Wow! It's great that they are together while still apart. What a set up. 

Happy birthday. I'm sure I missed it but anyway. 

I was looking thru a friends favorites looking for a new story to obsess over, oops I mean read. So I came across your story and if this chapter is anything to go by I know I am going to love it. I love how you have them "talking" to us. It is a fun writing style that really grips you.

Your Bella and Edward are very interesting and I can't wait to see where it is going to go from here. They are both in love with each other and neither one of them has any idea. I love sneaky Alice....

Edward sooo safe worded. It didn't feel right so there is no way he would continue...Right?

I really liked heraing from not only Edward, but crazy bitch Tanya and mama Esme as well.

Yeah it's starting.... like I said before best foreplay ever.

Wow! I never knew phone sex could be that good.

I really like how you summed up what Bella felt about what happened in the last chapter. A lot of times you get too much of the same thing, but you made it so seemless that it was great.

I love how playful but strick Edward is being with her. I am hoping okay maybe begging would be a better word that the next chapter is the start of the test scene.

Great chapter! So big bad Dom Edward seems to be a little afraid of the teeny tiny virgin sub Bella. Interestingm 

This was my favorite and I was really glad that you won. (Even if you did beat me.... lol)

I didn't realize that you had started to continue it, but I'm really glad to see you have. So it looks like I have a little catching up to do.

Great Story.

Denise

They had a great weekend, and I really hope that there is nothing in the contract that will cause Edward not to want to be her weekend sub....

Awwwwwwww.

Tanya is such a bitch, but at least now they wil not have to deal with her. I am really glad that Maxine and Bella seem to be so happy with Edward.

I think that Bella deserved that spanking. And truthfully I think she deserves another one.......

It's like a little trial weekend....

Bella's ass is going to be very sore by the end of the weekend......

I am really enjoying this story. It is very different. I like that Bella is having more girl time.

OHHH! I think a 24/7 daddy time would be interesting....

Fuck! Sorry but there was no other word I could use to describe this chapter. I hope Esme didn't push her. Okay logically I know she didn't. Edward would have her in jail for a long time if that had been the case. But I can see Bella turning away from her and Esme grabbing her arm to stop her only for Bella to lose her footing and falling. God this is so sad. 

As bad as Bella's condition is at least they are together. Edward is just going to need a very tough skin to get through the next few weeks to months. Especially if Bella never gets the use of her legs back. But I'm taking it as a good sign that Bella hasn't kicked Edward out of the room yet. But I'm sure that's coming at some point. Hopefully Edwards won't listen though. 

I love this story. Even if it tears my heart out. Lol

They need to go talk to someone. They pushed everything away for years, now it's time to get everything out in the open. 

I hope she makes it. Because if she doesn't Edward isn't going to be able to go on. 

I loved the way Edward proposed. It was sweet in a off the wall kind of way. 

The poor things losing a baby is the hardest thing in the world. I lost my first baby at 13 weeks, I was lost for so long. But 2 year later I got pregnant again and now have a beautiful 9 year old. 

Well they had a amazing honeymoon. I hope that Bella can fight her way out of the coma with Edwards help. 

Oh shit! I didn't think that Carlisle and Esme could get any worse. I wonder if it was really their fault or if that is just how Edward is seeing the situation. 

I hope your daughter is doing better. There is nothing worse then your baby being sick. 

Knowing that something happens to the baby I don't know if I'm happy or sad. I'm happy because of course you are when someone's having a baby. But I can't help feeling the overwhelming sadness that the baby isn't going to grow up or even get to live at all. In my mind I am thinking that Esme and Carlisle somehow cause a late miscarriage. But you haven't revealed that yet so well see. 

A question though it isn't still 4 years in the past at this point right? If I'm thinking right it should be closer to 2 years in Tge past? Sorry I'm a little confused. 

Oh God. I have a horrible sinus infection so crying my eyes out is a very bad thing. Oh this chapter had me crying like a baby. 

See getting up and moving was what she really needed. Now that the swelling is going down and her body is healing maybe she can start to heal her mind as well. Hopefully she will start letting the others in. 

Okay this may be a really weird question and I don't know if it's something you even thought about but did they preserve Bella's eggs? A friend of mine was in a horrible car accident when we were in our early 20's. There was so much damage to her hips, pelvic area and stomach that they ended up having to do a hysterectomy. But the doctors preserved her overlies then removed her eggs to be frozen. 3 years ago her sister become her serigate and she is now the proud mother of twin boys. Her sister in law has offered to carry for them again if they would like to try for another baby. I was just wondering because these types of things happen all the time. And Bella seems to have so many people that love her and I'm sure would be willing to give Bella and Edward that gift. 

It is so good to see that they are finally talking. They have so much pain that its nice that they are starting to really be there for one another. And Evan coming that is going to be hard. 

I wouldn't mind seeing their faces either. 

I truly love this story. They have been through so much and the thing that sticks with me is that they never seperated. I think that is the most telling thing about the two of them. It would of been so much easier for them to just walk away. But they stayed. 

There is nothing that is going to heal Bella faster then those kids. 

Oh how perfect. I'm so glad that they were able to really work though everything and they were given Evan. It's great that they feel complete now. I still feel a little bad that they were not given the opportunity to raise a baby. While it's horrible that a family had to die and that Carlisle was given such a light sentence I'm glad that in the end they got what they deserved. 

I'm really going to miss this story. 

I really liked it. I have never read anything quite like it and I a excited to see where you are going with it. I have sooo many questions, Did the Cullens find a way to be human again? Was it only Edward or are all the Cullens going through with it? DOes Edward still have his mind reading ability, if Alice and Jasper are now human as well do they still have their powers.  

Oh the possibilities..... Can't wait for more, please continue it.

Yeah Emmett's back. I wo dee who he brought with him. 

Mike is a real jerk. This sounds like fun...

The guys are really liking the fact that they have a girl on the team to get advice from. 

I really like how this started. I can see so many different things happening here.

God he's a mess. I sort of feel bad for him, only sort of. At least it seems like Mac knows he loves her. 

Wow. Bella's had a hard life and it's about to get harder from what I've read. Poor thing. 

3 days huh. Well truthfully I expected as much. I wonder if Edward really called Esme or was she just covering for him?

Well thank god he has finally seen reason. Hopefully. Bella will be able to forgive him in time. 

Thank God! I'm really glad that Bella is letting him in. Because as strong as Mac is she was really suffering. Having to chose Bella over her father couldn't of been easy on her. But she was so afraid for Bella that she was willing to give up her happiness with her dad. That was heartbreaking. 

Even after 2 years she is still oobsessed with piercing his peen. Lol 

That was a really sweet ending. Seeing Edward graduate. 

I'm glad that you were honest about what happens when you abuse drugs. So many stories make light of it. They make it look like nothing but fun. 

I'm glad that Bella allowed Edward to help her. When they both get over their pasts I'm sure they will make a great team. 

Yeah. A kiss is still a kiss right. 

I hope that it isn't going to always be one step forward two steps back. 

While they are all saying that Bella's reactions aren't normal. I find them perfectly normal for her personality. Maybe it's because of my messed up past but who knows. 

I'm glad that Edward talked with Esme. As hard as it was I'm glad that it happened now. 

Im so glad that she was alone and not with some asshole who Was hurting her. She hurts herself enough. As horrible as it sounds I think Bella needs a inpatient program like what Edward had. 

I was wondering when Esme would meet Bella and the group. 

It will be nice for them to get away and have a little fun. 

I'm glad that Edward spoke up about Bella's addiction exchange. As much as it pained him to let up on the sex I'm sure.