huh, Renee is extremely insecure and it's quite obvious that their interest is in Bella since he was only happy to hear about the child.... this going to be sick isn't it? One of them wants her or pimps her out?

Too bad Felix didn't have the balls to save her

Hum, definitely twisted. Curious as to when Charlie is going to show up.

Pfft, Felix should have told Charlie.

Great chapter... how come I feel like Alice is going to stir shit up and get in trouble?

Edward is great as per usual, very doting for a man that has never had a GF or really cared about others :)

James is right... Bella's protectors couldn't protect a fly

I'm sure James will figure out he lost his phone and find a magnet to run over the device or cut it out of her or something to elude them.

I'm hoping Edward still persues being a doctor. I also figured he would have a hard time with being away from Bella so much from going 24/7 to 2days a week is pretty drastic of a change

I don't get why Bella went to Charlie when Renee and Phil setup a Will and everything and why she doesn't know about it... the lawyer would have contacted her. Way to naive

I'm gad Edward is changing, I'm hoping they move to Pheonix and Carlisle ends up dead so they can all be out from his thumb since it's looking like he had Bella's parents killed

I'm hoping that Edward doesn't fuck up over Demitri and finally learns that Bella is in danger from Carlisle

I'm definitely routing for Carlisle being killed, that way Bella & Esme are safe.

Well that sucks... poor Bella is going to be even more messed up. I’m betting it’s Carlisle and he wants a piece as well

Wow Edward is a dick... anxious to see how their first met goes

Wow that was a jack ass move on Edwards behalf. seems like he quite pleased about fucking over Bella

Wow the Chief is being ridiculous, I'd definitely slap a restraining order against him and get those tickets dropped

Oh wow, their quite the pair LOL, Bella can't seem to keep it together

With all the screaming I'd be surprised if no one heard lol

It's sweet how completely and utterly devoted Edward is, willing to give up anything and everything for her. I hope she beats her addiction

Glad Demetri was found guilty of all charges :)

Wow lovely... Edward might want to figure out what a condom is before he knocks someone up LOL

Wow talk about embarrassing... that alone would make me strive to be nothing like her and get out of forks

Wow, Bella is pathetic and about to lose Edward all on her own. I highly doubt Edward cheats on her considering his jealously concerning her.

She needs intense therapy.

I think Carlisle has caught on about Felix, the news should be interesting

A lot of background in this chapter... looking forward to Edward's response and what Aro does next

Rose & Em need to relax... as for the foursome... I'd stick to the couple only releasing in their mates... would be weird to get pregnant with the other persons mate LOL

Are they always going to be a foursome?

Good for Renee & Bella, looks like the right direction to rebuild their relationship

It's nice to see them all come together to save Kate :)

A lot of bad things seem to just target Bella, poor thing. Glad they pulled him off, and Kate gets to go back home

Wow that's messed up... Edward & Ali should hear her screams if she is now in the office & It's nice she & Ali designed their parents homes for them

Jasper's mom is pretty perceptive lol

Well I didn't see their parents becoming a foursome O.o, curious to see what the boys are nervous about

Wow, I can see why Bella wouldn't go for him if he sleeps around that much. Edward seems to indicate love there, not the way to get it returned lol

Huh, I'm assuming he's the one that sticks up the hospital to get to Bella & Alice?

Curious as to what the threat is... probably Tanya.

I'm looking forward to seeing what is between Edward & Esme... also if Bella's presence changes Esme as well

Wow, Jacob is absolutely disgusting and I can't wait to see what happens to him :D

I think they should train Bella, obviously not Edward since he would go batshit... but Jasper and Em could do it.

Great story so far, I really hope you don`t have Bella take her name as `Swan-Cullen`I`m hoping she takes his name... I`ve always thought those hyphenated last names are kinda dumb... if you want to marry someone, but you don`t want their last name? Odd.

What was stupid was her playing stupid like she didn't know who Edward was... and then telling "Isabella" instead of Bella which he would have clued into since it was just yesterday she was mentioned... definitely going to blow up in her face.

I don't know... Edward can't give Bella what she wants... marriage & kids aside from his current.

Uh, I hope Bella isn't going to try and hide her pregnancy from Edward by moving out. He won't take that well

I was hoping Edward would clue in, apparently not *sigh* Bella needs to grow up, she's constantly going off half cocked--seems like she's like her Mother more then her Father.

Nice chapter, not sure if you know this, but when you wrote about Jake & Leah coming up you have it as they were moving Bella and Sam in permanently

Wow, I gotta admit I would walk up to Edward and kick him in the junk and then break his nose. He is not very perceptive and he knows Bella went through something bad and here is sprouting off information about her kid. He needs to learn to keep his mouth shut to outsiders, same with Emmett.

Huh, makes you wonder if James actually buys that Edward is her father -- It seems so and yet Emma has his hair colouring... Edward & Bella are both dark haired.

Wow absolutely pointless useless. Bella doesn't have a fight or flight instinct, those 4 weeks were wasted, especially gun practice if you don't carry a gun on you.

I have to admit I don't really feel sorry for Bella, she put herself into that position and doesn't listen to anyone else.

hmm, I'm assuming it's Edward...