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Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

FINALLY!!! I love the way Bella and Mat are together. Murphy sounds just like the kitten we just rescued. Merry Christmas to you also even though I would love to see another update.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I just read your notes at the end. I am surprised that people have been bugging you to keep her with Edward. I love her being with Matt and can't wait until the fear of the sex thing is gone. And I am saying this even though I am an Edward fanatic, but not this Edward. I have no idea how you are going to end this story, you have kept me on the edge of my seat. Love it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I missed your writing and am so glad that you are back. Sorry to see Edward get out of jail, and hopefully he will not try and skip out on bail (which I am suspecting he will do) especially if that turns out to be Jessica's bone. Hmmmm

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I think Edward plead guilty and acted as if he were sorry because he thought that would be a way to get to Bella's sympathy which apparently worked and that he thought maybe Bella would come back to him to comfort him. Who knows, only you do.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Maybe eventually they will get together. Matt really has a lot of paitence.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Wow, what a great chapter. She is finally healing.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I almost thought I missed part of your story when this chapter started out the way it did. YOU HAVE WRITTEN SUCH AN ENLIGHTENING STORY. It didn't just have love, sex and intrigue, but IT HAD SUCH A DEBTH TO IT. THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL AND VERY INSPIRING. THANK YOU.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Love this chapter.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I just started your story and really like it so far. Interesting agenda.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Laterzzz:P

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

I hope she gives it to him good.

Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

I can't wait until you get to the part where they are actually playing together. Happy New Year and can't wait for the next 2 weeks to end. Thank you.

Author's Response:

You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

I cannot wait for Saturday to come (ha, ha). Hmmmm. I feel as if I am there in person. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Some of the recs you give are very good like Diamond in the Rough, but I have to say I love your story so far the best of them all. Can't wait for them to find out their real identities. Hmmmm very interesting and the heck with football. Pleaseeeeeeeeee this was much more exciting.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Oh you really know how to end your chapters with us wanting MORE. He doesn't even know she never got married and now to find out she's a virgin. Just too much. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

That was well worth the wait. Loved it.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate your kindness and patience!  Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Well this is very exciting, I can't believe that Bella and Angela have been beaten as they have. Maybe somehow or another they will be able to escape. And I really can't believe Esme could have done something likek this. (never mind, of course she could). Love the story.

Author's Response:

Yah Bella got beaten cuz she was trying to get away....she a strong girl though...dont u worry. Esme esme esme.....no words for her

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I just love your story and really hope that it doesn't end any time soon.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't even remember how I came across your story, but I am really thrilled that I did. I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story just gets better and better. Very different and I am just loving it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

Oh it turns out to be such a small world. Hmmmmm. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

These people need to get away from each other. Too much. Edward better learn that women change fragrances. Hmmmm

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

You both may have had shitty weeks, but by God you both are writing a hell of a story. I am speechless. Love it.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

Well at least they know who the other one is now, but I see all hell breaking loose. Now Angie will know who Kitten really is. Oh my.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

What can I say, you have me on the edge of my seat. Edward has to leave Angie and Bella just has to be with Edward and forget about that nerd of a husband.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

Well I can see it now. Angie and Eric should be together and we all know who Bella should be with. Very funny Emmett chapter. Love the alerts to his office.

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

Oh boy, Bella is going to have the guts to leave and then Edward won't know and will keep up the wooing fiasco. This will probably be the only time Angela keeps her mouth shut. Hmmm. Looking great.

Author's Response:

AHhh yes....Angela....Thorn in Bella and Edwards side....xoxox thank u sooo much for reviewing...DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

Wow! I really feel that Bella was really a little harsh on Eric when she was teasing him about his size. I had a boyfriend who unfortunately was like that and I would never have said the things she did to him. In the long run I think Eric must have retaliated. Well this should be really interesting. Bella living under the same roof as Edward, how convenient. Hmmmmm. Cannot possibly wait another day for another update, but I guess I will have to. Happy Thanksgiving.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing....Bella could have been a little nicer. Would I have said it prob not....but Bella outspoken and at that moment she had enough...sorry if u hated that. Eric did retaliate but he aint as nice as we have written him so far.... :) Ari's chap is written so it wont be a long wait....xoxoox thanks for reading DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

Oh you were true to your word with an update. I loved it and can't wait for more. This ought to be very interesting.

Author's Response:

Very interesting indeed :) We're so glad you like it! DLIR is up next with her awesome chapter! Thank you for your review sweetie. We greatly appreciate your support!

 

 

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

Great chapter. Can't believe they have the nerve to try & get together in Angela and Edward's home. Too much. They better watch themselves, otherwise they will get caught big time. Sorry to hear about your friend's family member. Merry Christmas to you and hopefully I will see an update before the new year. If not Happy New Year!

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing...and Ari will be happy to see ur kind words....her chapter is next so when she finds time and rest to write she will definitely pick up where she left off last....SPARTAN isnt spartan without ARI

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody

Wow, you gave us such a great beginning to the New Year. I expected Angie to run into them, but I didn't expect Edward to open his mouth the way he did. OMG what a chapter. Loved it. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Author's Response:

That's out goal giving everyone a happy way to start the new year LOL

yeah I swear Edward and his mouth/stupid ideas! Will he never learn? I think not! So glad to hear you liked it so much. Makes us sooooo happy to hear! Plus it makes us work harder on getting the next chapter done!

Thanks for your awesome review!

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ALSO!!!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

Great chapter. What a bitch Angela is. Here she has been having this affair with Ben and is bitching at Edward. Still wondering what she was doing til 2:00 AM when she wasn't supposed to come home that night. Maybe Ben gave her the he ho. Happy New Year.

Author's Response:

hahahhahah maybe he did give her the heave ho or maybe she was being a ho with someone else???????????????? haaha.............hope u enjoy part 2

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Well I sure wish my Christmas Eve was a little like theirs. Hmmm. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

*Sighs* Don't we all? *Looks over at DLIR. DLIR nods her head yes*

We are sooo glad you liked it!

Thank you for your review sweetie!

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

I cannot believe that the two of them are not being more discrete. They are going to get caught by Angela and then there will be hell to pay besides worrying about Eric. Hmmm. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

hahahah yahhh.....their in love,,,,and its dark out and the building is empty soooo who could be watching?? lol .....,thanks for reviewing...xoxoxo

 

heres the teaser

 

"Bella?"

 

I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What’s he want?" Jessica whispered to me.

 

"I don’t know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.

 

 He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.

 

Mike, that’s his name.

 

Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I’m Jessica."

 

I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.

 

His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.

 

"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.

 

 He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don’t know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."

 

I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.

 

"An Angela Masen came to me today."

 

My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.

 

"What the fuck did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.

 

"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life.  I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."

 

I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."

 

I shook my head not wanting to hear this.

 

"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

Oh I knew that it was just tooooo good to be true. I had a bad bad feeling about that hotel room and where it came from and I guess it turned out that I was right. Poor Bella and lets just do away with that not-for-any good Ang. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

It seems to me that Jessica is the smartest one in this chapter. At least she is thinking with her head (play with words). Can't wait for more. Love the jokes.

Author's Response:

LOL it does seem that way! She was very smart and thinking fast. We have to make our readers laugh! Glad you like them.

Thank you for your review!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

Well here I was thinking that this was going to be the same kind of story. Guy saves girl and they live happily ever, but as always you are a great writer and changed things up. Sorry that you killed off Carlisle, though. Happy that you killed off Esme, but am thrilled the way your story turned around with Edward being angry with everyone. Love the twist.

Author's Response:

guy saves girl............boring LOL.....had to spice things up ya know. We have a vision of where this story will go and end and unfortunately Carlisle made the choopping block  hahah

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

OMG what a chapter. Well I have a feeling that if Bella and Edward goes to that party they will be making a BIG mistake. I have a feeling that Angela set that up to see if they go together or who Edward will bring. Hmmmm. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

a very good theory....is Ang behind it??? hmmmmm Im not sure...but I KNOW...part 2 is great

 

I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.



I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.



His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.



His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.



My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.



“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.



Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…



I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”



I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club

They are really having a blast. Wish I were there.

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Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

Oh I certainly cannot believe how naive both of them are. Here she leaves a key for Edward with a total stranger. They need to be more careful. There could be a camera setup in their hotel room and probably there is one. Hmmmm

Author's Response:

*Taps chin* Oh cameras oh now that sounds kinda fun. What do ya think DLIR? Should we have a scandalous sex tape out there floatin around of them? Wow that sounds like louds of fun! But yes they are both naive. They just do things without thinkin. Which could cause lots and lots of trouble for them.

Thank you so very much for your review.

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Well you really got me. I know everyone including myself thought it was Angie. This is a very exciting chapter, but Edward should have kept his mouth shut and maybe Ang would have given them hints or at least track her phone, but oh no he had to blow a gasket. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Edward should have but he wasn't thinkin sooo he acted like most men do LOL J/K

Thank you for your review!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

Oh I really do hope that Ari gets better. My prayers are with you. Love the chapter, but how could you leave us hanging like this. Can't wait for more. Thank you.

Author's Response:

SOORRRYY but if we write the next chap as I saw it when I ended this one....its soooooooooo worth it...........I hope u enjoy the rest

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

Well this was a great Easter treat except for the cliffy. I am going to guess that it is Carlisle on the stretcher and that someone shot Esmee because she was getting ready to shoot Edward. But of course, I read too many mystery novels. Can't wait to read what really happens. Saw WFE at Thursday's midnight showing (because I couldn't wait) and I really liked it, but I have to say that I didn't like Reese and Rob together (just no chemistry there) and didn't like the animal abuse (even if it wasn't real). Would see it again, just wish he had a different actress. Rob, Chris and of course Rosie the elephant were GREAT!

Author's Response:

Sorry bout the Cliffy,,,,,,,I just saw WFE again,,lol.....still loved it.........and cried again hahah

 

soooooooooo u like mystery novels hey?? ur pretty close but not 100%

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

GOOD RIDDANCE!!!

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow

Great chapter. I don't blame Edward, but I also feel sorry for Bella. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

You have me crying all over the place. So sad.

Reviewer: Teri Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL.

Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much...xoxoxo heres comes the honeymoon .....