Reviews by jylway
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra

I'm loving it!

And I'm so impressed that you can write it in a second language! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. If I am not mistaken, sheviking and CaraNo write in English as well and it is not their first language either as they are from Denmark, so it is not so uncommon. However, I think I'm the only author with a bilingual page on FF :0)

 

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

I absolutely loved it! Had a hard time walking away to get anything done! I can't wait to read your others! Just so you know... I'm bad about reviewing. Sorry!



Author's Response:

Then I guess a lot of people are bad about reviewing :0)

Thanks for taking the time.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389585
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

:) of course I loved it, but what a cliffie!! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I was away when you posted the most recent chapter. I'm so excited to see this again, so I'm starting back from the beginning! Love it!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

Lots of love beacuse I loved it! Just finished rereading from the beginning! I do miss the pics though :( Oh well,  you can't have everything right? Great job! :)



Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

So surprised but impressed by his choice of punishment... and I think I was paying attention... I guess we'll see! Great chapter as always

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Third chapter

DIdn't see that coming! Wow!



Author's Response:

Yeah, me neither :0)

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Infernal rise

I knew it was the dry cleaning bill!

Love it!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

I think it's going to be Alice... 

Can't wait for the next!!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Swinging cocktail

Loved it~ Can't wait for more!

It has to be Edward if she "spat"

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Trapped

Again... Loved it! Can't wait for the next!!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Alcoholic showdown

great as always



Author's Response:

:0)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

I just can't get enough of this story!!!



Author's Response:

:0)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Hangover

wow!



Author's Response:

:0)

Summary:

 

Bella and Alice share the same dance class. What happens when a secret letter is dropped out of her pocket? Rated NC-17 FemSlash Romance/Drama AxB pairing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Femme Slash, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11056 Read Count: 4316
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2012 Updated: 20 Mar 2012
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Secret Letters

loved it

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923125
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

:) wow!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

Thank you for that chapter! It was great!!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

loved it...can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

:) good chapter as always but the angst over Edward and Bella is killing me!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 75

I keep hearing from authors that it's hard to find reviews on this site... so anyway love love love!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow! What a great chapter! I was so excited to see it updated again so quickly! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loved it as always. Especially the dinner and Alice sleeping on Jasper :)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

umm... WOW!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I never know what to say except that I loved it. It certainly explains the teaser you put out. I am so glad you are not giving up on this story!

I am also very curious about the "marking"...

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Ok~ First up... Thank you for continuing this story! I LOVE it and I can't wait to see how you end it! But don't end it too soon!

Secondly~ I can't tell you how honored I am to be in your author notes! Thank you, thank you!

 

And thirdly~ Awesome chapter!!!

Oh and ooh ooh! Great pics!! <3<3<3!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Looking forward to more as always!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

So worth the wait :)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Great chapter! Love Bec, but great job Tori! :):):)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

great chapter!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Great chapter.

Loved your a/n too.

Can't wait for more. Keep writing!

Bec~ Thanks for keeping her going!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Wow! Didn't see any of that coming... ( no pun intended)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Yet another amazing chapter. It made me cry too!! And I will definitely support you by buying a book! Congratulations! You definitely earned it!!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

First of all thanks for the warning...

Another great chapter

And, I love the pics at the end

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

OMG! Great chapter! Don't know if I can wait two weeks!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 70: The Second Elizabeth Part 8

loved it!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

Loved this chapter as well!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

Another great chapter! Love how this all went! I can't wait for Edward to find out that Bella's still pregnant!

I am not worried that this will go on and on... I actually hope it does! 

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

ooh! good chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J

 

 

Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32440
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Reading it yet again!! I loved it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

Again... loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Love everything you write... I will check it out. FYI I'm terrible about reviewing. I never know what to say...

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

I love it! It's "my cup" :)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Ha ha! Nice author's note! 

P.S. I always read your notes...

Summary:

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34749
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Same post as on fb...I can't wait another week!



Author's Response:

:)

TB & True x

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Love your flag at the beginning of the chapter!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I say it all the time... Im bad with reviewing but this story just warms my heart :)

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This just keeps getting better and better

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

I have been waiting to read this because patience is not a virtue I was born with lol. I'm terrible waiting for updates. I LOVE it!

Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So glad you're back! This is an amazing story! And incidentally you updated at the perfect time for my "re-read"

Looking forward to your next post!

Lies by Milk40 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

She loves him madly. He loves her wrongly. 1st place in the "An almost perfect rejection" contest. A story by the very talented French author Lolita-nie-en-bloc. Translation by Milk40.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4055 Read Count: 741
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2013 Updated: 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lies

wow...



Author's Response:

That's exactly what I thought when I first read it...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113794
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: jylway Signed
Date: 02 May 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (part 1)

Hi! I've read this story all the way through your last post on FF on May 1st and I LOVE it! I'm not a fan of drabble, so thanks for the heads up in the beginning :) It did not, however, stop me from reading every update as soon as it came out! It's just too good! I am going thru every chap again here and on FF. I hope you don't mind if I don't give detailed reviews... I'm not good at that, but I know how important they are to writers. Can't wait to see the pics on this site...I like TWCS better than FF anyway. Too many b



Author's Response:

you are soooo funny. This review is awesome!  I hope you do like how it proresses.