Reviews by fleur50
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625046
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Aïe!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

oh! lala! quelle histoire!

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Je n'avais jamais vu mes fleurs de cette façon!

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Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Je suis si triste pour Bella...

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Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Tout un plaisir que de pouvoir lire cette histoire.

Fleur, Montréal, Québec

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Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

wow!

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

J'adore

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Cette histoire est extraordinaire.   Elle était si passionnante que j'ai lu avec l'aide du traducteur google.

 

Je suis fière d'être la bêta sur la traduction française, c'est un honneur!

Summary:

Bella and Alice, excited from reading DefinatelyStaying’s delicious lemony fanfics, tease each other over a web cam. What happens when Jasper comes to investigate the noises? collaboration with Definently Staying

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Alice, Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2246 Read Count: 1990
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2010
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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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The Cave by TheSpoiltOne Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Alice stumbles into a cave with her rescuer, afterward s some interesting circumstances come out of it. Edward and Alice One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3222 Read Count: 498
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2010
Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

c'est dommage qu'il n'y ait pas une suite...

 

Je ne comprends pas qu'il n'y ait pas plus de review, c'est bon!

 

Fleur50

Montréal, Québec

Bella's Gift by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Bella only wants one thing for her birthday. She has always been the strong one. She’s been dreaming of a tall, dark & handsome man who can take charge. Could he be real or is he only a dream?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5269 Read Count: 2734
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2010
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Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

génial! Quel début prometteur!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

;-)

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aïe!

 

Google Translate. French.  Montréal, québec

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

lol

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

;-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oups!

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

:o)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

:o)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

:o)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

:-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

;-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

;-)

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow!

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow!

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow!

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

horror...... lol

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2960
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

génial

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Family Time

Je lis avec mon IPad... mais pour écrire, ce n'est pas parfait...

 

 

Quand j'ai besoin, j'envoie des textes de mon IPad à mon portable par l'entremise de hotmail, je suppose que c'est ce que vous avez fait.  

 

 

Je suis hyper contente d'avoir un nouveau chapitre.  Par contre, une fois le texte traduit par Google Translate, le texte est un immense paragraphe, c'est très dure à lire.  Pour le prochain chapitre, pourriez-vous laisser plus d'interligne entre chaque paragraphe, svp.



Author's Response:

Je suis heureux que vous appréciez l'histoire.

Je vais essayer de mettre de meilleurs espaces po Parfois, j'ai du mal à couper et coller sur le téléchargement d'afficher l'histoire et ne pas avoir un ordinateur de mon propre chef, là n'est pas aider.

Merci pour la lecture.

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Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

Je lis sur mon IPad et ce n'est pas possible de laisser une review sur TWCS.  Je suis bien heureuse de lire la suite, votre histoire est tellement bonne. Même en lisant avec Google Translate, lol.

Montréal, Québec, Canada

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow!

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

episode

episode

episode


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77102
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
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Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Tilde

wow

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Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Serenade

Magnifique histoire!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Hyphen

Superbe!



Author's Response:

:)

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Rest

Merci vos betas qui me permettent de lire sans difficultes avec Google Translate.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy that you can use Google to translate my story to read! xx

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Hemidemisemiquaver

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Demisemiquaver

wow!

 

Belladona....?????



Author's Response:

Belladonna was also taken down from fanfiction sites! It was a wonderful vampire fic. 

 

Love BBxx

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Brevis

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Bracket

Superbe!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Semibreve

Magnifique!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Quaver

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Barline

:0)

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Sharp

:o)

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Octave Clef

le site que vous avez donne est introuvable, j<aurais bien aime lire.  

 

Where  Neverending_Math_Equation???



Author's Response:

The Neverending Math Equation is no longer online. If I can find a copy, I will let you know! It was brilliant! 

Love BBxx

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Alla Breve

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Breve

GOOGLE TRANSLATE. FRENCH.

 

MONTREAL, QUEBEC

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Minim

WOW

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Crotchet

Magnifique

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Brace

wow

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Stave

Superbe!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Treble-clef

WOW!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Semiquaver

WOW!

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Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Canon

svp, ne vous déranger pas à m'envoyer des copie pdf, c'est vraiment trop long à lire avec Google Translate, il faut que ce soit en ligne... 

 

J'aurais vraiment aimé lire l'histoire de vampire de Belladonna. Celle que vous parlez.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

wow!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

J'ai l'impression que Tony est peut-être le Prince Edward (Anthony).  Ce serait super!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

J'espère, j'espère que Edward est Tony!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

Votre fic est si intéressante que je la lis avec un traducteur google.  Je suis nulle en anglais.  J'espère qu'un jour elle soit traduite en français.



Author's Response:

J'ai utilisé Google Translator pour répondre en français. Je suis si contente que vous appréciez l'histoire, et je vous remercie de passer par la peine de traduire les chapitres que vous puissiez les lire. Il me fait du bien que vous pensez que cette histoire vaut la peine. J'espère que vous apprécierez le reste de l'histoire, et bon travail à calculer les Tony / Edward corrélation si tôt!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

ça se confirme, edward est tony...wow

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

super

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

bye, je suis pressée de lire la suite

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

vivement la suite

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

une chance que j'avais une bonne réserve de glaçons!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

quelle belle fic!

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

J'ai hâte de lire la suite.

Je me présente...

Je suis une jeune grand-maman de 48 ans. J'ai deux filles de 25 et 21 ans. Une petite fille de 4 mois. Mon aîné est infirmière aux soins intensifs en cardio, et celle de 21 ans étudiante à l'université en génie.

Je suis peintre et photographe-amateur et adore les fics de twilight, je suis bêta pour la traduction française de "The perfect wife".  J'habite dans la banlieue de Montréal, Québec.

Je lis avec l'aide d'un traducteur, je suis excellente en français mais pas bonne en anglais.  C'est la raison pour laquelle j'écris la review en français!

J'aimerais être averti un jour si votre fic est traduite en français, je la relierai avec grand plaisir.

Fleur



Author's Response:

Vous devez être si fiers de vos filles. Je n'ai pas eu d'offres de traduire une de mes histoires en français, bien que ma très longue fic Femme Docs et Kevlar Knights était traduit en allemand.Autant que je sache, seuls deux chapitres ont été traduits though.

Quoi qu'il en soit, je vous remercie beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de lire et de traiter les traduire. J'espère vous voir autour de plus!

Merci encore!

Jen

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Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

wow, vivement la suite

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

wow!

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

génial!

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

J'adore

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

wow!

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

génial!

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

dommage!

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Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

wow! un bébé

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Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

génial

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

génial

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

wow!

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

merci, merci pour la chronologie.

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

génial!

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Nathaniel & Elizabeth

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

génial!

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

Wow!

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Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

La fin est tellement touchante... merci, merci

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Superbe! Impressionnant! Délicieusement tordue!

 

Encore des rebondissements jusqu'à la fin. Vous m'avez fait rire... et pleurer.

 

merci pour le petit résumé au début.

 

Youppi! Le chapitre au complet a été traduit par Google Translate, je ne comprends pas, vous dites que le chapitre a plus de trente-six mille mots, est-ce une erreur?  Ma nouvelle version doit traduire à peu près vingt-trois mille mots...  Je suis contente d'avoir pu lire la fin.  Je croyais que ce n'était pas possible, vu le nombre de mots indiqués.

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Départ canon, j'adore.  Je lis avec le traducteur google.  Avez-vous une traduction française.  Je ne suis pas très bonne en anglais.

 

Je lirai lorsque j'aurai du temps...  quand je lirai, vous remarquerai... je laisse une petite trace en français, à chaque chapitre.

 

Fleur50,

Montréal, Québec 


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Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Merci pour le court résumé au début du chapitre.  Franchement j'avais peur de lire le chapitre 79 car je savais qu'il me manquerait la fin...

 

J'ai attendu pour avoir une meilleure version de Google Translate, lol, mais il me manque quand même une partie, Fuck!

 

J'ai lu jusqu'au début de la fête d'Halloween.  Espérons que vous aurez la gentillesse de faire un court résumé au prochain chapitre. 

 

Vous êtes un merveilleux auteur, mais Please la prochaine histoire, ne jamais dépasser 20,000 mots dans un chapitre, c'est déjà énorme!

 

C'est le seul reproche que je pourrais faire à votre histoire! LOL, elle est passionnante!

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

J'ai relu le chapitre 76 pour me remettre dans l'histoire, j'aime beaucoup, même à la relecture!

 

J'ai bien aimé que ce chapitre soit moins long! Je sais que les prochains chapitres seront plus longs, donc il me manquera la fin de chaque chapitre... dommage...

 

Heureusement que google translate s'est amélioré.  Au moins jusqu'à 20,000 mots maintenant, il ne manquera que la fin du chapitre. 

 

Je voudrais vous dire comment la traduction française est une vraie perle, vous avez une sacré bonne traductrice à votre service!  Ce serait bien si vous annonciez sur votre site qu'il y a une traduction française avec l'adresse.  Cela ne vous enlèverait rien car ceux qui lisent déjà en anglais continueront à lire car nous voulons avoir la suite, lol!  Mais c'est un plaisir de lire dans notre langue maternelle et aide à la compréhension.

Extremities One shot by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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My winning entry in the Auto Erotica Challenge. Awarded 'Best Handling'. 

Bella wanted to be one of the many girls that Edward pleasured in his Volvo. What happens when that car is now hers, and she makes the first move?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4867 Read Count: 921
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Extremities

WOW



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! xx

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

French... Google Translate... merci pour les explications, je ne comprenais pas.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

très difficile à lire... il n'y a pas de paragraphe!

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Un POV d'Edward, quelle bonne idée!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Passionnant!

Fleur

Montréal, Québec, Canada



Author's Response:

Vous remercier autant de pour la lecture !

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Merveilleux!

Je lis avec un traducteur anglais/français et je suis nulle en anglais.

Désolé, vos review sont en français!



Author's Response:

J'ai appris du français à l'école et mon mari est de Canada une petite ville dans nouveau brunswick mais j'utilise toujours un traducteur

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

c'est si triste!