Reviews by pmm
Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Hey! Great story so far but I am unable to read the chapter called The Boxer Cullen. How come? I really don't want to miss anything. Is there something wrong with the site?

 



Author's Response:

It's been fixed.  The only thing I can think is the server change today messed up the chapter.  :(  Sorry for the inconvenience!  :)

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625246
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

THANK GOD he told her the truth! That he communicated what was really going on! I was hoping that you would write it that way! Great job

Love this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: You’ve Made Your Bed..

Great title for chapter 15, but that's all I can read. I think something is wrong with TWCSL today. I don't want to miss any of this story so if you could, can you please repost chapter 15?! Thankyou thankyou.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

Just started reading this fantastic story! What a twisted thriller! All of you are terrific writers! I can't help but wonder though if Bella is as innocent as she seems. I wonder if maybe the catch is her knowing about Mike's plan all along and she's trying to turn the tables OR Mike and her are in a plan of their own together and trying to catch these killers in the act????!!!!! OR maybe I'm just reading things that aren't there. Oooo keep up the good work!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

I think your story is pretty good so far!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248511
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

How to extend this amazing story? I would like to see more interaction/as much conversation as convention allows, between Isabella and Edward.  Alot of the story seems to be from the POV of Esme, Carlisle. When it is from Bella's POV it is more about how she feels about the farm and Charles. What if she were to explore her feelings more? Go deeper and be more present in her feelings. I realize she is young and naive, and has alot to deal with, but I would love more conviction with her feelings, allow herself to feel all the love that is coming to her. (I am a total sap for romance, the more the better)  But, then again, what do I know? I just love to read this story!

Frayed by bagpuss Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Drabble-ish one-shot


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 239 Read Count: 2231
[Report This] Published: 10 Nov 2012 Updated: 23 Aug 2013
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting. Are you planning on creating a story around this chapter? I think it would be a good read.

 



Author's Response:

I wasn't planning on it, not so far, at any rate. But thanks for your enquiry and compliment. 

He Didn't Know by msbullcullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

Edward and Bella thought they would be together forever. They didn't know that fate would pull them apart. Edward didn't know many things. He didn't know people could be so cruel. He didn't know that one night at work would change his life forever. However, he DID know that he loved Bella with all of his heart and they belonged together. He didn't know how but they would be together.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35786 Read Count: 41109
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2013 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great story however I'm a little confused. How can Edward and Bella be in school together if he is five years older than her? She's about to turn 18 making Edward at least 22-23 yrs old. Could you explain.

 



Author's Response: The ages mentioned are Bella's. Edward is in college He is 5 years older than Bella. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: pmm Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this story in the beginning. There was substance to the plot and the characters and of course, great lemons. I couldn't wait for the next chapter to see what would happen! The thing is, I know that Bella has some really low self-esteem issues that need to be worked out (don't we all) however, lately, you're chapters have seemed like one big run-on sentence that never seems to end or move the characters forward. It's like the story is just standing still.  I've stopped looking forward to new chapters because they are all the same. I will continue to read this story in hopes that it will move forward and be just as great as it was in the beginning. Please?