Reviews by snix
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

Oh dear...

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

Flip, Bella got off lightly it seems... Poor Renee, berating herself almost immediately!  You weren't kidding with the warning on this one. Bahaha.

 

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Haha you're being asked about Edward, bahaha, everyone would like he was important or something...

Arhh, I love this, I have absolutely no idea where you're going with the story, which is just awesome.

Thank you ladies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

*puking*

My e-mail got screwed up yesterday, so I searched all my favourites for the dates last updated, hehe.

So we have a little mention of Edward - will he adore Bella/Elizabeth?  Will he be able to cope with The Father taking her virginity? Don don derrrr.

Thanks ladies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

I feel like I complete (S)ickhead for liking this - but I do!!  And my heart may have just jumped out of my chest at the mention of Edward...

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

Ew, Aro plants the first seed!!

I can't believe how much I love this story.  Mhmmm so she has a memory, just a little nugget of a tease, you lovely ladies.

Enjoy your Easter too ladies.  Hope you manage to get some time for yourselves over Easter.

Until next time.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

This chapter was such a soddin' tease!!! I freakin' loved it.  This is by far my most favourite out of your stories ladies. 

So you two finally met up, brilliant.  Thank goodness you didn't decide that actually you didn't really like each other after all. 'Cause that would have sucked big time for us lot.

Thank you for sharing your awesome talent, kisses.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Blimey! Poor Carlisle.  I hope he's successful in keeping his family safe. 

Where the heck is Elizabeth, hat's the sleaze doing to her?  Will Charlie find them all in time?

Brilliant story ladies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Dirty perv... every virgin female at his mercy.  Puke, he's yet to plant his seed in her, here's hoping for erectile disfunction for the evil sod!!!

Esme's beautiful character shines through.  Wonder what's happened to her lost children?

Thanks for all the time you dedicate to us ladies.

x x



Author's Response:

Your more than welcome... we love it.. just wish we had more time to write.. maybe once the site has calmed down we can write more.. We really miss it..

and erectile disfunction... snort.. LOL yes well unfortunetly he wouldn't be so willing to have the ceremony if that was the case... DAMN IT! lol

We are really glad you are 'enjoying' the story..

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Ouch...

So I gather Bella saw her mom??

Is Aro going to chop her hand off or 'just' damage it?

The woman are robots during the day, no talking!!  Are all the men normal like Carlisle or do the carry this on throughout hometime too?

Shamed for a year - blimey seriously harsh!

Blickin' brilliant.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Oh my life... Jeez you girls know how to hot up a hot story.  I just want to get your brains and wring them dry so I can read the whole story NOW!!!

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Oh flip, the girls punishment was horrendous! 

Alice is putting a lot a risk.  Who the heck was watching them, please let it only be Esme or Carlisle.  Oh is it the bloke who bumped into Charlie???

Edward's still in Reflection?  Can't wait for him and Bella to meet again.  Will they meet at Alice's wedding?

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Oh my life, Charlie needs to get in there fast.  These two are going to be seriously screwed up if they get out alive.

Congrats on no longer having a life...

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Kisses and hugs for Amanda, congrats bb.

As for Alice being a Chosen, puke, puke, puke!!!  I dread to think how Bella's going to cope with that.

I don't think we know how old Edward is, but I guess he's gotta to be at least 18 as he's the eldest of three and Alice is 16.

Love your story ladies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

A/N news is extremely exciting, well done ladies.

Thank goodness Belizabeth is finding her marbles - but will she lose Edward? *sigh* Reflection time for Jenny may prove to be of huge benefit to us Sisters.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

You make us feel a little bit good by saying his seed is planted, then you whip it away by his lustful thoughts!!! mwahahahaa

x x



Author's Response:

Isn't he just horrible... lol.   Sick twisted old man with power.. that is NEVER a good combination.  lol

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Oh thanks for the extra bonus chapter - I'm pretending you've done it just for me as it's my birthday, hehehe.

I think the note says, 'Charlie, I love you' or maybay, 'You have beautiful eyes!' lol

x x



Author's Response:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY FROM US!!! YES TOTALLY WHY WE DID IT!! SURPRISE!!!! xxx hope you have a fab day honey MWAH!

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Exactly what I was thinking and to be in the car with Alex... Interesting my dear.

Lovely seeing EPOV. A four foot by four foot box, WTH?

People moaning about the length of your chapters, cheek!!! You girls are amazing and your updates are so regular, plus this is your pleasure not your flamin' job!!  Post a 10 word chapter - go onnnnn do it. lol

Love ya guys.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Arhhhhhh!!!!! Thank you for getting this mind screwing chapter out asap! bahaha

Darn Phil!  Darn you pair having a life! hehehe

Can't wait, er actually, yeah I probably can wait for the next chapter 'cause Bella's gonna get her butt kicked.  What will the Cullens/Whitlocks do?  What did Edward experience while he was out? Will this affect his reaction?

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

Darn that was an awesome chapter!!! My eyes nearly popped out of my head when I saw the missing poster, brilliant! :)

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

Poor Edward, thank goodness he's found out about the life he's been living though.  I hope he finds her before Aro takes her as his!

Weekly updates?? Really? Excellent!!!

Thanks for your dedication to us.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Freakin' Nora!!

Dear me, how the heck did Bella survive, poor cow. 

He tasted her blood - (hehehe like what you did there) sick, twisted, pervert.

He's got a sound proof room?? Oh my life.

Please, please be Edward coming in the room.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh crap! So close, so flaming close.  Charlie we need you, come on man!!

Ace as usual you crazy pair!

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Arhhh Charlie's gotta get his plan together fast!! Thank goodness Felix stopped him diving right in. 

The Publishing House looks good ladies, get yous...

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I loved it!!  A New Years prezzie too?? Fanks guys. :D

Poor Edward, saturated in his own blood... if he survives this the outside world will take some getting used to.

Come on Charlie - do your stuff man.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Oooh thanks for the New Years update... Fantastic!!!

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

It's like I've been getting telepathic messages or something, for the last couple of days I've been thinking about this story, not knowing the update was sitting in my junk mail... What a cheek, fancy filing it there!!!!!

So much is still on the line - and they're no where near home and dry. 

Til next week ladies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Gah poor guys - I'm worried for everyone left at the compound!!

x x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514852
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Yummiliousness!! Edward's adoreable!

 

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Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Oh just another little place Edward has tucked away...

Gah, my alert hasn't been working and it took me forever to find the rest of the chapters. :(  But I have found them now!! :D

 

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Now now Jake, don't knock the Training School, I've had hours of fun there.

 

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Oh crap...

 

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Oh crap, Victoria's chip may just safe the day!!  Edward has lost everything? Gah bless him...

Thanks ladies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Now that's the fade to black that I can enjoy!  Let's hope he's gonna get some now!!

Thanks lovelies.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Perfect ladies!! 

You mean do a one-shot of Bella pre-James? That would be interesting.  I wouldn't read a full on story with Bella though and no Edward... But would definately be up for a one-shot.

Hope you enjoyed your time off, I had it in my head that I wouldn't be hearing from you pair until the end of the month, so this was a lovely surprise.

Thank you.

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Somehow I managed to missed these last two updates.  WTH??? Well I think that was a very HEA for James.

hehe 

You have both done amazing things with this story.  *clapping and cheering*

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

What an incredible ending.  Perfect.

Love you ladies. Thank you so much.

x x

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

Oh my gosh - now Bella's gonna either have a complete melt down or she's gonna counsel him...

They're not the kinda stiffs I'd like to spend time with... lol

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

So I battled with this, thinking how could she still love him knowing Edward was capable of torturing Mike, so I put myself in her shoes.  If my hubby tortured someone for doing the same to me, I'd be shocked, but I know I'd understand.

However, if I then went to find out that he had a past like Edward, I know her heart and career choice, but I'm not sure I could accept someone as twisted as him.  For the sake of fanfic though, Edward's a babe and it doesn't matter what he does. ;P

x x

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me thinks I'm going to like this a bit too much...

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Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Goggle it... Ok and Us... lol

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That first dance move would have left stains on his trouser leg, just sayin'...

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

:)  Another smiley to add the list list then bb.

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Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Dang he's one hot moma!!

x x

Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

;)

x x

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: snix Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

What the freakin' 'eck is that kind of ending - I am dead.  How will I cope until next week? Babe, do you hate us, haven't we been good to you, loved you enough?  lmao

Wow flippin' wow.  Incredible.  Amazing. Awesome. Delicious.

I really just can't say how much I love love lurve this story, especially this chapter right here!!!! Dang Girl, you rock!!!!

x x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.