Reviews by Twilight2Midnight
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995771
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Another awesome chapter - you certainly know how to write them :)

T2M x

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Who's who in the zoo! I'm not worried about that - I want to know why Esme burst into tears? Is it because she's happy? Emotionally happy that Bella did this for them? Surely that is why.... 

Yes, just another amazing chapter - as usual :)

Love & hugs to you aswell...

T2M x



Author's Response:

so flipping clever... :)

thanks for the review T2M

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh wow... what a chapter! So loved every word - putting us into a sense of security THEN pow... in come James & Jacob to kill their awesome time together!

 

Great chapter with the crying to thanking to mending all broken wounds to relationships to family time :) Just a perfect chapter

 

T2M x



Author's Response:

thank you - praise indeed :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh - I don't even know where to begin with reviewing this chapter other than saying....

WOW!!!!

 

Full of emotions in this chapter from - loneliness to compassion to lust to suspense to happiness to withdrawal to my favourite - climax to overload.... oh I could go on & on!

But wow - what a chapter :)

Awesome

T2M x



Author's Response:

thank you so much - your rock xoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OMG - I had to stop reading this chapter several times (which I might add, I have NEVER done in ANY story before) as I was starting to cry & get VERY emotional about them... together, each on their own, their thoughts aobut what is happening to m=them etc.... WOW! What a rollercoaster of a chapter :)

 

Absolutely brilliantly written - loved EVERY word!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you T2M - you make my heart warm xoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Edward is feeling uneasy as Bella is going to be kidnapped - James & Jacob have been lying low for WAY too long now... they are hunting her now for sure...

Geez, I'm getting scared even for the next chapter!!!!

LOL - how funny is that... scared & it's not even posted yet!!!

Loved this chapter by the way... I'm glad Bella is feeling less nervous with the other couples! Mentoring is a great idea for Bella.

Oh boy - bring on this chapter & get it over with PLEASE!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Loved the INXS shirt idea! As I come form Australia & I loved that band growing up... Michael was it for me for many years!!!!

 

I had already guessed Rosie was pregnant when you first mentioned she was sick!

I was fortunate to never have morning sickness with either of my girls but I have 2 very close girlfriends that are 10 & 12 weeks right now & they are sick as all hell :( Poor darlings!!!!

 

Fantastic chapter - yes, I totally agree, we really needed that lighter chapter after all that they have been through!!!

 

Love your work ;)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Love the "OMP" - very cute :)

WOW - what a chapter... of course, just full of your brilliance as usual!!

Rose pregnant... awesome

Bella writing in her journal - loved the entries... as did Edward :)

 

So much in this chapter... just perfect... thank you!

T2M x



Author's Response:

thanks honey, glad you liked it

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I just wish I had the time to read everytime I get an email in... but this way I have a few to catch up on...

By the way - loved this chapter... boy oh boy - Christmas is goin gto be fun :)

T2M x

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

WOW - a very confronting chapter... I was in tears for most of it!

I totally agree with you there with the Father/Daughter relationship... I have the same with my Dad, alcoholism & he doesn't talk! Much like Charlie I suppose....

 

Thank you for this chapter, made me think & realise alot about my Dad!

I even had a what I would call a "normal" conversation on the phone with him today after reading this chapter! So my thanks goes to you & for opening my eyes to how his side of this seem/work or even how he might feel!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

A full on & very hot chapter - I loved it... I love how you write such a long & wonderful chapter!

It takes me awhile to get to read it all but I shut myself away & read the whole lot all to myself :) 

No kids or hubby to annoy me.... yep, they don't get fed until I finish every last word!!!!

haha - horrible mother I am ... but my stories come first!!! LOL

T2M x



Author's Response:

thanks for the review T2M, none of my chapters are meant to be so long, but I find that I prefer to finish a train of thought in one go, as such - it's easier than trying to break it up and then jumping in again.

now go and tuck those kids in and give the hubby a kiss xoxo

Michele

:)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I'm so glad you r wrote the A/N at the beginning....

I am in tears! I think the last 3 lines got me the most out of the whole chapter - maybe it was just building up to seeing each other gain :(

My heart is sinking but as you said - it was needed!

BUT really - a whole month without talking to each other, 2 weeks without any clothes other than slep & gym gear! Oh boy - I thought this lifestyle was a interesting one but geez, YOUR punishments are so harsh :) LOL

As usual can't wait for more... also thanks for the rec's too!!

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry , but the thought of Alice Cullen with nothing to wear but sweats and jammies was just too good to miss up on. Jasper is an original to say the least.  Thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

WOW - what a confronting, emotional & crazy chapter!!!

There is SO much to take in on this chapter - they are getting longer & longer & so full of raw emotions .... I need tissues just to get through it!

 

You are one amazing writer!

Can't wait for more - was going to write this full on review - but it's all in my head & i can't put it into words!!! I'll just go & have another cry for these two!

By the way - loved Garrett & Kate - they make me laugh SO hard :)

T2M xxx



Author's Response:

T2M - I know that they are getting too long - I will try and cut them back a bit, promise.

Thanks so much for the review - I love Garrett's dry humor :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I am so in love with this story - I actually wait until EVERYONE goes to bed, so I can saviour every word in every chapter!!!!

Th other story you recommended - Witness Protection... that is the 3rd time another writer has done that.... so off I go now to read this one :)

 

Thanks for the amazing update - as usual...

T2M x



Author's Response:

hmm you are like me - I do the same with your chapters :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Geez Michelle, you SO love those cliffies!!!

Are you trying to kill us as much as Jacob is now dead or what!!!!

It's taken me 3 bloody long days to finally get to read this whole chapter.... I so don't like my RL right now as it's keeping me away from my reading!!!! hehehe

 

Yes, have been reading these stories too - Love Swing my Way too!!!!

Have a good week & can't wait for more of PLU....

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Fantastically brilliantly written chapter - there is SO much to review about but hey...

When it is written this well - why say anything at all - except for....

WOW - that was amazing!!!!

As always - will read your rec's as well... just more reading for me :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

As usual a full on brilliantly written chapter :)

Glad Bella is finally getting it!

Love it as always!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

thank you so much - xoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Michelle - have a wonderful Chrissy & NY... take your time & enjoy RL for a change... sit back, relax & enjoy this time with family & friends :)

 

Fiorella - are these summer storms a real bitch?!?! I live on the Gold Coast & we are missing most of them where I live but you sure are coping them thick & fast!!! 

I feel for you guys up there... I would NEVER risk the gorgeous Mac either :)

Just wanted to add - i am in Sydney for Chrissy & finally got to met our one & only TSO :) How exciting was that... like meeting my very own celebrity!!! I don't know if you have meet her but she is just gorgeous & extremely funny!

i hope you have a wonderful break over Chrissy & NY... enjoy those glorious summer storms of ours & stay safe!!!

 

Love to all readers, reviewers & happy people for Christmas...

T2M x

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

What did Bella ever do to Bree? Why has she got such venom towards her?!?!

Loved Bella & Edward's little lemon - getting a bit citrusy :)

Glad that Bella is going to Alice & Esme for advice too...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was recommended this story & it's got me hooked already :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW - poor girls... how will they adjust?

Interesting story to say the least...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Brilliant chapter - didn't see him coming back to take the girls again!

Awesome chapter :)

All I can say is - thank goodness I have a few chapters to catch up on.... lucky for me!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just can't imagine the readjusting these girls are going to have to deal with & how long it will take to reeducate them.

Amazing story - I have to say once again :)

Got my heart beating so fast reading this :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Bree - who is she with now? 

I'm glad Bella & Stella have got there homes sorted out...

Only to get better - well, I hope so...

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews! I am glad you were recomended to my story! I hope you continue to enjoy it. there is still so much more to come.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As Edward said - baby steps but I like the fact Charlie knows all about the Cullens & the werewolves.... makes life alittle bit easier :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

WOW - he did take alot of girls...

I love how Jake imprinted on Stella - perfect :)

I'm reading this in my iphone as well & it wont let me leave reviews! 

I'll have to go back & review if I get to the end of a chapter :)

I love this story - you have me hook, line & sinker!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Geez how many graves did they find?

Interesting Bella is getting jealous of Stella's attention from the men... 

Atleast Edward is kissing her - giving her all the love she is needing!

T2M x

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor Bella - her trust is broken!

Loved them riding Jake :)

T2M x

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad she came back...

Edward would be in lots of trouble if she didn't.... LOL

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This was a brilliant chapter... loved every word :)

T2M x

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Can't review - have to get to the next chapter NOW!!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your wondersul reviews! more to come soon. I hope you keep reading.

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Something or someone's coming.....

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG - you can't seriously think I want you to leave this story - even for just alittle while!!! NOOOO!!!!

It's great but really getting juicy now :)

Stay with it please.... I love this story!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awesome - have to keep on reading....

On to the next chapter - thank goodness there is still another one to read for me :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG - a cliffie - sorry another chapter to get too.... yes please, pass the tissues!

I hope you are writing another chapter as I get to the last chapters that are posted so far?!?!?!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Fantastic chapter - I'm actually loving all the different POV's... 

Thank goodness there is one more chapter to satisfy me for tonight...

But please post another one soon :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh geez - this is like another cliffie but with lemony citrus attached :)

I can't wait for the next chapter....

PLEASE post soon :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OK so I reread this over the past 18 hours...

YES all 21 chapters as I love this story & so want you to update asap!!!

So cruel to leave us in the waiting game ot see what happens...

Cliffies are cruel but so are writers that don't update for months (sorry was trying to write it less harsh than that!!!!) But I love this story so much that I need you to finish this story & put us out of our misery :)

 

Thank you & I do hope your book is going well....

T2M x



Author's Response:

My appolgizies on the delay. I have been a bit busy with writting another orginal novel to be released in August. So it will be finished i just have to work it into my other writings. thank you so much for reading and reviewing it! I deal with an editor trust me harsh is the norm for me, but she is the greatest and i wouldn't have it any other way. I will see about putting you out of your misery very soon. And yes thank you, Mocked by Destiny has done quite well concidering it ws my first, Am hoping Mocked by Faith does just as well. :) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42793
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waiting

Poor Rose... hope she is ok!?!

Glad Emmett was there to help her - does trouble always follow these two?

Seems like it!

Poor darlings - will they survive all these dramas & get out at the other end ok!?!

I sure hope so... 

 

What's going on with Creepy Freaky Aro? Something strange there.....

T2M x



Author's Response:

yep, emmett to save the day.  i always wished he had the chance to avenge rose in the actual books, so i did it here.  and yes... trouble does always follow these two.  you are right to think aro is creepy.  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

Great start to this story - little bit of background .... then onto more yummier things!!!

Can't wait to read more....

T2M x



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  sorry i didn't write you back sooner... can't respond while i'm at work.  but thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Home

What a fantastic chapter! I want to live in this family too - especially with a "brother" like Edward :)

As they say - Never bet against Alice!!!!!

LOL

T2M x



Author's Response:

lol!  that's right.  no betting against alice.  and i'd love to have a family like the cullens, too.  they're awesome!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Traitor

Geez, I'm already crying at her truthful outburst - I only hope Edward can get through to Bella & soon!

T2M x



Author's Response:

bella's outburst was fueled by hormones and by her feeling overwhelmed.  she'll calm down eventually.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Misunderstanding

WOW - how much can she let go in one ranting? I'm glad she feels this way towards Edward... but how will Emmett handle this?

T2M x



Author's Response:

she did really let go, didn't she?  emmett's slightly less emotional than bella, so he handles things better.  thanks again for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Unstable

I'm so glad Edward is coming to her rescue!!!

She is in need of rescue so badly.... oh & how yummy does this Edward sound!!!!

Flaming HOT!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

edward is such a great character to right.  he is very yummy, too!  agreed!!!  i just want him to cook for me... mmm, cinnamon rolls.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Premonitions

Who is watching them & Alice losing her room key - that can't be good .... can it?!?!

Edward seeing Bella's "boobies" - what a crack up!!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

someone is watching, yes, but we won't find out for a while.  i just had to make edward say that!  it seemed so appropriate for a teenage boy.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Protector

Can't review - have to get to the next chapter...

Hot stuff by the way - can't wait for citrusy lemons from Bella & Edward :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

well, thanks for stopping to say hi!  lemony goodness is waiting for you!  read on, my dear.  thank you so, so much for all of your reviews!!  i loved them all!!  have fun reading!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Intruder

OMG - ok so who is this guy then....

Sorry got to get to the next chapter & fast....

T2M x



Author's Response:

ah, yes.  THAT guy.  you shall find out.  enjoy!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Victims

I really don't like this Aro character - he's seems a bit fishy to me!

I put a bet on that the bodyguard is Jacob.... he's the bigger one of the two!

If it's Jasper - he'll be too much into Alice to watch over Bella..... 

That's my thinking anyway :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

aro is fishy.  and good guess about the bodyguard.  most of the other readers thought it would be jasper.  good job!  thanks again for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

HEHEHE - Fucking Mutt.... love it!!!

Jealous already.... what a classic :)

So I was correct with Jacob... now when does Jasper shows his gorgeous head in this story then? Can't wait for that meeting!!!!

 

This is going to be interesting - Jake & Edward....

T2M x



Author's Response:

edward and jake actually won't have much of a rivalry.  jake is too old for bella in this fic, and fbi agents don't step out of line unless they want their testicles ripped off.  anyway,  glad you're enjoying!!  thanks for the review!! ;)

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Triggers

1/ Loved how Edward has that effect on Bella - slicing her hand... way to go Bella!

2/ Carlisle's story - brilliant... very funny!

3/ The kiss - WTF is going on there - why did Bella run like that?

 

Don't worry Edward I'm just as confused....

T2M x



Author's Response:

bella got a little clumsy when edward brushed up against her, but i think i would, too.  carlisle's story was something i actually witnessed.  fun, let me tell ya.  and next chapter explains bella's hasty escape.  thanks again for all your awesome reviews, sweets!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Help

Ok - my guess is Jasper is the shrink?!?! 

Well I'm hoping it to be :)

Or is Jasper their age - as in Alice, Edward, Emmett & Bella?

Getting to the horrible part of the nightmares - that's for sure!

T2M x



Author's Response:

you shall see!!  the nightmares are horrible, i agree.  it's rather difficult to right those parts.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Shocked

Geez can't review!!!!

Have to keep on reading....

Sorry :(

T2M x



Author's Response:

hahaha!!  that's okay.  glad you're enjoying it!!  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Hiding

This is getting SOOO good :)

Have to get onto the next chapter now!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

aww, thank you so much!!  i'm glad you're enjoying it!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected

Aww their getting closer - AWESOME!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

yeah, it took them awhile, but i think they're getting it! thanks for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped

Never trusted Aro - was really suss about him in the beginning....

Is he in on this as well?

Riley.... never trusted him either!!

Soe really fishy characters coming through now...

T2M x



Author's Response:

aro is shady.  you'll find out just how shady in future chapters.  riley's sneaky, too.  lots of new info being discovered.  thanks again for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Unbelievable

Ok - what's wrong with Edward? I'm worried now...

Bella moving on well with therpy... great!

Edward & Bella - glad they finally did something together - WOW!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

we'll find out about edward soon... and she is moving on very nicely with her therapy.  thanks for the review!! ;)

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Information

WOW - Aro was connected to JAmes all along!! 

DIdn't see that one coming - thought he might have something to do with him but not that deep in!!!

So happy Bella finally opened up to Edward - now they can move forward... well, once Edward tells "us" what's wrong with him too :)

Just hope it's not too bad!

Carlisle & Esme are pretty special people to take on Bella & Emmett - that's for sure!

T2M x



Author's Response:

yep, aro is a dirty, dirty cop.  bella opening up to edward is a huge step in her recovery.  and we'll find out more about edward soon.  thanks so much for the review!! ;)

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Incidents

Go Edward & Bella - get hot & steamy almost every night.... what a wonderful dream for me!!!! haha :)

Edward - blacking out?? NOOOO!!!! Can't lose Edward - can't they take a break from all these dramas yet?? 

Nice citrusy lemons are required for these two! I'm assuming they haven't "done it" yet? Only mucked around as such?

 

Sure hope our darling Eddie is ok??

Now I'm up to date - bugger... now more to read :(

Can't wait for more....

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

lol!  no sexy times for these two just yet.  they're taking it a little slow, but i think it's better that way.  and edward has some 'splaining to do!!  we'll get to that next chapter.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  your teaser is in the mail!  ;)

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession

Oh poor Edward - now he's told Bella... I'm assuming they'll all feel better in a sense of the word about knowing what's wrong!

I just hope he can get better sooner rather than later (operation then recovery.... really quickly) so they can get back to "normal" 

Well, here's hoping anyway :)

Thanks for the quick update too...

T2M x



Author's Response:

well, everything is out in the open now, so hopefully some more healing can begin.  more on his prognosis soon.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

Awesome chapter - now we know what we are dealing with... brilliant :(

The Doc's are back... surely they remember them?

Can't wait for more... thanks for the update!

T2M x



Author's Response:

we do know what's going on.  next chapter will go over more of the details of what's to be expected... and lots of drama!  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Emotions

Well I think you have asked all the questions I would like answered - like right now :)

Yep another chapter would be great for NY's day!!!!! haha

Thanks for the update - Edward will survive - he has too... really he does!

Bella & Emmett will cope with all that's happening & get through the pain - they have too....

The Doc's back in their lives - this is a good thing!

James - well... he's lurking in the shadows - that's for sure!!!

Just don't know when he'll pop out & scare us...

Great chapter by the way.

Sorry to hear about a family death & your headaches...  as like Bella & Emmett.... take your time to get through & process everything!

Happy New Year to you as well... hope you have had a great Christmas too.

T2M x



Author's Response:

lol!  i wish i could answer all those questions for you right now, but that would ruin all the suspense.  i know you understand though.  just food for thought at the moment.  and i wish i could update once or twice a week, but my life just doesn't allow that.  damn RL.  always getting in the way.  in regards to your other comments... edward will survive, bella and emmett have made amazing progress and have learned some much needed coping mechanisms along the way, and james... let's just say we'll get some info on him next chapter.  thanks for the the regrets.  the headaches come and go and the family member will be missed, but is in a better place now.  happy new year to you, too and i'm still recovering from the haul the kids got at christmas.  i see some ma-hoo-sive donations to the local crisis nursery in my future.  thanks so much for the awesome review!!!  ;)

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45295
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

I haven't laughed so hard for a first chapter for so long in a story - that was just brilliant!

Was recommended to this story & glad I decided to read it :)

Bring on more....

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

OMG - what an awesome change to read this - I have always read about Domward not Domella!!!!

Awesome chapter :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3 Two Can Play That Game

How hot was that.... poor Edward blue balls - haha!!!!

I screaming with laughter right now :)

Loving this Bella SO MUCH!!!!!

T2M x

 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

Awww - Bella is totally freaked out by Edward - COOL!!!

OH I just love this story - I know I've told you that already but... geez, it's good :)

Love it, love it, love it!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

Finally Edward got some.... hehe

She's falling for him BIG TIME!!!!

Oh dear... I just hope it's a good thing :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 6 You Show Me Yours and I'll Show You Mine

Oops - the "L" word said & in reality Edward means it I'm sure....

Bella does too but they are both too afraid to say it just yet - it's only been just over a week!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 7 The Happiest Place on Earth

That was one of the hottest chapters I've read in a long time!!!

Gotta love those citrusy lemons :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!! <3

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?

Awwww.... THey're finally realising what's going on between them?!?

I so hope so :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 9 Can I Get an Amen?

What a brilliant chapter - I know I'm saying this everytime but I just love this story...

Also - WOOHOO!!! Love their new contract :)

Happy days!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!

Another fantastic chapter - 

Playboy mansion to I love you to visiting Daddy dearest in a nudist colony!!!!

HAHA :)

Brilliant just brilliant!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: OT Bella's Interview

That was just great - getting a little bit inside Bella's head :)

Thanks for that!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I

I nearly died laughing reading this chapter - extremely funny!!!!

I need tissues from all the tears running down my face... I'm laughing that hard :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch 12 Happy Birthday Baby: Part II

Wonderful party - chucking up & all :)

Holding her hair back - now that's love!!!! hehe

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 13 Things That Go Hump in the Night

Ahhh - change of play... nice switch :)

Edward really didn't want to do it though.... interesting!

Funny - she has the dreams of Edwards words... wonder if he'll fill her in at all?

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

The very first line of this chapter had me laughing again...

"I was convinced I had broke Bella!!!"

How brilliant is that line.... hysterical :)

 

Baby on the way - WOOHOO.... normally I don't like babies in these E/B stories but I'm just lovin' this story SO much.. can't wait til he has to tell Charlie!!!! haha....

 

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15 Eager Beaver

What a wonderful surprise he kept from Bella :) 

What a man!!!! I wouldn't kick him out of bed if he ... !!!! LOL

What a gorgeous family they both have.... atleast they weren't naked again :)

But how on earth can you leave me in a cliffie like this???

I have read this story over the past 2 days when I could... in between cooking breakfast, lunch & dinners, taking kids to school, picking them up, house worke went out the window even... etc etc...

 

So now I get this.... why oh why isn't there another chapter to read...

Of all chapters to read too & then nothing... absolutely nothing :(

PLEASE update soon!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all the wonderful reviews!!! I will try to update soon, hopefully within the next couple of days :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 18 Party at the Mansion

Loved this chapter - just brilliant & very funny :)

Thanks for the update...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

What a wonderful ending!!

I do feel for Bella & her labor though!!! WOW - what 14 hrs or so... poor girl :(

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story & can't wait for more from you soon!!!

Thanks for the story.

Have a great Christmas & New Year with your family...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Epilogue

Perfect ending :)

Loved this story - thank you !!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/12/images/ForTheLoveOfMyObsession.jpg

He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward's gone... now her life is with Emmett?!?

Only you would think of this!!!

Oh boy, I love your stories, so I have to continue on...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ohhh - so that's how he weaseled his way in.... nice & slow!

He must be "dying" for thr wedding to be over with then!

Interesting for sure!

Oh & I meant to mention your Rosalie in this story - she's wicked!!!! (and owned!!!!)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Geez... who told him about all the dreams that Bella wanted?

Rosalie, I'm assuming!?!?

But it seems alittle strange he decided to do it whilst she was away!!!

Evil - pure evil :(

Poor Bella - feel sorry for her already!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Contest Nomination

TPW is the BEST STORY EVER!!!!

You so ROCK with your stories - that's why I had to start this now :)

Good luck with the Awards...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

NO NO NO Bella ... say NO!!!

Bugger - she's already married to the Evil Emmett (EE) anyway now :(

So we know Rose is on EE's side... I gather she called him to warn him of her motives?!? Can't trust slutty girls that are still sleeping with your now said husband!

Did Bella click to his asking her to marry him? "I have loved yu since the first moment I saw you in that coffee shop...." or "I'll NEVER let you go..."

SCARY!!!!

Get out while you still can....

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMFG - he is so damn crazy, freaky, scary, creepy & anything else anyone else can think of...

I usually like a nice Emmett but this one is just down right... YUK!!!!

(sorry can't think of any other words for this creep)

 

But as usual - brilliant chapter...

Thanks for the update...

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389629
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Oh no Krazi - this has me in - hook, line & sinking lemony sinker already :)

You have to keep on going.... I know you have a few chapters up already & I can't wait to keep on reading them...

I was recommended over here - so happy I was!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Laterzzz:P

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

OMG - what a chapter... full of history but still my goodness - those dreams are freakin AWESOME!!!

Can't wait for the real thing!!!! 

Also - never bet against Alice.... LOL

YUMMY :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

I'm sorry but your A/N was a classic - "I kinda vomited in my mouth... "

That absolutely cracked me up...

Fantastic chapter by the way...

Now midnight here - so I'm off to bed... savouring the next chapter for tomorrow when kids are at school & hubby at work :)

Yeah for me!!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

Meant to let you know I was rec'd here too - also I SO love Escala as well - Icy is simply awesome & her Fifty shades is just AMAZING!!!!

But so is this story... I can't wait til they met but also SEE each other for the first time!

I can't believe they dream about each other SO much :)

Very citrusy dreams at that too!!! Oh how yummy!

Can't wait for more.... I'll keep the dreams happening until then....

Gonig to have a cold shower now...

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

AWESOME chapter - so glad you posted today just as I finished the 4th chapter, I get an email saying you posted another one :) 

WOOHOO for me!!!!

People Like Us - she rec'd me over here! PLU is a brilliant story too...

I think I'm a little stuck on Domward stories!!!!

Well, I have to say in my own defense - you guys write him SO well.... hehehe....

 

Can't wait for more - flogger on the cross for you if no update within a week (well 10 days then....) But seriously, I think you might enjoy it too much!!!! 

Hmmm - especially with Dom Edward doing the flogging!!!

Oh how delicious...

Til next time... enjoy writing :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

My thoughts are with you Ari... take care of yourself & your family over the Christmas/New Year period - it will be a very hard time but you can get through it day by day!

 

Awesome chapter once again lovies!!! I do love these two :)

Hot Sparten/Kitten citrusy lemons is always a great way to start the day :) LOL

Christmas cheer to the both of you 

T2M x



Author's Response:

xoxoxooxoxoxoxox marry xmas babes.....xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

Oh this is so going to blow up in his face BIG TIME!!!!

Watch out Edward - Angela is very clever too!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

Lemons in elevators are always awesome :)

Yes, kill Angela & Eric - LMAO!!!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

It's been extremely hard to read today - just when I thought I had the whole day to myself... my 12yr old daughter decides to break her arm :(

So off to the doctors we go & yes, in plaster for the next 6 weeks!!!!

End of our school year here, she's School Captain, State Athlete & School champion swimmer.... as well as dancing & singing concerts - she has to cancel everything now :(

 

So I didn't get to read until now - so now it's off to another chapter :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

Nasty man!!!

Yeah - jumping for joy she has found out!!!!

But is Edward ok - will he remember it all? I do hope so... 

T2M x



Author's Response:

:) you will just have to read and see....thank you for your review...it means a lot to us DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot doesn't even describe it :)

On to the next chapter for me!!! WOOHOO!!!

Got rec'd to your story - so glad I did :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMFG - what a hot citrusy lemony chapter - WOW!!!!!

I think I held my breathe thru out that whole chapter..... :)

Now on to more - yippee...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

Another fantastic chapter.... 

Can't wait for when they realise who each other is :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

Geez - you keep on leaving these cliffies & I have to get to the next chapter....

Which thank goodness for me is up just for me!!!!

Sorry - no long review - must read .... midnight here & have tog et to bed too :(

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for the reviews. Im glad your enjoying the beginning of Spartan and Kitten..hehe ur in luck..u have a few more chapters to read...and we should be updating in the next day or two....Dlir and Ari