bella is having a hell of a nightmare again and that is Edward just trying to take her hand. Hopefully, they will be leaving Forks with some better memories then she is going there with.
Author's Response:
glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.
“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.
“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”
Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”
She shrugged “Someone had too”
I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.
The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
OMG, I don't understand the dance lessons, I thought it was some kind of code for having sex. I think Heather and either James or the slime who wants to train Bella are in this together. Hmmm. Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
It is a code for having sex ....lol....
Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.
“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.
“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.
“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”
“My Officer Hawk?”
He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.
“I could have Charlie do it.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Oh what a great b-day present you gave me (your update). I don't even remember who was at Edward's home at the time to see him use the code. The only one I can think of is Aro. Oh another cliffy. Hmmmm.
Author's Response:
happy Birthday !!!! ....thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
I still can't believe that people would complain about Edward being the dominant that he is. After all, it isn't as if your story took a drastic turn. If they don't like it then they shouldn't keep reading it. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY and found the peen bit a little surprising, but find that it goes along with the type of dominant Edward is and their relationship. I don't think I quite believe Irena, but it is possible. I still think she is evil. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Edward is a stickerler for his rules and he expects total obedience.. if he allows slip ups to occur without bringing them to her attention, her submission will become lazy,,,he will be frustrated and she will loose respect for him, he never wants her to doubt who is in charge,,,although you will find as she gets more confident she will challenge him, but that is only natural ...that should be a fun night ...lol....
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml
Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”
I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”
His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”
“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face.
“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”
“Yes Sir”
“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.
“Tyler, how is the night going?”
“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”
Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”
Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Oh what a great chapter. I loved the game that they won, but really wished that Bella would have had the opportunity to slap Jess and Caius while she was at it. I find both Caius and Mike quite unnerving and think that they are dangerous to Bella. I think they both want her. I was realy happy that Edward wasn't angry with Bella because she was very inventive with her talking to Jess through Rose. Loved it and will be turning your story to my girlfriend who is just getting onto this site. Love it, love it, love it.
Author's Response:
What is your friend name???....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
Oh this was good. Just love Dougie.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
Love the story. It seems that all hell is ready to be unleashed. Can't wait.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
OH I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY! I had a feeling that Edward felt there was someting between Aro and Bella, but was surprised when everyone else thought the same. But after thinking about it, it makes sense. Love the banter and playing around between Bella and Edward. They are so much fun.
Author's Response:
I think human nature makes us suspicious, but actually can you blame Jane? if it was your husband what would you think ((remember this is before Aro changed the way Bella contacted him )) all Jane knew was that their relationship started with e-mails, then phone call and then they were meeting in person...hmmm....I know alot of people who are no longer married becasue that stuff happened....And B&E need ro have fun and they should have lots of soe good sexy fun in Victoria ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.
“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting.
“W..Why? You said I could keep it”
Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”
“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.
“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”
Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”
My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”
“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Oh my! Well first of all I love the statement I must love you if I am holding a bag of dog doo doo. I can't believe that Edward brought home a leash and collar. Oh nooooo. This ought to be good and really cannot wait to read more. You are the best.
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
I love the way Edward and Bella are being so open with one another, and the realization that Edward had of what kind of ring would be perfect for Bella. Hopefully, there will not be any bad times when they reach her hometown. Love the chapter.
Author's Response:
Forks should be an interesting weekend. I sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for leaving a review this week ...lml
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Your ending to this chapter was absolutely PRICELESS. What a great first impression. Love your story.
Author's Response:
lol...thank you, I'm glad you liked it ...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
What a great chapter. I can't believe that Edward kept his cool with meeting James. I would have punched his lights out if he would have said those words to me. Can't wait for more. Thanks.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Great chapter. Still can't believe that Edward was able to keep his cool as well as he did. Love the way he is giving her better memories with the places she has grown up with.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
This was a very funny chapter. When they went to the bar I knew what Bella's problem was and that she was afraid to see James there. WAY TO GO BELLA!!!
Author's Response:
She didn't want to cause any trouble and she was going to a place where she knew it was possible that James would show up
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Hmmm. I am wondering if by chance James is paying someone else (i.e. a mistress or some other child support). Interesting and can't wait to find out what he has been up to. No panites, huh, wonder what Edward is up to. Hee, hee.
Author's Response:
I'm sure that Edward has something wickedly nasty in mind...Thanks for reading and I have a small teaser for you...lml
“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”
Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”
“This one doesn’t know what you mean”
Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”
“She did what your girl said”
“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.
Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”
“What would my girl have her do?”
She answered without thinking “She don’t know”
That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct. “Would you have Claire do something to you?”
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
This was such a funny chapter. I knew that Emmett would think about doing something like that. I had no idea that it was Jessica and Mike, but I am sure that Bella is right. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it...louise
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
THIS WAS HYSTERICAL. Very funny chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks i wanted to show family interaction...
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
This was a very heavy chapter. They are really beginning to understand each other. Wonder what is going on with Rose and this rape character. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading, the new chapter should be up in a day or two...louise
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Oh this was such a cute chapter. Although, I felt sorry for Rose.
I am so jealous that you get to see 8 hours of Twilight movies. I live in MIA and they are only giving us the option of seeing the premier at 8 on the 14th. I was looking forward to a marathon like we did the last 2 years, but they did a change up this year. Have fun it is like going to a party, but better. Thanks for writing such a great story.
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Wow, everything is falling into place. I knew something was fishy about Heather, but didn't think Mike and Jessica were all involved together. Boy, Charlie really is getting an open mind. Better watch out stuborn Bella!
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading...louise
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Happy New Year! Oh this club sounds like there is going to be so much fun, can't wait.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Love the chapter. Bella is really coming into her own. Emmett is so bad.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
This was a great training chapter or Bella. Edward is very sneaky and is really so far ahead of Bella in knowing what to do. Guess she really is in good hands.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Wow. Welll Edward's actions have shown me how a parent should be when you have to punish your child. It is so hard to stand your ground. Very intense chapter.
Date: 22 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
Edward seems so clueless sometime. Loved it.
Author's Response:
LOL ... he is clueless when it comes to female traits...LOL... the poor boy doesn't have a clue ...LOL .....
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. Knew that was what happened wit the car. Hell yes, ground her.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
Oh Edward is going to get so very even with her. That was a good one Bella.
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"Boop! Bella's preggers!" Emmett said. "And guess whose the father?" Rosalie continued. "Edward Cullen!" Alice yelled. How could this day get any worse? Edward Cullen stalked toward us a harsh glare on his face.
Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan absolutely hate eachother. What will happen in this comedy? Can love find a way? What happens when the worst tears everything apart? Love is stronger than hate my friends but can it pull through the worst of life?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52328 Read Count: 15446
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chivalry In Retirement
Oh your story is so good. I cannot get enough. Can't wait for more. Thank you.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Remember Me
Oh my, well he better start remembering soon because he just may lose her to someone in the meantime. Love your story.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Drastic Measures
Oh poor Edward. I really think that Bella was really too hard on him. After all he doesn't remember and she needs to have a little more patience.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Friends
Definitely a hit! I think Bella has been too hard on him and he will remember when he is ready. However, in the meantime I see things getting quite dicey. Hmmmmm.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: A New Beginning
Well it looks as if you are going to leave this story with Bella going away to a different college away from all of the Cullens and having a new boyfriend. Please post what the name of your new story will be so that I follow the sequel. And of course, I am hoping that she still ends up with Edward. SOUNDS GREAT!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: The Resolution
I saw this ending coming, but thank goodness you decided to write a sequel. I think this was the best way to write this story, however, I didn't think amnesia would last that long. It seems as if they just fell out of love with each other. I am very happy that he moved to NY. Can't wait for more.
Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79309
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I love the bantering back and forthe from Bella and Charlie. They are really funny.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Awwww, how sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?
Dark Edward.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like it so far. You started off with a bang. Can't wait for more. Thanks.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
OMG, Edward really is the bad guy here. I think the parents really bought Bella for him as a b-day present after his breakup with his ex-girlfriend. Who would think that Mike was a good guy and Edward the bad. Hmmmm
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Well I am guessing that they had a gang rape like they were trying with Bella. I am wondering if the one guy who said for them to stop it with Bella because she didn't want that will ever come forward.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
OMG, I have no idea how this is going to pan out. I live 5 minutes from the U of M and only wish if this was a real story and involved a good Edward I would love to go and see him, but this is not the case. Still wondering if that guy is going to come forward. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I think Edward has some very serious mental problems. Bella should forgive him, not forget it, but forgive him. He is a very sick individual.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Your story just keeps getting more intense by each chapter. At least Bella has a real perspective on things. The parents are definitely to blame, but she does need to get away. This story is really different and I love it.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I don't think the music influences Edward because you listen to the music you like and Edward apparently has the personality to be able to write these rap songs himself. He only is concerned about himself and is not in the least concerned about Bella's welfare unless it suits him. The trip up to Tennessee showed this in detail. I do not think Bella is going to be able to keep Edward at bay. It is just a matter of time as long as she stays there unless she winds up killing all of them. Oh my, I have no idea where you will be taking this story. This is certainly not the Edward I like seeing though. Hmmmmm. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
There is nothing I can say to Edward's parents leaving them alone for a week. Here he has been acused of kipnapping and/or murdering a woman and they are leaving him alone with Bella. Wow!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I can't believe Bella was stupid enough to take those last pills especially since she realized what happened a few years prior. Hmmmm.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
This is so sick and twisted. I hate this Edward.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I am just wondering if she will indeed get away. Edward must be on his way and know people in town. I really hope she is not found by him. Hmmmm.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I can't believe that she was so stupid to go into town and didn't listen to Michael. Also, she should have told someone in town maybe Matt or that lady what was really going on. Now she is done for.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Well hopefully the Cullens won't be able to do any more damage and maybe now Edward will stay in jail and maybe get the help he really needs.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Oh yea! Matt is a cop and will be with Bella. Hopefully, things are going to turn out okay. The cops should have hidden a tape recorder in Bella's room and then they would have been able to tape Carlisle's threats. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Great chapter. Hopefully the Cullens won't find them.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I am hoping that you story stays on the good side, but I have a feeling that Edward will be coming back one way or the other. Hopefully, I am wrong.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
I think Matt and Bella make a great couple (I like him better than Mike). Hmmm, that means that Bella may have to testify if Edward goes on trial for murder, but I didn't think they ever found her body.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Way to go Bella, this is the right thing to do. I still like Matt with Bella.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Just when you have us thinking that everything would be cut and dry you throw this chapter on us. Wow. I have no idea what you are going to do now. I want her happily ever after with Matt. Oh well. Guess that is a long time coming. After this story you just want to hate anyone having a lot of money.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I am glad that they had to change their identities. It was getting a little awkward when Bella was jealous during that rafting trip. Oh I hope Bella winds up with Matt. I really like him. I guess that means that he had to quit his rafting job.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I sound like a broken record, but I really like Matt with Bella and only hope that Edward stays far away. Happy Thanksgiving.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Great chapter. I can't believe Carlisle is finally dead. Good ridance. Now if only Bella and Matt will get together that would be a great holiday gift. Can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I'm glad that Bella is finally seeing a counselor. She needs this.