Reviews by twinmamma
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Gripping story...

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672331
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake

Even knowing their seperation is temporary, this is such a heartbreaking chapter.  Your Edward & Bella are well real / completely fleshed out characters - it's so easy to identify with them & feel their pain.

Quiet Storm is one of my favorite stories -- among fan fic, and traditional hard copy novels alike.  I've re-read it numerous times Thanks for creating & sharing it!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13

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Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184429
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One

Amazing story - I loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532880
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I'm so in love with your Edward...  The ultimate hood with a heart of gold  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Damn...  The stuff with Aex is crazy -- butt nothing tops hearing that he lost his virginity to Lauren!!!  And calling him Skip -- that is too awesomely twisted...  

Any chance for another sequel?  I love this family!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I hope this story never ends! Totally looking forward to Edwards POV - those chapters are always my favorites...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Can't wait!!  :)

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Beautiful Life

Sorry about your living situation...  Thanks for teh update - so great to finally see Jasper & Edward resolve their issues.

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77470
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever

Such a great story - I really enjoyed it!

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

LOL...  He forgot to invite her on the date... No biggie!  It's not as if she's got a million other places to be.  Her leg is jacked & the rain has trapped them indoors.  She just gets treated to a "surprise date"...  :)



Author's Response:

Hi there twinmamma

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad you enjoyed it. Laughter at Edward's expense seems to be a common them amongst reviews. lol.

 

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers

Sorry to hear about your Internet problems.  Can't wait to read the final chapters.  I've really enjoyed this story



Author's Response:

Sorry for the major fail in getting this review reply in a timely manner.  Been stressing with the issues of moving and getting the net working, but on the bright side things are working well now.  Chapter 33 should post on time, I’m working on 34 right now and Nikky is working on the Epilogue right now.  WOOT WOOT!  Not much for teasers after this chapter, but keep those reviews and thoughts coming in, we love to hear what you have to say.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

TEASER!!! For chapter 34 – subject to changes during beta process...
With the help of Garrett, he got his hands on a large poker table, and even hired a dealer for the night with Aro’s help.  He asked Bella and Esme to make us up snacks, and then sent Emmett and Jasper to get the big people juice.  We kept the card game light while Seth was playing with us.  After he went to bed, we gambled a little harder.  Emmett’s only complaint about the night was that there seemed to be the lack of strippers. Actually, he was upset because there were no strippers.  

The night was relaxing and rather quiet, so it was perfect for me. I don’t see this as my last night of freedom, but the last night of my old, solitary life.  I can’t wait to have Bella as my wife.  I can’t wait to call her Mrs. Masen tomorrow.  Tomorrow I marry my soulmate, and my true life will begin.

~HCV~

Here I am, standing up at the front of the church.  Everything is so beautifully decorated.  The girls made it look perfect, and I know it’s exactly as Bella wanted it.  The ladies of the church made sure that every single detail of Bella’s wishes was precisely the way she had envisioned it.  

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times

Great story. 



Author's Response:

Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete.  We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short.  When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both.  Nikky has written hers and I have written mine.  Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on.  I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS.  We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten.  THANK YOU!  Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it.  Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

I really enjoyed the story!  Thanks so much for sharing it...



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Learning French by bagpuss Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

One shot previously posted for Dirty cheeky Monkey's 'Lemon Squeezing Wednesday' featuring Bella & Eduard. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110 Read Count: 5758
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2014
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot story - just wish you had the translations in the author's notes at the end



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment & I have now done so. Hope it helps!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182382 Read Count: 106387
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Read this at ff - probably my favorite Edward ever!  Love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm so glad you love him! :)  He's a blast to write!

Through The Woods by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sisters, Alice and Bella are worried over their sick father. Bella takes it upon herself to travel through the woods to see Zafrina, the witch. She will be sent on a quest to prove her worthiness to save her father. Along the way, Bella will find herself bargaining favors with ogres (Emmett), elves (Carlisle) and even fairies (Edward)...which one will win her heart? Consider yourself warned that this will be an ADULT fairytale!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11895 Read Count: 14750
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Forever

Very creative & fun story!

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

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banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Great chapter -- but seeing Tanya's name in fan fic never bodes well :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

So glad to get folowup re: proposal and heart tattoos! 

As to the outtake - I always love hearing what's going on in Edward's head generally -- but especially with your Edward!  He's such a sweet goober - it's so cute hearing this tough tatoo guy gush over Bella :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

So happy to see you posting again! 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

LOL.... Naturally the lesbian scene turned him on - but could he have handled a hetero scene as well?  And I'm kinda bummed we missed the proposal scene -- hope it makes it to an outtake. 

After such a long hiatus - I re-read the early chapters -- such a great story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412095
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Can't wait to see the next chapter...

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

Awwww....  Loved it!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 78: Edward

I'm really enjoying this story...  So sweet & romantic + lemons - can't beat that combination!   Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 116: Edward

So sad -- but I loved it!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 136: Edward

Fancy food vs. Naked Edward --> Naked Edward wins every time!  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 106: Edward

Good chapter.  Glad you didn't draw it out & they came to a quick resolution. Looking forward to watching the story continue to develop & seeing how they deal with a 2nd seperation & eventually living together.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 118: Edward

Great chapter...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 120: Edward

Aww..  BTW - I must have misread the pervious chapter, because I thought Bella was asking Edward if he wanted her to play with *his* ass...  Suffice to say, I was curious what his answer would have been.  LOL! 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 124: Edward

Awww...  I loved their sexy Skype time

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

That was sweet!  And I appreciate the frequent, multi-chapter updates...

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 130: Edward

So happy with the time jumps!  Can't wait to see what Bella gets for her b-day

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

Awww...  Can't wait to read all about their reunion!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Awww... What a sweet b-day present!  Can't wait to see what he's got in store for the weekend.  And Mike's panic - priceless!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 140: Edward

Hot chapter!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 160: Edward

Can't wait to see your take on Jake :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 170: Edward

Really enjoyed this story -- can't wait to see how you guys wrap it up!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 173: Bella

Great ending to a great story!  Looking forward to the Epilogues...

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Another great chapter.  I can't imagine how you'll deal with the obvios sexual tension between your two characters without crossing the line since Wisp is so damaged -- I look forward to seeing how your story develops.

As to your author's note -- I agree w/ you re: Hollywood & not confusing the actors w/ their roles...  Having said that, I'd bet $1,000,000 that "Kristen"  is going to unseat "Tanya" as the lead bitch in future fan fics. :)

 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whisp's story is so tragic -- I can't imagine how she'll recover...  I'm just hoping there will be a light at the end of the tunnel.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Glad you're feeling better - and happy to see a new chapter.  Happy holidays!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Glad to see the story moving forward.  I know it would be completely unbelievable if Wisp got better overnight -- and that is NOT what i want at all -- but it's so hard to see how damanged she is because of the horrors she's been through.  I just can't wait 'til she has some true communications skills, walks on her own feet and uses furniture. 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

:)

A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59616
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love the slow build up!  I hate when stories go from two people to being deeply in love in 2-3 chapters. 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

With all the build up - that simple kiss was hotter than most full-on sex scenes...  Great job!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So worth the wait!!!  What a great payoff for all the building tension...

Summary:

Edward is a medschool drop-out come pharmacist who hates his life. Almost every moment of it.

The light of his coldmedicine aisle is Isabella Swan, a frequent customer and constant source of escapist sexual fantasies; he is desperate for the courage and impetus to make them reality.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10542 Read Count: 1365
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2012
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So happy to see a new chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I will try my best to be less flakey in the future. The good part about my boyfriend being out of town is that I will pretty much spend the next month writing when not working.

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So glad to hear your heath scare was a false alarm...  Loved the lemon - and can't wait to learn more about your take on Jasper & Charlie!!



Author's Response:

If you want to see my inspiration for Jazz check out my tumblr.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

-Allie

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

Good stuff ;)

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 297: Chapter 297

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Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

Awww!!  Can't wait to read Bella's reaction to knowing Sir & the hottie at the office are one and the same... :)

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 295: Chapter 295

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

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Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 273: Chapter 273

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

Damn...  :)

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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 272: Chapter 272

Damn - those are some hot pics! 

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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 271: Chapter 271

Yeah!  She gets Rosalie's approval... :)

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Damn...  Totally hot!  :)

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 270: Chapter 270

Can'/t wait to see what additional drama Rosalie creates  :)

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 296: Chapter 296

Awww... Her first face-to-face/blindfold-free BJ  :)

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 289: Chapter 289

Oh man -- can't wait for the next chapter!!  They are so close to their fairytale ending...  Okay well, maybe not the traditional, "Disney-esque" fairytale ending -- but you get my point...  :)

Although, now that I think of it, Cinderella sounds like a born submissive  ;)  



Author's Response:

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm now that I think about it... that would be a really fun fic to write... step sisters Domming her, and then Sir taking over... :)

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

Damn!!!   Talk about employee benefits!!!!   And the Soapy Mayham image is unbelievably hot!  Her work is amazing!!!    Thanks for an amazing story -- and I'm so happy to do my part to get you the #1 spot with a quick review.  :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 274: Chapter 274

Ooo, bad Butterfly...  I'm glad she's gonna get some resolution re: being the only one & deserves the punishment for not being honest with her Sir...  Not that he's been perfect either - but not being subject to punishment spankings is one of the perks of being a Dom  :)

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Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 219: Chapter 219

LOL...  With or without the lube? ;)



Author's Response:

OMG... i wrote it and forgot lube... lmao even harder, will go back and add that in

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 307: Chapter 307

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

Love this story and no worries about the infrequent updates!  The story seems to be drawing to a close and it's nice that the delay will draw it out a bit... I'll miss this story when it's done :)

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

So hpot -- Dying to Edward's take on the night...  Can't wait til he realizes she's different from the rest and his "hands off" rule bites the dust :)

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 180: Chapter 180

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 181: Chapter 181

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 182: Chapter 182

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

Can't wait 'til Edward shows his face to his Butterfly!

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

I'll miss the updates - but totally understand.  Thanks for the head-up!  Hope you get through your work quickly.

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 193: Chapter 193

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

:) it sound like Edward's worlds are starting to collide.... Yeah!

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

So happy to see Edward finally admitting that Bella is something special... :) 

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 215: Chapter 215

LOL...  Love that Edward is torturing Emmett!  :)



Author's Response:

then u will really love the next chapter!

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Date: 08 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 245: Chapter 245

Do damn hot...  Get it girl!  ;)

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

Awwwww..... He loves her!  What a nice end to a horrible week (Sandy did a number on my house).  :)

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

damn!!!  The story + phot is hot!

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Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

LOL!!!!!! 

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

LOL....  And the photo you found for this chapter - priceless  :)

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

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Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 224: Chapter 224

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Oh man - I hope Edward turns up the romance a bit soon...  Don't get me wrong -- the D/s stuff is crazy hot -- but I can't wait 'til they get to know each other outside the playroom :)

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 230: Chapter 230

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

Ooooh...  Can't wait 'til Sir & Butterfly take it to the next level :)

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 238: Chapter 238

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

LOL.. How does she not realize that Sir must be a work colleague??  Then again -- all that oral sex is probably making her a little fuzzy-headed ;-)

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

LOL...  That must have been a sight for his vampire eyes.... not to mention the smell for his vampire nose ;) 

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 243: Chapter 243

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 250: Chapter 250

Iwas wondering what she crushed...  And isn't that the first time they've ever really snuggled & shared sweet kisses? 

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Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

his chapter is such a tease (and I mean that it the best way possible!)  How much longer 'til the blindfold comes off...?  I'm dying!!  Please don't tell me that'll be the end of the story -- I need at least a couple of chapters where Bella gets the full Dom-Edward experience! 

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 253: Chapter 253

Yeah!!!   Great point Carlisle!  Oooh - I'm so excited to see where this leads :)

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Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 254: Chapter 254

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