Bella was amazing at the party, not only Edward, but most people were surprised with how well she did. There are always nice people and some so not nice, like Mandy and Vanessa, they were rude and didn't get the message clear enough. I guess they won't be invited to another party soon.

I think it's great Bella is making friends with other subs. As important as it is for her and Edward to work on their relationship, they both need contact with other people. Having other subs, not just Kate as friends will be really good for Bella.

What will happen with the twisters? What will Edward tell Jasper? Will they reduce the punishment? We'll have to wait and see that and therapy!!!!

Billy lost his son, that is one of the most terrible things a person can face in life. His reaction is understandable but wrong. Jacob's actions were his own and he was the one who got himself there. Billy might feel bad for what Jacob did but that doesn't give him the right to try and make others suffer. Thankfully it was clear and nothing happened. It was simply a huge scary moment. However it did bring good things too, it made Bella and Edward bond and get closer to each other. It also made Jasper go see Bella and help in mending their friendship.

Paul is good at what he does. He is challenging both Bella and Edward. They aren't too thrilled with his assignments but they are trying to comply. As time passes they will do it with a better disposition I guess.

The week-end that they were both dreading that then seemed to take a twist for the worse with Edward's comment, is now turning into something quite amazing. Renee finally made an appearance, a very short one hopefully. She had nothing nice to say to Bella, and Bella instead of letting her words affect her took control of the situation. She said what she needed and wanted to say and of course felt much better after it. Add to it Edward's surprise to be her slave... and yes, it will be a really good week-end.

it was good to know the background and past to Bella, Jacob and Alice. They are tight and unique group. They seem to do well in helping each other through the life they now lead. There's trust and understanding, and the certainty that they will be there for one another. 

I have to admit that what Bella wrote on her letter does seem impossible, but what type of explanation did Edward expect? What would the truth be for him?

His feelings and confusion are making things hard to grasp and understand. 

It seems Jacob is skillful to say the least in charming those around him, both human and vampire. Jasper is a vampire, and one who works in a hospital, and who "controls" the vampire population. That's unique and interesting. I hope we find out more about him.

Bella's skills and powers are impressive. But with Edward, things seem to not work in the same way as with the rest of people. Why is that?

It was an amazing performance that, of course, captivated Carlisle and Esme profoundly. They are smitten with the woman that holds their son's heart, and much more.

Their time together was magnificent. All that Bella had heard off now could and was tried, thankfully for her, Edward is strong and was able to keep up with her.

However, his last words were a shock. A shock that I am certain will be explained next chapter.

I was wonder what all the secrets and low voice talks were about. Honestly, I never imagined it would be such a surprise. Jacob needs this time and sharing it with Rosalie makes it even better. He is a unique character, so playful and so serious at the same time. He is intelligent, and enjoys studying, figuring out things, finding answers.

Bella depends on him a lot, and he worries a lot about her; so much, he was willing to put his plans on hold. Bella, wouldn't hear about it. 

Jasper said a very important thing, he might not have won money, but he learnt quite a few interesting and important things. In the long run that's a bigger win.

Everyone enjoyed Emmett finding his match at the game, all but him. But he is a good man, who will return next time as happy as always.

It had to be really scary for both Bella and Edward. A simple thing, a second of missed attention and blood was there. Bella's self control was amazing, and appreciated by both of them. This was a huge thing, if she can resist his blood.

It went down calmer than I expected. 

I loved that Emmett is her student along with Jasper, or Bella would suffer thinking what might Emmett plan.

So Jacob imprinted and Bella was left alone. That had to be so tough...

And about that scholarship... if she only knew ;)

It was him, it was fast, he got what he wanted and came back.

As for Bella hearing what he had to say, considering that all she has believed for seven years is a lie, no wonder she fainted. 

June is right, she needs to be extremely careful, she is new here and even if she knows the Cullens she hasn't been around lately and Edward's actions were a big, really big red flag. We'll have to see how they all act now.

Jacob was upset when he found out about the Cullens, Will he try to do something about it? He has no right to do so, but.... who knows.

It was him, it was fast, he got what he wanted and came back.

As for Bella hearing what he had to say, considering that all she has believed for seven years is a lie, no wonder she fainted. 

June is right, she needs to be extremely careful, she is new here and even if she knows the Cullens she hasn't been around lately and Edward's actions were a big, really big red flag. We'll have to see how they all act now.

Jacob was upset when he found out about the Cullens, Will he try to do something about it? He has no right to do so, but.... who knows.

I don't think it was Bella's fault. Jacob said they were keeping patrols, so we don't even know if it was him he saw. Still that probably won't convince Bella. 

Yes, her world seems to be falling to pieces, but Edward is close by, and I'm sure the rest of the Cullens will follow shortly.

Poor Bella, she feels so alone, and in a way she is, trapped between a real world and a mythological one, not belonging entirely to either.

Things now don't seem as uncomplicated as they were seven years ago. There's more thinking done over things, and consequences are apparently bigger now...

They are putting a great front, and who would have thought that school gossip might help the case. I'm sure Edward, at least a part of him, wants to hurt the kids saying they have been involved with Bella, but he has to see it helps their case. Luckily for them, the principal seems to not believe the rumors, and he wants to not believe them.

Going out as a family with a close friend was a good idea, Bella getting tipsy not that much, at least no one noticed.

He isn't the nicest guy in this chapter, I'll agree, but he is strict and wants things done certain way. His girls are the most important thing in his life, of course he is going to want perfection. 

Now we know why he didn't know who the last candidate was, but it seems Esme might have known. As for Rose, since she thought this would be a good idea from the start, she is encouraging Bella. And as for Bella... what ever her motives are or were, after seeing him with such attitude... who knows...

Esme and Carlisle made a bet? That has to be embarrassing for Bella, but at the same time, it's hilarious. They love Bella, deeply, and are certain she is the right person, not only for the Job, but for Edward's family. 

Edward has quite the temper, and he has a difficult time hearing others and their points of view. But yes, he is a good guy, just a bit complicated.

Emmett and Rosalie are nice and care tons for Bella, they are willing to do a lot of things to help her out. And if Alice was there, it would be the same. That dinner would have gone much worse for Edward.

Edward over thinks things too much. He has been doubting hiring Bella right from the beginning, but I can't see him not doing it. He is just really nervous, and that's sweet.

His parents are kind of lost too. They want the arrangement to work, but they also want to see Edward happy, and if it's with Bella, even better. But still there are the girls to consider and both of them.

It's amazing how comfortable they can be around each other, how easily they fall into conversation. 

Edward angry with Jacob was interesting, doesn't Edward know Jake is married?

I don't want to kill him for stopping the kiss, but I don't feel like praising him for it either. His emotions are just a big jumble, it has to be difficult to be feeling so many things, while still thinking they might be wrong, and having a constant argument with his rational side about it all the time. 

He is fighting a useless war, but still. Until both of them decide to face each other and really talk, it will just be getting more awkward.

And then, oh! the bad luck, she finds Angela's waffle maker, how could she have known?

Right from the start the date went South, there wasn't one thing Bella found acceptable for her in Royce. And it never got better. Talking about himself, wasn't great, but could be bearable, but telling Bella she needs to go to a gym!!! That was crossing a line, thinking he might be able to control her life. Then of course we get the complementary dinner and... way to loose a temper. At least the restaurant personnel knew about it and where expecting a scene, I guess not such a scene but still.

Then he didn't even let 10 minutes pass into the movie when he began his "attack" on Bella, and what? thought she would be fine with it? That's an ego!!!

Edward could have been caught, but was able to find a good explanation for his fast arrival. 

Poor guy, such kinds of dreams.... how long will he be able to go on like this?

I didn't consider she would go to him!!! And that he would be expecting her to. That was amazing. She has her friends and the people she hangs out with, but when things got really, really rough, she went to the one person that can be as close to her father as possible, Carlisle. Not only close to her but also to Edward. 

It was angsty and heart breaking. Poor Edward, with no clue to if Bella would be coming back. he worried for him, for her and for the girls of course. But all the worrying wasn't needed, she was there, at home. There at dinner with the girls, and then there with dinner for him. Yes, there was progress made :)

It's funny that Edward and Bella didn't consider that their family already suspected, not to say knew about them. Alice, clever Alice, just gave the last little needed push for them to acknowledge it.

Still, there are certain things that need to be taken care of, such as saying certain words, accepting certain desires, and frankly stop jumping around the bushes. 

Maybe tonight is the night...

I honestly didn't see it coming. It makes sense that Emmett would be a bit tense and nervous around Edward. Almost three days and being unable to say anything. It has to be killing him. 

As for Bella, if her world was shocked before the accident, and the accident moved it more. It's still nothing compared to this. She is just trying to make sense of Edward telling her he loves her. And now this? How is she going to take it? She will be more than worried on how Edward will take it. Especially with what she thinks he thinks.

Waking up, should have felt like a relief, but in Bella's case... this is just what she doesn't need at the moment. But life tends to be like that and not worry too much on what is already on our plate.

About the update, what ever works better for you.

Why is it that we have such a hard time speaking our minds? If only one of them wouldn't have been so coward and say something... but fear makes us not think and as a consequence miss out so much in life.

Hopefully Edward won't listen to her on her last request and go look for her. Also someone will tell Edward the truth.

I can't wait to see what both of them do now, and everyone around them too.

Yes, you were right, this chapter doesn't show the best side of Bella, it makes her look even selfish. Which she isn't, she is just scared, and yes being  a coward. She chose to run instead than facing what "she" got herself into, partially. It seems she has chosen to run and leave all her life. It might have worked in the past, but not this time, not anymore. Her choices have affected too many people this time. Even those who at first agreed and supported her have begun to realize she might have taken the wrong path. She didn't want to hurt them in purpose but she has and she needs to do something about it and soon. For her, and the baby, if not for anyone else.

It had to be really difficult to see her through so many and different eyes, but it helped us see how much one person's decisions can affect so many.

Hopefully she will snap out of it, or someone will make her, and sooner rather than later, please.

So Bella wasn't the most patient mother to be... She seem close to going after someone if Charlie hadn't decided it was his time.

As for Emmett's plan, it was good, but not perfect, since it didn't complete the job. Although it might have been for the best, since Rose is on the plan now and willing to do what ever it takes.

So Edward finds out next chapter, I'm guessing it will be through the investigator, and not his family. How will he take it? He will be angry, the interesting thing will be, who will help him calm down. 

Another thing, you said Edward finds out, but said nothing about Bella... why? ;)

It's always easier to try and blame others for our mistakes, take away from us as much responsibility as possible. We try to find excuses for us and blame for others, until that someone, yes usually our mother, comes in and straightens things out. Edward would probably have remained as stubborn if it had been someone else, telling him off. But not with Esme. She is mom, and mom knows best, and mom knows how much this has hurt him and those around.

So he has begun to see things under another perspective, and even if that is a huge step, there are plenty more needed, along with time. At least they are moving along, and Edward is at Bella's door step, staring at a probably extremely excited Sam.

Sam is simply adorable. He is funny, confident, and such a great friend.

Reactions to the announcement were different. Some were happy, others worried. Things haven't been easy for either or them. They are trying to build a life together, with strong foundations this time. They have support from some, but not all, yet.

Cute and sweet. We have to love Sam, his part in the lives of Bella, Edward and the kids is huge and valuable. He has come to love them all and wants to see them all happy and together. He has a special sense that helps him help others, like with Lizzie.

As for Renee she is unique and has the biggest heart, so welcoming Bella and Charlie wasn't an issue for her, that's amazing.

Thanks for sharing this with all of your readers.

She is doing what she likes, and enjoys it. She is well taken care of, that gives her part of her confidence.

He is used to getting his way, almost always does, and now, he has been challenged. It will be an interesting duel.

It seems Bella isn't that uninterested in Edward. Her father said she should choose him.

But I don't think Johnny will be too happy.

I liked it a lot!!!!!

Both have been hurt, and took a lot, all for their children. It wasn't easy to end their marriages, even if the ex's were not worth the effort, but the kids were and are.

They were to scared to do anything, that was until Alice took matters into her own hands.

It was sweet, sexy and I really want to read more about them.

I like how you're developing the story. It was a really pleasant surprise to see it become a story.

Bella is mature, extremely. She knows what she wants and realizes it will take time, she doesn't mind. She prefers to be patient, to wait and not give up. Edward is surprised by how she has been behaving and how supportive she has been.

Things apparently will work out for them, even Emily seems closer to Bella than anyone could have expected.

Divorce is never an easy thing, and when kids are involved, it can be worse. Tanya is trying to hold on to the idea of a "happy family" it isn't working. She has lost her head a few times and made things worse for her. And yes, better for Edward, but with a high price. The kids are smart, and I guess they want peace and to see all this done.

As for Bella, she is smart, very smart and working hard in not leaving any loose strands that Tanya might find. There are still things out of her control and those make her nervous, like James' appearance at the party. Hopefully that will be a one time thing.

Charlie was going to realize things sooner or later, yes, it wasn't under the best circumstances, but as Bella said, on the bright side, it will be better as a whole. Tanya is really reckless and kind of dumb. Leaving the kids alone at night and risking such kinds of people to be able to get so close to them. Emily is smart and knew what to do, so, thankfully, it all turned for the better.

The boys are realizing more things than Bella and Edward thought they would. It isn't bad, but if they aren't careful, Tanya might try something. But with how things are now, I don't know if she will be able to accomplish much.

Oh, oh! This isn't good. Someone was in Bella's apartment snooping around, what for and why, there's no clue. But it isn't something to take lightly. Bella might not have liked the locks and security system, but they will give Edward and Charlie piece of mind.

As for the picture and Edward being seen with Bella, it can be a big problem or something that goes on lightly. It will probably depend now on Mrs. Cope. Will she say or do something? Hopefully she will talk to Edward first.

Edward's mother was being an extremely protective mother, it's understandable. However she shouldn't have addressed things as she did with Bella. What Bella said is true, it does also reflect on Edward and that isn't fair. 

All of Forks found out, and as expected there were reactions, not good ones, but they knew it would go this way. One of the biggest shocks was the news Tanya gave Edward. Esme loves her son, but her way of loving him, isn't good, right or fair. She assumed she could handle his life from a distance, and it isn't fair for him. Edward felt really bad because of his mother's actions. Tanya's, sadly he expected. Now she is out of their lives, it's kind of sad, but she wasn't there much anyway. Bella has been there for them. The kids know it and rely on her.

The witch hunt was unfair, but sadly expected. Bella's explanation was really good. It's like a new toy everyone wants to figure out, and when they can't they get upset. Unfair, unjust, but that's how life is, sadly. Fortunately, they had big help by their side. Edward never expected such kind of help and support. Still the damage was made, and they are starting to put together their new life.

It seems more than logic that the stalker be James, funny how just as the restraining order was over, things began to show up again. Lets hope it doesn't escalate.

As for Bella and Esme's argument, sadly it was going to end like that. When we refuse to see things from the other's perspective, it can end badly. Bella is trying, really trying, but there's only so much she can take.

Not everything can be always good, or always bad, life tends to stay in the in-between. Esme is a proud woman. She has had control over her family for a long time, what she assumed was control and the best option. She was mistaken. She forgot the most important part, asking her loved ones, if they were happy. Her self-assurance made her blind to the reality in front of her. Also, it made her see things, according to her, not to the ones involved, Edward, the kids and Bella. Her strong will and mistakes are costing her dearly. Will she be able to realize things, to make the necessary adjustments? I hope so, especially for her.

The kids are impressive, wiser beyond their years and really sure of what they want, need and love. 

As for what happened to Bella with James. It was bound to come, sooner or later. Bella being able to defend herself was impressive and helped, a lot. If it hadn't been for it, perhaps James' information would have never gotten into the system and get him the help he needed.

They are moving, it will bring lots of changes and adventures. Can't wait!!! Nor for the party and their week in the Keys!!!!

Edward's tattoo had been something between him and Bella, until the pool party. I am certain, he didn't think about it, or that not only his kids but 18 more would see it. I can't wait to see what will he say to the kids.

So Esme has kept her attitude toward Bella. It is turning out to be too much, even for Carlisle. He had no clue what could have happened during Bella and Esme's lunch and he still was thinking Esme got what she had been working on getting. Edward was more than surprised, for the lunch, the fight and what Bella did. I think neither him or  Bella wanting to read what's in the package is good and noble. It's Esme's not theirs. However, we don't know if Esme thinks Bella read it. Maybe next chapter we'll find out.

Their strongest quality as a couple is their "togetherness". It's amazing how they support and comfort each other. Something much needed with the situation with Esme. It is huge and it needs time to process, understand, forgive and forget. Hopefully all of them will manage.

The tattoo situation was also very well handled, and that wasn't easy. Again another proof of their trust in each other. I guess the kids kind of think that their relationship isn't as "regular" as the rest of the people around them. But since nothing in their lives since that day could be considered "regular" I guess they all just go along with it. That's way Evan made such little fuss then and even now.

As for the babies!!!! Wow that's a huge package. Lots of work, thankfully there are plenty of arms to hold babies in that house. 

What happened to and with Esme was tough on everyone, but it had to be the toughest for Carlisle. He is an incredible man, when things became really, really bad, he didn't leave, he stayed there and took care of Esme. That shows character, love and devotion. I think we know where Edward got it from. It seems Esme did hit bottom, which was necessary, however, that doesn't mean everything would be perfect from there. It will be okay but it also needs time, it seems she is trying, doing a big effort and it's paying off. Probably after attending Emily's graduation, Esme will see it and make a bigger effort.

Bella and Edward's life is going really well, even Rose might be around now. She has matured and seen things from a different perspective. The same as with Esme, it  can't all change in an instant but it will and that's what counts.

I was away on vacation when this chapter was updated. Things happen for a reason and I didn't get to read it until I got back home, which I think is a really good thing. Explaining to several people why I was crying while reading wouldn't be easy, especially in another language ;) 

When I began reading I was to say shocked and surprised might be close. Of all the ways for this story to end, this wasn't one I would have ever bet on. It makes it even a better ending since it came so unexpected. Would Bella have been able to do what Edward had to? The fast and easy answer would be yes. She was always so strong and had such a will, but it was all because of Edward. Without him, she probably wouldn't have been the woman she was. I wouldn't have seen Edward asking Emily or any of the other children what Bella asked of her. That was all Bella's love for Edward and her family. 

It is really hard to see this story end, it has been such a wonderful and amazing journey. Thanks for sharing it with us. But most importantly, thanks for ending it as you did. I am guessing it probably was a tough choice, as good choices tend to be. It takes an amazing writer to do things in such a way to surprise readers from start to finish as you have.

As weird, odd and out of place as this might sound, another reason for me thanking you for this chapter. My sinuses were really, really dry after the trip, the crying is helping them, a lot.... ;) Probably TMI but I had to tell you, sorry!!!

He did a good job tracking her down. And she did a good job too telling him more than he had asked for. He has to be grateful for the extra information, and apparently will be using it, and soon.

Emmett's flirting was fun, especially since it made Edward so angry. Bella's reactions were simply out of nervousness I think. As for Tanya, she didn't like what she saw outside Edward's office, she was in trouble before it, but now, it might be worse.

So Edward had decided he would stop seeing Bella, but his plans, even if gone accordingly, weren't what he wanted.

So he went looking for her, found her, too. But now, what will he plan in order to see her? I don't think he will stay away as he "said he intended to".

We might not, but Edward clearly did. And what a mess it has gotten him into. Bella won't stay, not a chance, and Tanya... well she will have every right to not be too happy now. Not to mention all the explaining and/ or calming down he will have to handle.

Oh Bella!!! She reacted, true, but wouldn't you have done the same in her situation? I guess I might have. If she had seen the car in Seattle she might have let it go, but it was in little ol' Forks!!!!! Then again, it can't be the only Volvo in the Olympic Peninsula. 

Charlie is really nice and very happy to have Bella there for a few days. He even got her a phone, sadly the first call she will have to make won't be a pleasant one.

Nice to hear from you again!!! You've been missed, and the story too!!!

So Bella wasn't so wrong, someone had been following her. The confirmation, didn't help much though, it's making her even more paranoid and worried. And now that she knows that Edward probably knows too it was her who hit his car, she is going to be even worse. What about him? Will he go looking for her or wait for her in Seattle? And what about Jasper? He was just trying to help his friend, again. I don't think he will agree to it next time, if it involves Bella. ;)

Don't be a stranger for so long!!! :)

She is brave and/or it hasn't sunken in yet. However, the way Edward explained it, he made it sound sexy and hot. 

He really was surprised to see her there. He was certain she would never want to see him again. Instead she went looking for him. 

It is a different type of chapter, it is also a very important chapter. It gives us the needed information to understand Edward and Carlisle mainly, but also Bella and Esme. Two women truly loved and in love. Sadly love isn't always all that's needed. Esme and Carlisle needed different things, and there was no way to compromise. However Carlisle seems to have regained hope, at least for Edward.

To you to a wonderful Christmas and New Year.

Rosalie's plan is working perfectly; the other girls doing their parts very well. It's going to be a long, long night, one that both the Lords of Volturi and slaves will never forget.

As for Tanya... she was trying anything to get Edward, and he was the only one to realize it. She was angry but said anger was made disappear by no other than Jacob. They will make an interesting couple...

Girls in that time weren't given too much information, so it's understandable that a girl in Bella's position would be like such. It was a surprise that Jacob agreed to it, he has to have feelings for Bella, but sadly, she is leaving.