Reviews by Tinsley Warren
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Swan begins her career halfway across the country, it quickly becomes more than she expected. Teamed up with Emmett "Bear" McCarty, she is the voice of reason on Kansas City's lewd and popular morning radio show. Sparks immediately fly between the two hosts, but fate adds another person to the mix-- one of the show's surprise guests, jumpstarting more than just her heart. 

 

Follow Bear, Bella, and the morning show crew through the fun and exciting world of being a local celebrity. See how tragedy unites them and how love heals them.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, gratuitous sex in every chapter, and rock & roll! 

 

AH, NON-CANON, OOC. Bella/Emmett, Bella/Tanya, Bella/Emmett/Tanya, Leah/Jacob, Leah/Riley, Angela/Demetri, etc.

 

WARNING: Does contain femmeslash and polygamic relationships.

 

rock music inspired collage

 

A Yellow Grape Tomato Award nominee (Best Slash/Femmeslash OneShot) of the 2011 Tomato Soup Awards! 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett, Bella/OC
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Femme Slash, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories, Entertainment Biz Buzz
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41576 Read Count: 19562
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2011 Updated: 02 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Hmm wonder if Bella wanting Emmett to be with Tanya realy was the lust talking...I wonder if he will. 

HOLY HOT!

Glad Marcus explained things to Aro and that the girl from the scene got some sort of happily ever after yeah?



Author's Response:

Definitely the lust at that moment, but their relationship will naturally progress to that. :)

hee hee Thanks! It had me extremely nervous since it was the first anal I'd ever written.

Isn't funny how Marcus is a dom? And kind of a mob boss to boot? LOL 

Yes, the young lady definitely gets her HEA. It's in an upcoming chapter. :D

Such great questions and comments! Thanks so much! <3

 

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Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Wait, one of Aro's brothers paid for the surgery?

Uh oh! If the baby isn't Jake's having his mom knowing about it will not be good!

So wait, what happened to Bree? Is Tanya coming with them on their funeral?

Ah lemons galore! 



Author's Response:

Hahahaha! Yes! The plot thickens! LOL

Yes, Aro's brother Marcus paid for Jacob's funeral. We'll get fully immersed with him next chapter.

And, yeah, that was surely unwelcome news to Mrs. Black, huh? *laughs evilly* ;)

Nope, Bree dumped Tanya once she found out about Bella. 

And, no, Tanya didn't go to Jake's funeral. Only Aro went. Just goes to show what everyone thought of him, huh? Not really. That was kinda rude. Bella and Emmett had to leave for their honeymoon, so Aro ended up representing the radio station as a whole at the funeral. *shrugs*

Sweet lemon meringue pie! All kinds of lemons in this citrus-filled chapter! ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :D

 

fountain outside of a hotel

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Hmm Bella is crestfallen that Tanya brought someone, right after she married Emmett lol! Wonder how that makes him feel

WHOA! I have never heard anyone get married like that. That's so awesome!

Loved it! Glad Tanya made it, guessing she may add some drama or lust? Hmm



Author's Response:

I just think that she was definitely nervous that she was there. And what if Tanya had brought someone? She definitely has unresolved feelings for Tanya at this point, of course Emmett realizes this. Tension! Eeek!

Haha, cool. Thank you. I thought it'd be pretty neat. :)

Aww! Yay! Glad you liked this chapter so much! :) 

 

wedding dress

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

SO Jake is missing, but his club guys found him. He's unresponsive. Hmm

I'm glad Leah is with Riley! He seems like a real genuine guy!

Wonder what's up with her baby...hmm

Uh OH! Here comes Bree!



Author's Response:

Ugh, Jake. Yeah. :(

I know! Me too! I totally love them together! :D

tee hee hee. . . can't tell you. . . ;)

Yep! I just knew Tanya would be back, too. LOL 

 

Scarlett Johansson photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Oh wow! Okay, so I'm team Riley! Leah needs to stay away from Jacob! He's domming on the side? Wonder if he told her that! Makes sense why he was looking at everyone but Leah at the bar that night!



Author's Response:

Woot woot! Another one for Team Riley! ;)

Did that whole Jacob was a dom-in-training surprise you? Because it did me and I'm the author! ;) And yes, it sure does explain his shitty behavior towards her. :( 

 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :D

 

Xavier Samuel photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Love their wedding plans! I think it will be a great day and something they both are clearly excited for!

Always hot lemons, love it!

UH, OH! Leah and Jake and the baby and Riley! I wonder how this will play out. Leah should have come clean right away though....but things happen and here they are. Maybe she will end up with Riley?



Author's Response:

I remember when I was done with this chapter, and I was like, "The sex is crazy!" LOL I had never written so much lemony goodness before! :)

Erm, yeah, sudden story arc I came up. Almost became too much, like maybe they could've had their own story, but I really liked how everything eventually played out. :D

 

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed another chapter! :) I'm loving these reviews! :) Thank you! xx

 

Vanessa at Diesel/Marc Jacobs event

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Whoa the beginning of this! Pretty steamy! 

I loved that moment with her dad and Emmett. I thought that was so sweet of him to ask even when he is only there in spirit! So so so sweet. He really loves her that's for sure! 

 

Beautiful proposal!



Author's Response:

Hahahaha, well, you know... it was Emmett's turn. ;) LOL!

Oh that cemetery scene... yeah. I love the peace and serenity of it. Emmett's so sweet! 

Thank you, I enjoyed the studio proposal, too. I thought it was cool that they pitched in and helped Emmett surprise Bella like that. I had a hard time deciding on a song for him to play in the background, too. Flyleaf is not true hard rock/heavy metal, so it was a little odd of a choice, but it in the end it was the lyrics to the song and the strong female lead singer that won me over. :)

 

Glad you enjoyed the chapter! :)

Kristen Stewart B&W photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Oh wow! I was not expecting Tanya! Normally when you see that name it's not pleasant, but she was nice! 

 

Very steamy!! 



Author's Response:

Hee hee hee. I get that a lot (about Tanya).  :) 

Thank you. Glad you thought it was steamy. ;) Hope it helped with your own writing. :D

 

Kristen VF photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

TWINS!? I had a little thought maybe, but then I was like no!

Love that these lemons are so hot!

That Newton fellow did sound creepy...they are lucky they didn't go along with his idea



Author's Response:

Bwahahahaha! Yeppers, twins for Leah! ;)

Thank you! *blushes*

LOL, yep, I totally made Newton creepy. I think he should've been more so in the Saga, but it's YA, so I had to step up to the plate. ;) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D

Tom Hiddleston

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Wait, so is Bella expecting?

Oh wow, they did find a rhytmn and seem to be doing well with the three of them together, love it! What a hot relationship they have too!

Glad everyone got their HEA!



Author's Response:

Eeeek! Can't answer that without spoiling the two donated pieces, but Emmett's definitely going to be a father! ;)

*fans self* That threesome was alot of work! LOL! Writing and re-writing it, I mean, LOL! ;)

Yep, I'd say so. I'm a sucker for HEA. :D

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I certainly enjoyed your reviews! Thanks for commenting as you read along! :D

xoxo

flowers and thank you note

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Who is the mystery pov! They are running my happiness bubble for those two with the promise of angst lol! 

 

Loving rose loving Seth! So sweet! Sue is a godsent! 

 

All the upcoming events sound very interesting and woot for desk sex! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Congrats! That's so awesome! You deserve it this story is awesome! 

 

And no! They need to get through this well! I'm worried. I feel for both of them. But Bella's request is a serious request. 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Totally understand! No worries! 

 

I love that they thought they were qualified due to the fact that they watched dr. Phil lol! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Seems like Edward has an effective way of keeping Bella's mind off of talking lol!

And oh Emmett! What to do with you!

Summary:

Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30285 Read Count: 22016
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for moving this over here! If FF pulled this, hell would have broke lose!

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Tanya should not be trusted! What the hell is she sending eyes over to edward for! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Edward! I think it would be fun to hear from him for a bit.

Love their shared ink. They are so solid I love it! 

Glad Renee liked him and approved! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I don't know how I would feel if I was in Edwards shoes!! Such a weird thing to have to watch I'm guessing! 

Love this! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

I hope Tanya doesn't get any ideas...he's off the market! 

I so thought the sex scene was not with a girl, no wonder he wanted to be there! Now she's in for a real treat with the trailer action!! 

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44070
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Awakening

Whoa! Talk about a hot update! Man that was good! 

 

I wonder what that was that flickered in his eyes. I'm rooting for them to become something more! 

And I hope he doesn't get mad at her! It's her first time! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412095
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Holy hell! That was hot. I loved that they decided to enjoy their flight lol! 

 

And Tanya seems to have legit reasons so I'm glad! And Emmett being there, how I've missed him lol! Glad to see a familiar face! 

 

And next chapter is going to be good...hmm I wonder what's happening!! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This was beautiful! 

 

She said yes! So excited!!

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Home

This made me cry! Words can't describe how much I loved this! 

 

Im so glad that they are going to renew their vows, I was just thinking that they should! It would be beautiful! I can't wait! 

I'm glad Edward is going to spend time with his family too and that he cleared Emmett's concious if you will. 

This was just so beautiful! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Breaking the News

I loved this!

I'm so glad they got faith! She's such a Cow! Also glad they cleared Mac in the press!

I just love them!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Perfect Day

That was so good and beautiful!

I'm glad they got to have family time.

Queen elizabeth is such a crazy animal! Glad Ethan could help out!

I love this family!

Fingers crossed Bella doesn't have the baby in the courtroom!!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Media Madness

I heard somewhere that there is going to be a death in here and it's not who we would want. Bella and Edward don't get killed do they? I'm so worried! 

Im glad that the media's stories aren't true! They need to lay off them!! 

I love this little family! Worried about Eric tho...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Damage Control

Ahh so this is the death and I shouldn't be worried? I thought it was going to be faith but I didn't know. I think she took her own life. Ah but eric was saying he wanted her gone....hmm

I hope the interview doesn't hurt their case! I love that Bella is momma bear and they explained the situation from thei view! 

 

Love them!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a fledgling lawyer, has better luck in a courtroom than with men. Enter the hottie in the pricey suit who offers to pay double her going rate, and he’s not talking legal fees. The pair find themselves deep in a compensation-based misunderstanding until a few months later when she realizes she may be in love with her one and only regular. *Entry for the 2012 Taste of the Forbidden Contest**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10814 Read Count: 3787
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a great entry! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Tinsley, that's awesome of you to say :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717354
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Aw! How sweet! 

I'm glad he called her and that he was thinking about her. It probably made her day!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Emmett needs to get kicked. 

I'm liking CJ a lot more lately.

I hope Bella doesn't change herself because of what Emmett said.

And hmm...wonder what's going on with the little one...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

What a sweet valentines day! 

Bella seems to know her stuff and I think she's a good match for him! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Well looks like Edward did right but staying by his side and not cj's.

Hope everything's okay with Bella! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I think he knows CJ is bad, hence why he said stay that way about him staying a good boy

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Well glad they had a little moment to themselves. 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Looks like Bella is used to it now or playing the part?

So people are trying to give him trouble and it seems like CJ is on his way out....

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Glad she means so much to him!

Seems like he understands what shes going through even if he hasnt been through it himself

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Hmm so they both have agreed that they want to be with each other. That's a good thing to agree on.

Love that Bella is so good at jumping into the role to help him. How sweet. Especially since he's a guy that gives off the essence that he doesn't need help from anyone

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Aw! I love that they're both holding on and that they had that talk. I think they needed it

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Wonder about CJ being nosey...

So Jasper made them rethink how they feel? That's not fair. They know each other, they both show a side of each other that they don't show others. 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

So he's going to be rising in the mafia and maybe a father.

I think hearing from CJ about being a father helped, a different perspective. 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Glad he's seeing what CJ is doing. He should not trust him.

I agree with his views of becoming made too

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Glad he's not pushing her, not that I thought he was.

But they still need to talk clealry

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

His stomach clenched, does he not mean it about marrying her? Uh oh. That wouldn't be good.

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Aw yay! I'm happy for them! 

I hope they can fix things! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Hmm wonder how much of what jasper is saying is the truth...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Lol! He seems so frazzled! 

I think they will do good with a baby, lots to learn, but they will do good!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Oh the joys of doing that for the first time! Love their crazy time lol

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Hmm. I was worried for a second that he made the wrong choice with Joey. 

Could cj really want to take out his father? Or is this a set up against Edward? Hmm

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Oh wow! I guess it was just a matter of time. 

 

His godfather didn't have those guys sent to take him out did he?

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

OH NO! Are they coming after the baby??? No!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Uh oh! This doesn't seem good at all

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I hope they're okay! 

So cj is being set up? Hmm 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Oh no more proof. 

 

So Riley really doesn't seem like the smartest kid on the block 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Looks like dipping his toe in was easier than he thought. 

 

But maybe Riley doesn't look at his surroundings as well as he should...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Aw! I'm so glad everything went well for them!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Yeah I think Alice leaving that room is the for the best lol! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I trust Riley. I don't know why, but I trust him. 

 

He gives good advice. 

 

Glad he had that talk with jasper! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I hope Bella opens up to jasper, he need it and I think she does too. 

There's no one to blame here except jake. And I hope jasper knows that. 

Glad Bella is talking to Edward! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

LOL love that it was a purple backpack! 

Glad they had that moment!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

That awkward moment when you see each other again and you don't know where you stand. 

 

Glad Bella took the initiative and got into the bed with him though 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

So everyone is getting into the business. 

 

Don't know if I trust Riley....

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Hmm wonder why the hit was taken back. 

 

 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Maybe he needs to tell her he misses the old Bella? 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

So Bella wants Edward as much as he wants her. It's like a limbo

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Uh oh. 

 

Looks like Alice is planting the seeds of doubt

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Oh wow! I wasn't expecting that!! 

 

Ahhh she has to tell him!! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Uh oh! No!! This isn't good! I'm nervous as all heck for them

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Tribute

No! Shit this isn't good! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Tribute

Wait...this is the same chapter yeah? 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Awwww. This is sad. 

She needs to tell him! This is like looking at my younger self. I hated telling what was going on with me...and it screwed things up! 

 

I hope he doesn't go to someone else....

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Poor Bella! 

 

She needs to tell him. I'm glad she's thinking about keeping the baby though!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

This isn't good!! Crap 

 

and not a fan of Riley...his wife's about to pop and this is what he's doing? 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

This is getting better at least 

I'm glad he sees that he's changing, maybe this will be a turning point 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

He just proved her point....he needs to think before he acts. 

But I get she's frustrating, he just needs to get her to talk. Yelling won't do that 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Go Bella! Glad she's holding her own! 

 

Wonder if jasper knows about the baby....

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Glad jasper got in a good punch! 

 

Probably not the best way to find out...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Aw the end was cute! 

I hope they decide to keep this baby. I really do 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I hope jasper comes around. 

Aluce needs to chill! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Looks like she made a good impression on their first date!

Hmm wonder if Jasper will really stay away from CJ

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Aw looks like they're getting to know more about each other. 

Glad they seem to being working as a team

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

They're like an old married couple.

What a gentleman he is

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Seems like Alice got the ball rolling for these two...or maybe not. Is Edward going to pause? Hmm

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Aw! He's trying to build her back up. That's beautiful 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

This was so perfect for them! So happy for them! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I hope nothing happens when Bella gets the keys...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I'm nervous about her going out without him with everything going on...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Aw! Love how he sees her!

I hope he does stay faithful, and her too!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

No worry about the wait! 

Oh yeah! Crap if he wasn't there it may look like he set everything up. 

Hmm what is Jasper's deal. I hope he does have feelings for Alice...maybe it was jealousy?

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Ahhh so that's how everything happened, smart move!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Hmmm I don't see this ending well for them..

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Oh wow...he's clearly part of them now 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I hope they can work through this.

I agree with jasper. 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Hmm I wonder if the boss called jasper in to save him? Hmm

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Oh shoot! I hope he doesn't get caught. 

I wonder why the boss wanted Riley gone...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Hmm wonder if Riley was helping those other organizations.

where was jasper? Hmm

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I hope jasper really does have it! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Loved how domestic them seem!

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Lol! Love their frantic ness! 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

I was wondering if it was his godfather too...

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

So his godfather wants to take him out? 

Hmm maybe it wasn't him then?