Reviews by BellaRoseBelikov
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366792
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: New Start

I keep thinking that he's hiding a health issue just like she is...

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Need You

fine fcitional man in a kilt - soounds like Jasper in "The Transfer"? myOmy

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995728
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

wow

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

impending panic attack!

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

YAY!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

sounds like a fun game - vamps vs wolves!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189018
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field

aww



Author's Response:

Hehe TY :)

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

your dialogue is so wonderful.  it's great to laugh out loud from a story!



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  I love writing dialogue and I love making you laugh :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

hmmm..security video..oops



Author's Response:

No oops, I don't roll that way :)

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

if i was Emmett I'd might put that in the locker room :)



Author's Response:

Haha I guess we'll see pretty soon!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254934
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

what the hell is wrong with Leah?

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

you're so brave

and write sooo well!

Summary: Past Featured Story

vv

Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

Our first Valentine's was 6 weeks into our relationship. Paying two rents, only using one place. "So, I guess you should move in with me. Of course, this means we're getting married." And six months later we were. (That was 1989!)

Sometimes you just know....



Author's Response:

i've been married a scarily long time....more than half my life..ew.  But, we've never lost that spark..that urge...that uncontrollable feeling, yeah, i still want to bludgeon him to death most days. lol.  just kidding of course....well mostly.  Thanks !  glad you like the story.

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27175
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

if Bella says no, I'm ready



Author's Response:

lol, me 2.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 145036
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

best Mike Newton ever!



Author's Response:

I never thought Mike Newton was a bad guy.  He was actually a pretty normal teenager who happened to have had a crush on Bella Swan; that's why I made him into a good guy.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

sorry I missed my flight ;o



Author's Response:

You missed your flight?  How?  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89183
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Expect the Unexpected

fuckin' awesome



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

Glad you liked that chapter...lots going on there. No Creative Writing assignment this review?? I enjoyed the last one.

Thanks for the review. Concise but positive. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Rocking His World

h-h-h-hot



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

There's something really hot about an Edward in a necktie, coming unglued at the seams. ;)

Thanks for the review, bb!

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Mood Lighting and Ambiance

English Lit assignment:

How many ways can you use 'Edward' and 'tool'... in the same sentence?



Author's Response:

Okay, BellaRoseBelikov...I take my homework seriously. So here are the results using "Edward" and "tool" in the same sentence:

1. I'll admit I'd fondly fondle fabulous fanfic Edward's tremendously touchable tool.  (alliteration!)

2. Thoughts of Edward and his tool make me drool just like a fool.  (assonance!)

3. Edward's tool is a drill and I am gladly his screw.  (metaphor!)

4. When it sparkles like a jewel, Edward's tool makes my juices pool.  (simile!)

5. Edward's tool can fix anything!  (hyperbole!)

So, I wanna know...did I get full credit on the assignment? ;) thanks for the giggle!

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

a second review for Ch 31:

"fuck" is such a versatile word: fuck, fucking, fuckin', fuckers, fucked, fuckit, fuckety-fuck, fuckem (fuck Em!), fuckedup; perhaps an endless list

How many emotions can you express using the word "fuck" or a variation?

 



Author's Response:

Oops!

Somehow I missed this assignment. All I can come up with is "Fucking Pan-Emotional" That would cover every emotion, I believe. So this turned out to be a relatively short assignment. ;)

Thanks for the giggle.

-bannerday

PS I went to high school with a guy that used a form of the word "fuck" about every third word of every sentence.

Example: "Fuck, can I borrow a fuckin' pencil or what? Fuck..."

 

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

I think I should have checked the batteries...



Author's Response:

;) Sorry about the battery malfunction, bb!

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

Jake has some nerve....



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

I had to laugh at your review of chapter 34: "Jake has some nerve..." Of course! What kind of an idiot gets into a car accident the night that his ex is out on her first date with his replacement? I'm mean, COME ON!!!!

Thanks for the giggle. Keep those entertaining reviews coming. :)

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Miles of Aisles

the teasing and texting is so funny - makes my eyes water - you truly have a gift for dialogue



Author's Response:

Hi BellaRose!

Thank you for the compliment on chapter 43's texting and teasing dialogue. I do like writing the banter for this little group. For some reason I hear them all individually so clearly and distinctly in my head. Maybe that's scary?

I'm about to post chapter 45. Hope you get a chance to read 44 (if you haven't yet) and 45. I'd like to live at the Cullens' home. I'd really enjoy living in Edward's room at the Cullen home. I think I'd expire from sheer happiness if Edward and I both lived there. ;)

thanks for the review

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Just Desserts

yummy



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

Just Desserts are rather yummy when Edward is involved.....just sayin'. ;) Thanks for the smile.

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: The Food Network

Here's to finishing unfinished business!



Author's Response:

Hi again, BRB!

It's good to know Edward is keeping score and won't allow himself to get to far ahead of Bella in the Feelgood Department. :)

Thanks for the review,

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Orbitting Celestial Bodies

wow. you've been a very busy girl this week - thank you :)



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

I'm sorry i didn't reply to this sooner. I've been on vacation. glad you liked chapter 61. I hope you like 62. More sexy because you just can't get enough of Edward and his sexy. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

One Stupid Thing by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

When thirteen year old Edward Cullen met sixteen year old Isabella Swan she became his "Older-Woman-Secret-Crush." Over the next ten years their lives drifted apart only to have Fate bring them back together again and again. Now at ages 26 and 23 they are reunited in Forks. Bella is preparing to marry the wrong man...in Edward's eyes. Bella is headed to the altar, and Edward is running out of time... Can he convince her that there is another choice? Maybe Fate will intervene just one more time.

Told through flashbacks from both BPOV and EPOV. Lemons later because it would just be sooooo inapropriate at their beginning! Humor, romance, angst and suspense...because I love it all!

Lovely banner by the even lovelier Coleen561!

Thank you to Twi-Ho...Twi-Holoic for the awesome banner below!

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65635 Read Count: 3514
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2011 Updated: 18 Jun 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Conversation Hearts

so cute!



Author's Response:

Hi Bella Rose!

Glad you think it's cute. I'll tell Little Edward...just as soon as he comes out of his room---the door's locked...no telling what he's doing in there. lol

Chapter 4 is up. Hope you like it. Let me know.

Thank you for reviewing.

-bannerday

Summary:

banner by Ysar

 

After years away, Bella is returning to a place she thought she'd left behind and a man she thought never wanted to see her again. Love often comes when you least expect it. There are lies that need to be confessed and secrets to reveal.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146616 Read Count: 43647
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 Jun 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

sounds like Chelsea and Jake are coordinating their efforts

I'd like to take Charlie up on his offer...



Author's Response:

Chelsea and Jake are quite the pair.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339523
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin

..got to.. catch.. my...breath...need..dry panties

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

sounds like she's pregnant :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

twr

Banner by ChildOfSummer!!  THANK YOU!!!

If someone gave you three wishes, would you use them? That's the question Bella Swan, practical psychology major, has to decide when her grandmother presents her with a story that she can't believe, and a blue sapphire ring that she's always coveted. If you could go to any time in your future would you make the wish?

AU-Human. Cannon Couples. OOC. Not angsty, but a few tissue moments in places. Language, Lemons (of course...you know me). It's different than anything else I've written. Interested in a little magic?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've read
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72920 Read Count: 15590
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice!

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loving it

thank you

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

very sweet stuff here :)

wonderful story

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sweet and hot - perfect!

:)

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

perfection

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I'll take one of those



Author's Response:

Me too, please! lol  Thanks for reading!

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

great story

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Thank you for the story.

I hope the soccer a few weeks ago went well.

Used to be a soccer mom - loved the road trips

Summary:

bannar

BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74927
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

another wonderful story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

fsg

New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five

Merrrrry Christmas!

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate

love the banner by the way!

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks

This is SOOO GREAT!!!!

definitely worth waiting for

Thank you for all the details and I absolutely love the fun between E&B and the house tours

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life

luv the hatrack!



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

Glad you liked the hatrack. Bella...she moves to the big city and finds a new place to hang her hat. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It

this is sooo soo funny!

thank you!



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

Glad you are getting some laughs out of Edward's discomfort and distress. ;)

Thank you for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff

more great dialogue = you give the best banter around!



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

Glad you like my banterlogue. I have a lot of fun writing this.

Thanks for the review and compliment.

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse

"Review me, review me, because I love you when you do me."

even your A/N's are hysterical!



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

I'm so glad...someone out there is reading my author's notes. I wrote a rather interesting one for chapter 6 (at the beginning.)

Hope you like the next chapter.

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Moving Right Along

Bella:




Edward:






She’s doing it again




Who and what are you talking about






That bannerday chick – we’re in another one of her stories.




I hope she doesn’t have you dating Jake again.






Hey, it wouldn’t be so bad if you hadn’t given our dog that name.




Yeah, his mouth runs more than the toilet.






They’ve already exchanged presents.




I hope it’s not “His” and “Hers” t-shirts.






Nope. Not exactly.




As long as I have a Vanquish, it will be a great story.






Yep. At least your car is a performer.




Uh. Just what do you mean by that?



Author's Response:

Hi BRB!

That was one of the most hilarious reviews I think I've ever gotten. You should be writing this story with me!!! LOL

Thanks for the giggles!

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Into the Lair

i can't believe you left us there !

thud

(that was me hitting the floor in a dead faint)

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces

Are there any houses for sale or rent in their neighborhood?



Author's Response:

I've been watching the for sale listings in the newspaper..so far nothing, but I'll let you know, I'll probably need a roommate to afford the neighborhood. LOL

thanks for the giggle!

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much

hmmm...he reaches for her as she starts to crumple. The angle isn't quite right and he finds himself off-balance. His touch sparks her adrenaline and she watches in slow motion as he falls with her, his arms around her, he's turning them so she doesn't hit the floor. His head hits the edge of the cabinet on the way down (or the candle slips and hits him in the head), he lands first, slightly stunned, Bella in his arms, on top, of him. (deep breath) Dark, humming, feeling each other's stuttering breaths. Looking deeply into each other's eyes. Lips so close, bodies perfectly aligned.

Then the lights come back on and teh music is blaring "It's Raining Men, Hallelujah!"



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my oh my, BellaRose...that was hysterical! One of the best reviews/scene suggestions I've ever received. I love that he's stunned, of course she's stunned, it's odd and otherworldly until the lights flash back on and the music blares.

I loved it. I hope when you read the next chapter you are as pleased as I was by this. *crosses fingers*

Thanks for the guffaws and giggles.

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

I wonder if Jake and Leah will be coming to visit. While they wait outside her place for her to get home, they have a lil hot-and-heavy session out front. Edward sees this and feels bad for Bella - thinking Jake's cheating on her and then he has to figure out how to tell her.

Hopefully James has a fanfiction addiction to a certain contributor. When he and Edward go out for drinks/dinner he makes a comment about a really 'odd place to hang one's hat'!



Author's Response:

You are just on a roll today, bb! I loved the idea of Jake and Leah just suddenly turning up and causing Edward to think Jake is cheating. I can just imagine Edward beating the crap out of Jake for no good reason because in his mind, he's certain Jake has ditched a pregnant Bella for this other woman.

Meanwhile Leah calls the cops who arrive and arrest Edward. He is carted off to jail and allowed one phone call. Naturally he calls Emmett who assumes this is a prank to get back at him for the dong-in-the-drawer prank. So he hangs up, guffawing at Edward's antics and doesn't go bail him out. Edward is stuck in jail wondering how his life fell apart in less than a week.

The End.

Bwahahahahaha!

Thanks again for the giggles and guffaws. Thanks for reading and reviewing even though I've been so bad about the replies.

-bannerday

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Distractions

never before thought about the genetics of towel/hat racks....

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan

I'm out of town on business but had to find a computer to readthis when I saw you posted.

So glad I found a secluded corner in this hotel lobby - not too many people to explain what is causing gasps and laughter.

I would expect him to be upset, but he also seems like he may be able to see the humor in it all as he reads the way Bella presents it. Hopefully by barbecue time he will want to help her 'experience the chase'. Maybe he'll even approach Angela to help him.

OH OH OH! ...he has to post reviews!  my oh my

 

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: When the Shit Hits the Fan Fiction

Absolutely Perfect!

You did a great job with the fic-in-a-fic fic'ing thing

I don't really want Esme to tell him about the story - yet. (I forget if she and Carlisle are due at the BBQ)

It's only been a week! Definitely my Favorite favorite story :)

Thank you

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events

Whew...he made it through that conversation with his mother without permanent scarring.

I have an image of Angela listening to a group at the BBQ chatting about this story they're reading online. As the discussion gets lively and loud, everyone else takes notice. Bella listens relatively comfortably, curious for her readers' opinions; Esme is quietly interested and watches Bella and Edward as they react; Edward's jaw drops as he pinches the bridge of his nose. Then Carlisle walks in the room, "Hey, who's hat is this? I'm reading a story where this girl hangs a hat on this guy's erection".

Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is the very first Fan Fic I wrote. It was written during the summer of 09. I know that it is riddled with errors and I have no intentions of fixing these errors as this story is being posted to show my growth as a writer.

 

 

This is the story of how the night Janitor falls in love with the CEO.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 111 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116539 Read Count: 82638
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2011 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

It's nice to have a 'good Jessica'. Thanks for sharing your story.

 



Author's Response:

I just felt we needed to see Jessica in a new light. hehe.

 

Hugs