Reviews by Nona Cuddles
Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: An interview with Aro & Jane

I 'm in total awwwwwww.  They are beautiful together..  It was like putting pieces to a puzzles together..  just like with Jazz.  a better understanding..

and I cried of Jane and Aro and Edward for the loss of Mason..   and I agree you can't place one child with the other.  it sick.   they are 2 different people..  and your going to grieve no matter what?  When you loses a child it like cutting of a body part or a pieces of your heart.  I have not experience or ever want too...... but I have lost lots of cousins from birth to 42yrs of age.  and seeing my aunties and uncles was not pretty.   

 

I give your a A++++++ on your interview..  awesome.. 

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Beach Ball

Hahaha..  that was priceless..  Come on if that all she had to do..  then he deserved to lose. heheheh.    to funny,  But I love seen their side of the game.  awesome. 

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Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Charlie's Surprise Visit

You want to cry with charlie,  and he right about Bellaa putting the Jerk in Jail.   But not until she is ready.  which maybe never...

it is easier sad then done..  Bella is not strong enough to handle the pressure that goes with it.   But maybe in time with Edward TLC  she will get their.  I only hope.   Or james gets his in the ended.  you know what they say,  "what goes around comes around"  I believe it.  even if it took over 30 yrs..   

I can't wait for the next update of both outtakkes and story..  

 

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Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica's Dilemma - read after chapter 79

NO she is not dumb.  just not to bright..  petty..  oh she just made this worse on her self.   oops. 

love this outtake.  god mike not to bright either.  hahaha



Author's Response:

Most Criminals are too smart for their own good...and your right Jess just made a bad decision worse...thanks for reading..louise

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Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Bella's Journal Tuesday June 10, 2010

That was Beautiful..  Now you can see why Edward was so proud of her and gave her a reward.. 

She has growen stronger and more beautiful each day.. 

 

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Early Morning Chat

That was great to hear Edward..  But I confused..  is this not a BDSM love story..  mmm. 

You know what gets me,  Is if Bella was the Domix.  and did that to Edward.  none of the readers would say a thing..  I have seen it a dozen times in the Domix stories..

But god for bid for Edward to a true dom..  most stories start of with D/s But it ends  more like playing and bella is in charge and if she wants he can be dom.. 

I love your story because Edward is a compassinate Dom, Care for her,  Plus they have a wonderful and geniuen romance..   

So I actuall was hurt and sad for you that some of your reader said that he raped her..    but I can guarnitee that if was the other way around they would have not said a peep.......... 

Okay I think I am getting carried away..  and really it a fantiction, not  really life..  Enjoy the story and stop cristizing  the charcters..    How can anyone say anythink neg.  about your fantastic story..    

Great big hugs... your reader friend Leona

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I 'm glade for the update.. I will always be wait for the next chapter..  RL gets in the ways, but it is more important.. 

Chapter was short but really good..  the cliffhanger is not nice..  I hope all is good..  I hate to see what Edward does if anything happens to bella.. 

<3Leona :)

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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I frigging love it..   I can't wait to read up to the last chapter you have got.  awesome..  :)

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Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

that is awesome! yes I all ready voted for you.  actually I was on there voting for my favorit story and found yours, so I looked your story up.  I love it..     can't wait for the next chapter.  Still wondering why he can't here all her thoughts.  maybe when she yells her thought out he can here her?

:)Leona

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Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

I had to say I was shocked at what Emse did to Edward/. it was rape and the floored me.  You have a wild Imagintion.  awesome chapter. 

I hope Edward will forgive his mom.  I think bella will have to forgive her too..  that was aweful.             :)Leona

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Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

SoEdward he only hear part of what she is think..  I wonder why he can't hear all.  what is it that makes on thought heard and the other not... 

:)Leona

Ps.  awesome chapter..  i do think if the guy did not want to suck on the dildo he should not been forced.  that is my opoinon.    

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

It was nice to see Bella Pov and th history behinded her Sub personallty.  But I like Ed pov. 

I hope your get out of your writting blues soon.............  Cheer up the words will come..  and even if you don't get a review your story are very well loved. 

:)Leona

Celebrity Pass by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:


Definition of ‘celebrity pass’: an agreement between a couple (married, dating, same sex or ‘normal’) that when a famous person whom you’d like to have sex with comes onto you…you have permission to indulge your desires…and it isn’t to be considered cheating.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4090 Read Count: 752
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was HOT!  I might not be a sam / ed fan..  But this was fantastic..  true love..  loved it. 

Ps.   I totally a Jasp/ed fan..  sorry fellows.. 

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

Banner made by Moonlit-Wishes

 

This Banner is for the out-take that is now posted here as the final chapter. 

Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Love at First Sight

I totally love your story!  I had it on my favorit for a while.  but just had time to start reading it yestarday. .  it is wonderful.........  So much a emotions. a beautiful story.  your a excellent writer...    :)Leona

 

Ps. I am off to read the last chapter.  and thank you so such a wonderful story. 



Author's Response:

Leona~

Thank you for the wonderful review and the story love and the writers love.  I am currently working on another story that is BDSM based, but with a twist...Bella is the Domme and Edward is the submissive.  It is called A Sub Search.  My sisters 3 was the first story I attempted to write and I loved it so much.  I put a lot into that story, and I have gotten RAVE reviews for it, but it is still one of them stories that goes under the radar and does not get much recongition.  There will be an update to the story postign sometime after the first of June, I wrote a one shot based on their 27th wedding anniversary, for the fandom fights the floods relief.  I am so grateful for your kind words and the review that you left for me.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing.

Kasi~

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue: Thirteen Years, Down the Road

that was a wonderful ending :) Leona

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Nona~ I hope that you enjoy the newest out-take jsut added as well.

Kasi~

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Hi

I like yor introductor chapter it is awesome.  I see you have written a lot of chapters.  So it will be nice to read tell I get to you last One.  I will give you a over all review once I finished reading all your chapter.  So far I think you go mystical mind going..  I can't wait.  Lucky me I don't have too for the 23 more chapter.  Smiles Leona

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91322
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
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Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow.. I started reading this story last night. it took a bit to read the other 2 stories.. plus keep up my other reading.. I love this story. But can Bella every get a break.. Why? do you do this to her. it is so sad.. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapter. until I catch up. Awesome sad happy all the emotions are here.. and a beautiful family. Hope little why. dreams don't come true. I know she was more like bella.. I off, I will be ranking each chapter tell I catch up. thank you so much.. for continuing this squeal. it awesome.. :)Leona

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Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh my god..  Bella is lossing it badly..  She is going to throw them away before they throw her away..  She lost and hurt.  I know it is easy to push everyone away.  But it don't help it just makes everything worse..  Poor Bella

 

awesome story so far excellent!!  :)Leona

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Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was BEAUTIFUL..  I can't believe that I've caught up.  read both your other story's and loved them.   and I love this one too..  It was awesome that the voltora let jas take them all out and let loose and no worries for just a litttle while..  To reconnected and come together has one 4 quarter becaming a whole.  Love it..   Your a excellent writer I can't wait for the next chapter! 

I want to believe it is James but somone has been watching her for a long time.  Maybe it it Laurne..  I 'm almost 60% sure it her..  I always thought she would get back at Bella somhow.  and she would problem know her way around the office and stuff.  mmmm.  Maybe?   Am I close? hahah

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Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow..  Why  this is unbelievable..   how can someone have so many enemys.  or ppl that stock her..   I 'm totally have no words.  Bring her Back...    :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

This was a sad and happy story...  I missed the last 15 or so chapters..  I could not read them..  it hurt to much..  But one day I will read all the stories again.. 

You wrote a wonderful series..    Hugs Leona

Summary:

Edward and Bella have been stepsiblings since they were ten, but how long has Edward felt something different for his Sort-of Sister? EPOV of fanfiction MY Other Brother


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6658 Read Count: 3855
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love ebov..  smiles leona

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312017
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

hi

I 'm reading another arthors story and she had your story has a favor it.  I 'm so glade that I decided to take a look at your story. So far it is very exciting..  tense. . your a very good writer.  I can easily be a fly on the wall watching them.  I have a great imagition.    Can't wait to finish the rest. 

Sorry if I don't write reviews on the rest of the chapters.  But I might sometimes and diffently at the end of the last chapter.  thanks you.  have a great day.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hope you continued to like the story.  i update fairly often.

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Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Hi

That was amazing story so far.  You have hit every emotion and more.  Your a awesome writer..  I felt like I was there.  all the surprize that you put into the story was awesome.   I Can't wait for you next chapter.  Oh Yeah I think it James that is sending Bella the Flowers.  But I have a feeling too it could be Micheal from Forks.  MMMMM   Thank you so much..  have agreat week.  Smiles Leona

Ps.  Wow nice cliffhanger.  I was so glade that I did not have to wait with the other chapter.  it took me 2 days to read your story.  and now I have to wait.   :)  hope feel not to long. 



Author's Response:

the next chapter is almost ready.  Thank you for your kind words!  i appreciate them.

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

Hi  You have shown that family is unconditional thier is a bond that is made and can not be broken.  with this family everyone is intwined one way or another. 

And yeah I know about the bad sheep of the family it can be aweful if lose someone close to you because of it.  Awesome story. 

Have a great night. Smiles Leona

Can't wait for next chapter.  <3



Author's Response:

thanks!  I agree.  Bella now had a larger family than she evern imagined.  I'm glad you like the story.

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

I don't know how I missed this chapter.  awesome thou.   I just love your writing.  :)



Author's Response:

I thank you!  glad you liked it.

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

That is so sad and Sweet I knew Edward would come home to her.  He always seems to find the way to comforted her when she needs him the most.     :) Leona

 

So Lovly.. 



Author's Response:

he 's so perfect...and obviously couldn't ever be real.  *I glare at hubs*  his response:  'what's for dinner?'   *sigh* 

Covet by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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What do you do when you meet the love of your existence a year after you marry the saviour of your soul?  Edward and Jasper thought they were doomed to a life of longing and regret until they meet someone who holds the key to unlock their future.

Vamp Slash

Jasper POV


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14714 Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

Awesome and sad at the same time..  excellently done..  I still want ali to pay for a while, for what she did to thous boys. 

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

This is beauitful.  I have not read the the beginning yet.  me bad.  But I can't wait.    Smiles Leona

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 47928
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes I would be the same way.  and so would Bella,  She lied to him, she should have told him..  that was her fault that this turn out the way.  DON'T EVER LIE..  it will DESTROY A RELATIONSHIP faster then you can turn a arond.      :)Leona

 

Oh I frigging love this story..  awesome.. 

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

There she goes running again..  or maybe.  I will find out in a min.  I only have 4 more to catch up too..  I just want to tell you that this a beautiful story.   :) Leona

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Is this your life..  Because it a beautiful story..   and you have to taken some stuff from life.  I always say a good Auther puts the soul into the story.  Not all it is them but some..  which makes the story AWESOME.. 

And that was mean..  I have a slip and I got hurt..  that not cool..  lol but still funny if it not you.. 

:) Leona

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was Beautiful chapter..  I love Esma..  hehe..  And I do know it like to go to a auction.  If you like it hard not to bid.  hehe.  I spent a lot a money at one..  My family almost did not let me go to another.  hehe. 

Beauitful story..   :)Leona

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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Is she going to ask him to marry her?  Because that the only thing she can do to get him to marry her with out saying I want to marry you.   Awesome story..   But why is Bella so set on now marrying Edward? Does she not want to at least wait a bit.  She can say Edward before we have kids. I want to marry you.  So when your ready ask..  Because this is not right..  She should have done it before he did all this for her..  So wrong.  Maybe I not getting it right.  But she becoming a Bitch.  Her way or the high way..  Not right..  So please let me know if I am off track?  I could read this again and have a different view.  it just how you start reading it.  but Like I said your story is wonderful.  full of happiness andlaughter and sad.  This got to be base on part of your life..    Have a great night Leona

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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was Beautiful and very tearing happiness..   The whole story is wonderful..  I ' m sad it coming to a close..   I will go read your others stories.  your a wonderful writer.   :)Leona

 

ps. please if you every do a squeal you have to let me know.. 

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

I LOVED it.  Edward was funny but protective when he needed to be..  awesome..  :)Leona

 



Author's Response:

he tries hard not to go overboard.  Thanks!

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Sage Advice For The Overworked

love love love it............  and yes parents do love to embasse you.  haha.  it was very cute..  we all need someone to depend on a little..  to keep us grounded..   Jonny Depp.  yummy.  but Edward is yummier.  hahah



Author's Response:

i agree with you on ...everything. lol.  Thanks very much!  check out the sneak peek of the next V&V now posted on the blog.

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Hi I love Edward pov.  I kind skimmed it a little.  I wan't more of how Edward was thinking.  It pretty funny with some But deffently Sad and frusating.  I love it.  and VV.  Your awesome story writer



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Glad you like the stories.

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool

That was so sweet..  He is always protecting her.  even on the other side of the world.  He love her so much. 

:) Leona

Your story is awesome I love both pov.  



Author's Response:

very true.  I can't wait until the two stories are caught up...i'm working hard to get there.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Ugly Truths

Holy shit is right.  That was sad and funny all at the same time.  Your a awesome writer..  I love Edward Pov.  thanks again.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Your reviews always make me feel great!

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Wow.  it is so nice to have Edward pov.   awesome writing..  Have a great night.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

Wow.  Like I said it nice to have Ed pov.  He couldn't even enjoy himself without her.  Except with the other actors.  Because they were in the same vote.   Awww so sweet.  I can't wait to see his reaction on Bella being there.  hahaha.   Have a great day.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

he's kind of pathetic.  Thanks!

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

That I would like to find out..   MMMM..  bad Alex... 

Love your story.  Smiles Leona

Ps.  have a great night. 



Author's Response:

next chapt just posted.  Glad you liked this one.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

That was beauitful.  Can't wait for the next chapter and for the next chapter of V&V..  have a great weekend.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

thanks!  just in case you didn't get the link for the sneak peek..here it is again:  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Prelude To A Proposal

hi

I would love to pimp you out.  But niece and her friends are to young to read from hear. haha.  but she does read fanfiction but only the ones she is allowed.    to bad she would love your story.  soon thou.    I love Edward pov on this.  your fantastic writer.  Thanks.  I can't wait for the next chapter. 

have a great weekend Smiles Leona..



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Here's a link to the sneak peek for the next V&V, enjoy!  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

Wow.  we both new that he  is pathetic with out Bella.  hahah.  God it is awesome to see into his mind.  it is so fasicnating..  I can't wait until the chap that he proposses to Bella. 

They are such cute and sappy couple. 

well have a good night.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.

http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050

any probs, let me know.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

That was Beautiful as always..  :)Leona



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Night Terrors for the Fatigued

Has always I love Edwards pov.  that was some interesting bathroom break.  luck the boys come down.  I would hate to see what would have happened. 

The nightmares he is having is that due to the threats that Bella are getting? You know what you dream some of it comes true..    That would not be good?   Well I can't wait to see his pov for the next chapters..  That going to sting..  okay  Have a great day..    :)Leona



Author's Response:

Edward is kind of a mess right now.  The next two chaps of his POV are really long too.  He had a lot to say I suppose...lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

That was a really funny chapter.  even with the Baby case.  awesome has always.  :)Leona



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

So he did not run away..  he just need time to think..  But he should of said that to Bella.   Awesome has always..  :)Leona



Author's Response:

he'll learn.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Hhaha.  that is funny..    and poor Edward at least he is confiding in Bella.   and so glade you have caught up.  wow.   Don't forget to take time for yourself and RL.    Havea great day :)Leona



Author's Response:

don't worry..i have a full life...gets on my nerves how freakin full it is!  You'd be surprised how much 'down time' I can squeeze in when I want to write.  Thanks!  I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I cried for Edward..  But why did the cop have to be so mean..  I do know their out there.  We have a couple in this town thier pricks.  and that saying it lightly. haha.    Very heartranching chapter.  awesomely done..  

:)Leona



Author's Response:

some are absolute jerks....and you're not allowed to say much back to them.  Glad you liked the chap.  New V&V just posted.  THanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

That really sucked that James can do that to Bella.  But at least he has to walk a fine tight rope or pay dearly..  F**King asshole.  I hope he gets his in the end..   

And I do agree bella is strong she can handle it.   I think she should go on opera.  Good news to counter act the Bad.  Doing you think?

Awesome has always..     :)Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Trying to catch up with my review responses.

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141815
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

This was heart wrenching story!  They so much stuff to work tho,  and the lies..  But they feel deep inlove.. true soulmates.. 

I am soo happy to have read your story...  

hugs  :) Leona

Summary:

It starts with Edward's birthday and the very special present he gets.


Categories: All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27272 Read Count: 5941
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: A Very.....Romantic Vacation

Beautiful.. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

When Edward is reunited with a former partner at a gay marriage rights campaign, will lust turn to love, or are the bittersweet embers of their parting too far gone to be fanned to an inferno? Jasper/Edward, some flashback references to prior relationships.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15202 Read Count: 1369
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was AWESOME!! I can't get the words how your story made me feel..  Love is beyond all emotions.  You can't go against it .  It wins every time.. 

:)Leona

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389633
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Wow. Aweosme!!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Chapter is long but funny and sad at the same time..   your a awesome writer..  can't wait for the next chaptyer.  Night :)

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Awesome!!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Wow..  I love this story..  It is truly amazing........  I love the ending of this chapter..  you leave us wanting.  What a tease. hehehe.     there so in love with each other that there worried to push the other one away.  They are true soulmate even when they did not know it was them in the playroom..  they connected.  And Edward new it was Bella somehow with all the traits that is totally hers.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  i just can imagain Edward freaking out..  Because Bella is stuned.  hopefull not to long.  hahah. 

Have a great night.  :) Leona

I'm sorry that I did not leave you reviews on the first chapters.  But I did rate them.   I will rate and leave a review from now on.  Awesome story..



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

That was excellent chapter..  made me want to cry with all the emotions..   It really sad that Bella doesn't think worth of herself.    But with determention Edward will  show her love and understanding..    :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Wow..  that was a hot and sad chapter..  lots of emotions in this chapter.. 

But  a good questions why is the 2 dogs..  hahahha.  boy Edward is in trouble.  But then why?  you think he hurt her dog..  mmmm.. 

Loved it.. 

<3 Leona :)

Ps.  sorry I did not review last chapter.  i somehow missed it.  and just finish reading it.  it awesome too.. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club

Wow..  that was Hotter then helll....  Loved the chapter.  The heat waves were coming off the page...  My god you guys must of had orgasm writing this Honeymoon scene.. mmmmmmmmmm.. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Hi

I say your chapter was awesome...  But I can't say I 'm happy with Bella..  and Edward is pussy whipped..   It was hot..  but maybe you guys but me in the mind set with edward and found the outting boring..    and really she could not tell Edward was not into it..  MMMMM..  I know he had to love some..  its their honeymoon..  But she was sweet when he got drunk..  I was pissed that she left like she did.. My ex husband did that to me..  like I said he is a ex husband..  

I love kink stuff..  but to fuck in a public bathroom for get it..  I should know I had to clean them.  grouse..  it kind of took the kink out of it.. 

But like I said I love your guys story...    <3 Leona :)

Sorry for not liking Bella to much in this chapter..   

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.

Wow.........  I 'm speechless......  I don't want you guys are been doing but the story is unbelievable fantastic...  I could not stop the emotions I was feeling..  The words were speaking volums.......  they were leaping off the page..  wonderful..  I can not wait to read the next chapter.. 

<3 Leona :)

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Hi

wow.  that was a frigging awesome chapter..  so they did not go to the boat.  and there in Forks.  Not good!   :)Leona



Author's Response:

Hiya Leona!

Aw thank you we're glad you liked it. No it's not good at all. More crazy things coming up soon!

Thank you so much for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Wow.  that was a little bit of a shocker.  after I reread the last chapter I was think of Emsa because all she thought about was Angla.  she did not say anything about Bella.   then reading the first part of this chapter confirmed it more.   Until I read Epov.  oh my god What a BITCH.  AWESOME STORY.  Can't wait.   Bella is going to need a lot of therpy.  And does Angla now Emsa is her mom.  mmmmm.  intersting.  :) Leona



Author's Response:

one answer.....no Angela does not know....Thank you sooo much for reviewing and hope u like Esme part in the next chapter

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

wow I love your story so far.  I actually started to read it today.  it awesome.     Have a great night Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Awe we're so glad you like it! That makes us happy. Hope you continue to like it! :)

Thank you so much for your review.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

Hi

That was awesome!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! We love to hear that. We are so glad you liked it.

Thank you so very much for your reveiw!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Hi

That was @@@@ing awesome... 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

Ok that was fucking sad!!.  But why would you but Edward against Bella!..  What the Hell..  I dont' understand that.  did not see it coming.  Kind of figured Carlisle was died.  But to have Bella and Edward  to suffer when they should be helping each other.   that so cruel..  Well I hope it not a long fight..   But I still loved this chapter..  you guys are great writers.. 

:)Leona

Tears for Carlisle  and Edward and Bellas..



Author's Response:

Sorry,,,,,,but all in good time...there is a method to our madness

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

Well I think it is Edward thet short Erica because they got there on time..  or it was Roslie.  or Angla because she was able to get out to Laurnt hands.  But I really hope Erica did not shot Bella.  even if he wounds her.  that not nice..  there is so many possiblitys.  Wow that is a awesome cliffhanger.  if I say so.   :)Leona

Have a great night.  Awesome story..  and hope your friend heal soon.  sending you my Gruading Angle. 



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much for ur best wishes....and I will ease your worries...Its not Bella who was shot

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

Oh my god..  I thought is was angla. But I have a funny feeling it is Carl.. please not him..  And I think Esme got hold of a gun and fired it at Bella.  MMM..  what do you think can I be close?



Author's Response:

Hmmmmmmmmmmm pretty damn close....but what are close about??? hahah not telling ya...sorry.

 

but i just finsihed the next chap.....so I sent to Ari...a few fixes and then off to the beta we send

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

Wow..  I knew it could be her shoting but to kill her self.  oh god..  What a crowerdly way to leave this earth..    I hope Carlisle will make it. oh my god..  :) Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow

I did like the chapter.  I 'm sad.  and want to kick both their asses..  But your the writer.  See were you take this.  So fucking sad..  :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

I 'm susposed be sleeping..  But now I can't, well not yet. I need to com down.  You guys for got to tell me to get my tissue box ready.  That was so sad...     I 'm glad he open up his heart again..  :)Leona

 

You guys ROCK!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home

That was sad, happy, funny, Sexy, and so on. It was a beautiful chapter.
I agree with Bella they were both wrong in some way. But their love is strong. I do agree in fate. their is good and bad. But what is ment to be will be.. it just when You guys have done a beautiful job on the story..
:)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer

that was very romanic..  But what a cliff hanger..  We all know she'll say yes..  I hope..  Your not that mean..  But to make us wait is mean of enough..  haha. 

I love this chapter..  He would move mountain for Bella.  she is one luck women to have someone that love her with all is heart and soul.. 

:)Leona

Summary:

You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!!  Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA

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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!

Ari

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love

Hi You guys are wonderful writers..  I still can't stop crying..  It was really hard to read to the end..  I loved your story.  I don't think I could read it again.  But maybe someday.  Awesome.. 

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

this story is amazing..  I 've no words..  We all no preg can screww with women heads.  The most loving person can be a bitch.  the sad thing is sometimes they don't come out of it.   Now for Carlisle if he dies it would be sad..  but he caused most of the agust.     and what he did to Bella was unforgivable.    I can't wait to see what happens..  :)Leona

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

That was so beautiful...  I had to cry a little..  it was amazing.. 

sad it almost done.. 

I can't wait for your next story..  a funny story would be awesome!



Author's Response:

i have three stories in the work right now! two are going to be colaberation. one is up under the penname jessand tat. the two other stories will be under jess2002. one will have some funniness in it! thanks for the review

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

My heart actualy goes out to both of them..    You he was wrong!  But I don't know you..  but everone I know has accused their mate or husband or wife of cheat at least once.  Bella is stubborn.  and so he Edward.  but he is trying..  When will you give them a break..    Love your story and this chapter was sad..   I know it a story..  But I just want to hug them both..   Your awesome writer.  :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow..  You know you can understand Edward a little.  it is who he is, when he lost control he was punished.  but gain lots from it.   That is TUFF LOVE. 

I listen to may father and is a little scaried of him.  But he give me everthing I needed.  He love me.  and he don't want to see me suffer.  So yes I can understand.  Thank god my father doesn't believe in spanking. hahah.    awesome//  :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was actual BEAUTIFUL!  She stood up when she was right!.  which she was on this case..  I respect that.  the love making was wonderful.  and yes if you can hold out you orgasm it is more powerful and wonderful..  she learn a good lesson..  Man does he have control on his orgasms......  wow..  I can't wait to find out about carlisle..  It would be awesome if Edward can take control of his life and not lose everything..  that would be the best.  spanking is fun and she does need to grow up..  Love conquer all.. 

:)Leona

Ps.  it was hard to read this chapter with everything squished together.  Just want to let you know.. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

The sad thing was she was.....  She never let him deal with her.. Bella jump! then was rude.  Edward is never rude.  Poor Bella so stubborn!.  I feel sorry for both of them.    and that was a aweful of you to leave a cliffhanger like that.  Talk about punishment. hahaha. 

:) Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow.  I would love to do what Carlisle has a hold on his boys.  I know that some Father run the head of the family.  But this is wrong.   It will be interesting  and wonderful for Edward and Bella make it.  I hope all works out.    awesome chapter.  Smiles Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow.  awesome writing..  I 'm going to enjoy this story I can see.  I know you have up to 17 chap now.  So please I will say a simple word and give you a rating.  and once I have caught up I will review.  Smiles Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow! 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I 'm between laughing and really enjoying your story.  it awesome.  Men love when you tell them that they are your daddy.  Fantasy.  yup..  Love it. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

She is not be looked after but also spoiled bratt.  Edward pays people help him.  that is there job.  i can't wait to see who wins.  hahah

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You know it don't creep me out.  I have lots of friends who are cogars with young men or men with young girls friends.  But I have a friend that call her husband daddy all the time and their the same age.  I guess its how you look at.  If Bella was young I would not like it.  but she is of age.   and who are we to tell someone not to love someone of their age.  it is just wrong.  everyone has the right for love or happiness is all I 'm saying.   Smiles Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow.  very interesting how the dynamics is going on here. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Your a good writer.   I going to have to look to see if you have other storys for later. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow..

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

A+

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

A+

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ochy..  he liked but not to much.  hahah

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

A+ that is Bella she did not know how guys were attacted to her.  you have her chacter down pat.  aweosme..  I hope Edward does say sorry for calling her a slut.  that mean.  But someway he will but after her spanking.  ochy.  Maybe? if your nice in your story ahaha.  I will see in a min. 

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yes Bella has to face her fears.  But that easy said then doen.  I hope Ang and Irena don't get in trouble.  Bella need to talk to Edward more ask him questions.  He will answear if she asks.  But I quess that is the flaws There Charters are awesome..  You got them pretty good..  A*

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That does not look good!