Reviews by 1918
Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167504
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: 14 Egg McMuffin

Awesome chapter! I love that Lee has warmed up to Bella, and has started to help her out. I'm so proud of Bella for the progress that she has made. I would like to strangle Masen, of course. I'm so glad that Bella is making her thoughts about Mase perfectly clear to him. He needs to get his head out of his ass, and she pretty much told him that. I got a big smile on my face when she let him have it! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: 19 Diving Deep

Awesome chapter!

I was so nervous, just like watching it all unfold on the t.v. screen as I was reading the part when the shark whipped it's tail around and knocked Mase down! The way you wrote that was so real. Bella's reaction seemed to be in slow motion to me as I read; the poor thing. It was like I could feel what she was feeling.

I absolutely love that Whit and Lee are helping Mase and Bella to get their stuff together. I'm just ridiculously giddy at how things have changed for the better for all of them! I love your story so much!

I love, love, loved Bella's reaction to Mase as he stood in her doorway. I was so proud of him for telling Bella how he feels about her. I know he struggled, but he did great! I'm so happy for them! I know there might be hurdles to overcome, but I have faith!

Thanks again for writing this awesome story!

xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump

Awww...I can't even tell you how much I loved this chapter. I even got a little teary eyed in a few places.

Don't hate me for the short review, but I've been up all night and need some sleep! I'm getting close to being caught up with all the chapters though. :) I can't wait to read the rest!

xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 21: 21 Are We There Yet

Heeeeeeeeee! :D I loved this chapter. I love Mase's 'family'. I love Masen, and of course Bella too. I love your story so, so much! I'm really glad you are writing it! :) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: 22 Came With Cape

Awesome chapter; I love, love, loved it! xoxo Kelly

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Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

I was freaking out when Bella got attacked by that damn stingray, and the minutes afterward. I love how Edward is taking care of his Kapu, not that it would be any other way of course. Yay! Edward finally knows that he's in love with Bella! I'm so happy! I can't wait for Carlisle and Alice's arrival! The house will be buzzing with feelings! You wrote this chapter so well, it was intense and a little scary. Of course the best part was the love. It was just awesome! xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kelly!  Scary is an excellent reader reaction with this chapter ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 24: 24 Band Together

This was a great chapter; I loved it! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 25: 25 For Love & Tacos

Fabulous chapter! I loved it so much. xoxo Kelly

Summary:

Tie Me Up In Tinsel Banner

 

WINNER OF THE 24HR SMUTMAS CHALLENGE!!

 

Edward has always had it bad for sweet and innocent Bella, but avoided her due to his kinky nature. This Christmas could change it all when Bella surprised him with an extra special gift. Merry Christsmut! AH EPOV. Written for the 24 Xmas oneshot contest.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3298 Read Count: 3403
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 02 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christsmut

Well fuck, that was hot as hell! Thanks for writing. xo  Kelly

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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PretendersToTheThrone2

Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so excited! You are good already, but here you are writing a historical piece! I appreciate the extra time and effort it must take, and I can tell yours will be worth it. I just love historical romance's, so thank-you for writing!

I love the beginning of your story, I can't wait to read more! It always cracks me up that the men from around this time period were such big whores. :P Edward is worried about being bored on the way to court, but I'm pretty sure he won't be complaining once he sets eyes on the princess.

I could go on and on, but I'll just say that I'm really looking forward to reading your story. Again, thanks for writing.   =)    Kelly  

Oh and I wanted to mention that the text is really teeny, and is hard to read, it won't size up any bigger. Just thought I'd mention it. Thanks    =) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  Yes, he is a bit of a whore, but its part of his charm. The research is fun and I enjoy playing with the language.

 

As far as the text issue, I don't have much control, but there is a text +/- button on top that should help that issue.

 

Summary:

Bella has always hated her Christmas birthday, but a visit from a sexy santa might just change her mind!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1200 Read Count: 1324
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2011 Updated: 05 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Once again you have me laughing my ass off. Not only are you funny as hell, but you write great lemons too! I hope to see more writing from you in the future. xo  Kelly

Master May I by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 456]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble fic. Edward is Bella's Master and is very particular in the playroom. But his sweet pet knows how to make him happy. E&B, AH, OOC. Banner by Soapy Mayhem

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 93 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9757 Read Count: 225243
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I need pleasure now, Master!! Touch me now!

Sorry for the lack of reviews, I got behind and had to rush through 20 to 37 to catch up. Please don't punish me.  =)  Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love drabbles, and this will be my first BDSM drabble. I can't wait to see what makes your characters tick.  =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What else does her master desire? Can't wait to find out.  =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Here we go!  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

=)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

=)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I want to look at her Master too!  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

How hard it would be to not look into her Master's eyes, especially when she can look anywhere else. I wonder if she's allowed to look at his lips.  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is so fun! I love the slow, sensual undressing of Master.  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

*wipes drool from chin*  That is sexy...    ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ouch, and not in a good way. I think I'd learn my lesson too.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ready, Master...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Anything you say, Master...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Your Master is a little more strict than some I've run across, not that that's bad in any way.  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Master may I moan, please...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh hell yeah...  :P

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oooo, I can't wait to see what tool or toy Master will use next.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh yes Master, tie me up!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You're killing me here, Master...

Summary:

 

Dr. Cullen is stuck working on Christmas again. Will he get that miracle hes been praying for? And what can he do for the patient in room 3? M for a very Merry Christmas! All Human. EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2355 Read Count: 1928
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

X-mas is long over, but I definately got into the spirit again! What a spicy little one-shot, I loved it! You do know how funny you are, right? You said some things about yourself in your profile that just aren't true! You should give yourself more credit in your writing skills, at least that's my opinion. Thanks again for writing.  xo  Kelly

Summary:

 

Carlisle perverts a Christmas classic. See what's going on in and around the Cullen house on Christmas Eve. This is just for shiggles. M for really dirty humor, smut, and mistreatment of forest creatures. Vampire/human. AU. CPOV


Categories: Crackfic, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 547 Read Count: 700
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was funny as hell! I can't stop laughing, that's the best poem I've ever read! The tears of laughter were rolling down my face. Thanks so much for your great writing.  xo  Kelly

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

I love this first chapter, it really sucked me in. I can't wait to read more. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 "Land"

This is so good, I love it! Can't wait to see what's next for our castaways. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Ship Wrecked

That was exciting! I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what was going to happen! They got really lucky. Now I can't wait to explore the island. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Making Camp

You've done such a great job with your story, I can almost picture myself there on the island. I sure hope Bella will be okay. xo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hi Kelly

I can picture myself there as well.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Working Together

I know I'm repeating myself, but I really do love your story. I love reading how well they all work together. They are really lucky to have been able to salvage quite a bit of stuff. I can't wait to see what Emmett comes up with for a permanent structure for them to get out of the elements and away from any animals they may encounter. xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hi there Kelly

Repeat yourself all you want and keep 'em coming. lol. 

Reviews let me know that readers are still interested, so never apologise for a review, whatever you might have to say.

I'm glad you're enjoying Wrecked with Bella.

You've got a few chapters to go and I'll be working on chapter 23 from tomorrow to get it posted by Saturday in Sydney, Australia, because I'm off to Melbourne for a week. I'll be taking my laptop with me, but you know what it's like when one visits their mother! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing - they're all very complimentary, so I appreciate them all, and the time you take to write them.

Check out my blog for photos for the story at www.jkazziefanfiction.wordpress.com

Just look for the Wrecked with Bella posts.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Making Plans

Great chapter! I'm so impressed by all the plans everyone is making. It really is lucky that everyone has something to contribute, especially Emmett, since he came up with the plans to build a house for them all to live in.

I'm so glad that Bella is going to make a full recovery, as I'm sure Edward is. :o)

I was thinking about any wild animals that might be on the island, and how they might be able to catch them, then I thought of course it would be no problem for these resourceful men. I just hope no one gets hurt if one charges at them! 

I also wonder if they are going to do any exploring of the island. I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :o) I just love your story, it's really is so much fun to read! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Moving House

This is so fun and interesting to read! I appreciate all the research you've done for your story; I know that must take some time.

Geez, everyone worked so hard on this temporary hut; I can't imagine all the work that will have to go into the house. That is unless they are rescued before then. Oh, that wouldn't be any fun, would it?

I haven't decided if it would be better to stay shipwrecked, or to be rescued, as far as Bella and Edward getting to know each other better. Once again, I have to say that I better keep reading to find out! :o) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"

What a fun chapter! I can't wait until they go exploring again. Besides, Emmett and Rosalie need to continue their alone time, and I'll bet that Alice and Jasper will want to have some time alone as well. ;) As far as Edward and Bella are concerned, well I guess time will tell. :o)  xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

That was so much fun to read. I was really getting excited when the guys were chasing those piglets around. Too funny! :o) I could almost picture the six of them as they bounded back into camp, and the looks on Carlisle and Esme's faces. Great chapter!

PS- I keep forgetting to wish you a safe trip, and a great time when you visit your mom, so have a good one! xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hi 1918

Thanks for your review/s.

The piglet chase was fun to write. Wait until you read chapter 21 - there's a bit more fun.

Am in Melbourne now with Mom and about to finish chapter 23 so I can get it posted.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Temple

Your story is getting more and more exciting! I love it! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Making a Move

I'm really nervous about Edward, Jasper, and Bella exploring that lava tube. Anything could happen!

I kind of figured that Rose was pregnant, and that's so exciting. It's a good thing Carlisle is there, and it's been such a good thing to be training Bella to do all those different procedures, etc. I'm sure that will come in really handy, and sooner that later, right?

As far as Rosalie having the baby goes, I'm not that worried, because women have been having babies for centuries without hospitals, etc. The only thing that worries me is if there are any complications. I bet you won't let that happen though.

You said you hate to write lemons!? I thought that Edward and Bella were hot and sexy, getting a little dirty down in the sand. ;)

I love this chapter. Thanks for writing. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube

I knew something bad was going to happen! I was on the edge of my seat as all that went down. Hurry, Jasper! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Getting Help

Holy crap! I'm freaking out! That's all I can say right now! xoxo Kelly

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Search and Rescue (Part 1)

Where is Alice? I hope she just took one of the other tunnels, turned around and will have come out where Rosalie and Esme are. I'm going crazy with worry! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2

Thank God they got Edward and Bella out of there before the whole damn floor caved in! I was on pins and needles reading that part. I'll bet that Alice never, ever tries to go off on her own again. I'm sure she learned a valuable lesson. I have to wonder if she is pregnant too. That would be so crazy! (in a good way) Last but not least; nobody better ever cross Esme, or they will probably live to regret it. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

What a chapter! I loved it! :o) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues

Alice is suffering from some type of depression. Am I right?

I'm glad Jasper helped Edward to see the error of his ways. I think you can feel sorry for yourself a little bit, but he was going way overboard.

Now, let's go make some soap and candles. ;) Loved this chapter. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Love Shack

Hot!! ;)  xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hi Kelly

Thanks for all of your fabulous reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying Wrecked with Bella.

I'm working on chapter 23 now so look out for it this weekend.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Soap and Dope

I loved this chapter, it was so great! xo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hi Kelly

Thanks for reviewing chapter 19. Glad you enjoyed it.

Regards, Karen

Saving Her by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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A mysterious new girl comes to Forks High. Edward can't take his eyes off her, Bella can't take her eyes off Edward, and Alice can't see anything. What does this mean for the Cullens and Bella? Set after the Bella's birthday but Edward doesn't leave.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56613 Read Count: 3380
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooo, your story is so good already. What a mystery; I can't wait to find out more. xo Kelly

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50406
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I know I'm repeating myself, but I am so in love with your story! I'm having such a blast reading it! You are a really good storyteller, and I love your writing style too. I am really into your main characters; they are great, and I love them more as I read along. I can't wait to see where things go from here. Thanks so much for writing! I look forward to your next chapter. xo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hello,

That's so sweet! Thank you.

Lissa

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is so good; I love it! I wonder what the effects from Bella's bite will be on the guys. I also wonder if they'll both fall in love with her, and which one she would choose, if not both. If it's one of them I hope it's Edward; I can't bare to read a story where Bella and Jake are together. I can't wait for her to learn english so I can know what she is thinking. I suppose they'll keep her at Edward's home, but will vapid Tanya still be there; I hope not. If Lauren finds Jake's watch, he'll be in deep *hit. Maybe Bella still has it. xo Kelly



Author's Response:

Hello,

I have the answer to the relationship question and the traits of my version of vampires on my blog if you'd like to know. The reason why I did this is because I didn't want people to get invested in the story if it wasn't going to be something they enjoyed.

Lissa

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely love your story already! I can't wait to see what happens next!  =)  Kelly



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Lissa

Remarkable by evilnat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary: Past Featured Story

remarkable

Bella Swan has a thing for men in suits. She has an even bigger thing for men with tattoos. What happens when she encounters a remarkable specimen by the name of Edward Cullen? AH BxE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read , TBR
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16520 Read Count: 31249
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi there! This is so cute; I can't wait to see what happens next. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Your story makes me smile. Funny Bella. :o) I hope Edward asks her out soon, or she might just spontaneously combust! xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a cool way to ask someone out. :o)  I can't wait until Friday night! I hope Bella gets to see Edward's tattoos, so she won't keep driving herself nuts wondering what they look like! xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this! I'm having the best time reading. Thanks for writing! xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You said this chapter was hard to write and that you weren't happy with it, but I thought it was perfect. Nice and sexy. I like that kind of dessert! I really love your Edward and Bella, they are sweet and hot too. xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh yes, fuck dinner and go back to Edward's place; I'll bet they could make a meal out of each other. ;) xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh yeah, that was hot and steamy. I'm definately ready for round two! ;) xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I know I've already said it, but I really love your story and this Bella and Edward, they really are just perfect. I look forward to your next chapter. xoxo Kelly

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Swan's adventures through her career. She's supposed to teach Edward the business, but might he teach her a thing or two instead? Humour and occasional angst. Mature content. Rated M for lemons. Drabble fic.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40960 Read Count: 26288
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Eric's outtake

I'm so glad Emmett called Edward. I know I already said that earlier, but it's true. I really enjoyed your story; I wish there was more! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Edward's outtake.

TeeHee! That was funny. =) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

How cute and sweet are they? =) Yeah, I'm with Bella on this one. Is it a happily ever after? They haven't really known each other that long, and besides that, Bella has to figure out what she's going to do if she stays in London. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I have tears running down my face now. That was a tough scene to read. =( xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh fuck! I knew it! Awww. =D xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh my god! What will happen next? xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Damn it! I almost guessed at an earlier chapter, that I wondered if Edward had found that damn camera. I can't wait to see what is on the tape! =) Edward might have guessed that Marcus was blackmailing Bella, and did something to the camera. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I feel sick, and want to cry. =( xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That was so romantic and hot. I wonder what will happen next. How can she leave him especially given the way she feels. I think she's falling in love with him or already has. With that in mind, I don't know how she could hand over the tape to asshole Marcus. I guess I'll see. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can almost feel her heart breaking. =( xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh no. If Bella goes through with this it will come back to bite her in the ass. I really hope she changes her mind. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

How in the world are they going to get out of this mess with Marcus? Can't wait to find out! xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I bet Marcus will still want to do the three scenes, but instead of Emmett and Jasper, maybe he'll want Edward to do the three with Bella. Or not, it's just a guess. =) xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I have a bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yes! xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

EEEEK! I'm all tense waiting to see what happens next! xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well crap! What's Bella going to do? Will she sacrifice her job because of her growing feelings for Edward? Hmmm. I also must say that I love your Edward character, he's such a gentleman, among other things. =) xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Damn! Hot! Hot! Hot! Now I really wonder what Bella will do about work. She did sign a contract after all. Maybe she just won't give a fuck if she breaches the contract. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awww. I wonder if Eric called him. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

EEEEP! What now? Can't wait to see. xoxo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, I think Bella is falling under Edward's spell. =) xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Your story is so fun to read! xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was fun! =) xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oooo, the whole weekend; I wonder what will happen. =) xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm, this is an interesting development. I wonder what Bella is going to say to Eric. xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

My guess is that he's wanted to do that for a very long time. How sweet. xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I can't wait to hear what Edward has to tell Bella. xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

TeeHee! I think Bella's in trouble here! =) But I think the 'trouble' will be all kinds of fun. xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I forgot to tell you how much I love your Eric character, he's a hoot. I love that he calls Bella, 'Bella boo'. It's so cute! xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

=D Awesome! Things are getting better and better, and of course more fun! xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yeah, I can't wait to see what Bella will be getting up to in England. xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

=) I can't help but giggle! HeeHee, brothers. This should be fun. =) xo Kelly

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story sounds like fun. Looking forward to reading. xo Kelly

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
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Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

:) xoxo Kelly

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Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Awwww. xoxo Kelly