Hmmmm. Given both facts and assumptions thus far, I am going to guess that the woman on the phone was NOT the Charlotte of the true Jasper's history. How the heck did Victoria get these look alikes anyway??

Nothing sexier than a single daddy!

This was so worth the wait! Seeing Esme first insult Bella at the hospital then harass Bella and the fallout that ensued; dealing with teenage sex drives; the anticipation of revisiting the playroom; seeing Rose in line at the club; the satisfaction of returning to the play room; the babies growing and Emily graduating *sigh* Very nice journey.

Whaaaaa! Sob. Sob.

This story is truly a gem and I am actually grieving over the loss of these two characters.

Ok, I must now go find a new happy sexy story to perk me up!

Well, I guess Edward is finally going to get Bella to talk to him! *smirks* He just may not like what she has to say. Maybe she'll be worked up enough to fess up to what she saw in his home that made her run and hide.

Somehow, I suspect Edward might be more angry that Jasper got caught than the damage to the Volvo. I shall certainly be eager to see if I am right about any of this.

Now that's a far better outcome of being called to the principal's office you'd expect!

Sorry. Sorry?? She's not suppose to say 'Sorry'. WTF?? Sorry isn't what our boy needs to hear. How is it she isn't really upset about having his baby but keeps blowing off the idea of marrying him? He loves her. She is his world. She and the teeny baby growing in her.

Bella, marry that man! Is it because of how they met? Is this about her job? Why, why, why???   (sorry for the whiny rant)

Hot happy horny men; gotta love 'em!

Wow. I feel for Edward. His struggle to teach his girl a fundamental tenet was difficult to watch. His ability to separate Master from lover is commendable. His relief on reading the content of her text was obvious. I hope Isabella now sees his perspective and can use that to surrender more fully to her Master.

I would very much like Alice to support Bella as she needs her friend to do. Alice’s displeasure must wear on Bella.

I will be interested to learn if Bella's theory about Heather being involved with the b&e in some way is correct. Then, is Heather and the vile officer Hawk? or is James involving others in some diabolical way to perpetrate offences against Bella? (dun dun dun!)

Curious Edward's chosen 'punishment' against Bella's unintended/unauthorized orgasm. Clever without adding undue drama to what became an unpleasant evening. I love how Emmett has them married off and neither of them really expressed objections to his assumption... 

Edward meeting Charlie shall prove very interesting to witness. I anticipate Charlie will certainly be the protective father/chief and Edward to be the charismatic gentleman who cares profoundly for his Isabella.

Despite all the horrific things in Bella's past, I can only guess that there may be worse things that even she does not conciously remember. Heaven help Edward for the guilt he may experience for bringing forth that memory in his beloved.

Devious!! I am so eager to learn what her punishmen entailed...

TEASE! Now I wanna know just what people are saying on the blog. An I wanna know now darn it. *smiles* I am so happy with the story. I love Bella and Edward's dual relationship. Fun to see Leah and Jake's relationship too.

I cannot be mad at Edward. Had he not acted as he did, he wouldn't deserve to call himself her Master.  I imagine that this was as taxing to Edward as to Bella.  She is realizing how her actions affect him as well as all the others who care about her. 

She likely will never again act without consideration to those who care.  I suspect she will begin to consider how her behavior affects her Master before she acts. 

Once this phase of punishment is over, I suspect that Bella will have a new appreciation for the loving attentions of her Master. (not to mention the great make up 'vanilla' sex too) I do hope Bella realizes how Edward will be suffering by denying himself release in her body.

Better to tell the truth. It is sooo much easier to remember and I do not see how she could get into any trouble.  Alice really could have said no to Rose...  Rose and Bella were doing Jasper a favor aferall...

I really like that Emmett asked the question so many want to know but never understand. The explanation Bella gave opened the eyes of the siblings and their spouses. I suspect that they each have a better understaning of the mind games Bella and countless others endured.

Sooo happy that damned ink is gone from her foot. Let the happy times commence!

Interesting how some people think the finances of others is theirs to know and gossip about.  Edward has so much to learn about his woman. Dear God, the dance floor scene was incredible!! Wow.

Wow. What a disturbing history Bella continues to run from. I am so glad she opened up to Edward and began to share some of her darker history. He needed to know what horrors hide behind her eyes to better understand what she has endured. It is difficult to learn to trust and she has every reason not to yet she has the perfect chance to.  I think she will learn to lean on Edward in time and find she heals a little each time she does.

It is good to see Bella relating with her co-workers. She needs the support of that network in her life. We all need to embrace fun and family wherever it presents itself.

While I'd like to blame Leah's pregnancy hormones, but perhaps Bella does need to carve time from her week to spend time with her sister. She does need to nurture that relationship too.

The security dude was a touch of reality. He reacted like many would, crass and without respect for the choices of others.

I like how Edward is finding ways to take care of Bella while at the same time supporting her independence. (If only this was taught in 'man class' to young boys! *wink*)

I found myself returning to the beginning of this chapter to Edward’s words: “It’s going to be harder than I thought.” He was referring to the evening’s lesson, wasn’t he? It must have torn him up to know the emotional pain she was experiencing, knowing that if he were to soothe and comfort her she would lose the necessary lesson. She needed to learn this now to enrich their lives going forward.

I was very pleased to see Bella’s creativity using Quileute and safe wording once she realized where she had been wrong. There will be a long night ahead of them but it is another growth spurt if you will in their relationship.

That being said, I thought Edward’s diversion of Vinnie with a sleep over the next week was brilliant. They both adore those two.

Alice’s sarcastic question to Bella about asking Edward’s permission to use the bathroom did not get her the answer she expected. I doubt Alice will ever understand the dynamics of Edward and Bella’s relationship and she doesn’t have to, she should however learn to respect what they have agreed to so long as they are happy.

Edward’s behavior before lunch, the tension he showed makes sense now that we see the struggle he had before him in the evening ahead.

The girls’ conversation on the beach was... enlightening. Alice’s ‘technicality’ regarding virginity, Rose’s lack of contact with her parents, and poor Alice’s childhood sound track of her parents’ love life were a strange mix of random conversation among the friends.  The guys conversation about ways to please a man was amusing. Piggish, but amusing.

Bravo to Edward.  He held strong and did as he said and did not acknowledge Bella’s service during their evening out. I thought for sure Bella was going to openly weep when she realized she had to choose her own dinner.

I do hope a smiling, happy couple emerges to join the siblings in the morning.

I like that despite her best intentions, Bella sometimes lacks a filter between her mouth and brain... this makes her very real to me and my perseptions of her realationship with Edward. Her desire to please him with her submission is genuine yet sometimes her independent nature flares at the wrong time.

It was fun seeing Alice try on the role for even a moment! It just isn't in her to follow through and Jasper wouldn't understand it if she did.

I like visiting inside Edward's mind. Hearing his defense of Bella when another makes an inappropriate comment. His desire for her in watching her figit over his teasing of her body. His thoughts regarding punishing or pleasing her are very interesting to me.

I love how the boys tease each other and make their silly bets! Jasper likes and approves of Bella but he does not seem to have an understanding of just how much Edward is captivated by her.

Such difficulty to remember restraint when the desire to touch or kiss master's peen... *sigh* Yes it is the nature of their relationship givin it is play time. Even Edward is having trouble keeping the rules it would seem.

So often I become impatient when a shift in pov rehashes events. This time I appreciated the value of revisiting events. It was artfully written and I especially liked seeing Edward's view on Bella's display for the 'challenge'. His love, adoration and pride were wonderful to experience.

I am intrigued (and perhaps a little amused) at Aro's reaction to Edward's 'growing up' as he put it. I shall be interested to see the conversation between Edward and Emmett over that very thing. Aro genuinely adores 'Miss Swan' and I do believe he looks forward to the day she becomes a part of his family.

I loved the teasing of Edward by Bella as they prepared for dinner together. Hope we get a peek at what occurs upstairs...

Oh my, oh my. *hyperventilates* Yikes! Bella, just WHAT have you gotten yourself into this time??  Oh dear. *deep breath* Just remember, you do not now anyone  there and will never see them again...

You agreed to this, and Master will keep you safe.

Dreams can hold such powerful emotions. Of course, it must be Edward who approaches, but the recent fear of the dream is incredibly real to Bella.

The zip cording sounded incredibly awesome. I, however, expect I would be far too much of the chicken shit to enjoy such a thing. Loved Edward's jealous reaction when he asked who kissed her before she cliff dove!

The neighbor couple needs to get the stick out of their respective butts. (or maybe put something far more fun their instead *wink*)

Edward can be incredibly creative finding ways to achieve mutual satisfaction in the quietest possible manner.

I enjoyed again the family time with everyone bonding. Edward is learning more about his Isabella, both who she was and how she became who she is now. It is a pleasure to watch these developments.

Sooo. Asswipe has appeared. It is interesting how the town protects their girl from the scum that lingers in their midst. I am certain that we shall be seeing more of this useless expense of earth's atmsophere.

Bella is still fragile when it comes to her ex, but is surrounded by loving family and friends. Edward shall move heaven and earth to keep her safe.

Love, love, love this story. I can totally understand how a new reader could eat through this gem in a few days!

I do so adore Edward. He is perfect for Bella. He seeks to know her on every level that he can and uses that knowledge to be a better man for her. What more could a woman ask for?

I enjoy the developing insight to Bella's past. The silly times with Jake, the sister stuff with Leah, her daily life.

It is good to see Leah opening her mind to Bella's alternate lifestyle choice. Even realizing that it IS Bella's choice is a step. Acknowledging that it makes her happy is a good place to begin. Nobody said Leah needed to know, understand or agree with it, it is BELLA'S choice and no other's.

Bella will likely forgive Jake by morning. She loves him and knows he wasn't being malicious, only a man. Poor Bella just has to accept that her pet is no longer the innocent he was this morning.

I adore seeing these two bond ever more closely. They continue to learn every day how to better communicate. I was thrilled how Bella responded to Edward's concern she was keeping something from her. Her ability to quickly diffuse his fears was beautiful.

Silly Bella. The lesson here I suppose is to be aware of one's surroundings. Given Esme's family buisness, this little episode was perhaps on the mild side of things. However, knowing your boyfriend & Master's mother heard and witnessed it of course would be embarassing!

The part I liked most was Bella's scuffing of her foot, remembering the emotional pain of that particular punishment. She loves and respects Edward far too much to ever earn herself such a punishment again.

*hee hee* I LOVED Bella's stunt during the game!! Edward TOTALLYT fell for it. Gotta say I suspected what was up. Emmett seems determined to win using whatever tactics necessary. Her performance was fantastic.

I wonder if Jasper should be encouraged to chat with Uncle Aro. His intentions are good, but he really needs help to understand that Bella IS a strong willed woman who wouldn't allow Edward control of her were it not her desire to do so.

I adore Vinnie. Any chapter with him in it MORE than makes up for 'no nookie' time.

Emmett and Vinnie both have learned something, seems Bella needed to as well!

Bella sure is awful snugly with their neice! Could it be that Bella is feeling that magic pull?? Perhaps she wanted all the chances possible by buying Edward new underwear...  Maybe she should revisit her doctor and be checked out. Perhaps there is a chance for her.

Thank you for directing me back to that chapter. Having been some time ago, I admit to forgetting Aro's directive to Jane.

I liked Edward’s approach to shopping. His conditions; either unhurried now, or interfering with their D/s time later. I thought telling her to pick three while he did the same was very clever given her strong bend towards frugality.

Ah, Jess. I think Jess is a manipulative conniving woman who had her own tenancies turned against her. Mike is seeking to please Karen and Karen has her own agenda known only to her.

Bella is going to absolutely HATE ‘lockdown’. She has worked hard to become independent and if she perceives Edward’s demands as unreasonable I fear she will defy him.  I only hope her defiance does not ultimately endanger her.

I cannot imagine what Karen wants from Bella. She is unbalanced and likely remembers whatever propaganda she was fed by James. Given James’ abuse of the women under his control, he could have brain washed Karen into believing anything.

Karen possibly believes that in having James’ child she should have been his wife, not Bella. That Bella enraged James so likely fueled his wrath towards Karen. Given the abuse she suffered at James’ hands and the ensuing mental illness, I do believe Karen is incredibly dangerous. Were she properly medicated and in therapy, then perhaps she might be a safe member of society but as she is now she is little more than a charge of dynamite with a long lit fuse.

*gulp* Master Edward is definitely ratcheting up their playtime. I must say, given his irritation by her sighing I am not surprised at his instituting 'corner time'. This is a painless, yet potentially humiliating way to train this behavior out of his girl.

What a devious way to reward his pet! Yikes. Serious over stimulation but at least with the granting of release as needed. I do believe her legs will be covered in her fluids by the time they return home. I shall be curious if he shares his thoughts behind her new name for this evening.

I am eager to visit market night. Will Bella be shopping without her Master? Given the discord among club members, that could be rife with bitter undercurrents despite the threat of Uncle Aro or Edward's censure.

It is interesting that in thinking she was following what was expected, perhaps he wanted her to safe word and stop the madness he was inflicting.

I shall be curious as to the content of their texts.

HA! Emmett WILL take whatever measures necessary to win. ESPECIALLY if it means Edward losing. *tee hee* At least Bella had the modesty to feel embarassed over her role in the scheme.

In the end, they were all reminded in the folley of including a five year old in any scheming. *grins* Lots of good family fun. I am guessing the evening will NOT be PG!

It was interesting watching Charlie wade through, learn, absorb and accept his little girl's lifestyle choice. Good man. Good dad.

Hmmmm. Too bad Edward was cut short on his private talk with Edward by his mom and aunt's arrival. And then the time just wasn't right as Charlie was leaving. Maybe next weekend they will have another chance...?

I am pleased to view this hidden part of Bella's mind. The thoughts she writes are for her and her Master; that they were shared is gratifying.

Very much enjoyed seeing Bella's pov on this one.

Suspense is mean! Please hurry.

No offence intended, but that is one heck of a mouth full to tag a little girl with. I consider the 'back door' test (how's it gonna sound when it's being screamed from the back door). Doesn't seem to have a flow to it, more like calling to a list of people. Again, only my opinion.

*SIGH* If that is where we must wait, so be it. Better than if this chapter had not been posted. Sooo very glad mom sees things as she does and that pop has enough of an open mind to adjust if given time.  Ultimately a very sweet chapter of family bonding and character development for each member too.

Well, glad that part is behind them. Knew that wasn't going to go well. Not like Em could take hearing that Bella begged Edward to make love to her in her dorm. He was barely able to stomach any of it. He, however, has not been in their heads all these years to witness the yearning each of them felt. Em didn't see that his sis and brother were best friends, not siblings.  Now, they have to convince their parents of that technicality.

Glad you're back! Happy to visit once again with our confused family. I am so happy Emmett is making an effort to adjust. He loves his sis so much he doesn't see straight. I look forward to quality time between our young couple.

Wow. They are behaving like the grown ups they are trying to be. Kudos for them both. Very impressed with their positive presentations to their parents; equally impressed with the parents respecting their choices.

I am sooo glad that the boys are back.  Giddy with anticipation at their discovering Bella's 'secret'!!

Does Bella really even have to choose? It would certainly be a difficult road, but they all love each other and have this totally fucked up history together...

How the hell can Tanya hide from Edward that she isn't pregnant? and how does she expect to 'hide' the baby? Even if she leave it for adoption, Edward will NOT go for that. He'll fight and claim his parental rights were violated. Dumn bitch!

Grateful to know there will be a sequel. There is so much of this story left to be learned.

What a great chapter. Bits o' lovin', family time with Seth, quizzing by Sue, snuggle time in bed, and a satisfying smack down for Jacob. Very well rounded couple of days. Gotta say I'm rather curious what games Jacob is playing. Messing with Seth and feeding Leah bunches of shit.

Verry innnterresting!!  Curious that she is not all that emotional (in a sad, depressed sort of way) about Jacob's cheating.  Kinda happy she's out for vengance tho *cackles evily*. Eager to see what she does!

Pixie sure has a surprise for Bel-la!!  *giggles* This is gonna be soooo much fun.

I feel a little like Alice on caffine - jumping in my seat for the anticipation!!!! Ever so eager for these two to meet AND then for the BIG reveal!!! While I am sure the reveal is still a ways off, I am excited just the same.