Reviews by paula2838bu
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

Thanks..I think that was a perfect ending for this story...looking forward to the outtakes as well as any new ideas for stories that you may have.  Again...congratulations on a job well done!



Author's Response:

thank you very much, i enjoyed this epi too

outtake one done and with beta, outtake two, actually in the middle of writing it right now

more stories to come for sure!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thank you for the update...I love this story and am so glad that you are going to finish it.  Good writing needs an ending and you certainly have proven that you can write a good love story.  Hope to read more of your thoughts and continue a happy holiday and new year



Author's Response:

so glad you enjoyed it, yep, last chapter just came back from the beta and i'm finishing up the epi

i appreciate the kinds words

i love love

happy holidays and new year to you too!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Please write more of their "Lucy and Ethel" moments.  They are hilarious and keep the pace of the story from being too serious.  You are very good at writing humor..thanks for a really good story and great characters.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Even after reading this the second time around I found the humor so amazing that I laughed until I was crying.  The way that you portray the antics that Bella and Alice get into  remind me of Lucy and Ethel from I Love Lucy.  Thank you for creating such interesting characters.  Love the story.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow that was some chapter! Thank you for not leaving us hanging...I do hate cliff hangers especially when it involves Edward.  I have said it before but I love this story and the way you characterize Bella and Edward....great job and good writing.  Also thanks for the pictures they are beautiful.



Author's Response:

thank you so much, the photos took hours to upload tonight!  And hours to research and find!  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Love this story and hope you are feeling better...I am so afraid that the end of this remarkable story is coming and I don't want to leave these two characters that I have grown to love.  Can you give us an idea of how much more of their story you are going to tell...I don't want it to end!  Happy Easter to you as well and thanks again for a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Hey Paula, Don't be afraid, there is so much more of their lives to tell still. We have babies to come and career  moves to make and lots more loving to come.  My original story has 69/70 chapters but i recon we will have a few (many) more than that!

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Wow! That was an amazing chapter!!!! I love when you write about all Alice's antic's.  I laughed until I cried during the hospital brawl.  This family is wonderful.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Thanks for a great story.



Author's Response:

thank you so much :)

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Thanks for the repost...it was so satisfying and much more up to your usual standards!  Love the mood swings...as the mother of twins I can remember that feeling of disbelief when the doctor told us that we were having twins and not remembering much else after!  As usual this chapter did not disappoint. Love this family.



Author's Response:

Hey Paula, Thanks so much for the review and your comments.  I may need your help in the later months - I never had twins and can only imagine what it must be like.

Love,

Michele

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

What can I say other than I loved it.  When she stood up to Lauren and the gang I just wanted to cheer..and don't even get me started on the car!  Hilarious  !!!  Brian and Anderson make a great team and extra touch of whimsey.  Please just keep the story going...I agree with another reviewer that this should be in print.  It is one of my absolute favorite stories that I can't wait to see updated.  Thanks for writing such a great story with amazing characters.  Their growth has been a joy to watch (read) develop

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

As always you don't disappoint..the birth should be interesting especially if the whole family gets in on the action.  Remember Alice's delivery sooooo funny.  Thanks again for a great story.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow the last two chapters really overwhemed me with incredible writing and ideals that were a little to "real life".  Sometimes I think that  lines are blurred between real life and fantasy when reading fanfiction, especially stories that are "special".  That's what happened to me last week and it bothered me thinking about Edward's problem of honesty.  Glad that a week later and a well written chapter puts some perspective on their realationship.  Thanks for the reality check and another GREAT chapter. I do miss the pictures but I love your writing style...you make everything so understandable and clear. 

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

THAT'S WONDERFUL NEWS!!!I was almost afraid to get to the end of this chapter as I thought that might end it...and you just made my day  by continuing the saga.  Thank you and I am sure I am speaking for all your  readers.  I am not sure that I will ever be done with this  family, but I do miss the interaction of Bella and Alice.  The trouble that they get in to is so funny....the off springs can take over and heaven hellp anyone that wants to date the  girls!!LOL  Thank you again for a wondeful story, amazing characters, and interesting plots.  

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Wow what a great chapter can't wait for the Academy Awards.  Thank you for not ending it yet...as much as I am looking forward to the next chapter or sequel, I am not ready to give these great characters up.  Thank you and have a great holiday if you celebrate if not Cheers to you and your family.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Hugs, love, kisses and snuggles right back at you.  Thanks for such a satisfying ending to this great story.  I waited for the longest time to read this knowing that it was tlhe end ....this is one of those stories that really touched me.  Promise if you decide to publish this that you will give us a heads up!  Have a great holiday and can't wait for your next story and the continuation of this one. Fondly....Paula

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

I have followed their journey throughout this story and I love it!  Your characters are real and real life sometimes isn't pretty.  Please keep updating as I can't wait for the next installment.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123454
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

This story was so well written and I loved it.  I've read it now three times and each time the ending is beyond expectations.  Never did I see their forever going this route.  In someways it reminded me of the Notebook...I don't know why except possibly the amount of tissues that were needed both during and after reading it.  Both characters, especially Bella were exceptional ....their constant love,strength, and commitment were what we all dream about.  Sorry to see it end, but am looking forward to your next story. 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389609
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Wow!!!!!!That was some hot chapter.....Please update soon 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129740
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

As always I'm in awe of your use of descriptive words...what you wrote should have been really difficult for the reader to understand, but I can close my eyes and see it all clearly!  I also have noticed that you seemn to be humanizing Edward just a bit...am I wrong?  I love the purr and smirk.. his trademark.  Thank you for the quick update...this story has been intriguing from the start...great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hmmmm, I dunno, Vampires in this story show extreme affection and care for mates, they joke and play and tease their mates,though what edward is doing is a bit lowkey to what he could be. *Winks* I know in the princes lock discussion, we wanted a bit of  vulnerability, but rest easily, that convo was just that. A convo, has no part in the original story line. He won't be growing a random pussy lmfao My moms said the same thing when I let her read. You two have a very captive eye!  Awwwww thank you honey bunz for reviewing. 

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Wow...what else is there to say?  I am in awe of you both writing this on so little rest..good grief that was an amazing description of a vampire changing into something really scary!!! Now, on to the good stuff...thanks for the picture ..somehow I don't think that is whatt Emmet changed into..LOL but thanks 



Author's Response:

I would have to find a goo dpic of what emmett would look like after a change.  They are still a humaniod looking species,  but the skin is grey,  the eyes are catlike and they are much taller with longer arms and legs. But shoulders, chest, stomach, bootay and man loins are still incredibly hot lmao *winks*

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Great job as always...lots going on but somehow (   shaking my head in wonder) you make this clear??????????  I almost feel sorry for Edward being thrust in so many different directions hee hee...he really does deserve it though.  As always can't wait for more..interesting now that the humans can use garlic to fight off the vampires. REALLY!!!! So funny. almost too traditional ..any rate loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much =) Yeah, we really like the idea of the garlic water, it keeps it a bit traditional.

 

Thanks for reading and commenting,

 

~Jells

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Question....did I miss something???? Is it possible for Edward to turn Bella into a vampire so that he can have a "proper mate" or is that against the rules... just curious as to why this hasn't been discussed..or more than likely I have just missed it.  Thanks  Paula



Author's Response:

You know, it's actually mentioned a lot. I think in one of the early chapters Edward even kills a vampire because of it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great chapter...please don't make us wait too long for an update!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Next chapter is DONE and is currently being Beta'd :)

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thanks for the update, and glad to hear about all the exciting things going on in your life!  This is one of my favorite stories and I am so glad to hear that your are going to finish it.  If the rest of the story is half as good and interesting as this chapter was it will definitely be worth the wait. Can't wait for this cliffy to be resolved! Good job and keep those updates coming......



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wow! You really know how to keep your story exciting without giving to much  of the plot away.  The depth that you go into to create flawed but redeemable characters is interesting.  I hope that you will reveal what Edward is hiding and why do I think that there is a lot more going on with Bella that meets the eye.  Man the tension between the two of them is HOT!  Please update soon....love the story.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I am really enjoying your story and for the life of me I can't figure out what is causing Edward's behavior!!!!Call me dense, but you have written this story so well that I am totally hooked without really understanding what Edward's problem is.  The amazing thing is that you have beautifully weaved a story together that even though things aren't clear to me,  I can't stop reading.  Good job....but please give us something that will explain Edward's actions...and what's up with Josie?????  Again great story and please update soon!

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Regrets & Decisions

Powerful chapter...this gives good insight as to why teens don't think they have any other choice than to kill themselves.  Your heart really breaks for both of these characters..an anxious to see what you have planned for these two in the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That is what I was looking to do, make it powerful and judging from the reviews I did that. 

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chasing Cars

Wow that was a powerful update...Poor Edward, hopefully things will be better soon for both he and Bella.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it was a hard one to write, but seems to have hit to spot with readers!

 

Preview

Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together.  Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.

Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.

Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.

“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Revelations

Wow pretty amazing chapter!  Well done...you put so much information  into that chapter, and yet it was so clearly written and easy to understand.  Great job..



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Thanks for your kind words, it was a pretty action packed chapter and I'm glad that you feel it worked.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Revisiting the Past

Thanks for the update..this story is an interesting diversion from the usual Edward meets Bella ... they fall in love ..etc.. really curious as to what direction you are going to go with this.  Welcome back 

Summary:

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Jasper Whitlock spent his high school years being tormented by Edward Cullen. When their paths cross again years later, could the boy he once hated become the man he loves? Slash, Mature themes.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 213326 Read Count: 24245
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love this story and am so glad that you decided to cotinue their tale.  It's so interesting how you have weaved their various backgrounds into a very intriguing story.  An anxious for this to continue and hopefully get their happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I love this story and have every intent granting these boys a happy ending. They've come so far.

Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48919
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good job with the story...glad you decided to keep going.  Of course their sire has to be James, but you will probably surprise me with someone totally different. Anyway, love the story.

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 144428
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Dreams and Moving

Wow..where have you been all this time?...I just saw this story yesterday and started reading...it was so good I went to your profile to see what else you had written...Man ALL of your stories look so good that I can't wait to read them.  I just don't remember seeing them before and I am here often....The good thing is that I have found you and your stories! Just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed reading your work.

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Pizza and Beer

Really love the character development that you are creating....story is really good and of course your Edward is awsome.   Can't wait to read more but must stop as I'm going to see Snow White and the Huntsman. 

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Drugs and Death

Good start to your story...I love ice skating and the world that it represents.  Can't wait to read about his audition. 

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter..thanks for the update

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Your story is so good and quite thought provoking....sadly, I'm afraid that this type of sex slavery is all too common.  Thank you for bringing this terrible tragedy to our attention..as always can't wait for updates



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! yes, while this is completely fiction, I see real accounts of horrific abuse in the news every day...

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I am so sorry to hear that someone tried to steal your incredible story!  That being said I am so glad that you are still going to continue teiing this amazing story about Edward and Wisp.  I am being selfish I know for wanting you to update quickly,  but you are writing a story that unfortunately needs to be told.  I knew that human slavery existed, but NEVER anything like this. Hopefully, your story will continue to open people's eyes to this atrocity.  Thank you again for telling it. 

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Get chapter..so well written!  Please let that awful woman be gone forever!!!!!!As always I can't wait for your updates.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324431
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

Love the story...I especially love the pictures...they add so much and you make it so easy as they are on each  page.  Can't wait to read more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113786
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a wonderful surprise to see that you started writing about some of my favorites again!  I'm glad that you put in the disclaimer that there will be no cheating as these two people went through so much in the first story....I know that you have to have some drama, but I love these two...my they have been busy...seven kids!!!! Thanks for the pictures..with so many new faces I have to keep referring to the family groupings to remember who they are and  who they belong to. Have a Happy New Year...



Author's Response:

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

As always you don't disappoint...love this family!  Hope your thumb is better so you can keep the updates coming.