Reviews by adirondackmommi
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

No more chapters, really....I, I, I, need some.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995715
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

*Big Smile* Loved this chapter !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds promising.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

My, my....she has alot of self control.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Best chapter so far....yummo

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Perfectly written

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

No spanking when impaired....I'm glad you made that clear at the begining. No discipline should be given when the giver is not in complete control, or whe the receiver is incapacitated in any way.  Nice chapter

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

CATFIGHT !!!!!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

still no photos

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

FS


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very Nice so far ! Can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

There are so many things that i'm loving about this story

- Bella has a backbone

- Jasper isn't a control freak

_ You & Your Beta have given this a nice flow without the distraction of constant grammar errors

Great Job !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loving this Jasper, he is so damn yummy !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Smart of Bella to leave a scent trail for Jasper to follow - I was wondering if Peter's intuition was going to help him out here, or if he would here from Alice....glad to see it was Peter.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

First Kiss Love !!!!

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella needs to see Alice.......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Very Nice

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

As they say, All good things must come to an end.....still, sad to see it end. Wonderful story. Love the Badass Jasper !

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420731
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Love Game

Oh I think I'm going to like this one.....

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Jenna's

I'm thinking horny Bella has a "Baby on Board".

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 26: The Wedding

Their vows brought tears to my eyes

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: The blue box blues

Jake..... what trouble are you going to cause?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Mac N Cheese

Now that's gonna leave a bruise....what is Edward going to say?  I am so glad I found this story, can't wait to see where you take it.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Picking up the pieces

And what a bummer that neither one of them has an apartment they can go back to.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Thanksgiving

I have decided that you either work in the medical field or have done an extensive amount of research. I'm leaning towards working in the field as research does not usually produce the result you have achieved. I am loving this story and appreciate the accuracy you portray in  hospital/medical refrences. I would much rather see those left out than done wrong, and you have done a great job. Loving this story !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Take a bullet for you

Nice use of the Twilight quote....

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Run this town

Wow....better than a horny Edward ? Can I have a horny Edward and Carlisle? Going once, going twice? Awwweee, I bet we could go more than that......

 

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I just wanted to take a moment and let you know how much I am enjoying this story, I would normally review every chapter and just rattle off whatever pops into my head....but for some reason everytime I review the font size resets and I get bounced back to the first chapter, then I have to confirm my age again and reset everything.....it is really annoying. So just know that I am loving it, and so glad I found it.  I can't wait till Edward gets his handson James....I know it's coming.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What is up Leah's ass?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sounding good so far..... I'm hooked.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the flow of your writing, it seems very natural and easy to read. You have me hooked already.



Author's Response:

Thank you .. I hope it remains that way for you and you continue to enjoy it ....lml

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of my all time favorites, I hope to see it completed as I am beyond invested in this story. Even if it's been pulled to be published - maybe just a heads up would be nice. I look forward to seeing where this goes, it's been my late night companion for weeks and I hate to just leave it without a resolution. I hope RL is just busy and our author is doing well. Trying my best to be patient - this story is awesome.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467276
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 33: The Hills Have Thighs

Loved the chapter, the trailer has been pulled though.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: That's Amore

I like the little nod you gave to the original here in the interaction between EJ and Debbie. Nice. Alternating POV are fun when they dont rehash the same scenes and repeat the same dialogue, glad to see you using it to explore the characters.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 37: love taps

I don't get why they can't be together - Age just isn't that big a deal - Both are adults, no one is a creepy ass perv, all is good.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Holidaze part two

Glad they finally broke up, she wasn't good for him. And I love that Natalie is so comfortable with her breasts, truth is when they are huge everyone notices - just roll with it and be comfortable in your own skin.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A day in the life of Bella Cullen

I was so glad to see this wasn't over, I grown so attached to this family and I love the dynamic you have created.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Asshole

I hate cliffhangers, so much so that I only read completed Fics. That and I've gotten absorbed into too many characters only to see the story abandoned for one reason or another, and  I get we all have lives; but I obsess over it and find myslef wanting to complete the story in my own head. It's like that little unresolved thing hanging out there in fantasyland is driving me nuts. And yes, when I go into a room if the pictures on the wall are askew, I straighten then.

I love this story, I love the dynamic and the depth to which you have explred these charaters. I thought initally when I read that part II was going to revililve around the kids I thought - "I'm going to hate it, but oh well at least the first one was good". And now I am totally invested.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 15: At a loss

I can't even imagine the hell that would break loose if a physician/family member extubated a patient/family member - yikes (but I'm also thinking that he will probably have his ass very well covered), and it makes for a good story point. I hope these two find some common ground, my heart is breaking for them here.

Changes and Surprises by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella is moving back home to work with her father at his medical practice. She and his best Carlisle become secretly romantically involved. Once their cover is exposed, life changes and spirals for Bella in unexpected different directions.

 

Thank you to Julie for making me a banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186286 Read Count: 30286
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Format on this is showing up a total mess. I am going to download and attempt to convert the file so I can read this. Just a heads up.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A tragic accident leaves Emmett with no choice. Guilt, abandonment and some crazy moments lead to an unlikely affair! LEMONS AND LANGUAGE ARE ADULT!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39994 Read Count: 4056
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 03 Oct 2010
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh Emmett, you are so adorable.  I love how you capture his sense of humor, hoping to see more interaction with the wolf pack as well.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

lascivious.....naughty Bella..... is perfect for Emmybear

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I don't trust Rose one bit.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sooooo worth it.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your Emmett, you maintained his essential character while giving him enough backbone to not be Rosalie's doormat. The story flows nicely, characters are developing nicely and I can see myself getting more intrested in where this is going. What is distracting though is the frequent typos - nothing a good proofreader wouldn't catch. it's easy to miss our own mistakes, I think in part because when you have heard the characters in your head and then go back to look for errors, you tend to read what you know is there and mis the mistakes. If that makes any sense...... Anyway, on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aww, Jakey and Leah. I don't usually like that idea, but in this fic it totally makes sense. Now, can someone kick Rose's ass?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward being selfless.......hmm. I guess there is some sense left in him.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I do love Emmett. Wonderful job.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

I haven't seen him, but I would really like too.....

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

I love that Bella sees the need to straighten out her life first.....go Bella

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

I was figuring Angela and Ben would end up  hooking up....just because of the names and all.....now  bring on my spartan



Author's Response:

Ohhh Spartan is coming....xoxoxox thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I suddenly want to watch Troy.



Author's Response:

mmmmmmmmmmmm they should remake that fiilm and cast Rob.....good thoughts

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, just discovered this site...and really love it.  This story has me hooked at chapter 1



Author's Response:

Hope u enjoy the rest xoxoxoxoox

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

How come on this site everytime you try to hit next to go to the next chapter it takes you back to the 1st chapter and resets all the font sizes.....aughhh



Author's Response:

i dunno...never noticed....sorry about that : (

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the Cullens lose Alice and Rose in the battle with the Volturi, Bella must become the glue holding the family together. Alice makes the greatest sacrifice of her existence to ensure Jasper lives on.

ExB, BxEm, BxJ, ExJ, BxJxE (Ending).

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Edward/Jasper, Bella/Emmett, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 184848 Read Count: 63001
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Jan 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Reattachment

I love that Alice has left messages for them, it will make moving on easier to accept and it seems like a ver "Alice" thing to do.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons

I adore Emmett, always have.

Summary:

Sequel to Sex on the Beach. Rated XXX for violence, language and even hotter lemons. I recommend reading Sex on the Beach first. No one likes a cheater. :P


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325974 Read Count: 68252
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 26 Dec 2012
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: No More Drama

At the rate Paul is going he won't need to tell Bella about the Cancer, she can read about it in his Obituary. Come on Paul, stop being a chicken shit and man-up here. You are not making this better.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Jealousy

I don't understand why Jacob is out of the bedroom. Just because they are trying to ensure the baby is Paul's doesn't mean Jacob can't be an active participant in the "sexy time". There are MANY, MANY things they could do to be sure that any child conceived would be Pauls. So right now I want to slap Bella and Paul, Jacob needs lovin' too.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: There goes my baby

I've been meaning to review, but honestly I'm so in love with this story I haven't wanted to take a break between chapters. Right now I am worried for Paul - I have a medical background, and that part of me says you are setting up some nasty shit for my boy. The optimistic part of me is saying that maybe it's a little to obvious and you are going to hit us with an illness but eventual recovery. And perhaps a character I don't give a rat's ass about can kick the bucket....... I am not however, a glass half full type of person. So I'm hoping for the best, preparing for the worst. Someone want to wheel the crashcart into Exam room 3 ?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bam!

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This chapter was very well done. One thing that stuck out to me though, while I can't say that all hospitals are the same, I can't imagine a circumstace where the family would ever be denied seeing a family member who has passed. In cases where a medical examiner may be called in all the Emergency equipment would remain in place, and the family would be made aware of what they would be veiwing, but the decision to view the body would be entirely up to them.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dance with my father

This chapter required tissues-

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Walked Outta heaven

I get that Bella is upset, rightly so, but she seems to be over reacting here.  Makes we wonder if something else is going on.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Time of Dying

I'm thinking big hospital bills = Edward to the rescue? = Pissed off and jealous husbands.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I don't want this to be over. I'm really glad I found it after it was finished so I didnt have to wait for updates.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Outtake 5: Daddy’s Little Girl

So sad to see this story reach it's end. It was wonderful, now I want to go see what this other story is I've heard mention of.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74032
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

Glad to see the Douchebags from Denali gone - though I do like Carmen and Eleazar. Things moving along with Carlisle nicely - I'm waiting for those 4 little words.... we've heard the 3 little words, next comes the 4 .

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart

I feel like Esme has been cast aside - her loss seems not to be addressed. Don't get me wrong, I am all for Carlisle and Bella and I get the focus is on how they cope with Bella's condition ..... but maybe a paragraph or two on how it is that Carlisle seems to be moving on so quickly.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

You can't see me, but I am internally stomping my feet......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

Heart breaking for Edward, but I really love B/C so .......let's see where this goes.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's

Crying hearts

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26670
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: The Conclusion

Damnnnnn

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427884
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Intriguing

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

Okay, I'm hooked. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

Clearly Charlie is a douche, I love Edward but sometimes his "voice" seems a little forced, I can't imagin referring to my IPad (whichever version) by "IPad 2" or "IPad Air". I think conveying wealthiness works better when the "voice" of the character is less specific. That said, I love this story so far and will most likely spend most of the night reading this. On to the next chapter.

Ch-Ch-Ch Chia by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

My entry for the Tea Bagging Twilight: Pineapple Awards. "The Best of the Worst Lemons" Contest. I didn't win :( 

Bella, dying to lose her virginiy, asks her buddy, Emmett - a very open homosexual male - for help. Humor, NO romance. Bella/Emmett. BAD LEMON WARNING, but then that's the point. Please enjoy! 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1445 Read Count: 1982
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2011 Updated: 19 Nov 2011
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG - I can't stop laughing

Summary:

Bella/Jake. AH. Rated M for Violence, language and lemons. When Jacob has his 23rd birthday bash at the Cullen-owned Strip Club in L.A, he gets a lap dance from Bella Swan, a drug addicted stripper with a whole lot of baggage. When things get abusive for Bella and her drug-dealer, and Jacob starts falling in love, can Bella let old habits die hard to fall for someone new? And save herself in the process


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 336649 Read Count: 13608
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 May 2013
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 25: The Interview

I love this story, especially love Jacob.  Having said that, no Paramedic -ever- would advise, or even allow an unconscious patient to be taken anywhere other than any Emergency Room for an evaluation. At the very least Jacob should have been monitored until he regained consciousness and then given a complete neuro exam. If he was hit in the head with enough force to knock him out he could have a concussion or a bleed, people have died from less. So.....public service announcement, Head injury with loss of consciousness = go to the Emergency Room. Do not pass go, do not collect $200 dollars. Do not take an unconscious person home - call an ambulance.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Stupid in Love

No, don't break my Jake's heart.....you stupid, stupid bitch ! Ughhhh I'm totally hating Bella right now.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Lost In You

Damnnnnn!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Everybody Hurts

I just love Jake

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Falling In

He's making progress, God I love Jake !

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Stop Standing There

I really want Bella to find out that Eddieboy is screwing around, maybe that will help her see him for who he is.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Into the Nothing

I'm Hoping Jasper gets some peace, he's been through enough.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Who are you really?

I stopped reading anything on FF because I was sick of stories getting pulled, it's irritating as hell. Now I only look for my favorite authors here and on Twilighted, at least then you know you are not going to get screwed halfway through the story and need to go looking for it somewhere else. So thanks for making yours available on a site that doesn't censor, your readers will get the word out and you will get more traffic.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Breakthrough

Nothing good comes from lies.....nothing.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Lullaby

I would hope if she had been living with a raging STD for 10+ years she would have some clue, and and if she passed it on to Dickward he should have some idea as well. Granted there are a few that have some subtle symptoms, but I can't believe she could be that clueless.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: So Help me God

Huggles for Paul and baby Alex

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Save Me

She is making progress, but she has to stop lying.........

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Sex Jeopardy

I realize that when I review I tend to make comments to the characters.....I guess that tells you how much I get into the story. So, Bella.....tell him already.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 30: California King Bed

Sounds like trouble......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Savin' Me

So Edward's going to be okay with his brother's taking the fall for this?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Better than Me

I get that Jess was hurt, but they were not dating...... at all. She should cut him a little slack.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: In Love with a Stripper

Okay, so at this point we are suppose to rip Edward's balls off and feed him those for dinner - ugh

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Teenage Dream

I wasn't sure about this to start with. A story with the Cullens as the assholes and all. I am not team Edward, but I do love my Cullen men. You have gotten me very attached to Jake and Paul lately though. I was worried that Bella was going to be very unlikable as a drug addicted stripper, but I'm feeling suprisingly sympathetic at this point. Can't wait to see when you take this.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: I Hate Boys

It's okay Jakey, I will make you feel all better.......

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: By the Way

I don't get how Bella is suppose to be a IV drug user and a stripper....and no one notices the track marks? If she's using on a regular basis in addition to starving herself, she is going to have track marks and a delayed healing time. She should be looking like shit about now. Perhaps when you have barely dressed women grinding in your face track marks don't really matter, but the addicts I've seen don't continue to look "perfect" for very long.  Having said that.... I am happy that Leah has found Sam, I hope things work out for them.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Someone to Love You

I love my Jake.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue: Teenage Dream

I'm hoping Jacob gets a lap dance he can "fully" enjoy at some point.

 

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Outtake 2: Bad news with a silver lining

An infection in one ovary = total hysterectomy ??? I think I missed something here.

Summary:

The Quileute legends were not entirely accurate in their depiction of imprinting. Who was to know that the pack imperative was so strong? Bella is just about to find out how strong. A/U. Warning: menage, mature themes, domestic discipline.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Brady, Bella/Colin, Bella/Embry, Bella/Jacob, Bella/Jared, Bella/Paul, Bella/Quil, Bella/Sam, Bella/Seth
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 277262 Read Count: 388285
[Report This] Published: 06 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2019
Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

So I'm wondering.....why is she so tired all the time?  Is something going to happen that extends her life or are my poor boys going to end up loosing her at some point considering the live so much longer? Also, I'm thinking her new friend is in a similar relationship....  Oh, and did I mention I happen to love this story?

Reviewer: adirondackmommi Signed
Date: 16 May 2015 Title: The Pack Imperative

Hmmm, what is Issa?