Reviews by halloweenlover
Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really love this story I can't wait to see how bella act around edward now that they are together and i wonder what will happen next .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really like that Edward is trying to bring her back one small step at a time .I hope Bella recovers soon but love the story

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

loved it

Summary:

Edward is a pornstar. Bella is a fluffer. One shot. Slightly crack, slightly hot, mostly fun. M for immature words and dirty body parts. Handcuff me for being a dirty bird.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5317 Read Count: 1988
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Pleasing Bella.

can't wait to read more loved it

We're Married by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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1st Place Winner!! Til Death Do Us Part O/S Contest Entry:A drunken night lands four friends in Vegas with the purpose of getting married. Best friends getting to share their day with each other, but their spur of the moment nuptials don’t turn out as planned.AU/AH/OOC/ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7101 Read Count: 2055
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

i loved it i really hope that after the contest is over that you will make this into a full story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review! If I do continue this it will probably only be another chapter or two.

Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

loved it

Summary:

Bella goes out for a girl's night out and ends up having a one night stand.

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Thank you to mkystich for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2526 Read Count: 1136
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it please write more this could be such a good story.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

there was so much going on in this chapter i loved it good for her taking that bath i knew she could do it and i can't wait till they are back together



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary:

Bella prepares for the moment she has been waiting years for. An autograph signing of her favorite actor is just the setting to make her fantasies come true. *Lemontastic*

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2551 Read Count: 1181
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 15 May 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was hot loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That was my first smut for smut's sake and I was real nervous about it.

Anonymous Meeting by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

 

For the Under Her Thumb Challenge on FF.

Edward needs a Domme but has trouble truly submitting and has been labeled as trouble.  At the club's anonymous play night he thinks he finds what he needs in a new Domme.

With no information on her how can he find her again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7144 Read Count: 3155
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 19 May 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Meeting

loved it i really really hope you make this into a full story it would be so good

Superhuman by lacedlove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

His love came to her just when she needed him the most...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1080 Read Count: 256
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 27 May 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that could be a relly good full story about them finding each other  loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loved it glad to see a little more in to bella's past



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

That was the best gift ever BD .I was so sure the judge was going for joint custody but now he is in jail LOVED It. I just hope Carlisle will be ok .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it



Author's Response:

Michelle!! You're sneaky. Here I thought you read it!  No matter, glad to have you aboard.  Glad you're enjoying it! bdc

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love him already lol I hope he will be fine and that he dumps Tanya soon he is not happy with her .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it !!!! I really hope Edward's cancer hasn't returned .I can't wait to read the rest .

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions

i can't wait to hear what edward has to say i know what he did was wrong but i still think bella needs to hear him out  loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you hun! Yes, she does need to hear him about but she is stubborn scorned woman right now and isn't listening to anyone but herself.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Music

Iam very happy that Bella got the hell away from both of them she needed to think ,but i love his e-mails and songs he is trying i just don't know if she can ever get over that much hurt loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

i loved it.i m happy that bella let him explain everything to her and she got the answers to her questions i do hope they can work things out i know he was wrong and it will take alot of time but i think when you love someone you can work things out

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Changing Tides

i loved his pov and iam glad they are going to try to be together

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Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i loved it that was the perfect end to this story iam so happy they are together

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Dance

ok that was so sad i loved the other end better i hate to think of them not together and him dead

Summary:

 

 

Geeky Edward Cullen has been pining over the girl of his dreams for two years. Desperate to win her over he starts a band with his friends, hoping to play his way into her heart. Will his plan work, or will he see what has been right in front of his eyes the whole time?

 

Written for the FicAwesome Gift Exchange for MyEdiction.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8377 Read Count: 1873
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

He needs bella not rose i hope he will finf that out before he loses her for good



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella has lost both of her parents. She befriends Alice at college who demands she accompany her to Forks for Thanksgiving. Good times aplenty on Thanksgiving Eve. M for Mature content-language and lemons. ExB, OOC, AH

Written for the Ficawesome Gift Exchange!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6723 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Holiday Encounter

Please please make this a full story this was so great i would love to see where you could take this   loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!! If I do continue it-it will probably only be another chapter or two, but I'm not positive yet!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420873
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love Game

I loved it such a great first chapter can't wait to read more

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Run this town

that was so funny poor edward bad first day first late and then mike but was looking up when he saw bella

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: SSDD

loved it alice is so funny and cuts to the truth

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Don't feed the bears

loved it em is so funny poor edward

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: eXfactor

loved it

Summary:

 

This is a one shot story for Bella and Edward when they return from Italy, smut

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2194 Read Count: 1035
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bliss

loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34251
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Moving on

This looks great.I love Alice I need what ever she is on lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: She Works Hard for the Money

Oh I looks like they might have a past??? loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Interview

Loved it great story so far Iam hooked =))) .Edward is so cute and shy and so is Bella they are perfect for each other .I wonder if Victoria was naked girl eww .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Another Place to Fall

Oh poor Bella I wonder what happened to her in her past .I hope Edward let Bella op[en up to him at her own time and not rush her .He seems like such a great guy I know he would never hurt her or push her .Bella just needs to see that she is wonderful and not doubt herself

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Breathless

That was a perfect first date LovedIt!!! I wounder if her accident happened in forks??I am so happy Edward told her about his crush on her it was so sweet .



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Hopefully you've continued reading & know all about the accident.  thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Beautiful Disaster

Oh shit Edward what have you done now?LOL I just hope he can talk to Bella and tell her how he really feels and was just put on the spot .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Be Gentle to Me

I don't think she forgave him too fast .I bet her secrect about her accident has to do with why she didn't tell him about the benefit but they will talk it out

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: What an Honor

I loved it .I cried at the rainbow conn. song .They both are so haunted by the past and for Edward Victoria stalking him eww.I am just glad they can both lean on one another

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Heal Over

My heart breaks for Bella .I feel so bad for her pain she had to live with but she need to see that she didn't kill Charlie he saved her because he loved her .And for Edward I feel so scared for him and for what crazy Victoria did to him .I really love this story

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Tit for Tat

Oh shit I wonder what's wrong now ? I really have to say you are a very strong writer and I love all the thoughts and feelings that you bring out in this story .I can feel how raw Bella feels and how much they both really care for each other .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: And so it goes...

Oh crap!!!ust what they need more stalker drama lol .I have to say Alice hit it dead on about them .I love Alice she is the best.I know it will be hard on them to be a part but they can make it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Lonestar

Bella has every right to be mad at him for not telling her everything that has to do with Victoria .I know it is hard for Edward and that he is not trying to lie to her or keep her in the dark but it is hard for him to talk about it but they will i know they love each other.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Time after Time

I loved it I know they can fix the rift between them .I loved the Bobby long ref.I love him and have seen him live a few times.Oh crap another pic of them together oh well life in the fast lane lol.Iam so happy Bella got her new job she will be great

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Save Me

Poor Edward he shouldn't feel bad or dirty Victoria is in the wrong not him.I think Bella is right when she said they were fated to be together to help heal and love each other

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Many the Miles

That shower he had was so hot lol i love him .I just hope Bella will be safe now that the news has outted them with her new job putting her in the spotlight .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Stop This Train

Damn first asshole Jacob now Victoria poor Bella she can't catch a  break lol i really love this story it just has me on the edge of my seat wanting more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Burn it Down

OH MY GOD!! I knew James and Garrett had something to do with Victoria .I just hope Edward or Emmett gets to her in time

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Hold On

Iam so glad she is alive and the rest can be delt with later I am happy hber mother came and is going to try harder to be in her life



Author's Response:

WOW - just WOW.  Thanks so much for all of your reviews.  You're actually reviewing faster than I can reply.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story & now that it's complete I hope it's all that you thought it would be.  Thanks again for each and every review.  They made my morning!!   Thanks again.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: At Last

So sad it over but That was so sweet and I really have loved every min. of this story

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue #1

I loved it Iam so happy for them .This was a great story.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'

Oh My God that was so sad I cried so hard but a good cry.I am so sad they lost Bella but he has Kate to rember her by .I am a sucker for aHEA so i will just think of the other one as the ending lol but I did like this as well



Author's Response:

THe original Epilogue was where the story was meant to end, but then this little plot bunny was dancing in my head and wouldn't be silenced until I had written it.  Sorry to have made you cry.  Glad you liked it even though it wasn't a HEA - but again, this wasn't in the original outline of the story.  It just somewhere my brain went & I let it carry me.

Thanks so much for every single review you left.  I think you're the only person who has reviewed to each & every chapter... so as my gift to you.   If you have an outtake you'd like to see written, please PM me and I'll see what I can do!!  There's a little piece of me that's having a hard time letting go of these crazy kids.  Put me on author alert in case I post other outtakes.  Thanks again! 

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144835
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it

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Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loved it



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so sweet loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

can't wait to read more to see how this all happened to them

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Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh my god that sucks poor edward and the rest i hope they find a way out



Author's Response:

Oh, gosh, me too!!!  :)

Coffee cups?  How'd I get coffee cups on my story?  I've always wondered about those... it's gotta be a good thing!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

now iam on the edge of my seat to see what happens next

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29923
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was really good you killed me with the mbskd for jasper that was so funny . and talk about hot wall action loved it can't wait till the next update

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

oh crap iam happy edward will be in the story soon but i feel for bella she loves jack so much and will be afraid they will take him away from her



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

oh my god now iam on pins and needles waiting for the next update i feel for them all what a shock to the family after all this time just to have them there loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

i loved it iam glad edward talked to bella about how he was feeling and what he went through my heart broke for him i hope he and bella can work something out and not fight for jack's sake



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I voted for this story it's very good i hope you win i love that alice is with them now she can start her alice match making way's to help these two see what in front of their faces lol i hope jacob stays away from bella and jack



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

that was so good i can't wait till they have their date i love this story so much you have me so in love with this the way you write i just feel that you have a very special talent and iam so glad that you wrote this wonderful and very special story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

i bet james and victoria were in it together this whole time evil .once again another great chapter i just hope edward wants to go with them to forks when their time to leave comes .



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

poor bella i hope that the move does help her can't wait to read more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

loved it short but sweet

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

i guess that must be jacob in the woods



Author's Response:

Hello New Reader,  Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review, I try and post every few days so once you get caught up to the current Ch you wont have long to wait for the next

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

i am glad she has charlie he will help her

Summary:

Runner Up for the Black Sheep Fiction FB Group Scenes on the Beach Contest. Love blossoms and friendships form through paintings on the beach. Follow a reluctant Edward on his journey of awakening and realization. AH/AU - ExB - Rated M for language & lemon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7276 Read Count: 191
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Sea of Realms

that was really good loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! I'm glad you liked it!! :)

Going Home by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

After a long shift in the ER, Edward goes home to Bella and Jasper. AH and NC-17 for language and lemons:) One-shot, for now at least.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6140 Read Count: 4452
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved please please make this a full story this looks really good and very hot



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This looks good can't wait to read more and it's alice i think

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

hmm alice loves bella hmm sounds good

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Broken

i feel so bad for her iam glad alice is there for her

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

i loved it i wonder where edward is and what the rest of the cullens will do knowing alice went to see bella

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge-My Mistress

You are such a awesome writer! I can't wait to read more and see where you take this very hot story and to find out more about why she wot let him touch her lokks very good

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

This looks so good can't wait to read it .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

I loved it him getting his dick pierced was the best ever and mistress cock tease is the best name ever for Bella lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

that was so hot.I bet he now wishes he kept his mouth closed lol love this story

Summary:

O/S Wealthy Bella has feelings for her personal massage therapist, Edward Cullen. She doesn't know how he feels for her until one day he shows her how he feels,breaking the ethic code of therapist/client relationship. Rated M.

Thanks to JMCullen09 for the graphic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6366 Read Count: 2275
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was so hot i can't wait to read more

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Exclusively Edward's POV

loved it i vote for it can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

I have to say i loved both povs but edwards was my fav i can't wait to read more  i think his was stronger  this so needs to be a full story



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254898
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i loved it that was really good iam glad she is getting along so well with everyone and edward he is so hot can't wait to read more

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I have read this before but i just felt like i skimed it so iam rereading it and iam glad i have i love it and now i am hooked all over again



Author's Response:

I'm glad your re-reading it...let me know what you think along the way...lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

can't wait to find out more about bella's past and see where this goes

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really do like this story it has me hooked.I am so glad you are doing both pov's it really helps to understand them better and see into there thoughts .I feel so bad for bella's past with james i hope that with time and edward she will grow to belive in herself more great job loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks...I like stories from both POV's it gives the other side and doesn't leave me wonder "what the hell are they thinking"...because yes it drives me nuts when I don't know...lol Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

loved it i thought that was a great collaring it was sweet and i liked it very much /and who doesn't want more lemons lol can't wait to see them at the club



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you liked it...and I'll take a lemon anytime...lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I really feel for bella james needs to be killed asap for all the hurt he put her through i just hope she belives that edward does love her and nothing in her past will change his love or feelings for her .I know it will take more time after being abused like she was to let her understand and belive him .i love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks..I'm glad you like it, and yes you are right Bella needs lots of reassurance...lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I don't he was wrong and i think bella knows that as well .loved it .side note it say completed please tell me that is not so i would pull my hair out i need more .



Author's Response:

I don't know how the completed got up there, but it's fixed, your hair is safe ...lol....Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

loved it



Author's Response:

Thak you...lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I could never be disappointed by what you write i love this story.Iam glad they had their talk and went over everything together i think it helped bella a lot.I know rose has been through hell and i am glad that she and bella can talk to each other.



Author's Response:

thank you..lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think aro is right and so is em he needs to talk to her and make her understand him and her better .i loved it



Author's Response:

Edward is learning as he goes ..lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved it .Iam happy that Bella is starting to open herself up to the feelings that she has for him and i just hope that he never breaks her trust



Author's Response:

this relationship stuff is kind of new to each of them...thanks for reading ..lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved it evil man lol but i get the whole build up thing .I loved that jake beat up james i just hope he stays gone but i think that was him in the car that almost hit bella



Author's Response:

hmmm...that;s a therory ....

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I can't belive the hell james has put bella through my heart breaks for her and all she has been through .I am glad she has her family and loved ones to help her and now edward as well to love her and help her see her true self



Author's Response:

That is what Edward is hoping for too...

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved it i can't belive leah saying she was just his fuck buddy .edward cares and  is falling in love with bella . iam so glad they talked at diner and that they opened up to one another some more



Author's Response:

Sisters can be cruel and they feel entitled to do it ....thanks for reading ...lml

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

loved it  i would never have lasted after the second stop lol poor bella not lol i do feel sad that she got in trouble but they will work it out she is still so new it will take her some time .and the van that is just creepy i know its james i just hope edward stays close



Author's Response:

He will, my Edward never lies and always keeps his promises ....Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”