Oh shit!  That was too funny the way Edward flipped out on Tanya and then to learn it was just a coincidense.

Ugh!  I am so frustrated with Bella, but there is a part of me that understands why she is doing this.

Make up sex really is the best kind.

I love the date that Edward set up for Bella.  It is very romantic.  I love how he has the internal battle over wanting to fuck her against his car.  Maybe next time. ;)

ROFLMAO!!!  I wasn't familiar with the traditional pie, but when I saw beer and terrigone I knew this wasn't going to be good.  Is Bella pregnant???  It would explain her symptoms and late period.  Oh shit!

I wonder if this illness is going to force Edward to change her ahead of schedule.  I love what Carlisle said to Charlie about no one being strong enough to keep Edward away from Bella.  Very sweet.

OME!  I was dying when Edward said, "Don't ever stop... Unh. Fellatio... So good."  That was the funniest damn line!  I am so glad that you have snuck in an extra chapter before this ends.  I love this story and am really going to miss it!

I love the diary excerpts. 

Holy hell!  He didn't hold anything back!  I love dirty talking Edward!!!

I really, really like Tanya in this story.  She is so sweet the way she was there to encourage Edward when he was all frustrated.

That was an incredible chapter!  I loved learning the back story on Alice and Jasper.  And the punishment was seriously hot!  I mean it was borderline cruel, but hot as hell!!!

Holy hotness! Never would have thought Emmett had it in him!

Wow!  I loved how Jasper took control of Alice after her temper tantrum.  And when he held her and cried I totally fell in love with him.

I'm glad they finally talked.  It was a long time coming, but it was so necessary.

Holy hell!  Master Carlisle can Dominate me anytime!!!  That was fucking incredible!  He truely is a dormant Dom.  The punishment was wicked intense.  He could teach Edward some things.  Oh crap, I am fucking panting.  Need to tie down (I mean track down) the hubby.

Excellent job lady!  I hope you will give us a little insite into the classes.  That would be fun!

XOXO

Nickey

That was a nice juicy little one shot.

I wonder what it is about the piano that is helping Bella.  She knows it isn't Edward playing it.  I wonder if the patient is playing something that Edward played for her?

Oh crap, she is going to flip shit when she hears Edward playing again.

Edward is such a selfish bastard.  He wasn't saving Bella by leaving her, he broke who she was.  And to take Alice and the others away from her as well was just cruel.

I hate Matt and hope the entire family gets a chance to torture him.

I am so thankful that Bella got away, but I think she is stupid to go back to Charlie.  That is the first place they will look for her.

Son of a bitch!  That raping bastard found her?!?

Death would be kinder than what Bella has had to endure.  No matter what, she will always be damaged on the inside.  She could live for a thousand years and never forget this...look at Rosalie.

Ughhhh!  I can hardly read this, but I can't stop either.  It is like looking at a horrific train crash.

So, she physically made it.  But what about mentally?

Poor Bella.  Now she truely has no one.  She can't go back to Charlie and doesn't feel like she can stay with the Cullens.  Very said. :(

Bella has skills!

The wedding was simple and perfect!

I was happy to see the snippit of 20yrs.  Not happy for Charlie's death, only that it was addressed.  I had wondered what had happened to him when Bella went missing.

I love the HEA you gave these two.  If anyone deserved a happy ending, it was Bella.  I love how Emmett, being as huge as he is, still cowars away from Bella.  That is pretty funny.

As much as I enjoyed reading this story, I think you gave it a very natural ending.  I don't know if a sequal would do it justice.  But you are the author so I leave it in your capable hands and look forward to reading more of your stories.  Till then...

Oh, I have started posting an AH story of my own called "Use Somebody".  If you get the time to check it out, I would love to hear what you think.  :)

Still thinking Edward is a jackass.

I can not believe the people in Bella's office are treating her like that.  She is not some 16 year old who got knocked up.  She is an adult.  There are tons of single parents in the world.

By the way, loved Carmen yelling at Edward.  Perfect!

This chapter made me cry.  You write Bella's pain with so much realism.

I am going to need to invest in more tissues.  Crap, now I am even starting to feel bad for Edward.  Ughhh!  What are you doing to me?  You are turning me into a weepy girl!

I wonder what Esme is going to think about all of this?

Ok, Edward and Carlisle have been cleared of all Jackassery charges and I am not throwing it all on Charles!  What an asshole!!!  Just because Bella isn't of the right breeding, her and her child are worthless?  I was so proud of Edward when he stood by her and got her away from that nut job!

Ahhh, he loves her.

I am glad that Bella told them about the pregnancy so far.  Though it was hard to read Edward's reaction to her hearing the heartbeat just a day after he rejected her again.

I liked this little peek into Carlisle's head.  I am not completley thrilled with him judging Bella on her diction and manners.  It almost felt like he was looking over a horse he was thinking about buying.

I am glad that he is backing Edward and not trying to pull him back into this blackhole of an exhistence in the family business.

Poor Bella, having to face THAT particular firing squad alone.  I hope she doesn't get fired for being romantically linked to a client.  Then again, maybe it would be for the best since that seems like a pretty hostile environment to work in.

I loved how Edward announced that they were having their first baby.

That was an excellent chapter.  Amongst all the stress and chaos, a simple kick from a baby brought everything to a standstill and calmed the storm.

Ugh, I hate cliff hangers.

This story is just wrenching my heart at every turn.  I know this is a problem of his own making, but I feel so terrible for the pain he and Bella are in.

I liked that Carlisle was honest about his affair.  I think that will help Edward hold onto hope that he can make this all better with Bella too.

Loving the uber protective Edward! I think he would have physically attacked the bimbo if she didn't get the hell away from Bella and the baby.

The charm bracelet is a nice touch.

Damn, I alost feel sorry for Tammy being put in that position by Charles.  Almost.

I loved their little add ons to the vows.  I thought their wedding was perfect.  Small and intimate was definately the way to go.

Well, maybe the bastard isn't dead inside after all.  I think it will take a lot more for the family to forgive him but at least he is headed in the right direction.

Edward's POV in this chapter was priceless!  Loved every word.  I'm glad to see Charles is making an effort and is being nice to Bella.

I am so glad that Edward is finally beginning to forgive himself.  He is right to be disgusted with himself for what he did, but it is nice to see him embrace the happiness in his life now.

I thought Charles and Bella's meeting of the minds was nice.  I liked how Bella stood strong in front of him when he apologized.

Only one left???  But I love this story.  I don't want to see it end. :(

I thought it was really sweet that Charles gave her the pearl necklace.  He has finally come around.

I think it was wrong of Bella to storm off like she did with the baby.  She has every right to be upset, but she should have at least clarified that she was only going for a ride.  Poor Edward has suffered enough.

Oh, I have started posting a story of my own called "Use Somebody".  I would love to hear what you think, if you have a chance to read it. :)

That was sweet and hot and dirty and I fucking loved it!!!  I can so see you turning this into a longer story, but if you don't, it is still a fuck hot one-shot! ;)

I love a slow burn...just don't burn too long.

So, Edward is a man whore?  I can see that.  I wonder if Bella will beat that out of him.

Correction, Edward is a man whore with a heart.  LOL, I love the thought the idea of him teaching little ones to play the piano.  Nice. ;)

She is like a cat playing with a mouse that doesn't know enought to run for cover.  Love it!

I fucking love it!!!  He finds her in an ad?!?  That is fucking classic!