Reviews by nancy123k
Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 225250
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What's so great about this story is, it doesn't give away so much, it makes you use your imagination!!!   HOT!!!

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Date: 14 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

HOT!!!!

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Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Slow building goodness.......

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Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

wOW, I have to say I'mglad I was not on the receiving end of that punishment, but nonetheless this is HOT!!

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Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Uh oh...she only got to cum once..and now he's gonna fuck her...I hope she can deal!!!!

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Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wow!!!  Very, very HOT!!!

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Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Hmmmm....I think I want a Master Edward for Xmas!!!

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

HOT, as always.  Not happy to know that this story is coming to an end....but with 30 chapters to look forward to, its ok!!!  I hope a lot of questions are answered, that I can hardly wait for!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Master May I

Things really are very HOT between those two, Im very interested what happens when Master lets loose. The pleasure has been so much Bella......lovin the frequent updaes!!!!   Sexy, insanely HOT story!!!!!

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Hmmmm, by now dont we all want a Master???   :)

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

By now she should be ready......wow...what stamina, and self control!!!!

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Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Hot, as usual!!  I want to say thank you, for the consistent updates.  Nothing frustrates me more than to read and get into a story and then nothing. I know things in life come first, but not for months and months.  You have spoiled us, GREAT STORY AND FAST, DAILY MULTIPLE UPDATES!!!   THANK YOU!!!    

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Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I want a Master, just like him!!  I will miss this story!!!!

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Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Absolutely incredible!!!  Everything is turning out perfect, I never expected how all this has turned out!!!  YEAH!!!

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Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

GREAT STORY!!!   Loved every single thing, very very hot!!!

Marriage by Treaty by Zorantha Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 167]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Prince Edward of Forks and Princess Isabella of Voltura are forced to marry as the terms of a treaty signed by their fathers to end a war between the two neighboring countries.  Edward is a spoiled, arrogant womanizer who is determined to have a marriage of convenience.  Bella is a feisty young woman from a country where the women fight beside their men making her a warrior princess.  Can Bella tame the wild Edward and make him into the man he should be or will the whole world lose out.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59923 Read Count: 51688
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2011 Updated: 12 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

Now, Im curious, does Aro want to get them all together to use these 3 people to destroy Edward, Bella and group or use them to defeat the 3. Hmmm. Im very proud Edward and Bellas relationship is going well and strong, and Edward hasnt screwed up, I did have a little bit of doubt with his history.  Great update!!!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218368
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

First, michelle let me say yes we want a long chapter, lol!!!  Tonight, I began reading HS from the beginning.  Also I will confess, I have seen it earlier but wanted to wait till more chapters were posted.  I absolutely love this story!!  I have read your story People Like Us many times, loved it too, and may I say cant wait for that sequel.  My heart breaks in this story for Bella.  But, she is right where she needs to be.  Im sorry she's loosing her baby, but Edward and the Cullen's will help her heal!!!



Author's Response:

hey nancy,

Thanks so much for your awesome review and comments. Update this weekend, honey!

xoxo

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great update, I knew the Cullens would help her thru this difficult time. Im excited to see where Edward and Bella's friendship goes and how long will it take to turn to love......

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

Great chapter.  This story, especially this chapter, you could just see it all happening!  Chasing the momma pig, capturing the piglets, being covered in mud, so funny.  It all has me sitting on the edge of my seat wanting more!!!



Author's Response:

Hey there nancy123k

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you found the pig chase funny because I was laughing as I wrote it. I've just posted chapter 10 - enjoy.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"

I began reading Wrecked with Bella this evening, from the beginning, and I love it!! I can't wait to tell my fellow readers about this funny, heartwarming story.  There is no other story out there like this one. I hope Bella and Edward get together soon, then the story will be perfect.  I hope Carlisle knows how to deliver babies, deserted island with no birth control, lol. With a experienced sailor, a contractor, a doctor and a "farmer", all together, they are lucky. I can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi nancy123k

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Bella and Edward will get together, eventually, but it's not going to happen overnight or be full-on from the get-go.

Regards

JKazzie

 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Temple

My guess is Rose is pregnant. Carlisle will have o brush up on delivering babies and probably training Bella on delivering  too. Something tells me that won't be the only baby in the future.  It is time for Edward to make some knd of a move on Bella.  They have been there for what 5-6 weeks now...Lovin this story!!!



Author's Response:

Hi nancyk123

Edward is about to make his move.

Do you want Rose to be pregnant?

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Making a Move

Yea!!!  Im so glad they are together!!  I hope they find something useful in that lava tube, Im not ready for them to be rescued but not having birth control, problem....  great update!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi nancy123k

I'm not ready for them to be rescued either, so don't fear.

Regards, Jkazzie

Naughty or Nice by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Nurse Bella seems to have met the man of her dreams at the Hospital's Christmas charity booth, but only after a co-worker already filled her in on the handsome Doctor's sordid past. She wants him, but is her heart worth the risk?

 

An E/B Christmas LemonShot

 

Beautiful banner by @Time_Lights

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7258 Read Count: 3703
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 02 Jan 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Naughty or Nice

Absolutely LOVED it, very hot, little drama in the beginning, I personally would love if this was continued into more.  I would love to know what happened, did they stay together, what about Rose and what was the deal wth Carlisle??  Great story!!!

Summary:

Someone Like You Banner

Edward Cullen travels back to Chicago to see his former lover, Isabella Swan, one last time on the eve of her wedding.

Banner by sunray16.

-Winner: 3rd Place, Best Angst One-Shot, The Eclipse Awards-


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7311 Read Count: 1948
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2012 Updated: 03 Jan 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Someone Like You

This really has the potential to be great, really great!!  It is good now, of course it leaves us wanting more!!  So many unanswered questions, obviously Edward had no kids in his previous marriages, but what all happened, was he just searching fr what he had with Bella.  Why didnt he look for her sooner, maybe after his first divorce?? Hw does Bella really feel abut Edward being married twice before??  Does Edward and Bella make it, do they marry, have kids, what state do they settle in???  There is no story out there like this one!!  I hope there is more to come!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you SO MUCH for the kind words! I'm so glad you liked this O/S! 

I already have a whole bunch of back story in my mind for how the fic would begin, with bits and pieces of the middle in place too! I really want to do more with this, and hopefully when I get one of my current WIPs finished up, I can start cracking down on this one! :) 

Thank you for the review!! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! 

xoxo

Summary:

One couple....Edward & Bella. Fiesty and naughty as ever! Bella has one...thing...on...her....mind. (pssst....spoiler alert: she gets it!)

O/S.

90% Lemon, 10% Hilarious


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5944 Read Count: 518
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2012 Updated: 17 Jan 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: One mission

Well, that was very, very HOT!!!  I love it when these two are married and havin hot sex. People (who aren't married) sometimes seem to think sex fizzles once you get married. Obviously, not these two!!! GREAT job, I look forward to reading more of your work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I more than agree that there is hot sex after marriage!! And my husband is 14 years older than me (I'm 36) so boo-yah to the non-believers. Ha,ha,ha.

 

Thanks again! xoxoxoxoxo

Summary:

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Awesome Banner made by: vbfb1!  Make sure to check out her great stories and blog to reqyest a banner!

 http://plainjanebydaydommebynight.blogspot.com/?zx=702939f0c989e36

Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62156
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

ohhh!!!!   Im patiently waiting for more!!   I just knew it would work, and the divorce is final too!!!  Bella will never be able to leave those babies!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Im such a sucker for romance, I just want the lies to stop and them to be together and settled. Im nervous for them!!

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Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG...Bella already knows Gunner and Brooklyn, wonder why they havent called her ma? I cant wait for edward to get back.  When spending time with Alice will she see a pic of Edward, Tanya and the kids, think they are happy and run... Im officially going crazy!!!



Author's Response:

Lol! You´re so warm, I see sparks flying!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and always reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Things are getting stickier...Alice...Edwards brother, Bella, Alices friend...Oh brother!! Things like this is what I was afraid of....Lets have more!! Were greedy!!

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Lovin it,  I feel sorry for those babies.  I hope Bella reacts good to them. They need to be honest wth eachother!!!

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Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yes, thank God.....it's definetly time!!  I honestly wonder how she held out this long, so many questions.  I hope that something doesn't happen in between time for him to get back. After all, didn't he say he lived 10 min from her hotel?  What if Bella and the babies nanny were in the same deli or whatever and the babies recognized her and said ma, and Gunner is Edwards twin, that would be uh oh!!!  Bella please don't run, wait for Edward to explain everything!!!!  He tried to tell you and you wanted to wait!!! 

 

I love this story.  I get so excited when I see a new update!!!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes, now that she opened up, his turn. He need to talk slowly, and explain carefully!!  Carefully so she doesn't tune him out at the word married, like I said in last chapter. They have a intense love, very rare. Too great to leave.  :)

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I might be able to come up, lol with something to say......after.....I stop laughing!!!

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Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Bella will be shocked when she learns the truth. But, I believe she will stand by him, after all he is leagally seperated and his divorce will be final soon. Tanya must be surviving on the pawn of her ring. Tanys is in for a big surprise when she comes back!!!  Bella will love Gunner and Brooklyn, when Tanya comes back and learns about the changes while she was gone, she will tell them how much she hates them and is using them and the Cullen name to get more money. She will end up dead when James fiinds out his money train is over!!

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Things are definetly lookin up....great job!!!!!!

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The beginning of the honesty has begun.  Staring with her real name.  His turn.  I think he is 100% convinced that he can trust her and he will begin telling her his name, then his job, the about tanya, then the kids and what they have gone thru then his  divorce.  He needs to be very careful how he tells her about Tanya so that she don't hear the words married and shut down. She loves him and has been cheated on so she will be very suspicious when he tells her about Tanya.  She has low self esteem and will have a thought that he's using her.  Edward...tread carefully.  LOVIN THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Perfect!!!  Boy would I like to be a fly on the wall when they see eachother.  Bella will have to remember what Alice told her about Edwards wife. I hope he walks in to Bella lying in the floor with he babies all over her!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

This story keeps getting better and better!!  I can't wait to hear from Tanya, boy does she have some surprises awaiting her, not only divorced, parental rights gone, but when she arrives back at the penthouse to find it empty, ha, the look on her face will be priceless!!  Gravy train over sista!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Loved the proposal!!!  Beautiful, heartfelt and those babies.... so glad about the adoption papers!!!  I was wondering abou that.  Complete family, for now, more babies please!!! As I have mentioned before, I wonder when Tanya will show her face???????

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

He is not thinkin Bellas on drugs......I know he would be happy about the baby. I cahn't wait for the next update!!!!!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Everything seems to be going great, I just can't wait till Tanya shows up!  Its going to be great, I just know it!

Summary:

Edward Masen and Bella Swan, high school sweethearts who married young, have their lives turned upside down when Edward is “discovered”. Celebrity, tragedy, alcohol and excess dissolve what seems to be indestructible… or does it? Can love rise above fame and indulgence? Or does Hollywood truly alter what is good in a man?

 

 

 

Celebrity, Deconstructed Banner, by EvilNat


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56283 Read Count: 10591
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2012 Updated: 17 Nov 2015
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

IDK,  Starting off Cheatward, Im intrigued.  My curosity alone will bring me back.



Author's Response:

I'm glad your interest has been peaked. All will be revealed in time, dearest. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Renee usually causing Bella stess, she's flipped now.  Lovin it.....



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, sweetness! Renee will be a handful... Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Cherryade by LittleWiseOwl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

"I find cherryade tends to fizz and pop. Like the ones in your glass their popping.
Is your cherry popped Bella?"

A Tale of Lemony Cherry Goodnes.

Ch Ch Ch Ch Ch Cherry Bomb!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3785 Read Count: 840
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 04 Feb 2012
Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cherryade

Very hot...too bas it was a O/S.  This story has the inner makings of a great story. We all want to know, was his a one time, do they have a relationship, does Carlisle like it, where does she go to college,  I could go on and on.  But overall, I really liked it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you XD 

You definately have many questions, perhaps they can be answered in the future ... XD I haven't decided yet I may carry on but maybe not. I've got to make sure I can get something good  out of it, although I like the idea of a sexy Dr Edward living just on the other side of town ... =]

Thank you for taking the time to review nancy =]

 

Birdie O.O x