Reviews by shenaniwhatagans
Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hips Don't Lie

So happy that you are back and so is Edroar!!! I'm dying for the dinner out chapter, so please don't wait to long ;) 

Loved their "training", they need to stop dry humping and get the goods out to really play soon...

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672776
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

He changes gears faster than a hooker changes panties...he's messing with my head!!!  (in a good way of course)

The event in the cabin was crazy.  Loved that he called Nanny though :)  That was him processing everything that has happened, right?!? Cause he isn't used to what is going on right now...he had to fight against it but can't contain it.  Men always think they are in control of everything and then their emotions smack them in the face & they freak out.

So he gets everything he wants & he wants her...he's made up his mind, kinda in a roundabout way...this should be interesting....

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

So much happened!!! I love that Jasper is constantly asking about what he wants with Bella...being all protective since I'm sure Alice is shitting a brick right now!   E's grandmother is awesome and of course she loves Bella. She want's grandbabies LOL

He might just drive us both crazy with what he wants her to do tomorrow :)

Finally, Carlisle...ewwww bastard!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

Let me elaborate more on my thoughts from last chapter...Carlisle is a f**king basterd, creepy as hell and an all around asshole!!! Not sure that covers it but I'm sure you get the drift :)  I'm enjoying that you made him a totally ooc character though, I'm giggling at him inbetween hating him LOL

They are white hot when they actually get together...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

Can't believe it's taken me so long to read this!!! Such an awesome start & I cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

I'm really enjoying this fic. I love stories that are fully research and very accurate!!!! I'm pretty sure that the person that Edward is and the group they hang around are not the most clean speaking and upstanding people.  This is how they really live and that is what I want to read about.  I love the real slang and their real motives. They are who they are and they aren't apologizing for it.

Love this Edward so far and this Carlisle is cracking me up. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

Alice could have handled that a bit better but she is so focused on 'scary' Edward she caused more issues with Bella then if she just calmly talked to her about it. LOL  However, she was very funny and Rose was cracking me up in the bridal store!!!!

So he texted her...obviously a big deal since Alice was shocked. So she couldn't go out with her friend to have a drink at the bar...I agree with Bella & Rose, she isn't dating Edward and he has no claim on her yet.  Then he calls & he sounds odd on the phone...is he not used to talking to women on the phone? I'm sure he doesn't make repeat chatting phone calls often LOL

Enjoyed their conversation and I like that Bella isn't looking for a handout. It was quite obvious threw out the day and her conversation with Edward that she is uncomfortable with the money that has been thrown her way and what is required of her for accepting it.  She isn't the normal type of girl that hangs out in that area I believe.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

Carlisle while still a creepy bastard, did warm me a bit by his actual love for Esme. However the whole not leting her blow him cracked me up!! But I do know that there are men out there that actually believe that same thing. Crazy talk :)

Edward calling and going on and on and Carlisles line about wiping his pussy, had me on the floor. Mainly cause I could just see Edwards face whenCarlisle said it LMAO

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Well, that was a crazy roller coaster ride!!!  Carlisle is back to being a dick in my book again...he needs to get off Bella...jealous much?!?!  If you don't want to get caught don't freaking do it!!!!!!

He really has no idea about anything to do with woman outside of sex does he??? It is half funny/intertaining & half sad/fustrating that he is so lost right now. He has a permanent case of foot in mouth disease...which keeps cracking me up and then making me want to hit him!! LOL

Can't believe he blurted that out on the street...he is crazy and confused and so damn cute...

And Nanny's line about him being in love with her 'yeah, keep telling yourself that' was so perfect and I love her feistness!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

Holy shit, what a chapter!!!!  Talk about hot and cold....they are both so afriad of getting hurt :(  Glad they sort of talked it out in the end...kinda

The over-reaction with the dog walking was crazy...I had no idea what the hell was going on with him at first & then when he just went for breakfast I like Bella was like WTF!!!  It would have sent me into overdrive as well...but then again I am also a hotheaded woman LOL

The tampon was awesome and so was his reaction to pulling it out LMAO  The dog eating it was hysterical and sadly happens in my house often...at least them getting into the trash an pulling one out...then they freaking fight me for it like it's a damn T-Bone steak or something. Damn dogs!!!  

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Round Three

Ughhh Carlisle is such a douchbag!!! And he totally creeps me the f**k out. I don't trust him either...just saying.

The dinner with the family was funny. Loved Ed Sr.'s reaction...LMAO

Edward finally admits that he loves her! :)  Finally, and now he has to move her and change everything that he has ever done LOL  Stupid love ;)

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Decision/Draw

Wow...he really is driving her crazy. Can't believe he had someone else sign her name to those deeds!!!  As exciting as it is that he bought her a huge new house as a surprise I understand her wanting to be a part of it with him :)

Love love love that she slept fully clothed & with a gun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I so would have done that same thing.  Poor Edward sneaking into surprise her and comes face to face with a gun...:)  Love that Carlisle is Esmes bitch at home...so freaking funny!!

 

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: TKO

Best crazy assed wedding ever!!! I can't believe that Edward didn't take out Charlie...omg what a ass.

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Light my Fire

They fight as hard as the f**k!! As much as she shouldn't know what is going on, she did need to know some of who and what he does. For her own safety and just relief from the not knowing.  It will make for such a happier marriage :)

Esme cracks me the hell up!!!  Best Husband of the week goes to Edward Cullen for the candle lit jaccuzi bath!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

Bella should be part of the inner workings of the family with her spider senses always on high alert!!!!

Loved that Carlisle walked away from temptation :)  Them sitting in Edwards office waiting to find out what happened was torture but then we he actually found out and couldn't actually do anything or talk to her!!! Holy shit it broke my heart and the emotion that he showed...he has come so far!!

I loved the coded talk during the phone call...it cracked me up!!

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy

The pothead mother-in-laws were AWESOME!!! Then adding in Nanny trying it...fell off the couch laughing!!!!

Bella is a freaking kick ass wife...Edward should have felt proud of her, she held it together and knew what needed to be done and freaking took care of it. Her conversation with Aro both over the phone and then on the boardwalk was a favorite of mine!!!

And Edward...she just shot some dude trying to kill her...she is so not going to go anywhere that you are not in the near future LOL

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

Wow, Bella standing up for Edward to Marcus...ballsy ;)

Is it sick that I kinda liked the basement scene...I think you did a great job with it. After all these guys did just try to kill his wife & he doesn't work a Wal-Mart he is a freaking mafia underboss! Carlisle shooting Sergi earned him back some more good points in my book.  He is slowly growning on me LOL

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto

Bellas relationship with Aro is so cute...she cracks him the hell up and it's fun to read! Holy shit storm with Esme sorta finding out about Jane...can't believe Jane was bragging, is she stupid?!?!

Bella letting Edward know that if he ever strays he will never be getting it from her again...awesome!!!!! Then saying that she might also be tempted, omg to funny, yet it does go both ways!

Thankgiving went well...Edward feeing the baby a chicken leg LOL  Poor Nanny giving 6 people a heart attack at the table about AC & Victoria asking for pot...so good.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: A Bitch Named Karma

That was one hellish day! I did know that Bella was soooo going to win that bet about Esme. :)

Her parents WTF, are they insane??? I guess I might be able to understand if they had been a huge part of her life and cared for her and stuff that they would be worried that she wasn't doing this on her own. But they never cared before and her dad with all the things he has said to her and called her...never again would I have a thing to do with that man!!  

Edward was so cute when he was freaking the hell out with her both before the hospital and once there. We should all hope for a husband that would that for us!! That is love :)

Carlisle helping Edward let off some steam was funny but that Karma comment, damn he's lucky Edward only knocked him out!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill

Edward and his random moments of emotional honesty, freaking Macys LOL It was great though :)

So happy that Bella kicked Janes ass and she totally deserved it. Esme was so proud of her and I'm glad that once Edward calmed down so was he.

OMG He ordered the hit on her dad, didn't he!!! I can't believe he let him live this long but wow...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Stages

So knew that he would take him out but wow, Aro was in charge of doing it!!  The funeral was an interesting mix of chaos and poor Bella doesn't what she is supposed to feel. 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Hot

Edward with the flu...hysterical!!!! Bellas description of Edward with the flu was priceless!!! Poor poor baby boy :(

I can't believe she went to Eclispe either, her reason cracks me up though. Her chat with Lexi was interesting and then Ed Sr....awesome hehehehe

WTF with the car bomb?!?!?!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

Knew you couldn't trust Jane...bitch...and Alec needs to grow a pair man up. I can't believe they are going to try to take them out and take over...is she crazy?

This is going to be a interesting ride.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

Loved their 'baseball game' at the end!!  Perhaps if he would have just told her what the hell was going on, she wouldn't have freaked the fuck out.  That was an agruement that has been brewing for a long time though.

 

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

Awesome chapter!!! From Jazz bringing Annie & Jacob to watch over Bella to the meeting with Marcus & then Carlisle telling him about Jane...the revelations under the bridge!!!!

Did Jane & Alec really think that the people they were hiring to do this wouldn't some how get back to Edward or at least one of his close associates??? 

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Poker Face

Thank god they didn't name that baby Charlie!!! LOL

Love love love that Bella told Jane off albeit in a whispered tone during a hug...I think that made it ten times better though!!!

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Olde E

I get that something suddenly flashed or pushed him into thinking like he did before Bella or even not that he was thinking like he did but he remembering it.  Everyone does it I think at some point or on some level. To most of us, like Edward we realize that we have what we want now and the old way/life was always missing something & we have moved past it.  He has grown :)

So, he proved his love to her by killing Jane...does that come with a special card or something LOL  I'm glad he did it himself. I really hope that things with him and Aro smooth out soon.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

Esme was killing me this chapter!!! From Aro to Carlisle, she was rocking it. And Carlisle is back on my shit list..again.  What the f**k is wrong with him??? I hope Gail is pregnant and Marcus either kicks his ass or kills him.  Right not I'm leaning towards the second option!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

I would rather have Skip do me instead of going to a lecture too!!!

Carlisle....he has got to be the dumbest f**k on the planet!!! 

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Diplomatic Immunity

Loved this chapter!!!!  I didn't know what the hell Carlisle was up to and he scares the crap out of me too when he is alone with Bella.  Sober or not!!!

I can't beleive he did that...he really does have a death wish.  And Edward....holy shit on a stick...he was out of control. Carlisle deserved it but wow.

Then f**king her in the alley...ummmm yeah that was hot...is it wrong I found that hot after everything that had happen...don't care, it was!!!

Dinner with the family was awesome...and that's all I can say about it...it was perfect

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

That has got to suck when you want one so bad and everyone else has one...:(

The fact that she only wants him for his sperm made me giggle...cause that is how it ends up feeling when you are trying to damn hard.  Poor poor boy, has to have sex all the time...

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Edward has to get tipsy just to be around Carlisle...that can not be a good thing.  I don't blame him, I'm just saying...

Damn the FBI always ruins a good family dinner!!!

 

BTW....I read several chapter at a time on my kindle then come back here and review...just in case you are wondering why there are so many by me in a few minutes time. :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

See, Carlisle getting them into shit again.  LOL  Seriously though, I just love to hate Carlisle...then I feel bad for him when he tries to make it up...then he does something again and I hate him...it's a viscious cycle :)

Sooooo excited that they are finally having that little baby!!!!  It's going to be fun watching him deal with her during her pregnancy...she is already hormonally crazy just wait!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day

I so understand how Bella feels with Carlisle...I do feel bad for him cause I know he is only trying to be nice and help...but he has creeped on her for so long and then he stupid stunt at Twilight, she is tramatized by it without really knowing it.  

I'm glad he was helping with the sign & it does kinda break my heart when he tries and it doesn't go right. :(  I just wish he wasn't such a dick before...maybe I forgive to easy too

OMG they are going to do a hit at the salon!!! What is Edward thinking?? I knew he was up to something when he started with the whole, you should take some time off & relax...take a few weeks or more!!! I'm sure he thinks that she should rest but I knew there was a ulterior motive :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

Well shit...I'm strapping myself in cause this is going to be a bumpy ride

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Love the crazy pregnancy sex dreams!!!   I can't wait to see what Edward has planned for Marcus....no one goes after Bella while pregnant (or at all)!!!

Thank god Bella talked to Edward when she woke up!!! Plus she is so observant she reads all the signs and knows others are lying to her & she reads her hubs really well and knew something was up. Good girl!!!

She is getting pretty good with Barry hehehehe

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

I really like Bellas thoughts on how and why Marcus wanted to take her out...makes perfect sense and I know that Edward thinks the same but won't ever say it to her.  Can't believe he shot Aro, get it but I'm not sure Aro was in on the plot hehehehe

Bella may have a small slots addiction that seems to make her shot out serious curses!!!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues

Esme is struggling!! I actually feel really bad for Carlisle and dare I say...I like him :)

He is stepping up and doing what needs to be done for his family...Esme totally needs to serious medical attention. Post partum is a big hell yes...poor thing

Wow, Edward is taking over the family with gusto! I know he has to make big moves to show that he won't be standing for any crap & it's very hot to see him do it.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Soooo awesome!!!! I have rec'd the hell out of this story even though I came to it so damn late.  

Thank you for creating such amazing characters for us to love and hate...some at the same time LOL

 

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I so missed these two together..they are so hot. :)  I would love to see and outtake of the proposal!!! EPOV would be fun, but whichever you choose will be great :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

A girl on girl love scene...either I totally forgot that from before or it wasn't said until now.  Yeah, Edward totally had a different reaction based on that fact alone!!! That trailer is going to be rocking for the next two hours <3

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J

 

 

Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32440
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG I love this chapter...the Amazon rain forest LMAO!!! Dying to meet up with the fuck hot sex shop owener :)

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't type when laughing so hard....snuffy!!!! Edward is gonna kill me in this story, hysterical and sassy :) Here's hoping "Jazzy" gets his happy ending & that Edward get to help him with it LOL

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Jasper has to use the darn Ass in a Can, while Edward dreams of his ass....sigh. Still loving them both but Edward is killin me with his wicked humor.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028764
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 296: Chapter 296

Nothing is better then a chapter all about giving Sir a blow job!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 297: Chapter 297

Yup...hopped up on vamp cum is clearly a fun thing. She is devoring him ;)

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 294: Chapter 294

UGHHHHHH  the neck kissing does me in every time!! 

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 295: Chapter 295

Love love love...there isn't much more I can say about this chapter but that.

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

She is surprising him at every turn here.

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

*sigh* perfect!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 292: Chapter 292

Perfect again...and I love the pic with the statement about submissives...

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 289: Chapter 289

OMG those pics are amazing!!!

Yes Sir...take her now!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Holy shit I was weak in the knees....I need to find me a Master and freaking fast!!!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

Ummmmm yeah...that was awesome!  The raw emotion within that room was intense and I loved it.

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 287: Chapter 287

It may have been a short chapter but it said a lot! Her emotion and his in finally hearing it. His decision becoming final and concrete...she is his and he will take her...

Love the pics...they are beautiful

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

Wow...she revealed so much and the poor thing doesn't know why she can tell him so easily. It is going to be a mighty shock tonight in the playroom but a good shock.

Edward is on cloud nine right now...

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

Oh my...poor butterfly is having a horrible seft doubt and regret moment. I have had a few of those myself lately and being stuck in your mind with those thoughts suck. 

She will be so surprised when he finally tells her what he has planned for the night :)

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 284: Chapter 284

Okay...his version was even hotter....

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283

Whew....is it hot in here??? Holy shit I want that for lunch!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

Awwwww this was a sweet chapter. I love this sweet unsure Edward...want to hug him all up and squish him. :)

And I forgot to say about the last chapter with Alice getting off by watching Bella perform for Edward...was awesome!!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 281: Chapter 281

OMG that collar is awesome and so very perfect!!!  She is going to love it :)

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 280: Chapter 280

My heart was in my stomach while reading this...I feel everything she does...not knowing if he will call or not.

I can't wait for her to see him again in the playroom...he will show her then right?

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

SQUEEEEEE   so excited!!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

LOVE her answer!! I think Edward is going to freak when her reads it but in a good way. I'm sure the smile that will be on his face will be huge. The time has come Sir...

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 277: Chapter 277

Edward has finally realized that it's time...I love being in his head. That he is just as scared as butterfly is about what each other wants. Not wanting to be left behind by the other...

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

She finally safeworded!!! Lets see how poor Sir handles this one...

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 276: Chapter 276

That went well...and Sir seemed to enjoy it very much!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 274: Chapter 274

*gulp* Disappointed Sir makes me sink down to my knees and try to curl into myself. Why do I feel bad?? I wasn't the one that did it...thanks for being able to make me feel like I was Noc!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 273: Chapter 273

I love that he draws her all the time and then hangs them in the playroom!!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 272: Chapter 272

Edward can claim me...I will be willing to test it out for him ;)

This was so hot without any sex taking place..just him talking about what he wants to do to her...so hot!!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 271: Chapter 271

Okay...so maybe it is a love/hate relationship with her and Edward.  He putting Jessica in her place was awesome!!!

And Bellas line about the phone sex was perfect...I can just see Emmett spitting that coffee now and the look on his face. Never mind the happy as hell look on Edwards!! :)

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 269: Chapter 269

Was it Rose in the bathroom? There perhaps to let Emmett have a mid-day drink ;)

 

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 270: Chapter 270

Edward and Rose crack me up when they are together!!! I want to call it a love/hate relationship but I really think it's a hate/hate. At least from Edwards side!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 268: Chapter 268

Wow...can Sir come to my house please??? I'll give him back I promise!

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 267: Chapter 267

OMG...Being taken against a picture window is one of my top must dos!!!  So freaking hot. Even if he just takes her in front of it...still feeding my new found exhibisonist side ;)

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 266: Chapter 266

I adore that she is in love with him without ever seeing what he looks like. If everyone could just close their eyes and see people for who they really are and not by what they look like we would all be so much happier.

 

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

His scent was made to lure woman in :)  I'm not sure what his exact scent is but when we figure it out we should totally make a candle our of it!!!!

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

That's the kind of bath I'm looking for!!!

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Can't wait for playroom day!!!  

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I would love to visit a real playroom!  I'm sure butterfly got very lost in thought here...so many images rolling around in her head!



Author's Response:

I posted a pic on facebook of all of my toys. I keep them in a tote in my bedroom, and what doesn't fit under the bed

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

Hot fucking damn...yes please I would love to be your canvas, Sir!!!

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

It just got very very hot in my house!!! Shit...when does my hubby get home from work, cause damn it's so freaking on tonight!!!  Thanks Noc <3

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Oh my...he makes me want to do dirty things to him...most of which he mentioned in this chapter...

I loved this part from the orginal...he tells her to cum without touch...I just can't remember what happens so bring on the next chapter please!!!

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

He is going to rub that thing raw soon!  

I've tasted myself and I wouldn't say it's all sweet and wonderful as often worded but then again I'm not a guy tasting me...

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I love his dirty mouth too...a little too much perhaps ;)

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Oh my...his words are my undoing.  Is there a class that offers how to speak so you drip dominance & a minor in super hot dirty talk???

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Don't think I will be able to survive when they actually are in the same room together!!!  To much heat <3

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Yes Butterfly you are a little cum slut!!!  Course, if he was my midnight caller I would probably gush at his words too.  Lucky butterfly :)

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Doesn't he realize that she will always want him for him...and wow, he is so prepared for the meet...such a boy scout!!! ;)

I think all of us would wear a blindfold for him any day of the week

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Yes...it's so close...so close!!!!

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Words are the best foreplay!!!  Bonus for both sides, cause you know it drives him as crazy as her...so freaking good!

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

He is such a good Dom!!!  Is he anticipating what she is feeling or can he really read her mind???  Did I miss that part...no right!!  

I can't wait for her to totally give herself over to him...REALLY can't wait :D

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I think she is feeling a mixture of excitement at the prospect of him taking her tonight...but on the other hand is probably upset about the idea that he would want to take her and she doesn't even know who he is!!!!

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

The icy receptionist....can you say jealous much Tanya?!?!  



Author's Response:

wait till u see why she's so bitch.... its coming up quick!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Thank you so much for writing this fabulous story and making me want to chat about it all the time especially in Kinkward!!! (I'm mary-kathleen burke foley) :)

Still loving the story!!!

 



Author's Response:

I appreicate the chatter and the reviews! I'm gonna reach my review goal of 2K i just know it :)

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

Ughhh I would totally have been a mix between freaking out and hot as hell!!!  LOL that she thinks he was sucking on ice.

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

Awesome chapter!!! Love that he is give Emmett a hard time LOL  The fact that he almost never swears makes it so damn hot when he suddenly does...

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Soooooooo excited to find out that you are continuing this story!!!! It was my favorite in the Driven to Desire challange!!!  *bouncing in my seat* Yea!!!!!!

There's so much to say...I love this Bella cause she has gusto...Edward, well when is there NOT something to love about him. Even when he is a dick I love him. So dominating and and and hot...sigh....anyway, thanks so much for continuing this <3

 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Stalker Edward....very nice!!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kinda didn't see that coming but I likey very much :D  Stalker-vamp Edward, yes please!