Penname: Footroza [Contact] Real name: Jenny
Member Since: 21 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a mom, a wife, a friend, a teacher, and thanks to the girls on TWCS...I have learned that I LOVE to write...


 


TSO and I write most all of our stories together, and it has been a truly wonderful experience for me. 


 


I hope you enjoy our new site as much as I do...and look out...cause we have some wonderful stories coming your way.


 



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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3521]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1598626
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

OH GOD...This is not going to go down well... I am screaming at the screen, "DON'T DO IT...HE IS A JERK..."  yeah...he is so not listening to me...that is unfortunate.

 

I am so glad you updated...and on the new site...Don't you love it.. I do... And now I can review your story...yeah...

 

Thanks for the update...(looking forward to Better than Perfect) too. 

Jenny

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

OH WOW....ummm...a few minutes?...does that mean you are posting another chapter at about 8:00...cause I am dying here...lol

 

That was just so wonderful, I love love love this story... I am a nervous wreck about what coming, and I wish she would just tell Edward her fears about Carlisle, but then again...he hasn't had much interaction with her since coming back from their trip...so maybe she just thinks he has moved on...(we of course know better...lol)

Thank you so much for the update.. I really enjoyed it...see you soon...

 

OH..and I will be happy to help you with the picture thing...it is really easy.  PROMISE...(no eye rolling...)

Have a good weekend.



Author's Response:

lol! The chapter is started, but not finished just yet. Try a few minutes in dog years.

Between you and Mandy I may get this picture thing figured out.  I just wish y'all were closer to hold my hand. :)

I did see the email from you giving me instructions so I'm going to attempt it tomorrow. Wish me luck that I don't blow up your site.

Love ya!

Mic

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I am so worried about what is going to happen.  This could kill everything they have worked so hard for them to find happiness with...

The only thing i think of is that I don't think he can do it... I think he THINKS he can, but once it gets to REALLY hurting her....he is going to feel like SHIT...or at least I hope he does...

You are the absolute MASTER...this is wonderful.

 

AND THE PICTURE LOOKS SO GOOOD.... I am SOOO PROUD OF YOU..

Look at you growing all up with the technology...you go...

Now...exit this site quickly and go WRITE...WRITE i say..

Thanks for the entertainment.. We had a rough day today.. Love ya.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry you had a rough day.  Mondays suck all around.  Thanks for all your help with the picture process.  You, Mandy and Lillie are my all-time heroes!

Leaving now to go write!

Love ya!  Mic

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I am not kidding...this was a perfect blend of drama, terror, and love.  You had me wrapped up in a web of depression at the beginning of this chapter... I love love love this story, and you are a wonderful writer.

Thanks so much.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Next is the garden!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Sign me up for a copy of EVERY book you write.  I swear I can't wait to read it.  This chapter is beautiful.  I am so proud of Bella...and come to think of it.. I am proud of Edward too. 

Thanks so much for such an amazing story.  In the end...it is all about the fuzz ball in the red barret..... LOVE YA



Author's Response:

Warm dryer lint is the best for a snuggle!  Had so much fun in Dallas & Temple.  Can't wait to do it again!!!!  Love ya!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 122541
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I have so had that happen before...Smelling something that you know you have smelt, but you can't place where...It is maddening...

 

However...mine did not end up being a hot guy that sneaks into my room to watch me sleep... (DARN IT)...

I think it was more along the line of Grandma's hand soap or something...ANYWAY...this is not what I wanted to say...

 

Great Chapter.. I love this story, and I am glad that Bella is feeling something for our poor lonely Edward...

Thanks



Author's Response:

Oh if only all good smells led to a hot man or at least good chocolate.

Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20494
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well.. i for one am sooooo glad you are branching out.. I loved this first chapter...I can't wait for more...

 

Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) There are 36 chaps total. i should have them all up by next weekend. :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh goodness.. Edward is MEAN.. lol.  Loving this story already.



Author's Response:

yea, Edward is kind of a dick. lol

 

thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Epilogue

That was amazing.  I loved it.  You did such a great job on this story. I was pulled along the whole way.  I am so glad they made it.  Thanks for the journey.

 



Author's Response:

thank you! so glad you enjoyed my fic. =D

Frisson by The Antimatter Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14211
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OK.. I think I said this when I reviewed before...OR...maybe I just thought it...but GO AWAY SEAN...SHU SHU...

I am thinking a big boulder should fall on him or something...Nice guy and all but GO AWAY...

Jasper needs some Alice, and we need some Jaspice lovin'.

I love this story...I mean so much...WAIT...I just thought of something....

Sean is the only one (outside of Jasper) who knew about her visions...AHHH HAAA...maybe he isn't a nice guy....Maybe a boulder is too good for him...now this changes everything...

See what you are doing to me...LOVE IT

Thanks so much



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry, Sean will be out of the way soon enough. :)

It IS a JasperxAlice story, but it would be crappy if Alice and Jasper just go BAM and fall in love with each other. I'm sure that's what happen in Twilight, but I wanted for Alice to have a little crush on someone else first. Make Jasper jealous... *wink wink*.

 

In a few (well, actually, in this next five) chapters Alice will start falling in love with him. Just wait... =D

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OH GOODNESS.. I was shaking in my shoes reading that last part...WHEW...ok..maybe Emmett is going to come out of his stupidness...

I think the worst part of this chapter for me was Jasper sending everyone away... That broke my heart...  and for him to send her to Emmett?  THat was harsh and cruel...

BUT THEN AGAIN...

maybe by her being there, Jasper thought that Emmett would change a bit...hummm now that is an interesting idea..

Ok..Jasper is forgiven...FOR NOW!!..  hahah...

BUT I WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER...ok...just had to get that out there

Thanks so much for the update.. you know how much I love this story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review... and trust me, I'm working on Jasper getting together witgh Alice. It's hard to make him be her 'master' but be gentle and stuff all at the same time.

 

You'll get what you want, trust me. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 88471
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

THIS IS GOING TO BE FABULOUS...so different and great..

 

The spoiltone rec'd this to me, and I am thrilled that she did.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, she read the story on FF, which is up to chapter 9 at the moment. Glad you like it. Still stunned that you guys are reading my story. You guys are great. Love you stuff. So happy to be apart of WCS. Yeah!

 

=0 Jennifer

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

HAHAHAHAHA...Alice and Rose are going to be pissed...hahaha

 

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you are enjoying.

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 46477
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Illumination

oh so fun....what does it say...what does it say...oh yeah...all I have to do it hit NEXT to find out... Yes..

 

This is going to be a fun ride...yipee..

 

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Venom

ok...I must have is email address...who cares if he is a fictional character...a girl can dream can't she...

 

wow...just wow...I am completely captivated...

 

Thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 54640
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh how fun...this should be good...he he he...



Author's Response:

It's fun for now, things will get more intense. Thanks for your review

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jumping up and down like a freak..I am waiting ..I am waiting...lemons please...This is going to be fun...

 

Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

My Prodigal Son by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Carlisle POV. Takes place after chapter 10 and before chapter 11. If you haven't read Edward's Clan it may not make much sense. How does Carlisle REALLY feel about Edward and Bella?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 764
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh gosh...is that some magical foreshadowing..or what...yikes.. I am scared...Have I told you today that I love this story...

 

Well, I love your story..

 

Thanks..K.. BY BY

The Piano by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake Esme's REAL feelings towards Edward, Carlisle and Alice. Best to read AFTER chapter eleven. If you have not read Edward's Clan this won't make much sense.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2239 Read Count: 655
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know what.. I feel horrible for her.. i can't imagine watching me son change into a monster and not to be able to do anything about it..

 

It kind of helps to see this side of her...but she is still a bitch...hahah

 

Great job...ok...I am finished with all the one shots....so may I have an update now...PLEASE..

 

Thank you..

Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Jasper's History. Takes place during Chapter seventeen, it won't make sense unless you have read Edward's Clan first.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2848 Read Count: 533
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are so amazing...I do so love Jasper...

 

These boys have been through so much...poor things..

 

Thanks

Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Tanya's POV - what was her relationship with Edward really like? And what did they do to traumatise her friend?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2253 Read Count: 1132
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why the hell was that so hot to me...?  Tanya makes me want to hurle...but Edward is just...fuck hot... YUMMY..

 

I am off to the next one shot...LOVE IT

Macabre by LolaRose Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight; when the two worlds of good and evil began to co-mingle in the glowing hues of the ever fading sun. The onyx tendrils of night slowly fill Edward's soul. Black of night, crimson blood, light of day; what will be his decision? Cannon darkward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8539 Read Count: 630
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Respit de la Mort

oh this this is going to be good....I like getting into his mind during his DARKER times...

 

Great job..



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I am really glad that you enjoyed it.

 

I LOVE getting into the darker side of his mind.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ars Moriendi

oh wow...he kind of scared me their at the end...I may have nightmares tonight...

 

Great job..

 



Author's Response:

I hope that you don't have nightmares, but I am glad that he was able to scare you.

 

Thank you again for the review, the next chapter is almost done.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 115549
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I feel so guiity.. I have read and read and read, and I am just now reviewinhg... AND I am an administrator on this site.. I should know better... I just can't stop reading.  Your writing is amazing, and the story is so very captivating.  So, please accept my appology. 

 

Now, that being said.  I wanted to say a few words about your author's note.  I am very sorry if people are hasseling you about your chapters.  You have to write when it suits you..and if things are going on in your life, sometimes it makes it hard.  Believe me.. I get it.  So.. no worries here. 

 

Thank you so much for giving us something so wonderful to read.  Ok.. now I am off to the next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/4071/images/the_dr's_home_life_2.JPG

 

Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 149920
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

That was so good.. I love that she is fitting into the family, at least from Edward and Alice's point of view.  I am worried about two things.

1. Rosallie is going to be upset that they didn't ask her to come.

2. THE REPORT that Bella is going to write for the paper.  What if something is altered in the end to make it looked like she wrote something bad.. or if the editor says that this is not the way he pictured the piece going, and changing it.. or tilting it to make it look scadalous or worse.  I am so not looking forward to that.  (I don't even know if it is going to happen, and I am a nervous mess.)  haha.

Thanks for the chapter.  I really enjoyed it.  Hope all is well.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

THat was so good.. I am crying my eyes out. thanks for the update..and good luck..

 



Author's Response:

WOW. Hearing that from youis just WOW. Thank you so much. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

I loved it.  Such a sweet story... I have actualy been thinking about this story a lot.  (I know. I am a bit cookoo.)  but I can't help but think that Rose is going to leave the family.  She just doesn't seem to like to share as much as the others, and she does put herself on TOP alot.  Just wondering.. Loved the chapter.

I hope you had a great holiday as well.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

Wonderful chapter.  I am so hopeful for them.. and Bella asked the same questions I was thinking.. :)

I am so sorry to hear about your friend and cousin.. My thoughts are with you and their families.

 



Author's Response:

Thank You!

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

I love it.. Rose has a long way to go.. It is funny that she was brought up in the lifestyle the most, but has the least amount of compassion for her sister wife.  It is like she wants her cake and eat it too.. She wants to be TOP DOG all the time. 

Great chapter.. I love how this story makes me think... hahaha.. I have to wait and read it when I am alone because I analyze the whole chapter.  lol.

Great job.



Author's Response:

Rose has many layers and hopefully they can peal the selfish ones off her. I also can't blame her for wanting to be on TOP can you...,.

I know what you mean there are certain stories that I will force myself to wait a day or two so that I can put my full attention into it.

Silence by Pange Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The last time someone’s blood tempted me this much, I left her body in a cold, dirty alley behind a music store. My entry for the Darkward Vampfic contest, because who doesn't love a bad boy? ExB, AU, Rated M for dark themes and a lemon.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9571 Read Count: 611
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey ...this was great.

Very nice one shot...but of course...it is my duty as the fan girl..to beg for more... Very nice job.  I really enjoyed it

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/5250/images/OUAVBanner.jpg

A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 107324
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SOOOOOOO EXCITED...you are here..you are here.... Best way to wake up EVER!!!...

I love this story..(BEST HOT JASPER in the world)

I am so sorry about all the crap that you have been going through....but you have found a good home...Cause we love this story..

YEAH..Thanks for coming over...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

THAT EVERYTHING THAT IS HOLY.. YOU UPDATED... I have gone back and reread this story so many times...it is really so good and unique.  AND... You're BACK!!!! yeah...

OKAY..couple of questions... Is Bella going to get in trouble for doing this?  That's scary.

Part of this was an outtake right?  cause if not...I am having a major deja vue.   However this explains why it happened, so that is good. 

SO.. next chapter????  will it be the ceremony?  and I can't tell you how glad I am that Carlisle will not be there.. WHEW. 

HUM.. anything else...... oh yeah...

 

 

Thanks for coming back to this.. I have really missed it.   :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Once Upon a Vampire

YIKES.. YIKES YIKES.. OH heavens.. It is so great to read this story again.. oh how i have missed it.. I actually go back and reread it from time to time.. lol.  Everytime, is as good as the first time.. kind of like chocolate... your story is like chocolate...but not fattening...in fact...I actually lose weight when I read your story.. (HE HE HE ).. cough cough.. ANYWAY...

Thanks for coming back to this.. I love it.  Can't wait for the update.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Like a breath of fresh air.. i have sooooo missed this story.  I reread it all the time.  This was a wonderful chapter.  (And very long too.. hahaha)  I enjoyed it, and I agree, poor Bella and Jasper need some alone time.  no.. they need ALOT of alone time.  lol

Thanks

Sons of Silence by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice believe in white supremacy after years of misjudged actions. How many lives will they destroy before they finally destroy their own? Very Mature Content. Please read disclaimer before reading. AU AH OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19501 Read Count: 1825
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Addicted

oh my goodness. this is going to be good.. Very interesting idea..I look forward to seeing where this will go.

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Annihilation

OH god..that movie still gives me nightmares...that scene on the curb...yike...ouch..

your subject is hard to write about...but it is very well written.  it sucks that there are people that believe this shit, but there are...and you do a great job protraying both the evilness of the situation and the fraility of their spirits...Your readers need to remember..that hate brings on hate.  If it is all you know, they you will live for it.

so sad really, but you do a great job.

 

Thanks



Author's Response:

Yes someone made me promise no curb stomps in this story, and I shall comply with that :)  Thanks for reading bb! 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Accusations

I love that you named her Angela...that was very poetic...I am a nervous wreck as to where this is going to go...but I am in for the long haul..

 

Great job

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89030
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

LOVE THIS STORY...

You are brilliant...

Love ya



Author's Response:

Jenny, i don't think I would have been able to even get this posted the way i have if it wasn't for your and Jen's support and help!!  Thank You!!

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60158
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

Freshies..that is good.. I think I am going to enjoy this...Great job.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

OUCH...but the bitch deserved it...(Not a big Tanya fan..if you could tell..)  hahaha..

 

Great chapter.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

hummm... My first reaction is to say...CONFRONT... but really.. bella and alice are right.. They are together together... so it would seem wierd.  anyway...still made me sad..

 

Great update.. Love it.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

ummmm..what just happened...wow...it was hot..but so so wrong..edward is going to FREAK OUT

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)

Rough vampire sex..humm...not to shabby...  I so love where this is going.. You are doing such a great job, and SOOO QUICKLY..lol

 

Thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 75050
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Mental Meanderings

I think you are doing great.  AND it is very realistic.  I have seen many people who have gone through very horrible events in their lives gravitate to one person more than others.  I think that is completely realistic.  Almost like they are focusing more on "natural" instincts because their normal ones are so out of whack. 

I can tell that you put a lot of time and thought into your characters, and I really appreciate that. 

Loving the story so far.  Great job.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

OH THAT IS SO SWEET. I love it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Meet the Cullen's

I was a sobbing mess when Emmett was talking to her. That was the sweetest thing.  Great chapter.  This story is written with such heart.. i love it...

 

Thanks



Author's Response:

That's Emmett lil' sister and he totally sees her as such and loves her to death. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Coming Back from the Dark

you good.. i love this



Author's Response:

I'm glad :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Not Her

I am so nervous.. I really want her to find out about them... lol



Author's Response:

It's coming . . .

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Reactions

oh wow.. now THAT is how is should have gone in the books.. that was perfect... I mean come ON.. wouldn't you be a bit pissed to find out that these people knew all about you... GREAT job.



Author's Response:

wow, thanks.  I admit if I found out I was being watched I would be freaked out!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Deal

Wouldn't it have been great if she had said.. "and thanks for sitting in my tree every night..."  hahaha.. I am glad she didn't, but that would have been funny. 

Your chapter was perfect...



Author's Response:

thansk for sitting in my tress every night . . . would you like me to leave a pillow and blanket out there so you're more comfortable?

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Abiding Friend or Soulless Monster

That's.. that's ... that's.. there are no words.. Edward commando means sweet dreams for me.. I wonder if he could sport a tent in my tree???



Author's Response:

well I hope you had sweet dreams.  don't forget ALL the other Cullen men are still commando!  makes you smile doesn't it!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Day at the Cullen's

Wonderful chapter.  I seriously love Emmett and the names they give each other.  I am so glad I am going into this story...even a bit late... I look forward to hitting that NEXT button SOOO much..

 

Thanks



Author's Response:

Hey it's never to late to get into fanfiction.  I love writing Emmett and Bella together and all their exchanges. He keeps things light and happy!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Where are we now?

Dang Jasper.. cool those jets will ya... Poor thing... she is just so lost...It makes me so sad...



Author's Response:

she is lost but I promise she'll get found . . . by a uber hot vamp no less!!!!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Homecoming

NEVER in my life have I been more excited that the little Next button is there.  I almost didn't review.. ALMOST..

HEY.. you can put the polyvore on here.   I did it for our first chapter of Volturi Order. 

Just so you know.. Thanks



Author's Response:

really?  I can get the polyvore on here.  Oh yeah I cna put it on the chapter notes???  I will have to check that out.

glad you did review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Just a Little Bite

I love that each of them has had a "special day"... I am sooo incrediablly glad you didn't kill her off in this chapter.. wow.. That would have been.....  VERY BAD.

 

Great job.



Author's Response:

nah, I won't kill Bella off . . .at least not that way.  hee hee

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Aftermath

I AM SOOO HAPPYYYY that she KNEW he was outside.. It just felt like something her character would KNOW.. you hit the nail on the head with that one.. Great job.



Author's Response:

yes, Bella is pretty sensitive to Edward.  We'll see more soon as to why that is.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Being Left Alone

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... that is so sad  :(



Author's Response:

sorry I gave you sadz

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated

YEAHAAAWWWW.. I am so glad he knows.. thank goodness.



Author's Response:

About FREAKEN time, huh!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story

oh gosh.. that was horrible.. poor thing.. What a weirdo that Riley is.. boo.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

riley is Boo, i think that might be the least vulgar responce I've gotten ;)  Thanks for all the great reviews!  I LOVED them!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

That was perfect.  I love Jasper.. oh who am i kidding.. I love them all. 



Author's Response:

you even love Rose????

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?

hahahah... your A/N crack me up.. I think it is a great idea that they are both on the same page as far as her changing goes... (as long as they spend forever together in the end..lol.)  But

 

I love the way you have her trying to convince himself that he has a soul.. that is sweet..and it is how she can fix him.  love that.

 



Author's Response:

glad you liked it ;)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 continued

oh gosh... i will take the short chapter any day... I am so happy for her.. This is so good.. I am worried though..

Is the BAD therpist JAMES??? god I hope not.. he is the only one we haven't seen yet.. and that is scary.

love the story.. great job.. anxiously waiting your update.



Author's Response:

nope the bad therpaist isn't james.  I don't know that I have or will name him.  He's unimportant.  We won't really end up seeing any of him.  a sentence here and there about Jasper getting rid of him.  Nothing else.

I'm glad you like the story and thanks again for all the awesoem reviews and thoughts!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 75905
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

No.. i didn't like it...... I LOVED IT... Poor Bella...she always tries to make the right choices but she messes up every time...

 

SO GOOD

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 87452
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hey ...welcome over...It is great to have you here.. Love this story... ( I am going to reread and review tonight..hahaha...) 

 

Happing posting.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YEAH..... love this story... you rock

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 28681
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK.. I have read this before, but it was on fan ficition.. and you update so good that I wanted to re read it again.. hahaha.  So I am off on a "Different Kind of Moon" journey today.. yipee.  (Cause I am having writers block myself.. boo).

thanks for the wonderful story... AGAIN.. lol

See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He said mean and hurtful things to her, and they are going to be pissed when they find out... BWAHAHAHA.. 

You know, it really was his fault.  Jasper could have gotten himself under control once they had him out the door.  It was Edward that pushed her into the damn coffee table.. yep.. it's offical.. I am pissed .. again..

but love your story..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Got to love Carlisle.  So good. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

YES.. he is a big jerk.. *throws a stone at his glass house*

HUMP!!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 193745
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

OKAY.. I remember now why I love this story.. Your writing is amazing.  For instance.. this line.. "I was a man given over to his baser rage."  I mean come on.. That is greatness.  So feral and animalistic, just the picture you should get when you see Edward in this scene.  Great job.. AGAIN.. lol

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

FUCK ME SILLY.. I think I just pissed myself.  What the hell..?  Where did Jasper go?  GAH....

I am freaking out here.. so an update would be REALLY GOOD.. hahah.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

OH MY GOSH.. THis was an amazing chapter... and FINALLY.. Esme is coming out of her BITCH FOG.. Thank you for the chapter.. is was terrific.

 

I had a great time talking with you the other night.  Thanks for coming onto our chat.  See you next week?



Author's Response:

Definately! I really enjoyed chatting with you too, the chats rooms are an awesome little feature! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter and thank you SO much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

Man.. he hold a grudge doesn't he.. damn.. The boy is hard as nails.  Bella is going to have to tred very lightly around him... from now on.. I feel like. 

Great Chapter.. i had a blast rereading this tonight. 

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

oh man.. I am rereading this again.. and this chapter just gives me the creeps.. Edward is going to freak out

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

What an amazing chapter.. My goodness.. the emotions were all over the place.  You just so nailed it all.  I am so glad you are back to writing, and I am so excited there will be sequel.  YEAH..

Thanks so much for the greatness.  Your story is just so wonderful.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3983]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 985597
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Oh my goodness.. I had to stop reading several times to get myself together.  I was a mess.  You have so very successfully intertwined these characters.  I can not even begin to discribe how well written and thought-provoking this chapter is.  I was so seriously pissed off with Bella at the beginning when she got mad over his comment.  BUT .. as the chapter progressed, I felt what she was feeling.  I mean REALLY felt it.  And then there is Edward.  I then became pissed at his stupidness. 

It is then that I realized, this is where Real World relationships fail.  Everyone thinks they are right, and we stop listening to each other.  It would have been so easy for each of them to just leave, but they BOTH broke down their own insecurities.  Which no one ever wants to do. 

I am absolutely amazed at the depth of this chapter.  I mean I love this story with all my heart, but this chapter took me to levels of emotion that I haven't felt from a story in a long time.  (Well, from a story.. I did get rather pissed off at my husband yesterday for a comment he made about frozen pasta.  MEN!!). 

Thank you so much for all the though and love you put in your characters.  It shows, and it is appreciated. 

 



Author's Response:

hey there F,

Thank you so much for your kind words and comments - these characters have really made me think long and hard about relationships that we just take for granted - we all have 'frozen pasta' moments, but we tend to forget that when they are said, ON TOP of other comments, or after something else has happened, that they are not just 'comments' after all - there is a deeper reason or motivation behind what we so flippantly say.

He said, she said - classic!

thanks again,

Michele

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am mesmerized by this story... I am gettting teenage tingles...It is wonderful

MORE PEOPLE NEED TO BE READING THIS... my new mission in life.

Here they come...

 

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

MY GOD...this is wonderful

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OH MY FREAKING GOD.. this was such a wonderful chapter.. The stuttering.. you got it so perfect.. I work with students with stuttering problems and you nailed the hard consonents.  I don't know if you did that on purpose, but I swear to god I could just hear her.  GREAT JOB.

I thought for sure she was going to safe word during his little interogation.  BUT  i am glad she got angry instead.  She needs to. 

Now, as for this Anderson.. COME ON DUDE.. keep a better eye on her.. for heavens sakes.  If she looks like she is bad off.. then she probably IS.. I swear MEN are so freaking blind.  Thank god for Alice.  YEAH ALICE.

 

I am sOOOO ready for her to just move in with him.  I just know that some ass is going to get some pictures of their "Play time" together.. THAT WOULD BE BADDDD.

 

and JACOB.. god. I am a nervous wreck.  As you can tell I clearly enjoyed the heck out of this chapter.  so thanks..



Author's Response:

thank you! I thought that I had reviewed to you but I can't see it here!!!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

GOD I love this story.. I actually read the chapter twice just so I didn't miss anything.. I love the way it ended.. so sweet.. and that she ISNT going back to that hell hole. 

BUTTTTT of course.. we know heart fail is coming.. Jacob and James together???? that has shit storm written all over it.

Love it.. Thanks so much



Author's Response: THANK YOU - as I do yours. And as for the shit storm - well I have learned to write those from two the best of them (hmmm any guesses who...). love, Michele xo

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OK.. I am so not calling ANYONE out on a spelling error because I KNOW I have millions... but every once in a while you come across one that just makes you smile.  You know those ones that Microsoft Word Doesn't catch cause it actually IS a WORD...

I KNOW this because it happens to me ALL the time..SO really .. this is NOT in any way a flame towards you, and I hope you get as much enjoyment out of this as I did...

Here is the section of the sentence..."It was one of the rear occasions..." 

Fuck I spit my coffee all over the screen.. THat is wonderful. 

 

THis is an amazing chapter.. So much going on... I was in tears when he gave her the collar before they left, and then again when she and Esme were in the garden.  You do such an amazing job of just GETTING there emotions so perfect... I can feel everything they are thinking. 

Great job... I hope you liked my little funny... I swear I didn't mean it to be ugly... I just got a laugh, and I thought you would too. 

Love ya.

 



Author's Response:

and you made me spill mine!!!!!!!!  that is priceless - wonderful... brilliant - thanks for spotting it and making my day!! :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OHHHH so good.. I loved the Balloon trip... That was wonderful.. THERE IS so much coming up, and I can't wait.  It kind of makes me think this is the calm before the storm.  AND...it makes me more than nervous that you had to discribe Carlisle's 'surgery' room.  (Will that come into play later?)  oh my god...

Beautiful chapter.  I hope Charlie comes... oh wait... what if he tells Jacob where he is going... oh nooooo..

See.. you have me on the edge of my seat. 

Thanks.

Love it.



Author's Response:

I love you so much! your comments make my day :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Excellent... I am so glad that she told him exactly how she was feeling.. I can't even imagine having to watch my husband kiss someone else...especially during a situation where she is feeling vulnerable anyway.  This is so good.  LOVE THIS STORY..



Author's Response:

thank you and I LOVE your review :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh this was such a great chapter.. so much going on.. I love how Bella is learning, but still not losing herself along the way.  Very nice touch. 

I had to stop reading mid chapter(Family interruption.. don't you hate that).. but my mind was wandering to James and Jacob.. I was thinking ... humm.. we haven't heard from them in a while.. and then WHAM. you hit me with the "Edward's uneasy" line.... DAMN IT.. Something is going to happen isn't it.  and the worst part is.. I have to wait till next chapter to figure it out.  BUT... that's what makes this story so wonderful. 

Thanks again for the great chapter.  The games were a big bonus..and I chuckled at the dropping Kate image.. hahaha.

See you next time.

 



Author's Response:

thank you so much - btw fixed the bad posting job that I did this morning - so comma's etc are correct :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

I'm sceeeeerrrred.  Did she see James or Jacob?   and Violence. oh no!!!!   Please please please tell me no one dies.. oh god.. I don't handle death well.  I am shaking..

 

Great chapter.. Our bella is doing so well.. sniff sniff.. it is all fixing to come crashing down.  poor them.

See you soon.



Author's Response:

this from one of the Mistresses of the CLIFFY - I am touched. (some would say mentally touched).  thank you as always I am humbled.

xoxo

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

LOVE IT.. and thanks for the update to chapter 39... or repost or whatever.  I thought you were just being creative... keeping us in the dark about what was really happening.  Great chapter...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Lovely... just lovely... I am so happy for them, and I wish they were REAL so I could send them a card or something.  I think I need therapy..  lol

Great job.  Thanks so much

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

Girl.. this was beautiful. I am all emotional and curled around my computer crying.. you did a great job, and nailed a very hard topic.  I applaud you on every level. 

 

Great chapter, and thank you very much.

 



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your really too kind comments 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

SOOO good.  I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.. I HOPE SHE DOES GOOD.  POOR THING.  GREAT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

thanks so much - glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I am not mad at all... She needs to see how it feels on the other end of the stick.  It is hard to worry about someone all the time especially when you don't think they trust you enough to tell you what's wrong.  This was not merely a "White little lie", but something that could have put them all in danger again. 

I think that by showing her how it felt, he is reinforcing in her that she should confind in him about things that could have a serious effect on them.  He is her lover and friend first.. and Dom second. 

So.. I completely trust you in your idea here.  I think she should see it for what it is. 

To tell you the truth, after I read your A/N at the beginning, I kept expecting something like him being photographed with another girl, or Bella doing something to "self harm" herself.  So I was a bit releaved.. HAHAHA

Thanks for the thought provoking chapter.

 



Author's Response:

ooooh the Domme coming out a bit here! But you are quite right and although he is a bit of a drama queen, Bella has to see his pov too. thank you for your insightful comments and review.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OH SO GOOD... She finally told him what she needed.  Wonderful chapter, and thanks so much for it.  I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving... or at least a good Thursday... if you don't celebrate that.. lol

 

thanks again.



Author's Response:

thank you so much - we don't celebrate Thanksgiving in SA - but we do have a dinner in my family as it's my sister's birthday on the same day.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Thank you so much.. That was a beautiful chapter and it shows them BOTH learning to grow up.  Sadly, I kept waiting for something horrible to happen.. hahaha.. what can I say.. you just never know with these two.  Danger lurks in every corner.. lol

But I am glad it was drama free...and so sweet. 

And thanks for the rec.. I love that story.. I actually found it on FF.net and was amazed that she wasn't getting more reviews.  She has a wonderful story and writes it so well.  I practically begged her to come over.. hahah.. and I think she is glad she did.  She has quite a following now..Got to love our site's readers..

 

Thanks again for the chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and comments F! I really enjoy seeing new talent coming through all the time! Variety is the spice of life.

And yes, our sites readers are always good for some spice!

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

It's easy to love ya when you are just such a sweetie.. That was a wonderful chapter.  i think he was exactly what she needed him to be.  It was hard for him, but it will only help her in the long run.

I really don't want this story to EVER end.  I was thinking as I was reading.. couldn't it be like a soap opera.. it just keeps going and going.. that would be AWESOME.

haha

 

Thanks again for the wonderful chapter.  Your writing is spactacular as always.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and the review.  Yip, I think that Bella's days of "5 spankings and 3 warm ups" are officially over!  We are going to see our Edward putting on his big boy 501's (OMG) and Bella is going to have to run to keep up or she will be suffering lots of creative reminders!!

Alas PLU will have to end - but perhaps it won't be over - they are just too entertaining to say goodbye to... so if you can think of a sequel title let me know. It is going to be interesting to see how our couple handle their full relationship with kids...

Thanks again Hon - all your encouragement helps us all be better writers.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Are you kidding me????  I vote 1,000,000 times for a sequel please.. I love this story so much.  These characters have just become a part of me.  10 more chapters is just not enough.. I mean come on.. we have the baby days ahead.. that would be interesting.. and Edward's new career.. how will he handle being out of the limeline...forever.. Maybe Bella's career starts to overshadow him.. and he feels.. left out.  All kinds of things could happen to these two..

Thanks so much for the wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey there F,

Thanks so much for your comments - there is a whole world of possibities out there for them, isn't there?  Sex, babies, careers, sex, drama, sex.... and that's just with E&B - never mind the rest of the crazy family.  I need to sit down and write out a story plan, although this one has changed so many times, I looked at the old ones and wonder what story it is!!!  Someone mentioned that they hate the flashbacks, any suggestions on how I cover time but go forward instead of looking back?  As always, I am gratful for all of your comments and suggestions.

And to feed your addiction to smut & drama I will post an outtake sometime this week.

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

God I love this story... These characters are just so apart of me now.. Thanks so much for creating such a magical chapter.  

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Very nice.  Love that they are finding each other again.. and Renee isn't her mother?  Good god.. please don't let Esme be her mother..  lol. That would just ruin this little tale. hahaha.

 

Thanks for the chapter



Author's Response:

Okay - at least there is ONE person more insane than I am!!!  Thanks so much for the review and comments xoxo

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you...

For not leaving us with a cliffy.. I would have DIED... That was the most amazing chapter ever.  It was so wonderful.. I was so freaking mad at Eddie, then so scared, then so emotional, and then ahhhh..  You did great..

Thanks one more time.



Author's Response:

Thanks from the CLIFFY QUEEN HERSELF???  Compliment indeed! Yeah the cliffy thing came up and I was like OH HELL NO!! We don't do well with cliffies - we have too much stress in our own lives - why torture people further?? Thank you for reviewing and commenting, update like normal next week and just a heads up, Edward isn't a good patient....

xoxo

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Hey thanks for the Rec's that's fun.  hope you are feeling better Fiorella.  Now, as for the chapter.. GOOD GRIEF... I am convinced that have to be some type of phycologist or something cause you NAILED this grief stuff.  I mean we would all have to agree that Edward was being horrible, but man.. you just got him.  His was an impotent Dom.  That's got to be tough.  This was an emotionally charged chapter throughout, but I am so happy with the ending.  I love it. 

Thanks.. and Hope you all had a Happy Easter TOO

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

What an amazing chapter.  She has come such a long way.  I just love it.  Hope this 6 weeks flies by.  Thanks for the chapter... and I look forward to the recs. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 49590
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OK.....WOW.. I am sooo sorry...I didn't review more chapters, but my god.. I couldn't stop reading... It is now 12:30 am...and I am totally addicted to your story.  Great job.. this is so totaly different from ANYTHING.. I love it.

 

 



Author's Response:

:) I just love getting any kind of review at all, believe me!  Sometimes # of reads vs # of reviews can be darn depressing so I'll take what I can get.  Especially when I hear that I made someone laugh.  I love that so many of you get my crazy sense of humor!

Thank you so much for reading, sorry if I kept you up past your bedtime...okay, really I'm not!  hehe  But I'm thrilled you liked it and I love that you think it's different...it really feels that way to me :)  Thank you!