I really love Bella's eagerness. Hell, who wouldn't be with Edward as your personal sex guide. *drools* Now, let's go play!  ;)    xoxo

Damn, that excerpt you wrote was hot! Oh hell, your whole story is fuck hot. I love it, and I'm thankful that you are writing it. Edward and Bella haven't even made it to the playroom yet, and I'm getting heated up; I can only imagine how these two will sizzle then.  ;O   =)    xoxo

This is so great; I can't wait to get deeper into your story. I really like your style of writing. =) xo

I can't help but giggle, and feel giddy right now. I'm sure my thoughts will change drastically later on. *smirk* I can't get over how much I love your writing style. =) 

 I think Bella might have a bit of a crush on Edward, for lack of a better word. As for Charlie, I have a few ideas about him, but I'm just not so sure of his motives. I suppose we'll be seeing more of James and Victoria? I hope Edward ruins them.  xoxo

I get so excited when I get a chapter notice in my inbox! I absolutely love your story! It's just hot, and sexy as fuck already.

I definately don't think it's too soon for Edward to be falling for Bella, when it's right, it's right. I think Bella feels the same about him.

I don't think Edward should worry about telling Bella about his lifestyle, because it looks like she'll be an eager little sub just dying to please her master.

I really want to know more about Bella's home life with her dad. I also wonder what she was dreaming about, it seemed to be disturbing to her.

I'll be looking forward to your next chapter, this one was great. Thanks for writing. xoxo  Kelly  =)

Damn, I just love these two; they are so perfect for each other. I think Edward better tame that possessive shit, or he'll keep scaring Bella. Being possessive is great, in small amounts, but can easily become a problem in a relationship.

I guess I can't blame Edward, after all he's been waiting a long time to find the right one and let's face it, Bella has a lot to offer and is so fucking hot. I'm sure that's what had Peter doing that double take and trying to get all up on her. Maybe I'm wrong, but I kind of have a bad feeling about Peter. I wonder if he will be showing up again in your story.

Over all I think the little dinner party went well. It was cool that Bella got along so well with Emmett and Rosalie, and what can I say about Alice? Of course she's awesome.

As far as Bella being ready to lose her v-card, it might not be set in stone. I mean she obviously craves that giant cock of Edward's, and she cares a whole lot for him and trusts him, but she could possibly freeze up at the last minute. Maybe not, it's just a possibility. I have to say though that I think she'd be fucking insane not to jump all over that hot ass man. ;) I'm pretty sure you won't disappoint us. Love your story so much! Thanks again for writing.  =)  K 

I knew Renee was going to be a pain in the ass, but cripes; she really treats Bella like shit. I think she needs some kind of help. I really love your story, and it's good to throw in some drama into a story. I think it makes it more realistic. Just my opinion. xoxo

*laughing my ass off!* Yeah, worrying about the hammock falling apart was my main focus. :P I love your sense of humor! You're awesome.  =)  xoxo

So, how old is Edward? Not that it really matters; I'm just really curious now. Hopefully you mention it later in your story. Oh, and I love Esme and vest wearing Carlisle.  =)  xoxo

Aww, poor Alice. Edward is right though, that doesn't give her the right to be such a butt.

Ah, the mysteries of Edward Cullen. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Renee will really have to pull up stakes and leave in six months. =)  xoxo

Well I for one will definately be sticking around; I really love this story. I'm looking forward to seeing just what Edward and Bella's relationship will be, just friends or maybe more?  =)  xoxo

I am soooo looking forward to reading your story!  =)

I love the fluff, thank-you for the fluff.  =)  xoxo

Oh lord, I dread that saying, 'the calm before the storm'. I knew it was coming though.  xoxo

Damn Renee, I want to slap her. Is that wrong?  xoxo

Oh Bella, just spill it to Edward before someone else finds out about Renee and tells him. That probably would not go over well, at all.  xoxo

My heart just aches for Bella; she really deserves a 'normal' life. Preferably with Edward, of course. xoxo

That was hot! But what the hell happened at the end? You're killing me!  =)

My god; I just want to beat the crap out of Mr. Cullen! He's such an insufferable ass! I love that Bella is finding a way to tell him off, just a tiny bit and not get herself fired. I really love this story! xo  Kelly

I loved Bella's inner dialog, she's so funny. =) In my head I was screaming for her to break away from Edward, he really deserves to learn he can't toy with Bella the way he does. Besides, the more she refuses him, the more he'll want her. Maybe she will end up being the one with the upper hand. I was so proud of her when she poured the rest of her drink on that smug bastard! I can't wait until they see each other at work again. I hope that Bella will stay strong. I look forward to your next chapter. xo Kelly P.S. I am so sorry to hear about your mom, my thoughts are with you.

Awww, just when things were looking up for our crazy 'couple'. This was a great chapter. I understand that your hands are tied, but I'll be so sad if this story isn't finished. I hope the author is okay. I wonder why she never returned your emails. Oh well, I thank you for translating these 24 chapters. At least I know that things are looking up for Edward and Bella. Thanks for everything. Maybe I'll talk to you again. Take care. :) xoxo Kelly

Hi there M! Love this so far. Sometimes I just love it when Edward is a cocky bastard, I guess it makes him that much more sexy. I love the last line of your story, and have to say: yes, let's all thank Edward Cullen for getting Isabella fired. So Edward what are you going to do about it? Or maybe I should ask what Bella is going to do to possibly get revenge on mister high and mighty. I can't wait to see what's in store for these two. Thanks for writing.  =)    Kelly

*giggles* This is great, but poor Bella. I wonder if she'll survive. I can't wait to see who his ice queen of an assistant is. Thanks for writing.  =)   Kelly

I love this story so much. Edward is like a faucet, one minute he's on and the next one he's off. His moods are maddening, but I love him anyway! I can't even begin to guess as to what is in the envelope that Edward gave to Bella. I'm sure the clue is in something I already read, but I can't remember. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter; I can't wait to find out what's in that envelope. xoxo Kelly

That man is so infuriating! I just want to kill him for treating Bella the way he does, but at the same time I find myself giggling at the whole situation. :o) xoxo Kelly

Argggh!!! I want to rip that damn smirk off Edward's face! It just kills me every time he toys with Bella, he truly gets off on seeing her struggle with herself.

I just knew who was on the other end of the phone call Emmett got at that first party. Of course as soon as Emmett said Zanzibar, I knew that poor Bella would end up seeing the cocky bastard. I just rolled my eyes at the image of him with those two barbie doll bimbos. I swear to god Edward is totally evil. Why does he always throw shit in Bella's face, like staring right at her while he kisses the hell out of other women. And what was that glare he was giving her while she was dancing with Yorkie? Why the hell should Edward care about who Bella is with, especially when he has tons of women at his beck and call. Could it be that he wants to add Bella to the long list of women he has at his beck and call? Or could he actually have any true feelings for her, and maybe all the other women he's with are just empty encounters?

Of course I'm not asking for you to answer me, I was just asking rhetorically. :)

I'm kind of proud of Bella for putting on that show for Edward, even though I know it will come back to haunt her. I hope she can get away from Yorkie now that she's got him all worked up. I can't wait to read the next chapter, this one was great!

xoxo Kelly

P.S. I hope you have been well.

I'm melted. That was so hot! ;p I look forward to seeing how he acts, after laying her on his couch, and what he's going to say to her. I wonder if he'll tell her what's really been on his mind since he saw her at the club with that other guy. Or will he go back to being the same arrogant ass he's been? Part of me wants to believe that he's been acting like an ass, to keep her at a distance so he wouldn't acknowledge how he really felt about her. Like maybe he didn't want to admit his true feelings. I guess I'll see. I'll look forward to the next chapter. xoxo Kelly

P.S. Hi! I hope you've been doing well. Take care! :)

Bless Alice's heart, she's such a good friend to Bella. Although I would have killed her if she had set me up like that at Zanzibar. :O I just knew that the asshole would be there; I'm glad that Bella didn't pay him that much attention. I don't even want to guess who's at her door. It scares me. :) One more chapter and I'll be caught up! xoxo Kelly

I love this story so much! I was thrilled that Jake punched Edward, but at the same time it could get him into trouble. But leave it to the great manipulator Edward, to use the situation to his advantage. I hate him so much, even though I'm sure he has quite the back story to explain the incorrigible way he acts. I'm dying to hear it. I wish Bella could hold her lust at bay long enough to really teach Edward a lesson. I can't wait to see how dinner with him goes. Great chapter! xoxo Kelly

Hi there! How have you been? I hope things are going good for you. *Hugs* Kelly

Wow! What a chapter! Bella was awesome in her tongue lashing of Edward. And he sure as hell deserved it.

But I am now as confused as Bella is by the comments made by Edward to her. That man confuses me until I want to pull my hair out!

I just can not get enough of this story! I love it so much! I can't believe that I took a 4 or 5 month break from reading, since I have so many stories I love to read. It was kind of nice though. I'm ready to come back now! xo Kelly

Just thought I'd say Hi! I hope you are all settled into your new home now, and are adjusting to a new city. Take care. Hugs

I really love the way you write. You are a great storyteller, and you know how to pull your readers in. I'm looking forward to reading your story, and meeting all of your characters.  =)

I'm so hooked on your story. I think you're a really talented writer, and I love how detailed your story and characters are. I'll look forward to your next update.  =)

I loved this chapter so much. I'm excited for Bella to go and stay with Jasper and Alice. I'm sure that she will be anything but excited when it comes to the move though; I'd like to think that Bella will at the very least, be looking forward to starting college.

I look forward to your next chapter.  =)    Kelly

I love it! I was laughing so hard, and wanted to laugh somemore. I love Bella's inner dialog. =) I'd sure love to see what happens next, and see if any of Bella's wishes come true! Maybe someday you'll continue your story. I want more! Thanks for writing! =)  Kelly

The anticipation is building; I love it! I can't wait to see what he does with Mr. Swan, and of course I look forward to Edward and Bella's reactions to each other when they meet. Thanks again for writing.   =)    Kelly

I love your story, but oh crap; I really wanted it to be Edward watching Isabella out by the tree. I don't mean to complain, but I have to be honest and say what I feel.

I could have slapped myself silly for being surprised that werewolves would be in your story. I get so caught up with the vampire side of the story, but I realize that vampires aren't the only supernatural beings that can roam the moors.

Well of course there will be a big battle between Jacob and Edward for Isabella, I would expect nothing less. Also I think it's great that Jacob has awakened these feelings in Isabella and is showing her about pleasures that are foreign to her, but orgasms and being aroused by peasuring yourself or being pleasured by someone else does not spell LOVE, that's just LUST. That's just my opinion.  (please don't hate me, I do love your story)

I'll be anxious to see if you'll have Jacob and Isabella marry. I look forward to reading the next few chapters. And once again, thanks for writing. I really do love your story, and your style of writing. You're really quite good.   =)    Kelly

*Rubs hands together like a villain* I'm dying here; I'll be anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Now I'm on the edge of my seat! This is so exciting, I love your story, so much! I don't know what to say about the chapter; I'm so excited, but I will say it was great just like all your other chapters. I know I'm repeating myself but, thanks again for writing. I'm so invested in your story, I can't wait to see what happens next!    =)     Kelly

Hey you!  =)

I'm going to assume that that was Alice and Jasper at the beginning of this chapter. I'm so excited to see where you are taking this story of yours; I know it will be awesome. You write so well; I'm really drawn in more and more with each chapter.

I was very curious about what Alice said about what's to come. I found that I gained the biggest amount of pleasure from her stating that Isabella was Edward's destiny.

I really love your story, so much! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks for writing.

I have to ask you how many times you've seen BD, I haven't seen it yet! =(  I had my ticket for opening day, but I got sick and couldn't go; it was so depressing. I'll have to make up for it by seeing it many, many times!    =)    Kelly

I don't know for sure where you live,(I think in the UK)and if you celebrate Thanksgiving, but if you do; I wish you a wonderful holiday.  =)

Hey there! Great chapter as usual. =) 

I'm so curious as to who opened the door, or left it unbolted. You used the name 'trouble maker' to describe who was watching Edward and Bella, of course I assumed it would be Alice, but it didn't quite seem that it was. Or could it have been the wolves? No, they would have attacked. Who ever it was could tell he didn't 'hear' them, and they were ready with excuses,(I'm assuming excuses as to why they left the door open?)so it had to be Alice and Jasper, right? 

Well for whatever reason Edward has lost his ability to 'hear' what people are thinking. It must be his love for Isabella, it is consuming him. Or something like that. =) That is going to be a big problem isn't it? Or not. Don't you love how indecisive I am? haha! It's fun trying to figure things out. I really just love your story so much! Thanks again for writing.  =)  Kelly  xo 

I'm freaking out! The pack is going to be assembled pretty soon, then they will head for Edward and Isabella! When Jacob's father says, "we will go and get your mate...if it's not too late" I wanted to yell that it better be too late!

If for whatever reason Bella hasn't been changed, and Jacob somehow gets her away from Edward, then I'll worry myself to death that Jacob will bite Isabella, and then what? But no, Bella is Edward's destiny, I think that trumps Jacobs feelings. Maybe I'm just biased. ;) 

Off I go to read chapter 13! I'm so excited! I love how things are so different in your story, so I have no idea where you are going with your story and I can't wait to find out!  =)  Kelly  xo

I should have seen that coming. Of course there would be a condition. How is Edward going to pull this off, unless he just does it without her consent. But he would like her to willingly want the change.

If he lets her see her father then that would cause all kinds of problems, right? Oh things are getting more complicated, and the wolves will be descending soon. I just love your story so much!

I hope you enjoyed your holiday, and I wish you a Happy New Year too!   =)   Kelly

Oh poor Bella, how scary to see her dad hooked up to all those machines, wires, and tubes.(I know how hard that is; I was there with my own dad last year)

How sweet was Charlie to get her bedroom redecorated, add the bathroom, and make her a space to dance in. Awww, what a dad.

I'm looking forward to seeing how your story plays out. Of course it will be great when Dr.Cullen makes his appearance at the hospital. *giggles* =) Thanks again for writing.

Kelly  =)

I'm looking forward to dinner at the Cullen's house. ;)  I had a thought about Jess; I wonder if maybe she is the 'stalker' type, and might go ballistic if she finds out about Dr. Cullens dinner plans. Of course, it could be worse...I guess it depends on how obsessed she is with Edward.*****Sorry for the rant, sometimes I get an idea in my head and I keep talking about it.

Looking forward to your next chapter.  Kelly  =)

Hi there!  =)  I think Bella and Edward got along just great; it seems that they have much in common. I laughed when Edward asked Bella how old she was; I knew he was checking to see if she was legal.  =) 

I agree with you about Bella, it's going to take her a little time to get used to a man showing an interest in her. I guess we can't blame her though, between the lack of confidence and her innocence, it's bound to take some getting used to.

I can't wait to see how things go as they get to know each other. I wonder how many 'taco' nights there will be? Edward is a doctor who works crazy ass hours, and he doesn't cook much so I think that he and Bella should have a lot of meals together. But that's just my opinion.  ;)

Thanks for writing, and I'll look forward to your next chapter.  =)   K

Hey there! I've missed your story so much! Even though it's been a while; I haven't lost my love for Mase, Guppy, and the gang. This was a great chapter! xoxo Kelly

I loved this chapter! I had no idea what the crew of the Colossus did exactly, but was pleasantly surprised! You must have based that on the show that aired last year where they caught, tagged, etc. I loved that show! I think I sent you a pm about it, but I can't remember. Even if you didn't see that little series, I'm glad that you wrote about that aspect of research, etc. I could just picture the MMR gang helping them out. I loved that Bella got to see a different prospective, and that she actually looked at the sharks when they were in the cradle. Awesome job! xoxo Kelly

I love your story so much! I love the interaction of the gang, and their dynamic as a team. It's great to see how Bella is being more and more a part of that team. *rolls eyes at Masen* I know he's doing what is best for Bella as far as her future is concerned and what's best for MMR, but he's not being fair to himself or Bella as far as their feelings go. It's a good thing she seems to be so patient. I don't think it's hurt that Whit has shared a few things with Bella either. Mase is still too stubborn to listen to his best friend, and oh my does that grate on my nerves. :) I love him anyway. :) I can't wait for dinner, and what other fun things they'll all do. Mostly though; I can't wait for Bella to tell her story. I have to say one more time how much I love Lizzy! xoxo Kelly

Oh for crying out loud! Mase was doing so well in being patient and understanding with Bella, then he goes and shows that quick temper of his. It was an accident, and she didn't know about 'his' room; I understand that he was devastated, but he went overboard. I think he was not only upset about his prototype, but that he was going to tell Bella about his feelings for her and the accident just gave him another excuse not to. Or something like that.

Now as far as Whit goes, Edward has his head up his ass. Again I think it's another excuse not to tell Bella how he feels about her. How can he think that Bella and Whit are anything but friends, when Whit is his best friend and knows how Mase feels about Bella, and how much Whit has been pushing him about coming clean about his feelings for her. Plus, you can't tell me that Edward doesn't see even a hint of how Bella reacts to him.

Well I suppose it could go either way in regards to who is to 'mentor' Bella from now on. Edward could keep doing it, and be totally professional and only be professionally polite or he'll hand her off to Whit and then act like it doesn't bother him. Either way, he will probably revert to his cranky old self. If this is so, I can't wait for things to blow up in his face when he's called out on it. One thing is for sure, poor Guppy will no doubt be confused to say the least, depending on which way Mase decides.

Whatever happens, I know I will enjoy 'the show'. :) Have I told you lately how much I love your story? Well I do! xoxo Kelly

Great chapter; I loved it! xoxo Kelly