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Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171527
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay so i love this story ALOT I can't wait to see more.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315846
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm betting on edward, she might get close to jacob but I don't think she'll acutally do anything, ooo or edward could interrupt.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

oh yay! i loved it i'm so happy one of them finally spoke up a least a little bit, can't wait for more

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

good chapter can't wait for the next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373375
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I can't wait to read this story, it sounds intersting already!

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Oh I love this, I can' wait to see more.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

I love this story!! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Good chapter, I can't wait for more, when they first see each other!

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Oh I love this, I can't wait until the wedding day and the see each other!!

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Yay! I loved it! can't wait for the wedding night though, although there will be people there which is awkward..

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

this is a really good chaper, sweet and lemony :)

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Well that was intersting, I think tayna deserved more than just wine in the face but that's just my opinion, can't wait for more

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

I got a little behind reading this, but I just caught up and it's such a good story. can't wait for more

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Okay so this last one made me cry, but in a good way. This was a very good story I enjoyed it

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

good story, just started reading it. I can't wait for more!

Lost and Found by nitareality Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Frustrated student Bella has a big problem. She lost BOB and he's being held in the lost and found, in RA Edward's room. Can Allice and Rose help Bella recover her BOB without sacrificing her dignity?

Comic Smut

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6775 Read Count: 1681
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

this was pretty good i Liked it



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for taking the time to review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64250
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i loved that proposal it was sweet and funny

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

lol2

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I just starting reading this story and can't wait for this next chapter so see what happens, this was just hearbreaking.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Good chapter....can't wait to see what happens next and when edward finds out

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Oh I can't wait to see how he reacts!

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great chapter, can't wait for more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sequel to The Good & The Bad. Follow Bella & Edward as they mend their relationship & start their new lives in LA. Old friends & new enemies make life more interesting. With Twilight Records blossoming, Bella & Edward find their niche in the music industry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55499 Read Count: 20188
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: The Good Boy Edward: Hey, Shawty, It's Ya' Birthday!

very hot chapter, can't wait to see more



Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on more. =0 J

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Bad Girl Bella: Red House

Just starting reading this story but it's very good, can't wait to see more.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Hope you do enjoy the ride. There was an original to this story. Hope you got to read that one too. =0 J

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

I like this so far, it sounds like it could be very intersting...can't wait to see more of it

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

very intersting....it's nice to see his soft side come out...can't wait for more

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

good chapter, it was nice to seem them interact away from people and how shy bella really is. can't wait for more

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I just started reading this story and I fell in love with it! I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it and just so you know, normally I reply to every review with a teaser, but I just updated, so you get the whole chapter, lol!


XoX

Shel    

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Good chapter, such a sweet date. Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

 

Good chapter, can't wait for more and to see how victoria's parents react.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

good story,can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, jump in and do it!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I just started this story today and I"m in love with it. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Oh I can't wait for the next chapter, and when they catch up to Bella and James.

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Looks like carmen may not hate rosalie for much longer. can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

great chapter, very funny at the end.

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15843
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter, can't wait for more

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184501
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase

wow, great story. love the suspense. I can't believe she killed those poor birds though! Can't wait for your next update

Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Wild

Great chapter, loved the end, especially the tree falling, just pure poetic justice lol

 

Summary:

In the midst of tragedy, Bella is forced to make a heart-breaking decision. WARNING: Character Death

This was my entry in the The Never Ever Happily Ever After contest.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 1254
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mrsmitchell Signed
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

its so sad but so beautiful too