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PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995786
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

love the story.  Keep writing



Author's Response:

thank you!!

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next chapter, lets see how Edward calms her down.



Author's Response:

you know he'll probably need some lovin' too...

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Love the story, good chapter.  Jim and James is the same person.



Author's Response: thanks for the review and yes!!

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Good chapter, good mix of events.

Reviewer: snotoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Enjoy the story and always look for the updates.  Yes to the pictures, and outtake of Carlisle and Esme for leaving his side.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and your short and sweet review xoxo

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

As always wonderful chapter, loved the wedding and Carlisle reaction.  Glad no babies right now for Bella. 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review snotoy, Bella and Edward have enough drama coming up, so hold on to your hat!

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Great chapter, looking forward to the wedding.



Author's Response:

thanks you so much for the review

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255190
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Enjoy the story, thanks for the promt updates



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you like it. I really would like to stick to the update schedule I set, so far so good...lml

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

enjoyed the chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Enjoyed the chapter.  Can't wait til they go out on Sat night



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving me a comment

Edward has a treat for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” Nothing on the other end

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

 

Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Enjoyed the chapter.  Good mix of feelings.



Author's Response:

Thank you- I liked writing this chapter...

Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..  lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Like the story, good to see it in a positive light and not so harsh.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I hope to keep it in a good light. I always believe in life choices, Everyone deserves to be happy! especially lonely vampire Doms.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Keep going.  They're just getting started. Always enjoy your story.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218368
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: snotoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Mama said there'll be days like this...

Thanks for the story, good chapter, quick update. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Adult Content: BDSM When Isabella’s contract with Master Jasper Whitlock is ending. Master introduces her to his friend, Edward Cullen. Will Isabella be the perfect submissive for Master Cullen? Will Edward be the perfect Master for Isabella?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181505 Read Count: 281210
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 01 Sep 2013
Reviewer: snotoy Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Till Death Do Us Part II

Enjoy the stroy glad to see them married, looking forward to the outtake



Author's Response:

There is one more chapter...the epilogue. Thanks for reading and reviewing.