Reviews by Daisy Crazy
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514952
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

HOLY F-ING COW!!!!  First of all, I can't believe James got Bella & Victoria again.  I hope y'all are planning on writing FAST!!!  Thanks for this quick update BTW.  :)  The good that I can find in all of this is that I think I'm going to get my wish & that Edward is going to get his chance to take James OUT!!! " :)  Can't wait for the next update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366885
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 64: The Name Game

YAY!!!! The babies are here! It seems they are learning how to get in a groove with their new additions. THANK GOD for family! It seems that their story is coming to a close. I HATE that thought, am I right?!? I will really miss this story. I don't want it to end. :( Thanks for another great chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Yes, it's coming to close. One more chapter and then maybe a couple outtakes, but definitely ending.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: More Than Words

I love how much growth is happening in their relationship. They have some wonderfully supportive people in their lives, which is very good & will continue to be needed. I'm looking forward to their trip &, hopefully, more healing. ;)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: My Cross to Bear

Ok, everytime I see an update, it's a drop everything & read moment!!! I'm dying here! I can't wait for all of the truth to come out. The phone conversation with Rose was enlightening. I wondered what was up Emmett's ass. I knew he was feeling his own guilt, but I couldn't understand how he could be so cruel to Bella. Looking forward to the reconciliation. :)

Author's Response:

The truth is going to be hard for a lot of people to swallow, but it's coming.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Searching for a Reason

For starters I want to say, I hope you didn't interpret my last review as hating on your story & the length of E&B's separation. I love that you writing is so real, that is why I look forward to your updates. You can actually feel your character's pain, and that's what makes you such a good author. Now, with that being said, DUN, DUN, DUN!!!!! He's moving in!!!! I also love her online convos with Numb Nuts (aka, Edward?)! Still stalking my inbox for your updates! :) Btw, thanks for two updates so quickly. I just love your story!

Author's Response:

Unless you were the review that told me they were flat out bored with the story, then no, it wasn't you. LOL  I get the appeal of instant fixes, but that's not real life and that's exactly what I threw these characters in to.  In real life, there are good times and bad, sweet words and devastating misunderstandings.  We've got a little of everything in this story and it's going to make the ending that much better.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

I loved this chapter!!!!! Her time with Esme was so great! It makes me do happy to see that she is finally allowing Edward in just a little. I wonder if Edward will figure the whole Emmett thing out. He's so perceptive when it comes to Bella, and he's obviously noticing her reaction to him. Huuuummmmmmmm?!? It's going to be a long two weeks because I can't wait for more!!! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Piecing It Together - Part 2

We're getting there! I didn't even think about what Rose said about Bella's possible pregnancy. Oh No!!! All I thought was, " WOW, could it be possible?". I didn't think of it being another obstacle for our favorite couple. You are doing great! I really loved this chapter! The Rose & Emmett situation is so real, too. This was another great chapter!

Author's Response:

It's funny how in good times things are blessings and in bad they become obstacles.  We'll see what happens for these two!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Learning to Breathe Again

OMG, YAY!!! I'm so happy things are moving in such a positive direction for them! I absolutely love this story! Thanks for making it real because their make up is some much better than it would have been if you'd have written Bella left, Edward got better, he came to live with them, & everyone lived happily ever after!

Author's Response:

The realness of the story is one of my favorite things about it.  That and all the great ideas EA gives me to work with :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 56: You Found Me

I KNEW IT!!!!! Numb is Edward. I love that he continued to be there for her even if he doesn't realize it. I wonder how he's going to take that news? I loved her shirt! I was just pregnant & that's exactly how I felt. Looking forward to more! :-)

Author's Response:

LOL  I had a few people who were suspicious of Numb.  He will realize it next Saturday and we'll get both reactions, plus his reaction in both POVs.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 60: I'm Not Calling You A Liar

Another great chapter! I'm so glad that they are moving to a pout of trust in their relationship that they could move on with their intimacy. I'm also glad that The secrets around Emmett are finally coming out.

Author's Response:

Yes, all the secrets with Emmett are coming out and after a little more hurt, things will be better for everyone.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Moving Forward

Another great chapter!!! Those two have had one CRAZY year! She still has a long road ahead, but she has so many people that love her, too. Thank you! :)

Author's Response:

Yep! Lots of people, lots of love, and one Edward. She'll be fine!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995732
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I love the part where Emmett won't go near Rosalie for fear of hurting her or he baby. It reminded me of when I was pregnant with my first child. My baby kicked & my husband felt it!!! It freaked him out so much he wouldn't go near me for the rest of the pregnancy. Needless to say, he was really looking forward to the six weeks after delivery being over!!! :D I love that he's finally going to make an honest woman out of her!! :) Great story, keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments and review - men are so funny, hey?  My ex hubby used to ask when the baby was 'sleeping' so that we could 'do it' - WTF?? Like I knew! xoxo

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Another great chapter!!!! I'm always looking forward to your next update! I'm glad you addressed Bella's response to losing her artwork because I imagined that would be incredibly difficult for her.

Author's Response:

thanks Daisy - I will post an outtake this weekend - hope you enjoy it

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I'm sorry you had such a bad week! I relate, I started back to work from maternity leave & my husband had my work keys. I went to pick them up from his office, but he had a breakfast meeting I forgot about, and on my way to work I started my period for the first time after the baby, so I leaked through my clothes. I live to far from my job to go home & change. I'm totally going to use your saying about He'll calling!!! Ok, it was a great chapter!! I'm so excited they set a date, the wedding was great, & I loved Domella!!! Great job! I hope you have a better week this week! :)

Author's Response:

omg - are you my soulmate???????????????  thanks so much for the review - i'm updating early this week and it's a long one again

xoxo

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Again, I have so much love for this story!!!! I'm looking forward to the weekend! ;) BTW, Bikerward...SO HAAAAAAWWWWT!!!!!! :)

Author's Response:

hey Daisy - thanks so much - I had so much perv fun looking for the right picture of Biker boy.... yum

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I loved this chapter! It covered so much! Great job! Looking forward to E&B's wedding.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Another great chapter! YAY, THEY ARE FINALLY GETTING MARRIED!!! *squeal* Can't wait to read the wedding. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76145
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm so glad you're back to writing this! There are so many unanswered questions. I can't wait to read more!

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: None

YAY!!!!

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

I really love this story & I'm always looking forward to your updates.  I can't wait to see where they are headed next!!! :) Eeeewwwwww, not Rudolph! :P

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love it! Babydoll & Mason are so f-in' hot together. I always look forward to your updates. I loved the idea of having him chase after her! Great chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked bb. Thanks! =)

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238934
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

When I saw that you updated, I was SO excited, I might've peed a little!!!  LOL! :)  But, seriously, I was so happy to see an update, and I'm really excited that we won't have to wait too long for another update because your cliffies Are. Killing. Me!!!! :)  Wow, ok, interesting direction with the Tanya thing.  I'm looking forward to seeing where that goes.  I can't wait for Bella to be hybrid so she can't kick some of these vamps ass!!!!  How cute is Bree, but OH NO, NOT JAMES!!!!!  Im whole-heartedly addicted to your story! :)



Author's Response:

LMAO! You're comment made my day! Thank you so much! That means a lot to me =)

Ch 19 will be posted today or tomorrow at the very latest. My poor beta is having some tough RL issues atm so I'm self editing a 15k chappy myself lol

Thanks so much,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

YAY, another update! Thank you for not making us wait too long. :)

Dun, Dun, Duuuunnnnnnn!!!!  You & your cliffies.  I'm pretty sure you are trying to kill me!! ;) Growl=reaction to baby, Ben's dad found them???  Interesting turn Bree's character took.  Was James the vampire that killed Bella's parents?  Was the rest of Bree's family somehow involved in that?  I know you aren't going to answer my questions, but AAAAAHHHHHH, I just have so many. :P

Here's another question, when is the trial, next chapter, or a few more down the road? I can't believe there is even talk about the possibility of Bella with another mate.  She is Edward's, plain & simple.

You already know how excited I am by your updates, so you can imagine the look on my husband, & children's faces when they heard my fan-girl scream when I saw the update alert today!!!! :D  Thanks again for working so hard to give us this story.  I'm looking forward to more excitement!  :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Aww sorry about those evil cliffies. ;) I'm all about angst lmao Although it'll settle down a bit ....later on. lol

I'll answer a question. =) The trial is in ch 21 or 22. I wanted to put it in ch 20 but it's a short chapter. I'm actually rewriting it b/c I lost what I had written b/c I didn't back it up. I know, stupid me. lol I was so upset. I'll tell you this as well, Bella won't ever have a new mate. She'll always be with him. HEA all the way. lol

Aww *blushes* Thanks so much. Your comment made me squee.

Thanks again,

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Your story is one that I drop EVERYTHING to read!  I can't wait to see the repercussions of Bella submissing to Ben & what is happening to Angela.  Does she lose the baby already?  Aaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!  You are, seriously, killing me with all the cliffies, buti think I must be a masochist because I love this story just the way it is, cliffies and all!!!  Lol! :)



Author's Response:

WOW! Thanks so much! Your comment made my day. I'm totally flattered. *grins really big*

 

I'll have a mini update asap. Aaaand it probably won't have a cliffy either LOL

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

 

fa

 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So, a lot happened here!!!!  That was some crazy stuff with primal Edward.  I knew we hadn't seen the last of Mr. Cheney, but now Bella has to remain his submissal for longer, poor E&B, poor B&A.  I hope Angela and the baby can survive all of the trauma they've been through.  I'm sorry I didn't R&R sooner, somehow my alert got mixed in with other emails.  I just found it today & was pleasantly surprised that you updated.  My prayers are with you and your RL stuff.  :)

Summary:

wlahc

Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Camping

My favorite part was Bella getting a "peak" of the boys skinny dipping!!!! LOL! I love Emmett & Possessiveward!!!! :)

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

first

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104700
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I just finished reading & I completely LOVE this E&B! I can't believe you left us here like this!!! I'm dying! Please don't make me wait much longer. I don't think Edward would jeopardize what he an Bella have, but I love to hate cliffies! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm so glad you gave us another chapter so quickly, and I'm even happier you didn't break up the chapters with her giving the ring back!!! They still have a long road of forgiveness ahead of them, but its good that Bella's giving him another chance, and really that he's giving her one, too.looking forward to more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 47923
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying this story. These two have A LOT of issues, but I'm looking forward to reading how they heal each other. Thanks for the chapter!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389613
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Wow!!! That was great, & really HAAAAWWWWTTTT!!!!!! :) I can't wait until your next chapter! I love your story!!!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

PLEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEE keep going!!!!!!! I'm dying for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

I loved it! I'm looking forward to more, it feeds my addiction! :)

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing...I cant wait to post more but this will work out for the best.....heres a teaser to feed your hunger for now

 

 

xoxoxoxo

 

"Bella?"

 

I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What’s he want?" Jessica whispered to me.

 

"I don’t know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.

 

 He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.

 

Mike, that’s his name.

 

Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I’m Jessica."

 

I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.

 

His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.

 

"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.

 

 He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don’t know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."

 

I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.

 

"An Angela Masen came to me today."

 

My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.

 

"What the fuck did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.

 

"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life.  I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."

 

I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."

 

I shook my head not wanting to hear this.

 

"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

Aaaaaaaaa!!!!! You're trying to kill me with the cliffy, aren't you? OMG, effing HOT chapter, but I knew something was up!!! I hope Edward finds her & fast!!! Angela & Eric are seriously effed up in the head!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL no we wasn't tryin to kill ya. Sorry about the cliffy. Yes they are messed up in the head!

Thanks for your review.

x0x0x0x0x00x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

Aaaaawwwwww!!! Mike & Jess are too cute! :) And, YAY, he's got her ring & he's finally going to finish things with this divorce! Loved it!

Author's Response:

yayy...were sooo happy that u enjoyed it.....I may be posting the last part of this original whole chapter soon....ari is ready to write again. YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

We're all happy that Ari is back!!! We missed you! DUN, DUN, DUN!!!!! The you know what is really hitting the fan now!!!! ;)

Author's Response:

:) I'm so happy to be back I've missed y'all so much! Oh yes it's going to hit the fan big time! :)

Thank you so much for your review.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Another great chapter, ladies!!!! Esme is an unbelievable bitch!!! I love that Edward told her, but this masquerade ball is VERY concerning. Looking forward to part 2!

Author's Response:

part 2 may be up tonight xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

Wow!!! SOOOO HAAAWWWWWWTTTTTTT!!!! I can't wait to read what happens next! ;)

Author's Response:

We're so glad you think so BB! We're working on the next chapter now!

Thanks so much for your review sweetie!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

I'm really hoping that's the DOOR that went BANG & that Edward found her!!!! Please don't make me wait too long! The cliffy is already killing me & I just finished reading! :)

Author's Response:

Im sorry.....ur gonna have to wait a wee bit more....Im gonna wait a bit more for Ari but if she is unable to write EPOV...I will write it in BPOV 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

Aaaaahhhhhh! You killed Carlisle? But, he & Edward were just starting their relationship! :-( I'm really, really sad right now! I'm glad the wicked bitch is dead, but I can't believe you killed Carlisle. :*( I'm looking forward to RPOV because WTF just happened!!!!

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

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Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Happy Valentines Day

I love that they are moving forward. Great chapter, worth the wait!

Author's Response:

thank you....my sister had it for a while but she hopes to beta the next one quicker xoxooxoxox and im glad u liked it xoxoox

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

Aaaaawwwwwww, Edward is going to be the baby's daddy!!!!! YAY!!!!!! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella and Edward hook up at a party their lives quickly become complicated, causing a rift in their close knit circle of friends. Despite the fallout, they can’t stay away from each other. Neither of them are able to admit the depths of their feelings for the other and when Edward has to leave for Italy and Bella realizes she’s attracted to her friend Claire, their already shaky relationship is in danger of falling apart.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297314 Read Count: 33531
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Winter In My Heart

Wow! Not what I expected, but thank you for being real. No one would be like, great you were with someone else while I was gone & you're still trying to get over them... Wanna do it?!?!?! :) I'm feeling so sad for them right now. I'm not sure I agree with Edward's decision that she should see other people. I guess I don't really understand it. He's already hurt because she was with Claire, why would he want her to see other people? I just don't understand why they don't work on their relationship.

It was a great chapter, even if it was terribly sad. I think the only thing that saves me from sobbing, myself, right now is that you have promised a HEA. Thanks for making this real. They still have a long road of healing ahead.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. 

Yeah, it's a tough thing.  In his mind it makes sense for her to date other people, but it definitely hurt her feelings.  He will explain more of what was going through his head when they do talk again.

You're right that they have a lot to still work through. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Sunday Morning

Another great chapter! Surprise weekend in a hotel... SOOOOOO HAWT!!!! :) I love that they talked about growing old together, I hope that comes to fruition. Looking forward to your next update! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks.  I know, wouldn't you love a weekend in a hotel with Edward? 

It's definitely going to come to fruition that they grow old together.  Just give them time to figure things out!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Everybody Here Wants You

I loved that he thought of her on V-Day!!! So sweet! As for his email, I'm not sure, I know they both felt awful after the last Skype session & he probably doesn't want to go though that again. I'm a little surprised that he's not more willing to keep her frustrations at bay because he has to know something is up with Claire. She talks about her all the time, plus the drunk convo after the kiss. Hummmm?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  It's interesting, I hadn't thought about the fact that he might want to keep her frustration at bay because of Claire, but I think he's trying to emphasize the emotional connection between them, and not just the physical.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Lover

I can't figure Bella out, other than she's afraid of commitment because of her parents???? It seems they're both really into eachother & should stop fighting it. I'm loving your story! I always look forward to your updates.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!  I was starting to wonder if anyone on here was reading the story.  Good guess!  Her parents are a HUGE reason why she's afraid of commitment.  I am so glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Three Doors

Oh no!!!! The dreaded trip & time apart! I'm not looking forward to this! :( I love that things are getting fixed with Rosalie.

Author's Response:

(laughs) I know, it's almost worse knowing it's coming, isn't it?  I was glad she got things worked out with Rosalie too.  I hated writing them being pissed at each other.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - I Don't Understand Anything

I hope Bella figures everything out quickly. Good chapter! It's possible I miss Edward more than she does! LOL! :)

Author's Response:

I promise I won't drag it out any longer than absolutely necessary.

(laughs) that's very possible that you miss him more.  But trust me, it's not because she doesn't care. :)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Love Me Two Times

She totally has it bad!!!!! LOL! Loved it! :)

Author's Response:

(laughs) yes she does.  Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - I've Fallen In Love With You

Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!! They just need to admit their feelings. He's going to leave & they won't admit their feelings & then they'll get into all sorts of trouble!!!!!! Can't wait to read what happens next! I love to hate the angst, but I can feel it in the air!

Author's Response:

(laughs) I am guessing you're getting frustrated with them.  And yep, that's exactly what's going to happen.  But, there are some really sweet moments between them in the next few chapters where they TRY to tell each other. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Ecstasy

I was surprised by Bella's reaction. She seems to be very confident in her relationship with Edward. I must say, I'm with Alice. I don't know how Bella kept from bitch slapping her! :) Interesting that she finally acknowledged her feelings. Loved the chapter, looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

She has acknowledged some of her feelings, but she's still a long way from being ready for a relationship.

It wasn't easy writing the scene with Alice, but I thought it was important. 

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Be With Me

Ok, the argument with Alice was a long time coming. I think Bella's reasoning was valid in her own head. She doesn't see Edward wanting anything more & she has watched as he pulls away if a girl seems too needy. I love your story! Keep it up, please!!!! :)

Author's Response:

Oh good!  I am so glad you thought the argument with Alice was necessary. I had such a hard time with it.  And I'm glad you think that her reasoning makes sense (at least from her perspective).  It shouldn't be long before the next chapter.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Just Can't Get Enough

It was a very sweet chapter. Are we already coming up on the Epilogue? If so, what about his trip away?

Author's Response:

Thanks!  No, we're not even close to the epilogue yet.  I just like to make sure the chapters are in order long before I need to have them ready.  It's roughly a 50 chapter story.  The body of the story is completely written, and the epilogue is partially done, I just wanted to have it ready to go when I do need it. 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter 1 - The Way We Met

Oh good!!! I was going to be very disappointed if you were finishing it already. I'm glad you have the story mostly written...it means a shorter wait between chapters for me! :) Always looking forward to your updates!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yeah, I am impressed with writers who can do it chapter by chapter, but it's just not the way my muse works. 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Somethin' Stupid

Two great chapters! My favorite part of this chapter was... well... all the sexy times, obviously LOL, but seriously, I love that she finally figured out that she loves him!!! He totally lo es her, too, but I think he's afraid to tell her because he doesn't want to scare her away.

Author's Response:

I am so sorry, I apparently somehow missed replying to this review!  Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it.  You're absolute right that he's worried about her reaction.  He can tell she's afraid to start a relationship.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - You and I

It's definitely slow, but it's SOOOO good!!!! :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you don't mind the slow pace.  I tried to make things as concise as they could be without losing the great interactions they have together.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Song For A Winter's Night

Aaaaahhhhhh!!! You're killing me! :) No seriously, I love where their relationship is going. I just wish Edward's trip wasn't looming, so they could explore their feelings for each other.

Author's Response:

I know, it's frustrating.  You'll really enjoy the next couple of chapters though I think!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - Cup of Coffee

Poor Bella! Edward is ridiculously understanding, even if he is terribly hurt! :*( When Bella finally started hanging out with her friends again, I knew that would help to heal her, but as hard as it was for Edward, the best thing she did for herself was talk to him. They were friends first, and she really needed her friend. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! I'm giddy with excitement! He finally coming home. :)

Author's Response:

He has been amazingly supportive.  And so have her friends. 

You're right though, he was a friend first and they haven't been focusing on that part of their relationship as much as they should have. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The New Year

It's so sad, I wanted to CRY!!!! :( I'm so sorry they have to go through this. I don't think they'll say anything about their feelings & I think they are going to really screw up this beautiful relationship with stupid choices while he is gone. I can't wait for more, but at the same time I don't want him to leave & I know that's coming next! :*(

Author's Response:

Hang on for the next chapter, it's pretty brutal.  I promise you on the Rob pretty that it'll be worth it in the end.  Thanks for the review. I hate to make you guys sad, but it's really flattering to know that you care so much about the story. 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - I Don't Have Anything

I cried, I mean literally CRIED!!!! You wrote it beautifully, even if it did break my heart that they didn't profess their love for each other before he left. What a difficult 6 months they are going to have. :*( Have you thought of writing an EPOV of their goodbye? I'm not sure if it would give too much away from your story, but I'd love to read it(even if I know I would cry again ;) )

Author's Response:

Aww, you're so sweet.  I certainly didn't want to make you cry, but like I said before I am so flattered at how much you care.  It is going to be a rough six months for them, although there will be some bits of sweetness that I know you'll love.

For the epilogue, I am planning to do it from Edward's POV.  During the epilogue he'll reflect back on their relationship so you will get a few paragraphs talking about how hard it was for him to leave her.  I might consider writing a more extensive outtake if you really wanted it, but I wouldn't send it to you until after the story and epilogue were completely done and posted.  It would give away too much right now.  Would you still like it?  You've been such a fabulous reviewer (sometimes the only one here on TWCS!) and you definitely deserve it.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Claire

Great chapter! I'm a die hard E&B fan, so forgive me if I don't have as much to say during this section of your story, but I promise to keep reading and reviewing. ;)

Author's Response:

I appreciate that you're reading it even though you're a diehard Edward/Bella fan.  I promise it'll be worth it!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - I Kissed A Girl

LMFAO, I love that you chose this song because as I was reading your Claire chapter all I could think was she should use this song!!!! Next thing I have to say is OMG, I would LOVE an EPOV out take after the epi!! YAY, you just totally made my day! :) Ok, on to my review...I'm really feeling bad for Edward. I know he's made his bed and all, but it would still suck to know the woman you love is out having fun with someone else. I'm afraid it won't end up pushing him to tell Bella how he feels. It could push him into some "hot Italian chick's" arms, just sayin'! Love the faster updates, it helps get through the angst faster. :)

Author's Response:

That's so funny and I know, the song was just too easy...

I started working on the EPOV outtake of New Years today.  :) 

I do absolutely feel bad for Edward.  It wasn't easy to write.  Edward won't pursue anyone but Bella, don't worry about that.  They'll have their problems, but that won't be one of them.  :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - It's About You

That was probably the most sad vidoe chat EVER!!!! I feel so bad for them. My hubby and I have never had to live away from eachother. I couldn't imagine how depressing and lonely that would be. I love how real you are. I have read stories where the lovers have video chat sex & everybody is on a post orgasmic cloud & everything is butterflies & daisies, but I think you wrote how I would feel.

 



Author's Response:

Aww, I know!  I don't think it would be as bad if you were in a long distance relationship from the beginning, but going from seeing each other all the time to being apart is so much worse. 

I am glad you thought it was realistic, that's something I always struggle with.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - You Look Like Rain

Ok, WOW! You totally shocked me with the Edward surprise. I think I loved it. I'm not sure because there's just all this weird tension with Bella that I don't like. :( I hope she can get over it for the 5 days that he's home. She'll have plenty of time to figure everything out after he's gone. I say, live in the moment!

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the surprise! There is some weird tension but she will get over it and they'll have a really good week together. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Someday

Aaawww! Now that's more like it. They really seemed to be Edward & Bella again. I'm looking forward to the next few chapters. It's nice having him home for a little while. I think goodbye will be hard again, maybe even harder than last time? On the bright side he only has a couple more months. This is probably about the half way point of his semester, right? I'm sure they don't FINALLY express their feelings for eachother, but I'm hoping they start becoming more aware of the hints & signs.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, they're definitely getting back to normal. It will be hard for them to say goodbye. It is the halfway point for the semester, so only a couple of months to go. They will become more aware of what they're both struggling to say to each other.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Confusion

Fun chapter! I find it really interesting that Edward wants to talk about Claire, but Bella is really resistant to even think about it much. I feel so bad for him. He's expressing himself so much more, but still really worried about the whole Claire situation. Btw, I know you said the epi would be in EPOV about his take on things, but what about an outtake of this week in his POV? Looking forward to more! I'm loving these chapters with Edward home.

Author's Response:

Bella really is resistant to talking about just about anything, isn't she? 

At the very least the epilogue will briefly discuss the week as he thinks back about it.  I am still debating which chapter (or two) to write entirely from his perspective. 

The next chapter will go up in a couple of hours!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Clementine

You never cease to amaze me with your awesomeness(if that's a word! :) ) as a writer!!!! Wow!!! Edward's declaration was just. WOW!!! Thanks for the quick updates. Always looking forward to more! ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  That is so nice to hear.  I knew I wanted him to tell her how much he cared, without actually saying I Love You.  I am pleased that you liked it so much.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - First Taste

They made love, but it's so sad because they haven't declared their feeling yet!!! :-( I'm getting sad because their time together is coming to a close. I love that you are updating so quickly, but I don't want Edward to have to leave again.

Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't reply to your reviews sooner.  It was kind of a crazy weekend.  It was hard to write about Edward having to leave again, but necessary.  And they're more than halfway through the semester.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - He's Got A Way

Their goodbyes are always SO SAD!!! I'm actually not looking forward to the next chapter! :*( On the bright side, we just have to get through a couple more months & he'll be home to stay.

Author's Response:

They're very sad to write too!  I know, it's hard to look forward to it when you know what's coming.  Buy they are more than halfway through the semester.  And each chapter will cover a much longer period of time.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - With All That I Am

I understood why Edward told her she needed to figure out what she was happening with Claire, but I'm not so sure that he was giving her carte blanch to explore a possible relationship with Claire. I'm sure he was really hoping she would choose him once he expressed his feelings, at least that's how I would feel in a similar situation. I do understand him wanting her to know she only wants him, though, too.

I loved the song! It was so sweet & now she can have him sing her to sleep at night. I think that would comfort me if I was missing my love.

It's so hard to go from the wonderfulness that was Edward's visit, too the confusion of Claire. I hope that she takes Edward's advice & is "careful"!

I'm looking forward to May, so therefore, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

While I'm sure a small part of him did hope she would pick him, he was in essence giving her permission to explore things with Claire.  I don't want to say too much, but he was concerned that if she didn't explore it, it would cause problems in any relationship they could have in the future.

I am glad you enjoyed the song so much!  It's one of my very favorites. 

The next few chapters will be pretty unsettling as Bella tries to figure out what she wants, but I promise, I won't drag it out unnecessarily. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Magdalena

OMG!!!!! You got your 100 reviews!!!! YAY!! It's totally not what it should be. You don't get near enough love here, but you did get 100! :) I totally jumped up and down when I saw you got 100.

Pretty hot girl on girl, if I was into that. You know I'm a die hard for E/B, but I still love your story! :)

Author's Response:

I did, thanks!  I have over 400 on Twilighted too, so I think 500 is very respectable.  :) 

I am glad you thought it was hot, even if it wasn't your usual cup of tea. 

Thanks for the review!

 

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17466
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Second chapter

This story has definitely captured my interest!!! Looking forward to reading more.

Summary:

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When Bella is hired last minute to photograph a wedding for the Cullen family, she's grateful for the experience and the money.  But upon her arrival, she begins to suspect there's another assignment on Esme Cullen's mind – one involving her handsome son, Edward...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5982 Read Count: 5576
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2011 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Photographer

Ok, so I don't know what's taken me so long to join the party, but can I just say, I've really been missing out.  I can't wait to read more!  :)



Author's Response:

I can't believe I missed replying to this!  So sorry.  I hope you've joined me for the continuation!  Thanks for taking the time to review!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218333
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

I followed your story, People Like Us, & somehow I missed this one, until recently!!!  I'm sorry I haven't reviewed as I've read because I couldn't stop long enough to type it out!  You write your characters so beautifully that I feel like I know them.  They become so real to me.  I look forward to your next update.  I'm putting you on author right now, so we don't have this problem again. ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMG!!!!  You seriously give us just enough to WET our appetite!!! :) Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Aaaaaaawwwwwww!!!!  How unbelievably sweet!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Aaaaawwwwww!  She said the "L" word! :) Congrats all your ebook!  I think it's great that you are sharing your talent for writing with more than just the fandom. :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Well, what does a person say to that...I sure hope Bella turns back to go see Edward.  Is there going to be a confrontation with Tanya?  I would love to see Bella & Rosalie jack her sh*t up!!!!!! :-) I'm looking forward to the E/B reunion, next chapter? 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Poor Edward!!!  What a terrible loss... There's a lot more to that story that I'm looking forward to reading.  I love the way you mix in the pee your pants ridiculousness with the rip your heart out sadness.  I'm desperately waiting for more. :-)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

YAY!!!!  We are definitely getting somewhere, now.  Although, they do really have a lot to talk about.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Ok, I thought they would shower separately, but you are too good to us for that!!!!  

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh Boy!!!!  Things are getting good now! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

YAY!!!!  They are finally communicating.  I love this story! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I love it, but you're SERIOYSLY leaving us hanging?!?! ;)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

YAY!  It's about damn time!!!!  Lol! :) Another great chapter.  These two still have a LOT to talk about.  I'm looking forward to what happens next. :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

YAY!  I'm so glad that there's more to the story!  I really love this story.  :-)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I love to read the fun, playful side of them, too!  Another great chapter! :-)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMG!!!!!!  That was horrifying, Emmett.  So, not ok to join people skinny dippin'.  I can't wait to read Edward's reaction to their playtime intruder. ;)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

LMAO!!!!!  "Boobs flapping", really?!?  The visual on that is stinkin' hilarious! :-)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Leave it to your Emmett to bring disgusting to the party. :) I'm looking forward to seeing how Bella deals with THIS freak out. 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Lmao!!!!  But, so disgusting!!!!!!  If he threw up on her, I'm not sure you can come back from that.  So, nasty! :P

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh No He Di-nt!!!!!!  That's just not right.  Eeeeeeeeewwwwwwww!  I'm thoroughly disgusted now, but at the same time LMAO!  You truly crack me up!  The places your brain goes with this story is unreal & I LOVE IT! :-)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

They're fixin' to do it, just sayin'!!!!  I always look forward to more.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

So great!!!!  Thanks for another update so quick! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

So HOT!!!!!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923228
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

So, she's pregnant...this is a good thing for her, right???  Your lemons=need for new panties!  :) 

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

Oh dang!!!  What a place to stop!!!  Thanks for continuing to write.  I love you!!! :)



Author's Response:

you saw how hard this chapter was for me... how I cried putting it out. Thanks for being there... :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Another great chapter!!!!  I think I'm looking forward to the wedding for the same reason Bella is.  She will, finally, be a little bit safer, but with James' jealousy I still think Bella will need to watch her back.  Thanks for the update! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yikes!  What a horrifying experience for poor Bella &, to be honest, Edward too.  But if I'm reading this right, then I think she thinks Edward doesn't want her now & that's why she was crying.  I guess I'll see for myself next chapter.  Thanks for the update!  :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Another outstanding chapter!  As hard as this story is to read sometimes, you never fail to leave me begging for more.  I wanted to finish this one before I jumped into your doc about Bree, but I'm heading there next.  

Poor Bree!  What an awful life she's lived.  Our E&B really need to work on that communication.  It was good to see that Edward is falling in love with his baby(ies).  

Thank you for the update! :)

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I, literally, dropped EVERYTHING I was doing & read this chapter as soon as I got my alert!!!!  And, wow, am I glad I did!!!  Serious happy tears right now!  I'm so glad that they have each other now.  It will be interesting to see how Alice reacts to the news.  I've had my suspicions all along, but you wrote the reveal in a way I never imagined.  It was great!  Thanks for the update!  That your brain can think about or process anything but MC right now, blows my mind.  But, the greedy reader that I am is very grateful for your amazing mind! :)