Reviews by lmw
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I foudn this story a few days ago and I love it.  it is very orginal.  I am looking foward to reading what happens next!

-Lisa



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, glad you are liking so far.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184410
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Epilogue

I loved this story!!  I'm sad to see them go.  Looking forward to your next one!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - A Little Poison in the Pot

So I snuck over a few days from Twilighted and have been reading the chapters posted here.  I love, love love this story and can not wait to see what is next.  Poor Bella and Edward.   I can't wait to see what Bella does next!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Antidote

Great chapter, I'm glad tanya could give Bella a little more confidence during thier, umm...heart to heart?

Bella has grown so much since the begining of the story.  Can't wait for th enext one!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Rolling Boil

Poor Bella living in kind of constant fear.  I love the way she and Edward are so googley eyed over each other.  They love each other!  BTW- I'm sure Edward and Jasper were looking at vases at Tiffany's....yah, vases.

On a side note, I actually made the soup mentioned and it was really good.  I made it a second time and put chicken in it and it was very good.

Love the story, can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises

Oh no....Jared...what have you done? Is there someone else working with Renee? I don't like this new development with him!

I love Edward and Bella.  I can't wait to find out when and how he proposes.

Also, I'm feeling a little nervous with this wholel dinner thing with Aro.

Great cahpter...can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place

Renee is crazy...more so than her usual.  Poor Billy was fooled too.  I hope that Edward and Carlisle make it in time and I hope Renee doens't try to harm them.

Excellent chapter, left me on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase

great chapter, I can't wait to read more!! 

Summary:

 

 

 

Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.

When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

OMG! First of al, i just found your story yesterday and I have been reading it.  I think you might have written my favorite version of Bella.  She's smart, sassy, emotional, forgiving and honest.  I really like how you have written her.

Now, OMG! No, Jane.  I was so excited for her to get a family that loved her and wanted what was best for her.  This is so sad. I wonder how this will play into Bella.  The poor woman has been through so much.

I hope you update soon.

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Poor Bella and poor Jane.  i am hoping she is still alive and it was a mix up on the corner's part.  I hope she isn't gone.  All she ever wanted were people to love her and she finally found them.  Fingers crossed Jane isn't gone.

Great chapter.  I loved the ? POV. So much detail.  Can't wiat to see what comes next.

Summary:

This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26605
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hoes in Different Area Codes

I like this story...it's whitty and funny.  Can't wait for an update!

Hero by fallanydeeper Rated: M [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

Summary: Edward and Bella, a newly married couple, living in a small town in the South East of England, have recently moved into their first home together, quickly becoming friends with their neighbour, Esme Cullen, a young woman working multiple jobs to care for her two children.

 

Bella and Edward help out as often as they can, taking the children off of Esme's hands so that she can go out to work and doesn't have to pay for a sitter regularly but one night, everything changes for the young couple, the unfortunate neighbour and the poor children.

 

Tragedy brings people together in the worst possible ways.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6995 Read Count: 810
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 02 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a sad story, but kind of expected when I read the title of the story and then read about the fire!  I knew something bad was going to happen to Edward.  Good little story though!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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To their families, Edward Masen, and Bella Volturi hate each other. Their secret relationship isn't the only thing they are hiding.

 

*Will be part of a Multi-Shot Series*

 

Rated for explicit Lemons and Violence

 

Banner by the lovely ViiolentDelight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10234 Read Count: 27918
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Behind Closed Doors

I thought it was going to be just a lemon.  I am kind of wondering if thet are CIA or burglers or something!

Wilted Carnation by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

The unthinkable happened while Edward was away & the Bella he finds is not the one he left behind. What can he do to fix the best friend he's loved for as long as he can remember when she won't let him in. Originally written for Fandom Fights Mental Illness. Fisrt banner is mine, 2nd is by Rosalynn and the gif is from Tkegl. Thank you ladies. 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28740 Read Count: 9507
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2011 Updated: 14 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Things Fall Apart

I hope that Edward talks to his parents about Bella's behavior.  She needs help.  i am really enjoying this story so far!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Under the Microscope

Sweet chapter.  I really like Bell and Edward's relationship.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is the very first Fan Fic I wrote. It was written during the summer of 09. I know that it is riddled with errors and I have no intentions of fixing these errors as this story is being posted to show my growth as a writer.

 

 

This is the story of how the night Janitor falls in love with the CEO.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 111 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116539 Read Count: 82638
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2011 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think this is a cute concept and a good story.  I'm enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I call this my silly story.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Things are getting interesting! can't wait to see what comes next!



Author's Response:

you will see soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I wonder what we will find out about Bella's case.  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

We will find out loads...

 

Hugs

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44791
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start to the story!



Author's Response: Thanks!!

December Air by kdc2239 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

"I'm married," he says, his finger subconsciously running over his wedding ring. "That's my daughter." Sometimes circumstances aren't what they seem. A story of what one man does just to make it through each day.


 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2531 Read Count: 1099
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: December Air

So sad...yet so good!  Excellent job.

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What happens when you are dying and have given up the will to live?  Can one person change your perspective?  Can she heal him?  Can he save her in the process?  A story about love, hope, faith and Christmas miracles.  A/J.  All-human.

 

Jalice

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Holiday
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18430 Read Count: 1303
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2011 Updated: 13 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Resigned

Great start and I can't wait to read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

This is a really cute begining and I can't wait to read more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127485
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I just found your story the other day and I haven't been able to stop reading it.  It is really entertaining with all of the twists and turns.  I actually got a little sad when Jessica died.

Any way, holy heck!  Please update soon!  I want to know what is going on with James and poor Bella!!

PS- As a former theater major and musical lover I love all the musical references and love that Edward and Bella were brought together by a musical!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loved the story from start to finish!  It made me laugh and cry and just smile.  Do you think you'll do a sequel after the epi?

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59280
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hi,

i just found your story the other day and I just finished everything you have posted. I really enjoy this story. I can't wait to read what happens next!

-Lisa

PS- I think you need to compile all of Bella's recipes and make a cookbook! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm working on th next chapter right now between shopping with my mom.

As for the cookbook, I plan to get all the recipes used here and post them in a chapter at the very end. I have most of them already written out, I'm still waiting on two or three that I still need to get.

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661087
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

I really like your story so far...it's really cute and I like the itneraction via email.  They are quirky!

Poor Edward though....tough break with his parents :(

I'm waiting patiently to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 61: Bella

I've been reading this for many chapters and I don't think I've written a review.  i really love this story.  I love the email exchange between them and how they are getting to know each other.  I look forward to reading this after I get home from work.  Thank you!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 62: Edward

I really liked this chapter.  Maybe Bella was still hung over?  Hmm...her actions have got to mean something.

Looking forward to tomorrow.  Happy 4th!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

I don't comment often but I do look forward to reading the two chapters (sometimes more!) after work.  You ladies are doing a great job!

 

The worse pick up line EVER was when I was in a bar.  I was talking to some people and this guy came over to me.  He looked at me like he knew me and then approached me.  He said, "hey there you are."

Me: Sorry, do I know you?

Him: Yes, yes you do-he smiled.

Me: I'm sorry I don't remember you.  Where do I know you from?

Him: He grabbed my hand and sasid, "evey night you are in my dreams."  I rolled my eyes while he tried to covince me to go home with him and we'd have a breakfast picnic in teh park.  Needless to say that NEVER happened!

 

Keep up the good work ladies!

PS-I love how you guys handled the "news" in the past AN.  It was very classy.  Good job :)

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

Such a sweet chapter!!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Ahhh...this was really sweet!!!  I loved it!  Can't wait to read about their weekend :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

Can't wait to read more.  This story is just good and makes me happy.  Keep up the great workk ladies :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 152: Edward

Love the story.  Please don't ever stop writing!  It makes me happy to read a little bit about them.  Love their new begining together! 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

Excellent job writing this story ladies!  I'm so sad the ride with Bella and Sarge is all over.  I look forward to the epi and outtakes.  Great job ladies again!

-Lisa

Summary:

Tragedy breeds adversity.  adversity seeds doubt.  Doubt spawns failure.  Failure owns depression.  but adversity can also empower perseverance.  it can make or break you.  Fail or persevere.

 

With one inevitably comes the other. Good and bad. Ups and downs. Adversity and perseverance. You can take it or you can do something about it. Which will you choose?

 

AH, Slash, Carlisle and Edward are married and face the challenge of their lives.

 

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Unless otherwise stated, all banners I post are made by me.  They might not be the best, but I'm proud of them nonetheless, so if you want to post them somewhere else just tell me so I can see where they are.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243407 Read Count: 8589
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: When Day meets Night

Great long chapter...thank you for that.  I still feel l ike I can't trust Jasper.  There is something that just isn't sitting right with me.  Hope I"m wrong.

Perhaps there is a Carlisle/Edward reunion in the next chapter?  Fingers crossed!!


Can't wait fo ran update!



Author's Response:

It's okay if you don't trust Jasper.  He did something really horrible and it'll take a while for him to completely make up for it, if he ever does.

Just keep an open mind, and I promise you won't regret it.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Stick and Stones

I have to say that one, I normally don't read slash stories and two I usually don't start reading stories that have all ready been established and ar ein the middle.  For whatever reason I stumbled upon yours adn wasn't able to stop reading it.  i found it late yesterday and read it until I fell asleep with my lap top on my lap.  I got up this morning and read a few more chapters and then had to deal with, well, real life and I just finished reading all the chapters and I really  like the story.  There is so much about the story that I enjoy.  I am wishing you a speedy and safe move and am waiting ever so (not so) patiently for the next up date! :)  I can't wait to se what happens next in Edward and Carlisle's life.



Author's Response:

Wow!  If everyone who read my stories gave me this kind of praise . . .  Thank you so much for the kind words, and I'm really glad you're enjoying reading about Edward and Carlisle.  I'll admit I wasn't always a fan of slash, but this idea came to me, and I just had to write it.  Thanks for the wishes, and stay tuned for a new chapter.  It will more than likely be here and on fanfiction until I decide what to do over there. 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Heal Thyself

Loved their reunion!  It was very sweet considering the circumtance.  I can't wait to read Uncle Carlie's POV next!  Also, I totally caught onto What happened to Jasper.  I liked his "visit" with Emmett and Rose.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it!  There's an even better one coming up.  And writing Carlisle's chapter will be interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I have been reading your story a for a while now and I don't think I have left a comment.   All Ihave to say is, wow.  what a difficult story you are writing.  I have never ready anything like this before and I'm curious to see where it goes.  Awesome job writing and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Lisa

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Ahhhhh!!! Youa dn the cliffies!!  This was an excellent chapter.  i want to believe that Edward is going to dumb poop for brains-I mean Tanya and go back with Bella but I guess never say never, right?  This was such a good chapter!  I'm wating patiently for the next!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23- The Date

Welcome back! I've missed this story and was excited to get the notification that you updated. I love how honest they were with each other. Can't wait to read the next chapter:)

lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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"Divorce is like an amputation: you survive it, but there's less of you."  -Margaret Atwood

Bella and Edward Cullen; they were the envy of couples everywhere. Until the Denali sisters came into their lives, that is. Did Edward cheat on Bella? Or is there more to the story than what it seems?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 147580 Read Count: 61721
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Epilogue I

I just found this story yesterday and couldn't stop reading it. I was even reading it on my phone while I was at the store.  I cried reading it the last few chapter.  It was a wonderfully written story.  I can't wait to read the next part.

-Lisa



Author's Response:

Thank you Lisa! I hope you weren't in the store when you cried. That would have been awkward (for others more so than yourself.) I'm glad you thinks so and I can't thank you enough for your lovely review <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really really enjoy this story and can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I don't have any idea of what will happen with Charlie and Bellabut bravo Bella for sticking up for herself.  Love how she is at least thinking about going to the gym.  Also love how she is considering and trying to eat healthier.  I can kind of relate to Bella where as I've recently lost a bunch of weight.  When you are heavy people look at you and treat you like you have a dieses.  I'm not where I want to be size wise but I'm working on it.  I love that we are seeing Bella's self esteem build.

I can not wait to read whay is going to happen next!

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131907
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really like your story.  Thank you for updating frequently!!  I can't wait to read more.

-Lisa

Isabella by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Isabella had to deal with her overbearing mother all her life. What happens when Isabella meets Renee's new mysterious boyfriend? Will he change everything? What will happen to her relationship with her mother?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61364 Read Count: 19806
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I just found your story and it is intersting.  I can't tell if I am really creeped out by Edward or if he is a good guy with some problems.  Whatever it is Carlilse is in on it too.  Also, it's strange that Alice is on so much medication.  I'm intersted in how this will all play out.

Waiting for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! 

Edward definitely has lots of problems. Everybody in the family have secrets that they are keeping.

Chapter 15 is on Fanfiction under the penname Shiloh2010. 

I'm still working on getting the next chapter uploaded here, but it's giving me problems.

Summary:

Written for Fandom For Suicide Awareness. A possible futuretake for my character Wisp. Inspired by LyricalKris, who dared me to write angst at Disneyland! Mostly fluff, a little angst. Bella and Edward go on their first vacation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18096 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2012 Updated: 21 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first I felt a little weird reading Bella/Wisp and Edward as a couple, but at the same time it majes sense.  Who else would be able to  understand her on that level? I also loved seeing her in process of her recovery (because coming from where she has come from would one really ever be "cured" of her past?  She has scars that will be with her for the rest of her life).

i loved getting a peek into their maybe future.  I'm glad she does get her happily ever after :)

 

happy Thankgiving to you too!