Reviews by deecie72
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995735
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this just made my week - RL a bitch w/surgery, etc. and this was a much needed and pleasant surprise.  you continue to amaze me; i just love this story and these characters.  pissed off a little by emo edward, but great chapter.  TY for not leaving us hanging!!!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189019
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

That was awesome!  I laughed soooooo hard!!!

 



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you :)

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104700
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent!  Please keep going.  really enjoying it.

Summary:

 

Heartbroken when Tanya told him she cheated on him with his best friend after he proposed to her, Edward vowed to give up on love and women. Bella Swan, they shy freshman at the Univ of Wash, catches his eye.  He fights to stay away, but can he? Love can heal many wounds if you give it a chance.  Travel with Edward to see if he gives into temptation while dealing with his tainted past.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, dark themes, adult content and future lemons! Enjoy

Stephanie Meyers owns everything Twilight, but I own the plot! This is my first story I hope you all like it!!

There is now a group site for my story on facebook.  If you want to keep with with updates and fellow groupies, feel free to come find me... ;)

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_152421278164462&ap=1

The first few chapters were reviewed by the Project Team Beta, Betas - thank you to them for their assistance.  But I am very proud and excited to have Woodlily and itsange helping me with revisions and future chapters.....THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146797 Read Count: 15151
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2015
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Broken Heart

i really liked this. i genuinely feel edward's pain.  thanks for being realistc - that this kind of hearbreak doesn't disappear overnight. 



Author's Response:

I agree with.  I could totally place myself in his shoes which made it easier to right.  I hope you enjoy the rest of what's to come!

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

i love this edward!  he is so wonderful in every way. i am really enjoying this story.  can't wait to see how hot it gets between edward and bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you're liking it. Let me know what you think after you've read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i just love this story.  the characters are so real.  i so look forward to the updates...hurry please!!

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yay!  This is one of my favorite stories ever and I'm so glad you are updating again! thank you!  I really hope that James gets his .

The Greatest Gift by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen has the plane ride of his life when a mysterious flight companion changes his life in the blink of an eye. Edward will need the help of his wife, Isabella, to right the wrongs of his past before it's too late.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 249172 Read Count: 36371
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

can't wait to see what happens...is CP's future important beause there will be a little edward on the way at some point?  hmmmm...



Author's Response:
Hi again~
 
Well, here we are after another chapter. Our Edward sure is kind of cute when he's being all sweet and loving to Isabella, isn't he? I promised you all a few chapters of light and fluffy, so I hope you enjoyed it. We will see the meeting in the next chapter as well poor, confused Jasper. Emmett is also a big part of the next chapter, too. And then....whoa! Chapters 10 and 11...HUGE turning points! Just saying, I so can't wait to hear what you all think of them.
 
I am going to be posting on Sunday like normal. I have it already ready to go, thanks to Laurel and the rest of Team Angel, so look for it around the regular time. I have to tell you, I'm still so totally blown away by the support you guys keep giving me and my story. Even during this busy time of year you all keep reading and keep leaving the most awesome reviews. There isn't a better gift I could ask for than that! 
 
So, without any further fanfare, here is your next installment of everyone's favorite angel (or angels if you're like me and Gideon is growing on you, too!)
~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~
 

Seth POV~

Once Seth had taken his leave to allow Edward a few moments of privacy to talk with Isabella, he found himself in the company of Gideon once again. Seth's mind was a flurry of activity, furiously allowing scenario after scenario to play in his mind as he tried to decipher what the best course of action would be for Edward to undertake in order to protect CP. It was so important he do so.

Imperative in all matter-of-fact.

"Young Edward seemed in much better spirits this morning," Gideon remarked with a loud chuckle.

Seth let his ice blue eyes twinkled and he laughed heartily at the remark. "Well, yes, I would suppose that rediscovering your passion for your wife would do that to a man, especially for one as beautiful and special as Isabella Marie," the angel said and then let out his usual sigh whenever Isabella's name came up in conversation.

It had been that way for many, many years now. Ever since his kind had taken an interest in Edward Cullen and his family, they had been waiting for the one it would take to break down the barriers Edward had erected around himself. Whoever it would be would have to have an infinite amount of love and patience and that person would have to be someone extraordinary. As soon as Isabella was discovered, they all knew that there was no one better suited for Edward than her.

She was as strong and loyal as they came, and she had barely touched on the surface of what would be asked of her in the coming days and weeks. She had no idea of the things she was about to have to face and though Seth was as confident as any of them in her and her love for Edward, he felt great pain at the amount of hurt she was going to have to endure. When his favorite human hurt, he hurt, it was just the way it was for his kind. Their love knew no bounds, but since it was so all-encompassing, so powerful, angels felt every nuance, every fleeting thought their assignments felt.

Seth had been all over the map, so to speak, since he'd made his presence known to Edward. There were emotions aplenty floating around, and that wasn't an understatement in the least. Between Edward and Isabella, for any lesser being, it would have been too much to handle. For Seth, while it was no walk in the park to be sure, it was going to be worth it in the end.

Gideon chose not to comment any further on the lovely Isabella for there was another person he was curious about today. "Jasper will see young Edward for the first time since he's become the new and improved Edward. Any thoughts on how you perceive their meeting might go?" Gideon asked.

Seth floated around for a moment to allow himself to truly think about the question. Jasper Whitlock was a complex man, not Edward Cullen complex thank goodness, but deep and esoteric. He had a way of looking through layers upon layers of people, situations, legal briefs....whatever the case was, and getting to the heart of the matter. He was able to look past first impressions and truly understand things that were hidden, either purposely or unconsciously.

All traits that came in very handy when one was best friends with someone like Edward, that was for sure.

As Jasper and Edward's friendship developed, it was hoped among Seth and his kind that Jasper would be able to break through some of Edward's very sturdy and well-fortified walls. It wasn't for lack of trying on Jasper's part that Edward proved to be so difficult, but Jasper didn't give up and didn't let Edward's surliness and reticence turn him away. He stayed, day after day, month after month...year after year, just waiting for the time Edward would realize there were so many people that loved and cared about him. That was the reason he'd agreed to step in for Edward and be Jack's godfather. Not that he didn't love the little boy, and of course he cared a great deal about Rose and Emmett, but with Edward was where his loyalty and faith lay.

He knew better than anyone, even Isabella, how much influence William Cullen had had over Edward. He listened to him reinforce his belief that Cullen Publishing was the be all, end all of everything, no matter the cost. It was William Cullen that instilled in Edward that it was up to him to work himself to the detriment of all else, Isabella included. It was William Cullen that did all he could to ensure that the rift between Carlisle and Edward grew into the wide chasm it had become over the years.

Jasper adored and respected Isabella, like everyone else that knew her. He also knew there was no one that could ever be better suited for his mercurial friend than her. Jasper had been friends with Edward during both the demise of his relationship with Sophie, as well as the debacle otherwise known as Anna. Neither woman was able to love and stand beside Edward the way he'd needed, though Sophie had tried. She just wasn't meant for Edward...he had always been meant for Isabella.

Seth looked at Gideon once he'd given the question the consideration it deserved. “I think Jasper has been waiting as long, if not longer, for the new and improved Edward Cullen as anyone. He's been a true friend, though Edward has, like everything else, not taken the time to appreciate all Jasper has done for him through the years. He knows as well as anyone, the influences Edward has had over the years, most of which have been detrimental.”

Do you think Jasper will be able to help Edward with CP?” Gideon asked, for he knew as well as Seth how important it was to Edward's remaining days to get the situation at the office well in hand.

Seth smiled knowingly, his ice blue eyes twinkling with a mischievousness that emphasized just how much he was going to enjoy watching the events unfold up close and personally. “Oh, you can bet he will. I have a feeling our boy is going to be in for some rather eye-opening experiences in the coming days. Poor guy, if I wasn't going to enjoy this so much, I might feel sorry for him,” Seth said and then disappeared to return to Edward.

Gideon couldn't help but laugh loudly at the shenanigans of his most beloved prodigy as he watched Seth and Edward bicker back and forth. It might be an unconventional way to handle an assignment, but Gideon had no doubt Seth knew exactly what he was doing when it came to Edward.

He had to, anything less than success would be a disaster...for more than just Edward.

~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~

Oohh...so much, but yet so little. LOL...but I can't give things away just yet. You will be seeing both Sophie and Anna in a few chapters and Grandpa Cullen, he's a piece of work. No wonder our poor Edward is so confused! Who wouldn't be with him as a role model?

Soooo, I would really love it if you'd send me an email, PM, or message on Twitter and let me know if you've liked these little sneak peeks or not. I have the next few planned out. After 9, we'll get to peek in on Em and Rose, and Charlie and Renee are not far away. For those of you that have followed me from TPWC, you know of my love of detail and character development. The bonus scenes allow me to explore some of the things going on in the background without taking away from our angel and his two humans. So, as long as you like reading them, I'll keep them coming.

 Follow me on Twitter....les_sh_16

Again, I hope you and your families and loved ones have a very Merry Christmas filled with lots of happiness, peace, and love!

See you Sunday...hope Santa brings you everything you asked for and more!

Hugs and Love,

Erin~ (les16)




 

 

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is awesome!  i also love that your grammer and punctuation are all correct and that you are using words that are a little more than dr. suess level.  looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

So glad you decided to give my story a try and that you are enjoying it so far! I know it's been a bit bumpy, but I promise if you stick with me, it'll be worth it in the end. Thanks for the compliment on the grammar and language...I'll take credit for the language, but my awesome beta keeps my comma's in the right spot!

Hope you keep following the story, there is lots more to come! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review! I really love hearing from you! The Greatest Gift has an awesome blog, you should check it out! I post teasers there every Monday and there is some other great information on there as well. Be sure to sign up for TGG email and to be a follower to get updates!

www(.)les16-thegreatestgift(.)blogspot(.)com

Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

les16~

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i love, love, love this story!!! i can't wait to see what happens.  I think we all crave a "wonderful life" moment sometimes, because we all have things we need to fix somehow, somewhere.  WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

HI!

Thanks so very much for taking the time to read and give my story a chance! I know it is very different from most stories so I am thrilled you have enjoyed it so far. I know it's been a bit bumpy, but there are some light, fluffy times ahead...I promise! Try to keep in mind I am a HEA girl through and through and I'm asking you to have faith in me! I hope you understand Edward a bit more now, we'll be getting more of his past shortly. Emmett and Jasper are just around the corner, as is Nonna. I'm so excited to get to some of the others.

In case you haven't heard, The Greatest Gift has the greatest blog ever! It's full of great information and pictures, there is a playlist and all kind of other goodies. I also post teasers there every Monday. Check it out and be sure to sign up for TGG email alerts and to be a follower!

www(.)les16-thegreatestgift(.)blogspot(.)com

I hope to hear from you again. I really love hearing from you!

les16~

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i love this story!  great chapter - spent all day looking forward to its posting.  so much hope for edward...

on another note, how do i get my teasers?  i reveiwed last week but didn't get my outtake on seth...and i've subscribed to your awesome blog, so what am i missing?

can't wait for next week!

 

 



Author's Response:
Hi again~
 
Well, I hope you are feeling a little better about things as we go forward? I thought it was really important to show them reconnect with each other and rediscover the love that has always been there, especially for Edward. And, really, who doesn't like sweet, needy, intense Edward?
 
Next chapter we see the beginning of his day at work and get some information that will be important as we go forward. I do promise light for the next few chapters as Edward and Isabella spend some time just rediscovering each other. Edward has a lot of work to do, hard work, too, and it is coming. I know you are anxious to get to the other characters, and I do assure you...they aren't too far away. Just hang in there with me, okay!?
 
I've had a few comments about wishing the chapters were longer. I know a lot of you are used to the monsters of The Path We Choose (and really, I was INSANE to ever do that...lol...no matter how much I love you all!) but this story has a much different pace and feel to it. I just write and stop where it feels natural. I will tell you Chapters 9 and 10 are much longer than any of the previous ones, so you can look forward to that!
 
I will be posting on my regular days over the holidays...but only if you guys promise to keep reviewing! I have the chapters already written to post so I don't want to make you wait for them. My little gift to you all for being such fabulous supporters of me and my story!
 
Okay, now for your next peek into Seth...and a brief glimpse of Carlisle and Esme.
 
Enjoy~
 
~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~
 
"Seth?" Gideon questioned as he approached.
 
Gideon couldn't help but frown at his most favorite pupil as he watched him. Seth was worried, that much was obvious, but Gideon had been around Seth for a long time now so he knew it was more than that.
 
"Look," Seth said simply.
 
Being angels allowed their kind to observe many things at one time. It was just one of the many benefits of being an otherworldly creature. Of course, it was kind of what they were known for, too.
 
Gideon glanced in the direction Seth indicated and he couldn't help but smile at the scene in front of him. As he watched Edward and Isabella discuss having dinner with Emmett and Rosalie, Gideon flushed with pride at the steps young Edward had already taken. Sure there was so much left to do and in all reality they hadn't even touched on the most difficult things yet, but progress was progress nonetheless.
 
"Seth, you should be..." Gideon began but then his attention was focused on what Seth was looking at.
 
"Good morning, Es," Carlisle Cullen told his wife affectionately as he entered a kitchen in a house only a few miles away from that of Edward and Isabella.
 
It might as well have been on the other side of the country considering the distance between the occupants of the two homes.
 
"Morning, dear," Esme Cullen answered her husband as she placed a mug of coffee on the table in front of him. She kissed his cheek and then walked back to the counter to get his plate of breakfast.
 
Ironically, she'd fixed the same meal as her beloved daughter-in-law.
 
Once she had placed Carlisle's plate on the table and had retrieved her own and a glass of orange juice, they sat in a companionable silence while they ate...as they had done every morning since they'd been married.
 
A few minutes passed before Esme said, "Edward should have gotten home last night. I hope he had a safe flight."
 
Esme, along with the two heavenly observers, watched as Carlisle sighed deeply and then allowed his mouth to form a tight line. It was always the same whenever Edward's name was brought up, and had been for too many years to count. By this time it was an unconscious reaction, but the action spoke louder than words.
 
"Carlisle," Esme said in a resigned voice. She should have known better than to expect a different reaction from him when she mentioned Edward, but he was their son and she loved him. She knew Carlisle did as well. She just wanted things to be different.
 
So much time had passed; so many things had been left unsaid by all of them. Grief, misunderstandings, anger...all had festered and grown, unchecked; until the family was in the disarray it was in now. At this point, blame or who said what first didn't even matter. Esme wanted it fixed, and she wanted it fixed now. Enough was by God enough.
 
"Carlisle William Cullen," Esme said in a sharp, fierce voice causing him to slosh hot coffee onto his hand. "You know, for someone who was treated as an afterthought by his father, you would think you would try to be different with your own children," she said and then stood to carry their dishes to the sink.
 
"I'm having lunch with Emmett today," Carlisle answered lamely.
 
Esme turned her green eyes, the same one's Edward had inherited from her sister, and let them smolder at her obstinate husband. "That is not the son I am referring to, and you damn well know it. If something had happened to Edward on his flight home yesterday, just think how you would feel. I've lived for twenty years with the regret of not reconciling with my sister and there is not a day that goes by that I am not pained by that fact. I'd hate for you to have to live with the same regret, Carlisle."
 
With that, she turned and left the room, leaving Carlisle to ponder what she said. His heart did truly ache for his son and for the distance between the two; he just didn't know how to fix it. He didn't even know where to start.
 
The two unseen observers looked toward each other, both with the same pained expressions on their faces.
 
"So much hurt," Seth said as his heart beat painfully in his chest. While this assignment was one he had wanted, in fact he'd wanted it more than any other; it did not come without its own personal, painful reminders. Seth's life before he began his new one as an angel had many similarities to Edward's. Not exactly of course, but enough that it made it easier for Seth to understand Edward than anyone else.
 
"Yes, but so much forgiveness and love and joy when all is said and done," Gideon said quietly. "You can do this Seth, you must. Not just for Edward, but for all of them."
 
With that he took his leave while Seth continued to watch over the family that had come to mean so much to him.
 
~~~~OOO~~~~OOO~~~~
 
Well? What did you think? Seth has his work cut out for him, that is for sure. I'll continue to give you glimpses of things I'm not showing in the chapters themselves and before too long we'll get to Seth's story, too. So, as long as you all like getting the little peeks, I'll keep writing them. I want the story to focus on Edward and Isabella, but there are things happening in the background that are important, too.
 
Let me know what you thought of this if you want, or let me know if you have any questions. Send me an email or a PM...I promise I'll answer.

If you didn't get the bonus scene for chapter 6, send me an email~ les_sh_16(@)yahoo(.)com
 
Or, find me on twitter...les_sh_16
 
See you Sunday with the next chapter. (Psst...for all you TPWC readers, the next outtake is done, watch your inbox for notification for when it posts!)
 
Hugs and Love,
Erin~ (les16)

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

i have loved this story soooo much!  thank you so much for not killing edward!  and i was right about the baby, yay!!!  wish it didn't have to end...

Red by shalu Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Red

A tale of a Red Riding Hood ... Alice senses a presence in the woods, watching her. She sees red eyes in her dreams, and between the trees. Tonight she ventures out to meet him. O/S for MaleficentKnits birthday. AU


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3815 Read Count: 148
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Dec 2010
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Red

very cool.  really like this. great job!



Author's Response:

thanks so much! :)

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89191
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: Part of the Build-Up

can't wait for the next chapter...but BOO for the end...thanks for the warning tho!  MUAH!

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Putting The Move On

I just finally caught up the whole story - read for nearly 6 hours straight.  LOVE IT!!!  I really do.  the family, the relationshiop between edward and bella - they all seem so real.  Cannot wait for further updates/developments!!



Author's Response:

Hi deecie!

Glad to know you are reading. Sorry I claimed 6 hours of your life with my story. :) Hopefully it was time well (?) spent. :) I guess the important thing is you were enjoying yourself. Thanks for the Storylove! I think I have made these characters feel rather real. I think a lot of readers can find something about each of the characters that feels at least a little familiar because we all have friends that are something like any one of these characters.

Thank you for taking the time to review and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it. Keep in touch, girl!

-bannerday

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You

Love, love, love this story.  Just keeps getting better!  Thank you!!  (and yes. worth every minute of the time it took me to catch up!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Hi deecie!

Thanks for the love, love, love! I'm glad you feel like it just keeps getting better. It's the "recovering Edward factor." He's finally getting to be a young man in love again. Such a different character than he was in the beginning.  ;)(And he's just going to get better. ;) *sigh* *drool* *puddle*

I hope you like chapter 49. Keep in touch and let me know what you think.

Thank you for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: So Near and Yet So Far

I just continue to love and enjoy this story so much.  To see how far Edward has come...the relationship between he and Bella is so real.  Would that men like that truly existed!  Can't wait to see what happens on their "First Night!"

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69: Facing the Future

Absolutely ADORED this story.  one of those that i'm so sad to send end.  you are very talented!  so lucky!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84276
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposition

I love, love, love this story and had no issues w/any of that!  Read for the enjoyment of the story, not the mechanics!  Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I'll do my best to get the next chapter out ASAP!

xoxo

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 144003
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Living Hell

i love this story.  so happy to see this update!!  i hope that edward can help bella fix herself.  they both have earned an HEA!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start.  looking forward to seeing where it goes...

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218343
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor, broken Bella.  She needs someone to love her so badly.  I am already loving this story!  Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!  reat plot, great characters...poor bella...i cried with her.  you are amazing.  CAN'T WAIT for the next update!  and so different from PLU, but awesome!!

Summary:

 

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Summary: Sometimes you need to be reminded that life does go on, no matter how much you wish it wouldn't. That your destiny might be just around the corner, if you open your heart to it. A story about love, loss and moving forward, one step at a time. 

 

Thanks to @Christag_Banner for the beautiful banner above.  Much appreciated!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1771 Read Count: 476
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2012 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Whisper in the Breeze

I really liked this.  Thought your descriptions  were very real and moving.  Nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review.  It makes my day to read them.  Thanks again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summer of 76 Banner

An elderly Edward Cullen tells his grandchildren the story of how he met their grandmother, Isabella Swan, in the summer of 1976.

Banner made by RobsButtonsBabe!

-Winner: 3rd Place, Best Romance One-Shot, The Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Favorite Tiny Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7661 Read Count: 1036
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2012 Updated: 25 Feb 2012
Reviewer: deecie72 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Summer of 76

LOOOVE!  wonderful!