Penname: kittyisme0341 [Real name: Alyse Mayer
Member Since: 09 Jul 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hello! My name is Kitty, and I am the author of one twilight fanfic (I have others in the works, but they're just in the brainstorming phase) entitled "Unexpected Pleasures" 


I am the proud wife of a former US Marine, and the proud mother of 3 beautiful and brilliant children! I have truely been blessed


 


9/17/2011


For those of you not in the know (which should be just about anyone) UP is on temporary hiatus... I AM working on it, just having issues... First, I realized that the intended course of the story had gotten off track and kind of ran away with itself... Weeeell I decided to reign that one in, and get it back to my original thought process... I might go back sooner or later and continue the arc it started to take, but so far, I'm back on track. The story is fully mapped out, and I do have chapters to update, but I want to wait until I can finish it, so I won't be having issues like this again... hopefully I'll be able to start posting again within the month! 


The biggest issue I've run into is that real life, wonderful though it may be, gets to be a handful... my 3 year old had to have surgery, my bestfriend's mom died, my other bestfriend is seriously ill and I keep having to run her in and out of the hospital, and my mom is going through some illness issues as well. Life has been getting in the way with the creative process... But I am writing once again! Please don't give up on me just yet! 


~Kitty


 


<P.S.  I am in need of a beta at the moment. I'm a bit of a grammar and spelling queen, so usually you won't find much in the way of corrections being needed, but I find it's always good to have someone to bounce ideas off of, and someone to polish your work, so to speak. Anyone up to the task, feel free to contact me!  alysemayer@aol.com>


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Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

it was good! Quick and too the point (pun definitely intended!) 

 

I LOVE Em's addition... although I would think Carlisle would have had everyone leave the house, knowing how private Edward is. I'm not saying he would have everyone leave every time, but for Edward's first forray into the sexual realm, it seems a reasonable idea for Carlisle to have. Either that, or I would have had Carlisle tell Edward to go out somewhere else, and he would keep everyone else in the house. 

Any which way, I liked the chapter! 

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

"She agreed, and that night I slept holding my angel as she tossed, turned and fought the demons I couldn’t fight for her."

 

Edward slept? Lol... it seems that in mating with Bella, he's lost some of his vampiric nature and is sleeping now! COOL!! ;)

Sorry, had ta tease... Good chapter. I really know where Bella is. Granted, I never went through all that she did, but I have experienced PTSD, and from the recollections of my husband when I was going through the healing period, it was something similar. Most people write about PTSD, but don't get the reality of it across... You write excellently.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Back to School

YAY!!! Ok, so logically I know that there will more than likely be a bit more drama to the story before it's end, but I really enjoy it! KEEP IT UP!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Every move you make

Holy shit! You really DID make Bella the very epitome of magnet for danger! All sorts of crazies and monsters are attracted to our poor girl! 

BTW, yet another masterful chapter! GREAT WORK

Dragon Stones by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time. 

Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon. 

She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates. 

 DRAGON STONES was the THIRD PLACE WINNER in the

Once Upon a Twilight Contest! 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55360 Read Count: 2688
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Alice

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! I loved reading Eragon, and of course, Twilight, so the combination of the two just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. :) 

 

Speaking of good dragon stories, have you ever read Song in the Silence (well, there's a trilogy tied to that book, but IMO Song in the Silence was the best of the 3) They're written by Elizabeth Kerner. If you haven't, you should check them out! 

Keep up the good work!

Kitty



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, kittyisme0341!

I'm particularly fond of dragons too...I've read Anne McCaffrey's PERN books over and over...

I've never read her work, will have to check it out...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

AHH! Ma'am, you are officially the cliffy queen! I'm on the edge of my seat, anticipating what Edward is going to say to Bella. I mean, I doubt he's gonna be THAT pissed that she essentially toyed with his human life, knowing how his life should have played out. Especially considering that if he was mad, all he would have to do is not go back to her. I'm more wondering if her altering his future, yet maintaining the timeline, does it change all his memories? or does he have memories of both timelines? And if he remembers both timelines, how does he feel about going from remembering never having touched a woman to suddenly remembering giving himself to Bella as her human husband? EH! I SERIOUSLY cannot wait for the next chapter!!! HURRY! 

 

Oh, and I am absolutely in love with your writing. It's so wonderfully descriptive, and you obviously really did your research and did an amazing job at keeping the people in Edward's time true to the times. Love love LOVE it!

~<3~

Kitty

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40825
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Like a virgin

Freaking love it! I have to say your story is by and large one of my faves especially with BDSM. Can't wait to watch Subward and Domella play!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor.  But in this story, things are not always what they seem.  Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot.  Canon and non-canon couples.  Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc.  Various POVs.    

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(Banner above by the amazing Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com)

 

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Categories: King Arthur/Merlin, Twilight, Crossover, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC, King Arthur/Guinevere, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance, Love and Faith, Supernatural
Series: Finished, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155108 Read Count: 21896
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

YAY!!! EDWARD IS BAAACK! Can't wait for Bella to see him!!! All that faith that he still loves her has paid off!! :) 



Author's Response:

I can guarantee that it will be fine.  She will be a little shocked at first, but who wouldn't be?

Here is your preview:

 

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My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

GREEN!!! Brown eyes are cool and all,but if she's gonna have Bella's hair, she needs to have Edward's eyes. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64022
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! By far one of the best stories I have read in a long time. :) Thankyou for breathing life into it!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

SCORE!!! Now the rest of the Cullens need to follow suit.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Hey! Don't knock the fluff! Fluff (real fluff) is good tasting stuff! Can't have s'mores or rice crispy treats w/o fluff! And we all know s'mores and RCT are some of the best stuff on earth! 

I liked the chapter, ftw!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Somehow I think Edward is going to tear James limb from limb... James really didn't think things through, now did he?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

LOVED it! TY for pouring your heart into this fic! It was precious and I absolutely adored it. I could definitely see (in my mind, so to speak) what was going on in your story, almost like it was a movie. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Honestly, you criticize yourself for having such short first few chapters, and while they are short, and maybe not the best, they have good description, and at least you didn't pull the classic, "They did this, and then they did that" sort of jumble. I honestly think you are wonderfully descriptive even with the short chapters. AND, you don't have much in the order of grammatical errors, which to me means a lot. I can't stand when people mix up their homonyms and don't proof read their work. 

 

So, in that order, I'm going to continue reading! 



Author's Response:

WOW, Thank you so much, your feedback means so much to me. Those first few chapters are terrible though especially when I compare them to the chapters I am currently writing. I have learnt so much through this journey and I can't wait until you get to the good chapters hehehehehe.... Thanks a bunch for taking the time to review... (Squeal) I'm excited now to see what you will think in later chapters.... MWAH!!!!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I don't like how you mark each spoken word with italics. It makes it hard to know what is thought and what is spoken. Italics are usually reserved for thoughts, exclamation or to indicate a prior event. Using it for every spoken word confuses me a lot.

 

Otherwise, good story development. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review, and I appreciate your feedback. I have used italics through the whole story because I didn't know that... hehehehehe, I hope that doesn't discourage you from continuing to read, I do point out in the sentance when it is a thought though so hopefully that helps you.... Again thanks a bunch for your review, I do thank you, I have never studied writing so reviews like yours do help me to improve....

MWAH!!!! I look forward to more of your feedback

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Holy shit! I think I ran through like 5 pairs of panties during this chapter! Totally Hawt! And I have to agree with Bella, Dirty Edward is hella sexy! Especially considering she's the only one to ever have seen him. 

one question I have, with Bella's shield, would Tanya have been able to get inside Bella's dreams? With dreams being produced by her mind, I would think that Bella would be shielded in her dreams, unless she drops her sheild, which would allow Edward to monitor her dreams for her, and look for Tanya's influence. 

I know... I'm mind fucking it.  :) 

 

Either way, keep it coming! LOVE it!

~<3~

Kitty



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHA...LMAO!!!! 5 pairs WOW thats funny, glad I could get you all worked up hehehehehe.... Hummmmm yummy Edward soooooo wish he was real!!!! hummmmm funny you should ask that question about Bella's shield, I can promise you she had not dropped it so I think it safe for you to assume you are correct, WELL DONE my lady!!!!! Mind fuck away I love it when people actual stop to think about the possibilities, MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!! Thanks a bunch!!!!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

AWESOME! I love that Bella is protecting Edward from molestation even in her sleep! She is truly a force to be reckoned with! keep it up!!



Author's Response:

YAY SQUEAL!!!!! I'm bouncing up and down on my chair doing a pixie dance hehehehehehe thanks sooooo much for taking the time to push that button and I'm thrilled you think that chap was awesome, I wonder what will happen once Bella wakes up hehehehehe MWAH!!!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

wow! You know I really didn't look at it that way. Good point! 

 

once again, excellent chapter. Well worth the wait! 



Author's Response:

YAY!!! Thanks sooooo much, hopefully Bella can make it through her tranformation and waking up without hurting or killing anyone to get to the blood, hehehehehe, it will be intersting to see what happens. Thanks for waiting and I'm glad you liked it. MWAH!!!!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I thought it was pretty good, although (me being the grammar Nazi that I am,) I was bothered by a few homophones you misused... You wrote in several places that Bella lost her innocents... Should be innocence. And patients for patience. Sorry, I know I'm a bit annoying with the grammar Nazi shtick, but I'm being honest. 

Good chapter otherwise



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch for your review, OMG you are a NaZi!!!!! hehehehehe, point taken but I never said I was a good writter, shit I can't spell at the best of times.... sPeLl ChEcK is my bestest friend hehehehehe... in this case he let me down *pout*

MWAH!!!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Loved the chapter! Piece of advice, you should put a translation in your chapter end for your readers who don't understand French, and aren't computer savvy enough to look up Google translator or Babelfish. 

 

Sweet chapter though! Lol... as much fun as Domsper would be, somehow I envision Jasper and Alice as being switches. I could see Alice decked out in leather, spanking a tied up Jasper with a riding crop, and making him call her mistress. Alice seems the sort to give as good as she gets!



Author's Response:

SQUEAL!!!!! hehehehehehe I'm thrilled you liked that ch, I am not 100% happy with it.... I didn't translate on purpose because Edward is going to make Bella say it again in english so he can be completely sure that she knows what she has just said.... that and I was being a little nasty hehehehehe..... You know you could be right about Alice & Jasper maybe I will work on that switch... hehehehhe... but Jasper is so yumming when he is dominating.... MWAH!!!!

Don't forget to check your email for the link

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

No hunting, no yelling. I understand why you did it, even w/o the next chapter. I certainly have quite a few of my readers howling at me for a cliffie... 

Once again, good chapter! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, MWAH thanks so much for pushing that little button, I'm enjoying the pouting and foot stamping from my reviews it lights up my life and cracks me up so feel free to yell at me anytime hehehehhe... MWAH

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I have to say your story is one of the most intricate and unique fanfics I have read, and I absolutely adore it! Can't WAIT for more!!! Keep it up!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella lives a charmed life, Edward has skeletons in his closet. They are drawn to each other but fight the pull, how could two people so different ever make things work in the real world. Dark themes and Canon Pairings.

 

Thank you to Decode Banners for the wonderful banner.

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58248 Read Count: 12973
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

It's sad that she had a relapse, but honestly, the road to recovery will have moments like that. The plus is that she knows it's wrong and is working on it. And now that Edward is accepting and willing to work with her on her recovery, it should help.

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Monsters

Another great chapter! LOVE IT! Laissez les bon temps rouler! (let the good times roll. Not that  being stalked by proxy by a psycho serial killer is a good time, but I'm sure you catch my meaning! ;))




Author's Response:

I have a feeling you will love chapter 17 even more. Love the saying in French!! I think a French speaking Edward would be incredibly sexy. LOL  Thanks for reading, here is your teaser for chapter 17. EA~

 

I went back downstairs and tried to occupy myself and not think about the fact that Bella was upstairs in my bathroom naked and wet. It wasn't an easy thing to do. Thoughts of her in my tub caused images of the day she had sprayed herself down after she'd washed her car to fill my mind. My head and my heart were telling me it was too soon to jump back into a physical relationship with her, that I had to take things at her pace, but my body was screaming just the opposite. Sleeping next to her every night and feeling her body pressed up against mine was bliss and torture all at the same time. I loved being there with her, having her in my arms all night long, but I was also yearning to touch her and make love to her again.

My thoughts shifted to the conversation we'd had the other day. I'd been sleeping in her room with her ever since the night we came back from her parent's house. After the first few days of me going back and forth between the two rooms to get what I needed, Bella said there was no way she was sleeping without me again so I should just move all of my stuff into her room. I was a little concerned that she was using me as a security blanket of sorts. I tried to not make a big deal about it but in the end I had to know if it was because she wanted me there for me or because of the bad dreams she'd been having, since it was the dreams that instigated my being there in the first place. Once we talked about it she assured me that while it may have started out because of the dreams, she loved having me in bed next to her and wanted me there because she loved me and didn't want to be away from me. Bella also told me that she'd only had one nightmare since we'd been out to the prison and it wasn't as intense as the others. Her explanation came as a relief to me. If she had been keeping me there because of the dreams, I would have stayed. But I would have also suggested that she talk to someone about her dreams, that they may be bothering her more than they should. It appeared that confronting Reynolds and seeing he was indeed still locked up gave her the result she had hoped it would.

Not wanting to be away from her any longer and thinking she'd be done with her bath soon, I made sure the loft was locked up, the alarm was set and then grabbed her bag, taking it upstairs to my room with me. I snickered to myself when it dawned on me that she'd been so excited to get in the tub, she'd forgotten to take her bag with her, meaning she wouldn't have anything to wear with her in the bathroom.

I got undressed and slipped into a pair of gym shorts and a t-shirt. Lounging across my bed I turned on the TV and caught up on all the local news while I waited for Bella to be finished with her bath. I was only slightly disappointed when she emerged from the bathroom, wearing one of my button-down shirts. And I say only slightly because even though I had hoped she'd be in nothing more than a towel, she was damn sexy wearing my clothes.

"Um… I hope you don't mind. It seems in my haste to try out your tub, I forgot my bag downstairs." She had a hint of pink on her cheeks as she pulled her bottom lip in between her teeth while she leaned against the doorway, waiting for my reply.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Time for Miracles

GO EDWARD!!! Seriously, I would have had Erikson's head on a fuckin platter if I were Edward. That SOB put her in the path of a bullet, knowing she looked like Reynold's victims and still sending her in. I know it may have been his best option, but he should have given her the knowledge so she could have protected herself. 

And Charlie needs to understand that Edward isn't superman. He can work his ass off to try to protect Bella, but he can't be in all places at once, and Bella still needed to have some room to feel like she was in control of SOMETHING in her life. 

 

LOVED it, btw



Author's Response:

Charlie and Edward will be ok. They both love Bella imensly so it will all be good. Next chapter we will see how Bella is fairing with Jake. Lots of info coming. Thanks so much for reading.

EA

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 When You're Gone

YAY! I liked it! It wasn't too easy, wasn't overworked or too difficult to imagine. You wrote it well! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

AWESOME!!! The only downer is that the chapter had to end! :) LOVE your story!!! KEEP IT UP



Author's Response:

it has to end ....in order for me to write the next one!  Thanks!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class

just wanted to say I loveloveLOVE your story. The depth of the characters, and their struggles through their situations are great, and unlike some stories, I can actually picture everything you write about in my head, playing out as though it's a movie. You're an excellent writer! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Wow..thanks very much...that was a very nice review.  I appreciate it!  Glad you like the story.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

YAY!!! Good tears are now flowing freely! Beautiful! Love it! All that lovely non-sensical stuff! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

it is sappy and silly...but i was hoping everyone would 'get it'  seems like they have.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

YAY!!! Seriously, that was the perfect proposal! LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  So far everyone seems to like it. 

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your story is well thought out, but you keep swapping narratives... IE, You go from speaking in first person narrative to third person omniscient narrative. Also, you need to break up your paragraphs where different speakers are concerned. It's hard on the reader to distinguish which character is speaking if you have them all mushed into the same paragraph. If you need a beta to weed out simple errors like this, I wouldn't mind helping you out if you like. 

Anyway, I like what you have so far, just needs a bit of refining. Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you..I have realized I have been switching narratives..it's tough not too revert back to third person.LOL I would appreciate your help I have asked a few people to beta but they are too busy. let me know and I will send you the next chap.

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Prelude To Aspen

I seriously love your story! You give the characters such a depth that many other writers don't. LOVE it! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Give And Take

Does that make me a strange one, because I would be one to sit down and have a conversation with him? Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't kick our boy out of bed for the world, but I'm more intrigued by a stimulating mind than a boy who looks good and knows how to make women moan. 

FTW, LOVE your stories



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I could talk to him.. i could be good.  maybe.  Good thing i'll never know! lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

YAY!!! GO EDWARD!!! It's about time he pulled all the stops out and manned up!  Now to get rid of the shrew and whiney bitch... That's Angela and Eric, in that order. ;) Good chapter, btw!



Author's Response:

LOL Oh God Eric is the whiney bitch! I love it LOL yes I'm with you it's about time Edward does what he does best...Well maybe the second thing he does best! We're glad you liked the chapter!

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

boo-yah! God I love me some hostile Edward! I'd love to watch that boy go off, then help him relieve some tension! ;) J/k, but not really. Seriously, Love this chapter!



Author's Response:

hahahahh I love a hot pissed off Edward....RAWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRr.hahahha and Im sure ur very capable of relieving his tension...But I have a feeling Bella will beat u to it. hahahah

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

POWERFUL chapter!!! LOVE IT!

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

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Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Remember....Remember

beautiful! But sad that king dipshit has a hold over Bella again. Just when she thought she was free of him!!! 

I just found your story, and I have to say I love it! 



Author's Response:

and I have to say I love you for finding it and loving it...xoxoxo hope u enjoy the rest 

Rain by Patch0341 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

For former Marine Eric Martin, life was a series of was just a lonely repetition of mundane moments. One rainy day at the bus stop is all it will take to change his life irrevocably.

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Beauty in Rain

By Kittyisme0341

Picture a priceless relic,

All covered in muck and decay.

It's beautiful splendor is hidden

All covered in drab shades of gray.

 

The Rain comes along and caresses it.

And slowly removes a lot of

The dirt that completely covered it.

And brings back the colors of love.

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Kissing in the rain


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14215 Read Count: 187
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2010
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hey babe! I know I tell you this all the time, and even pimp your writing out to any of my friends who are willing to read, but you're an awesome writer, beta, husband and father! You're my rock, and my best friend! Thank you for loving me enough to 'gift' me this story, even if it's no longer the little story you originally wrote for me that Christmas all those years ago! I love you!

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So I came to this story late in the game, but I loved it!!! Good work! 



Author's Response:

Better late than never!! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

bi

When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, in the process realizing everything isn't always as it seems. Canon couples, E&B Eventually, NO Cheating

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152943 Read Count: 29067
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Honestly, I think your story is one of the most well written fanfics I have ever read, and I simply adore it! The characters are real, not two dimensional like some stories I have found, and I love that their reactions are real. By that I mean, it's not a quick fix, everyone's instantly happy. They have real emotions and responses, and while a mistake might be forgiven in the immediate, it's something that isn't forgotten, and winds up coming up again later on.  I LOVE your story, and can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing!!!

Blind Intentions won an Avant Garde Award! I found out on my birthday, which made it so much better considering the day before! So thank you to all that voted!

Chapter 19 is written, and in the process of being edited, added to...etc I can tell you Chapter 20 will absolutely see the return of Esme! Fun times a head!

Thank you for all of your support /w BI, it means the world!!!

Teaser for Ch 19: (un-beta’d)
On Nathan’s first day of kindergarten it was I who cried, not Bella. In fact, I distinctly remember being laughed at for being such a sap, but I couldn’t help it.

“Daddy.” Nathan pulled my hand down indicating that he wanted me to kneel down to his level.

“I’m right her,” I croaked out.

“It’s okay to be okay, it’s just kindergarten,” he laughed at me. His smile was infectious, and I knew I was over reacting, but he was my little boy. He wasn’t suppose to grow up.

“I know, you go have fun, I’ll be fine.” I waved him off with my hand.

“I’ll see you later.” He waved goodbye to me and Bella before marching straight into his classroom and to his seat.

When the classroom door shut I froze...that was it.

So now, on Nathan’s first day back to school, it was no surprise that I had turned back into a sap.

“Dad, are you going to cry again?” Nathan half whines, half laughed.

Love to all,
Kelly (SLM)

 

PS. Thank you so much! Honestly, the best compliment is to be told my story is authentic. I don't like rushing to the HEA, because I want the story to be believeable, and too much has gone wrong for these three for butterflies and rainbows to occur only a few months later!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

YAY EDWARD!!! His rant- epic! I can't wait to see what you have in store for our favorite pair! Keep it up!



Author's Response:



Next, as promised, here is the BPOV for part of Chapter 20. This is from the time Esme leaves until Edward comes to her room!
“Bella?” I heard Edward’s voice, but it sounded distant.

Beautiful

Amazing

Caring

Not a gold-digger

Did he just say all of that? About me? I thought he felt that way...but to stand up to his mom? Did he just...

When I turned my face towards his, I could see the hesitancy behind his eyes as he held his hands up. He did...did he mean this?

I heard myself sob before I recognized the moisture on my cheeks.

I didn’t know what to do, so I ran.

The only room Edward had never invaded was my room. This was my safe haven when I couldn’t handle him anymore.

Over the past nine years, I had seen Edward be a lot of things, but I had never seen him be the man I saw today. When I saw him walk into the room, I expected him to snap at me for hitting his precious mother, but then he didn’t...and then he said...

I started to sob harder. My heart felt like it was ripped to shreds.

I was lying to myself if I didn’t see a family with Edward, but I couldn’t do it. I had never thought I wanted it before, but now that he was here, everyday, I wanted it. I wanted to trust him, but I didn’t know how because memories of her always loomed in my head, but now...now...God, I was so confused.

“Bella?” I heard him before I saw him. I looked up and was captivated by his eyes so I quickly glanced down. I couldn’t let him see his effect on me, not until I knew what it meant.

Could I move past this?

Could we move past this?

I wasn’t sure...but I was willing to try.


Last, is the outtake for Blind Intentions Chapter 21! Sorry it’s un-beta’d!
“So, what is going on with you two?” Emmett asked quietly in the kitchen. I followed the train of his sight to Bella, who was currently sitting under a pile or gifts bags and tissue paper.

“We’re going to try,” I answered. Try as I might I couldn’t help the smile that took over my face.

I heard Emmett talking, but was too busy looking over at Bella to listen. Her head turned and our eyes met. She returned my smile, before looking down and blushing lightly.

Alice hit her knee and she immediately went back to focusing on the thank you notes the women were currently working on.

WOO HOO! If you’ve made it to the end, you’re pretty awesome! Until next week, lots of love!!!!!
Kelly (SLM)

Summary:

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Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Into the Woods

My words to Bella... "YOU GO GIRL!" Seriously, I never understood why in the books, Bella could stand toe to toe with so many mythical creatures, but never tell Edward where he could stick it. I love my husband as fiercely as Bella loved Edward, but I have bitched slapped him and more when he was acting the fool. I might have been hurt, but I made sure to give as good as I got, and through out the stories, Bella was always that sort of person. Who cares if she felt unworthy? That doesn't excuse emotions being toyed with. No one is beneath another that their emotions don't matter. 

LOVE your ballsy Bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and your support. Yes, I too agree that Meyer's Bella could have had a stronger spine! Just remember when reading my version...Bella is still a kid. There will be time for tears and self guessing in later chapters. I believe in HEA's and my story is pretty much angst free (tissue warnings will be posted in chapter notes!).

Glad you are enjoying this story! Jayne

Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this story on Twilight Archives, and liked it. It's a hard one for me to read all in one go, because it's all too real for me and brings back bad memories if I read too much in one go. Nice to see you on TWCS now!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes, this story is also on Twilighted. I wasn't planning on posting here since the story is already so far in, but then I thought, why not? Lol. Yes, it is a very sensitive subject to read and write, but thank you so much for giving it a try. Unfortunately, I write from experience myself, and it took me a while to work up enough courage to actually continue with this once I started and then post it. But I'm glad I did. Thank you very much for the review and lovely rating! 

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184417
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One

Holy Hell!!! I seriously think that was the single hottest lemon I've EVER read!!! WOW! <is fanning herself 

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Confessions

I am thoroughly enjoying your story, and fully intend to finish reading all you have written. That being said, I noticed on more than a few occasions that you have a habit of swapping tenses from one person's POV to another without any indication, then swapping back in the next paragraph... I was wondering, do you have a Beta, and if not, do you want one? I would be more than willing to go through your past chapters and clean it up for you if you'd like. 

 

Kitty



Author's Response:

Oh my!  Thank you for the offer.  I have a wonderful beta, friend actually, who goes over eerything - we must have missed the tenses.  Thanks for telling me, I'll look over the chapters, and thanks for the offer!  It is my first story and I hope you continue to read it!