Reviews by sonogal
Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 120019
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

If she is so tired then sleep. She could home school and be done with school. She is choosing to put so much stress on herself. She needs to just concentrate on getting better. Her priorities are off now.



Author's Response:

True, but at the same time, school is the only part of her life right now that is somewhat normal. When the rest of your life sucks, you try to hold on to what you can. Thank you for the review:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Bella is having a pity party right now. It is a common stage with cancer patients. The goal is to get them past it.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

That was very nice of her classmates. I bet she didn't think she had so many friends who really cared about her.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I am so glad that she had this special time. It will put her in the right mindset to start the fight again with the transplant.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I hope meeting Nick and hearing his story gave her a little more courage and hope.



Author's Response:

The more people she knows who have done this, and survived, the more hope she has. Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think the blog is a good idea for Bella to talk to other patients.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

What an emotional nightmare for Bella. I feel so bad for Edward having to see that and not be able to wake her up.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

This was such a tear producing chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I cried alot with this entire story:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Bella needs to take care of herself and let Carlisle do his job. He said Emmett was ok. She needs to trust him.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Fevers can make you have the weirdest dreams.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Fevers can make you have the weirdest dreams.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Edward is so exhausted. He can hardly function. Bella's fever needs to break soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I am glad that thing are looking better.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I am so glad to have a happy chapter. Yeah!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

The first day home after being gone awhile is always the best.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

This was such a nice calm chapter. Bella and Edward just being is a good thing.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

They got Carlisle good.



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

I wonder if Carlisle is going to different stores to get the supplies. They might start wondering why he is buying so many condoms.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

I think it is a wonderful opportunity, but I think they still should go to college.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Bella made it to a day she didn't think she would see. I bet this class had more married couples than any other class in the history of Forks High School.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I am so glad that they all got to go and see Tricia. She needs to know that she has a whole new family to love and support her.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

This was such a wonderful story that I will miss.  I can't believe Carlisle's cancer came back after all of these years. At least he was able to see his children grow up. He was able to a whole lot of grandchildren. Even if his life was shorten, it was trully a blessed life.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Impulsive Chase

This story sounds really good. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing. Next update will be up on Sunday ♥ xo Mina

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Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: The Real Cinderella

Angela needs to chill. She has her big brother to keep check on the Edward/Bella relationship. Angela just needs to be there for Bella if she needs her. She and Edward already made the choice to explore this relationship. They will be great together.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Royal Duties

Alice and Jasper made me so mad. They should not have yelled at Edward, especially since he just regained consciousness. They could have waited and had a normal discussion. I think they forget that they work for him. Yes, he shouldn't have run away, but maybe if they gave him room to breath he would be happier. They should trust him more. I hope he gets in touch with Bella, so she knows he is alright. She was so frantic and Alice and Jasper just dismissed her. They should talked to her and gotten information from her.

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Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 13: The Pending Assignment

Loved the chapter. It was so sweet.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Unforeseen Consequences

I feel so bad for Bella. She didn't know of his allergy and now she is sitting in her brother's car not knowing what is happening to Edward. I hope once Edward is ok, he will go to the art store. Carmen knows how to find her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Unspoken Promise

I am so happy that Bella has Caleb and Carmen. Their mother is such a shrew. I can't wait until Edward finds her again.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: The Google Search

I am so happy that Bella is getting away from crazy Renee. Bella and Angela in Europe together is a great plus. Edward will find her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: The Next Move

I am so glad that the story is back.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: The Last Straw

Renee is such a horrible person. She will never be happy and likes to make everyone as miserable as she is.

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Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: The Blank Canvas

I can't wait until they  see each other again.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: The Modern Fairytale Part I

Glad they are having a great time. Bella still needs painting supplies.  Then they can just enjoy themselves. 

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189018
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

I loved this chapter. I just hope no one was around. Edward and Bella would not live this one down. Emmett would go crazy.



Author's Response:

Haha I promise nobody saw ;)  Em is definitely going to be jealous!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Leaping

The world is suppose to come to an end this weekend. Could it be because the Swans and the Cullens meet? Only joking!  Poor Edward having to deal with the crazy overly horny Renee. they should try to take Edward's gift on the airplane and get it confiscated. Oh darn! they need a place to hide all of her horrible gifts. Lets hope they never move close. Bella would hate it. She would have to have her mom's creative crap in her house not just when they visit.



Author's Response:

Haha that might just be what does it!  Lord knows my mind hurts just thinking about writing it! hehe

You know if they did something to statue #1 she'd have fun making another. hehe

True, they don't want them living too close.  At least they're in a building you need to gain entry to.  They could keep them out until they get all the junk placed. hehe

Thanks for the review hon!

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

Why would Bella want to rub an ugly statue when she has the real thing to rub all over. I don't this story to end I lov it so much.



Author's Response:

Haha so very true!  She'll hold out for some real abs ;)  I'm glad you want more!  Even after it's done, lots of outtakes to come! :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

I can understand Edward being mad. They should have told him, so he can prepare himself mentally for whatever the outcome. He is an adult.



Author's Response:

Yes he is and it's understandable that he's mad, but I understand why they did it too.  If it's nothing, then he's worried for no reason.  Parents don't have it easy!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

That was so funny. I guess they are rich enough that $100,000 isn't going to freak them out for an evening of fun. I think Edward owes him big. Edward may regret that fact.



Author's Response:

Haha yeah $100,000 isn't a lot to them like it would be to the majority of us.  I don't think Edward will regret it!  Em may be a handful but his heart is in the right place ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

I love this story. I am glad the gossip girls calmed down after a rocky start.

I hate this years Super Bowl. I hate both teams. I don't know what to do. I  guess go with who I hate least. I better think this one through.



Author's Response:

Yeah they're not so bad :)  Once the surprise wore off, Lauren calmed considerably.  Jess, not so much!

Aww sorry you hate both teams.  Always makes it tough.  Good luck!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Great chapter. I loved how the girls got Emmett and Jasper back.



Author's Response:

Haha thank you!  Emmett needed some payback and Jasper was just along for the ride, too bad for him ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer

I am proud of Bella for taking care of herself, but I think it is sweet that all of the boys rushed over to rescue and protect her. I wish more men were like them. The world would be a better place. I hope Dan got the message and doesn't start harassing women in other locals. He needs to stop all together.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the boys coming to the rescue but being unnecessary, more or less.  Of course they came a runnin!  Dan got the message and really this thing with Bella was a one time thing.  She's dating a QB and rejected him hard publicly.  He'll stop, I promise!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress

They are so funny. I am so glad that they got Victoria back. She so needed to be fired after the commercial. She finally got what she deserved. I wondered how Bella is keeping tabs on Edward's performance. Does she have a "price sheet"? I love the playfulness of their relationship.

Author's Response:

Thank you ;)  Victoria got hers.  She didn't really do anything fireable prior, I didn't think.  She overstepped her bounds but backed off when he requested, or seemed to.  Then she messed up bigtime last night.

She must have a mental price sheet, huh?   She'll probably only deduct a dollar now that they're down to 100K tho!  Their banter is a lot of fun to write.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

This chapter was so funny. Tears came to my eyes, I was laughing so hard.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad I made you laugh that hard!  Awesome!  I had a blast with it and I'm glad you did too!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass

That was such a funny joke Emmett pulled. I knew Emmett knew about Edward and Bella on the field. Emmett seems to know anything that can embaress you. It is his hobby.



Author's Response:

Haha Emmett does have a sixth sense for those things, doesn't he?  He makes me laugh, all the time.  So glad you enjoyed him!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

The 3 boys will handle this jerk quickly. If they can't leave their hotel, they will find a way to get Ron their fast. They will save Bella from the jerk.



Author's Response:

:) I think they're definitely going to find a way to get to her.  Emmett has no barriers, you know!  haha Glad you're thinking of possibilities, love it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

I am glad her boss explained to her that even though she can take care of herself she needs to allow Edward to take care of her. He has that need. He loves her. Bella also needed that pep talk about not giving up. It has only been 1 week. She can't give up her dream because of idiots.



Author's Response:

She knows that, but she's more worried about his career than hers.  She doesn't want to be a distraction, but you note, she never thought of walking away from him.  She wouldn't even consider giving up her dream were it not for him, but he wouldn'tw ant that either :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

Bella needs to stop being a worry wort. They want to be together, so they might as well be together. Edward should propose soon. Life is too short to not live it to the fullest. Bella is one who will worry life a way. She needs Edward in her life, so she can enjoy life.



Author's Response:

She's not a worry wort, she's a smart girl who has some reservations about giving up her whole existence for a man only 3 months after meeting him.  He'll propose when I'm ready for him to.  No worries.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

Rose will get Emmett back for all of his mischief. I am glad that Ted stood up for Bella and told her to come to him. She should of in the first place. Things at work should be easier from now on because she has support.



Author's Response:

She has plenty of support, she just didn't utilize it at first.  All is well.  

Rose will keep Emmett on his toes, no doubt about it!

Thanks for the review ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 23 Outtake, The Second String

I like Riley. They need to find him a nice man, so he can be a couple and hang out with the group. He is such a good sport.

Author's Response:

Haha so true, Riley needs a lovely boyfriend that will fit right in with the rest of them.  I'll see what I can do.  He's very cool and I really enjoy writing him!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

What a neat movie theater. I loved Edward's and Charlie's banter. It was so funny. They will be close buddies one day.



Author's Response:

It is neat!  It's real and I want to go but they don't have any on my coast.  Not fair!

Edward and Charlie were so much fun together!  Glad you enjoyed them.  They'll get along fine eventually :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

I almost forgot about the ad until Alice kept jumping up and down about halftime. I love Carlisle and Esme. The are such a sexy couple.



Author's Response:

Haha Glad I could surprise you with it!  Carlisle and Esme are quite sexy.  I love that about them!  Thanks for the review ;) More Monday!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

Edward is such a momma's boy. He could not think of anything but worse case. His ability to keep on task  backfires when his mind is not on the game. Bella will help him. He is so stubborn, but so is Bella.



Author's Response:

Well, it's always hard to focus on the positive when you first hear that kind of thing.  He definitely didn't have his mind and heart in the game.  Bella will absolutely help him get on track again :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

Emmett is going to take it to the locker room or something as crazy. Bella needs to be honest with Renee and tell her she does not want appreciate her art. I could not stand it if my mom was so embarressing. It is no wonder Bella is always blushing. Edward better dig up some good dirt on Emmett and be ready for the ambush.



Author's Response:

Haha we will see soon enough.

Sometimes honesty is warranted, sometimes it isn't.  I think a balance is required when it comes to your family.  Bella chooses to suffer in relative silence I guess.

Haha Edward's getting prepared!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Conference Championship

I hope he proposes at the superbowl. That would be so cool. I can't wait until they get Emmett back.

Author's Response:

:) You'll see next chapter!  Em's hooked!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Super Bowl XLVI

You threw me for a loop for a second when I started to read the chapter. I thought I missed something. I can't wait for the outtakes and epi.



Author's Response:

Hah yeah I did that to most people, but I liked the symmetry with chapter one!  I'll hit most of the big stuff I skipped in the outtakes, I promise ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Dancing with the Emmett

That was funny. I can't believe Rose ruined the payback. She was the weak link. Bella and Alice better not let her forget that fact. Rose likes to be tough.



Author's Response:

Hahah I'm glad you enjoyed it!  She couldn't hurt her guy, but he let them have their moment anyway :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Mile High

I agree with Bella. The only way to join the mile high club is in a private plane.



Author's Response:

Haha so true!  First class all the way :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 Pre Game Preparation

This is one case you would not want a Edward Junior. Who would want to live up to a 2 time superbowl MVP. That would too much for any little baby to take on at birth. Edward's other traits are enough to keep up with a boy. It is hard when your dad is the perfect man. I love this story. Keep the outtakes coming.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love that Edward wants his son to be an individual.  He may play football, he may play the tuba, but he'll always have his dad's love and support :)  Thanks hon!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Little League

I love this story. I love the updates. Bella better watch out for Ryan.  Kissin girls at 8 years old that is prime cootie catching time and an older girl too. Edward might have to lock up Ryan's family jewels during his high school years. That is one reason they have CB line. I just have to show my teenage son the pictures and he knows he doesn't want to mess up. It is all about letting them know all the possiblities. A little fear and thinking you are crazy enough to go through with it is good for them.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Haha Ryan's only 6.  I think he'll get into cooties soon!  Good plan and good luck :)  Thanks!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me

I have never heard of so many piercings.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

Renee is such a horrible mother. It takes her 3 months to call. I don't blame Bella for putting her off. She really doesn't need to know about Bella's life. I think the costume was funny.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace

I think they need to have a long talk.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry

I hope no one gets these videos. You know how celebrity videos are leaked to the pap. and the internet.



Author's Response:

I know, that would seriously suck. Lets see how Bella fares with the parents...It will be interesting to say the least! ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

I hope Edward deleted those pictures and hid the video because I can see Giana leaking those to the press. She is very vendictive.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

I am so happy for them. I am not a tattoo and piercing person, but I do know that is a big step.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! And yes it is a big step. I hope that they get to enjoy their happiness for awhile, even though it isn't likely...

Thanks again,

Laila

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone

Bella was a little gullible in the past. She should tear this Mateo a new one. I am glad that Edward is honorable. She should have treate him better when she was making introductions to Mateo. Edward's feelings should have been her first concern. He is her soulmate. She needs to remember that and Edward has a right to be a little jealous when she starts acting like someone elses feelings are more important.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

I think Edward is right. They needed this break from the stress and return to where they can be their selves. Bella is refreshed and Edward learned more about her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

I think the band needs to have a meeting and redistrubute the work load. Things have changed in the last 20 years and I think the work load should change as well.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long

That photographer was so funny. I love it when Edward is in the Dom mode. He is so sexy that way. I love how protective he is of Bella. Renee needs to get her own life and stay out of her daughter's.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell

I am glad that Bella has calmed down about the house and money. It was almost like she was doubting the relationship as well when she would not accept all of him. His generouslity is part of him. She needed to realize that and accept that it hurt him having to fight over it all the time. Bella needs to have a serious talk with Renee. She is crazy and will continue to cause problems if the don't do something about her.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

Bella needs to trust Edward enough to tell him what happened. He will take care of her and the idiot.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: I Want You

Charlie better cool it or he could loose his daughter by being stupid. Edward is her life and her future. She doesn't really need her dad. She needs Edward to be happy. Charlie better realize that quickly.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun

They need to find a way to just get rid of Collin. He is causing to much trouble. He is like an STD. He is a disease that keeps reoccuring. I am so glad that Charlie stepped up to help Edward.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Loved this story. I had to reread the whole thing to get the total effect of the story.. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Miss You

She better bring good news and not bad. She is hard to trust with all the drama she caused on tour. Bella better call some one to the house.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home

Collin better drop the charges. He really doesn't want all of his and his families dirty laundry aired out in court. He knows it was all a plot anyway. Edward needs to get off.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

I am so excited for them. They have gone through so much to be together. It is finally time to make it official. I never understood people who said marriage was just a piece a paper.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

That was beautiful. They are perfect for each other.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

That lying whore. Edward wouldn't touch her. She will be so embaressed when the truth comes out.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

She just wants the publicity because she knows she is wrong. She won't have the test unless it is medically needed. I think this is payback for Edward's previous ways. Gianna could be in a serious accident where the baby is born early.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

Bella was being a brat. She should have trusted Edward. He has been nothing, but honest with her. The sluts just wanted publicity. They have to stick together through this mess. Post again soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

She needs to rot in prison for what she did. I hope his shoulder will still have full movement and no major organs were damaged in his abdomen.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

I loved it. I am so glad they were truthful with each other.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

This was a great chapter. Those 2 can be so stubborn.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

I hope they have a long future together.



Author's Response:

That remains to be seen, eh?  We can hope E will get his head out long enough to pull off a nice long future together! ;D

Thanks for reading and responding!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

This was a terrible ending of the weekend. Edward would not do it this way. He is too much of a romantic.



Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint!  We felt Edward always had the best of intentions, yet somehow they backfire on him everytime (ala New Moon).  As another reader said, what fun would it be if they got it right the first time!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Emmett and Alice to the rescue. Edward and Bella have sure made a mess of things.

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I rhink that Edward can handle it. He loves Bella and would rather know than be in the dark. He wants all of Bella and that includes her job.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is not a good thing. I can't see him just letting her leave after knowing where he lives. I am assuming the Mason's don't know that he is a major drug lord. Does Edward recognize the name?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope Bella makes it out safely. I also hope that Edward and Bella's new relationship can handle this speed bump.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I agree with Bella. There is a leak somewhere.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I hope this works out for them. Her whole career is on the line. I know Edward believes in her. He will stand by her no matter what.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yeah! Bella got Tanya. I love that Edward ran in and saved the day. I hate that he got hurt, but love that he is the hero. I hope that they can clear Bella and Alice's name with the FBI. Bella still has a mess to clean up.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Bella messes up again because she tries to take everything on herself. She is not that good. She is part of a team, but she forgets that she is.



Author's Response: So true, that's because she tries to protect everyone, and thinks she can do it on her own, but she doesn't realize until it's too late...but I don't think this is her fault, I mean Alice just went to the store LoL

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Ethics Be Damned

I am so glad that Charlie is a cop and  a smart one.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I can't believe she forgot about her father's wedding, while Edward remembered. Who had surgery and was under anesthesia for 6 hours? I like Edward's attitude. Bella needs to realize that she has more to her life than her job now.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

For a detective Bella is slow. Can she not tell how much Edward loves her. Edward is a marrying type of guy. She should have figured it out long ago that it would come to this point.



Author's Response: LMAO....yes, she's not firing on all of her pistons anymore...I'll get the teaser to you soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Charlie acts all tough, but he is really a marchmallow.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I just love this Edward. He is the brave hero when you need him to be. He is the soft romantic guy when needed. He is just the best.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Well I am glad that Bella finally calmed down and married Edward before God. I hope she will be able to handle the official ceremony now. The parents will want to see a ceremony.