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Bio:
I am a "Mature" woman who admittedly is obsessed with Robert Pattinson and The Twilight Saga much to the chagrin of my family. Thankfully, they let me indulge in my favorite past time of reading twilight fan fiction stories.
I would love to be able to write like all these wonderful authors but haven't had enough talent or confidence to write. Maybe one day but for now, happy just to have the opportunity to read these incredible stories!
Bella, Alice, and Rosalie Swan are looking for the person who shot their father, Charlie, and left him for dead. The Cullen boys, Edward, Emmett, and Jasper, help them but will the person they're after get to them first? AH&MA E/B,J/A,EM/R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102591 Read Count: 42550
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Thank goodness Garrett had the foresight to plant a gps in Bella's shoe. Let's hope she keeps them on!
Poor Rose re her loss of her baby & a hysterectomy. That's going to be hard to recover from both physically & emotionally.
Hard chapter for all. Great job in your handling of it.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Using Sam as the sicko psycho is unique. I can see him snapping Phils neck. Sam is psycho too.
Hope help will be there soon...do not want Bella to be raped!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I know what you wrote was more realistic but I was so hoping they would have gotten there in time before Bella was tortured, beaten & raped.
So at least they got there and hope Bella pulls through. It seems that the end is near??
Graphic & hard to read but well done.
Author's Response:
You know when I wrote this, I went back and forth on whether or not I should have him rape her or not and I really felt this was the direction the story was supposed to take. It was incredibly hard to write. We have about fourteen more chapters or so I think.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I really really hope Sam is dead. Prison would be too good for him & Bella would never be able to heal knowing he was still alive.
Difficult chapter....to read & write.
Thank you for writing it the way you did. Everyone asked about Bella yet you were able to convey the question & answer without going into literal detail.
I hope they all make it. It's going to be rough. Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Bella took the blame for killing Sam so that Garrett wouldn't be criminally charged. Makes sense as Bella is protective of those she loves.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
You're doing a great job...it's difficult to convey the thoughts & feelings that Bella is going through but your words are doing it justice.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
I know it's not what she wants to hear but Bella needs some professional help. After everything she's been through...Charlie, Angela, Ben being murdered, stalked by Phil & Sam and now the press....as well as the other crap....it's going to take time and I hope she does get the help.
Aro should fire Alec, they need to find a new agent & get out of their tour contract and then go away to recoup & heal.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It's slow process for our Bella.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
This was really good. You really conveyedbthe deep, agonizing hurt and guilt Bella feels. She truly believes she has the weight of the world on her shoulders. Just glad Edward and the others are there to help lighten the load when she's ready.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) In my opinion, it's important not to sugar coat what she is feeling like a lot of writers do.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
I think you did well. No sugar coating, just tell it like it is.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I think Bella needs professional help & needs it fast. I know everyone wanted to give her time & she thinks she can handle it, but she can't.
The longer she waits, the harder it will be.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
The healing begins...slowly but there's hope!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Small steps but steps nonetheless.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Baby steps for all but baby steps nonetheless. Glad to see all of them trying to get their lives back.
Jacon
B & Seth, huh?? I like!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Journaling was definitely the right way to go!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Yes!! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Big steps but necessary! I see a glimmer of light....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
That was wonderful. I think the vows renewal was just what was needed. It was like a full circle completed in order to move forward!
Great job. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Great ending to a difficult story!!! So glad they got their HEA!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sticking with me until the end:)
After a long shift in the ER, Edward goes home to Bella and Jasper. AH and NC-17 for language and lemons:) One-shot, for now at least.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6140 Read Count: 4453
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Threesomes are not my fic of choice. However, reading it for what it is, I think you did a good job with it. Because of that, I'd give it a high rating because I think you handled their relationship arrangement well.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42794
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Victims
Got this rec by Peoplelikeus & it's wonderful! I think Aro is in cahoots with James in some way & the FBI bodyguard is Jasper.
Off to read the next chapter & see if I'm right or way off base!
Author's Response:
aww, thank you for taking a chance on my story! you have some good theories about my fic. i'm glad you're enjoying it, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Help
Just wanted to drop in & let you know I'm enjoying this. I'm almost afraid to know what happened to Bella. I witness your parents sawed in half & then forced to move their pieces is horrific as it is. To contemplate James molesting ans/or raping a 12 year old is incomprehensible.
Author's Response:
i'm so glad you're liking the story!! bella and emmett have definitely been through so much, but james never raped bella... you will find out more in the coming chapters. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped
I knew Aro stunk! Now to just figure how much! Why does James want to kill Bella & Emmett? We know Charlie had something on James that's why James murdered him & Renee. The plot sure is thickening....
Author's Response:
the plot is totally thickening! aro's nastiness goes way deep. and james is still after bella and emmett b/c he doesn't want to be charged for all the killings, and he knows they could pick him out of a line up and he'd go down. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Incidents
What's wrong with Edward? Is he epileptic? How does he know Tanya & Irina?
Great story!! Lots of questions so anything you want to share would be great!
Author's Response:
we will find out more about edward next chapter. i'm so glad you're enjoying my story, but i can't give away to many answers or it will spoil it for you! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession
Wow....I thought it was epileptic seizure but it's a brain tumor? I'm guessing it's non operable or they'd have done something during the past 8 years. Is it shrinking?
Hey...they're in Seattle....call Seattle Grace & get Dr. McDreamy to operate! ;)
Thanks & looking forward to the next update.
Fingers crossed for Edward!
Author's Response:
yeah, brain tumor, but we'll find out why it's back soon. and LOL about dr. mcdreamy! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret
Wow!! Yes, I know who the docs are....just can't wait to see how they are all connected! Different sides of the country, Edward's Ped. Neuro's, Bella and Emmett's saviors....how did it happen?
Great story...it's gotta be a tough road so I'll make sure I've got my safety harness on!
Great job on the explanations...looking forward to the next update!!
Author's Response:
next chapter will delve into how everyone is connected. and i love the idea of a safety harness!! i should recommend that next chapter! glad you're enjoying the story. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Emotions
Yep, all those questions & more!! However, trust you to answer them in your own time. Only thing.... don't let Edward die. Let them say the ILY's, successful surgery & catch James!
Great job!
Author's Response:
thanks for trusting, and yes, they will be answered. edward won't be dying... it's hard enough to write that he's sick. i'd never be able to kill him off. thanks for the review!! ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken
Great one! I'm hoping Edward comes through...he has to!
As for mystery POV? Either James or one of his cohorts....grrrrrrr!
Author's Response:
you're on the right track on both counts. edward will make it through and the ?POV will be revealed soon. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Safe
Great update! First word was Bella?? Perfection!
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it!! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Complications
Oh no....I hope Edward is okay and that the seizure hasn't impaired his memory, etc. in anyway.
Remind me again, who is Riley and what is his significance? If it's too much, just tell me the chapter and I'll reread.
Good one. Hope you feel better. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
more on edward in the next couple of chapters. riley posed as a high school student, tried unsuccessfully to kidnap bella at homecoming, and just happens to be james' son. hope that helps! and yes, i am feeling much better. :) thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness
That's right....now I remember. Thanks
Author's Response:
no problem. any time! ;)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout
Wow - can't say much more. Hoping the good guys are coming to the rescue. At least James is no longer an issue but what about the others??
Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
help IS on the way, and the fate of the others will be revealed soon. hang in there! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Full Circle
Great wrap! You got it all in without ad nauseum!
Author's Response:
thanks! i'm glad i didn't over-do it. thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)
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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q
Teaser Trailer #2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge-My Mistress
Sorry - not for me. I like some bdsm but prefer Domward & Subella or equality but not Subward.
Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14810
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: This Is Halloween
Great chapter & I loved the pics but you preemie outtake has me worried. Are poor excuses for egg donors psycho moms Vic & Renee going to kidnap Jack? I'm getting stressed & it was just a tease!! Oh no!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Broken : EmPOV
LOVED IT!! Going back to reread the meet & greet again! I had forgotten Edwards interest!
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV
Great outtake! Gotta say, when I read the teaser a while back, I was so scared that Victoria and Renee managed to get to Jack and take him away. That would kill Edward and Bella not to mention irreparably harm Jackson!
Really good outtake. I feel so sorry for him to feel he can't be a "normal" kid and has to be uber good because of the trauma his birth mother put him through. Glad he's in therapy to help him overcome or manage his fears. I hope one day he's able to tell Bella his fears so she can reassure him that she's not going anywhere. He may not be bone of her bone nor flesh of her flesh but she is his and he is hers as if it were!
Again, fantastic!!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV
Oh Edward.....just marry the girl!!
Great as always....I always love EPOV! James was so lost inside himself...I feel sorry that he had no clue but then....he never did!!
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV
;)
Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58330
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great beginning! Loving it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Have to give Bella credit. Don't think I would have it in me to be a er ped.
Nice party! Love Edward!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
After reading FTB update, I needed a bit of sweetness. Thanks!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I like how this story has some really angsty chapters, happy chapters, transition chapters as well as day in the life ones like this one. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I want Edwards baby too! ;)
Author's Response:
lol, me too!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
!!! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
That was hard....but I think it's going to give a bit of closure for all of them. What Matthews did nit only hurt the girls & boys but also hurt his own family.
Good job.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It was a big step for all of them and they did it together, which will only bring them closer together:)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Very cute!! I can see those boys doing the doowop behind Bella.
Author's Response:
I know, right? I would pay alot of money to see that:)
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I think this was so sweet & perfect. I loved Bella's reaction when they walked into their townhouse, the comments at dinner and Edward's reaction whe he told his mom goodnight and she told him they were coming home with them was priceless!
Predictably, I would say Italy is where Edward is taking Bella on their honeymoon or maybe back to Disneyland since that's where he realized he loved her since he proposed in Forks as that was where Bella became his.
I hope he takes her to Bora Bora. They have these luxury huts that are spaced out over the water and looks beautiful. I believe the hotel is the Bora Bora Lagon Hotel. Beautiful, private and peaceful..
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
A triple wedding that was so beautiful & intimate. I can't wait to hear about their honeymoons!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I think that's a great idea focusing on Bella & Edwards honeymoon & leave the others to outtakes. As much as we may live the other couples, to me, this is primarily a B&E story.
Fiji was a perfect destination!
16 hour nap! No wonder they're ready & raring to go and make a baby. That was so sexy!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
What a beautiful honeymoon!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Hmmm.....honeymoon baby perhaps?
Author's Response:
Perhaps ;)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oohh baby, baby!
All 3 honeymoons sound awesome!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
So sweet!! After everything, it seems like such a reward for them! Old wives tale says the worse the morning sickness, the healthier the pregnancy!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Great chapter....it's been worth the little wait!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Oh no! Not Charlie!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Oh no....how can Charlie die?? After everything that happened and they are all finally together.....tragic.
So so sad........................
Author's Response:
Thank you:(
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I will keep the faith & trust we will all come out okay in the end. I just hope none of the couples cheat or break up....that's kind of a hard limit for me on this story!! Guess because they've goner through so much to get to where they are at that I can't bear it if they aren't together.
Author's Response:
I can promise you that none of them will cheat and they will not breakup, even if their relationships are tested. I appreciate the faith.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I get it. We tried for years to get pregnant, finally did & miscarried early. Got pregnant again & this time, blighted ovum (a lot more common than people realize) and then nothing. Finally did ivf & have a beautiful boy.
I know this may sound trite, but they are youngish & healthy. They have been through he'll and back with the separation, lost each other, Jake, the trial & then the death of Charlie.
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Trust me, I know. I miscarrried back in '99 due to a blighted ovum and again in '05. It's very difficult.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
It was beautiful in a painful way. I remember trying to put on a brave face when I knew what was happening. My "first" was due on Christmas day in1999. That was a tough holiday that year.
Great job conveying the sadness, hopelessness & despair.
Author's Response:
Thank you. My baby was due in August of '99.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
They will make it, I think. It's tough, they just can't catch a break but what doesn't kill them will just make them stronger.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
It was fine. Not every chapter has to be 10,000 words at a time!
They needed that, the needed to reconnect on that physical level. I know when I went through my blighted o & my miscarriage, it took a lot for me to feel "normal" & good enough or even woman enough. Sorry, tmi but in any case, I think you handled it well. Glad Edward pushed Bella to talk to him. Made it all better!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Tough chapter to read. I know how hard it was to keep trying and not succeeding and we finally did ivf.
I truly believe those that have died are in heaven taking care of those who have gone on before and those on their way. Lost my dad 4 years ago and my niece almost 9 years ago at a full term birth and I know Dad is up there taking care of Angelina and all the other babies that didn't quite make it here on earth.
Hope Bella and Edward get their wish soon. It's heartbreaking to have unexplained infertility.
Author's Response:
After I had my miscarriage, I had a dream that my dad was sitting on his front porch. He was holding the most beautiful little baby in his arms. He looked over at me and smiled. He said that he had her now and that it was ok. When I woke up, I was crying so hard but I knew that he was taking care of her.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
My Dad died July 30th so Thanksgiving was our first major holiday without him. It was hard but Christmas & New Years were worse; thoses were his favorites.
Nice to see Renee trying. It's hard.
Nice chapter...move the story along.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Loved the prank. Jasper should have known better than to tell Bella!
Hope they have a peaceful Christmas season. They need a break!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Poor Edward. No wonder he ignored her!
Author's Response:
Yep, Poor Edward!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Heartbreaking. I hope they can get through it. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Thanks....I'm glad they are communicating. Too bad about the others; they need to focus on themselves. Maybe it's time they all found their own apartments. They can be neighbors but I think they all need their space.
Great chapter....you've been missed!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks:)
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Glad Edward stood up to them. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Plum Crazy and Coincidental
Just started this & sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter.
Honestly, it's just that good!!
Hope you get more readers.....it's exciting!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath
Jake needs to grow up. Bella & Edwards marriage has nothing to do with him. One sided love affair.....oh well...snooze you lose...not to mention the fact that Bella never encouraged Jacob, etc.
Good chapter!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos
Loved it!! I love the innuendo & teasing!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Closure
Ok....you can't just leave us hanging! I know Edward briefly explained his past with Tanya but where does she get off making these assumptions regarding him? It's been how many months with no contact & she expects instant reunion? What in the world does Edward have to apologize for?
Please...as a Christmas gift?? A little more insight & secrets revealed?
BTW - loved how you switched pov's within the chapter so we know what's going on with both of them at the same time without waiting!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-New Beginnings
Loved it! So....they're pregnant! Yay!!
Will we to hear the Tanya story?
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I liked it & enjoyed reading their love story.
But.....the end seemed rushed. After the cliffie with tanya, the rest seemed like a Cliff Notes version. It's a wonderful story but I think you sold yourself short. Maybe you got tired, bored or just wanted it over. Don't get me wrong, I really have enjoyed it but felt the end wasn't developed or detailed enough.
Good luck with any more stories you may write.
Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
I left the ending open on purpose. I may come back to revisit the story and write a sequel. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79309
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Intriguing but then your stories always are! ;)
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Interesting. Keep it coming! Looks really good so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC
For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Absolutely. I am a diehard E/B fan but your story is so diobolically evil (Emmett murdering Edward the way he did & took such pleasure in it), that I couldn't stop reading.
Having Jasper not related to Rosalie & having darker hair helps.
Really good story - looking forward to more but I have to tell you, the way you wrote the first love between Edward & Bella was beautiful.
Author's Response:
My daughter says she still gets chills when she thinks about Emmett telling Edward he was going to kill him and then whistling after.
There are some great pics of Jackson Rathbone with dark hair (natural) that are just downright hawt! I had to use that as my muse instead of blonde from the movies (that changed with every one).
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Evil Emmett is new. I'm a purist...Bella & Edward all the way. However, this has got lots of promise & if you decide to expand on it, I'll give it a chance!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I live for dark fics! I will continue this after the contest. Everyone always makes Edward/Jacob/James the bad guy. I wanted to do something unexpected. Big surprise, I know. And again, readers will just have to trust me that I know how to get to the happy ending
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Thanks for the heads up. I had this story on alert at ffn so I'm glad you let us know where to find this. I'm hoping for a happy ending but don't know how you're going to do it. I have faith but I'm heartbroken that Edward is dead.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I think the only reason I haven't completely lost it over this storyline is because I know that Edward is dead and I trust you to make things right. It scares me that although this is fiction, a lot of fiction is based on fact(s) and for people to have the capability to manipulate others to get what they want is disgusting.
I sometimes wish I could look at a timeline of sorts and see how people, events and circumstances circle each other to bring them to where they are.
Great chapter...in a sick way~
Author's Response:
stick with me and just keep chanting "happy ending". I promise it will have one.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Pure evil is Emmett. I know this is listed as an Edward & Bella story. Don't know how you resurrect the dead but I have faith!
Good job!
Author's Response:
Actually it should be listed as Emmett/Bella...for now. Edward's dead and there are no vampires in this one. :) I'll fix it. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Run....run....time to call/contact Charlotte.
Thanks for the update.....I'm glad Bella will be getting her HEA. Just angry that it's not with Edward. RIP
Author's Response:
Sorry, can't bring Edward back from the dead. But I promise there is someone out there for her...
The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement. FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15843
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very intriguing. From your notes, Royce King had been convicted of similar crimes & I'm guessing he raped or tried to make Rose one of his victims or maybe she was the first but got away hence the rose carving.
If he's in jail, maybe he has an unknown twin or lookalike cousin? I believe the Hillside Strangler crimes were committed by twin brothers. I may have the name wrong but I know I saw it on some crime show.
Good start...looking forward to more when you get the chance!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I like this....just as much as MOB. They are both good in their own way.
You've got us on tnderhooks here. I know updates will be few & far between so maybe a brief recap when you post again so we won't to reread in order to refamliarize us with the storyline? Just a suggestion!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Identical twins! Only thing that makes sense.
For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom. Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward. Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Good chapter....when reading, you can tell the difference on how each brother feels & reacts to Bella. Emmett does go all "Brother Bear" on her while Edward hits the emotional part; the part that speaks to the heart which is what brings the eros love into play.
I think they are both in the platonic sibling stage right now but the beginnings of "in love" are there. Edward is confused and I think he'll recognize his feelings for Bella before she does since he seems to be more in touch with them when it comes to her. Bella loves Edward, thinks of him as her hero and protector and feels safe with him. It may take a bit longer for her to recognize it.
Great job...glad to hear you'll post more frequently!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother
Great start....sounds promising. I know you said mostly Bella's pov but I'd love an Edward pov as well if you're up for it. I'd like to hear his thoughts as it seems he's confused or conflicted as well.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Hmmm....dont think Billy has strange intentions but I coukdbe be wrong. Older Jake? Maybe recognizes her from Forks?
Love the jealousy & possessiveness from both Bella & Edward. They still don't have a clue which is sad yet cute.
I know I'm not going to like their hook ups but I'll endure as it seems to be right of passage.
Good chap tee.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Good one. Feel bad for Bella since it must be hard to have 2 bodyguards with her at college. However, it's also nice to have 2 guys who want to protect her as well. Rare to find that at their age & in this time!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh thank God!! I was having heart palpitations thinking Bitchya was preggers. I had a feeling it was a trick but ya never know. Thank God Edward took Bella's advice & forced a test. What balls Tanya had to try & justify her " love" for Edward that she wanted to have his baby. She didn't go to school to get her B.A. Or MBA; more like her MRS.
Can't wait for the next one & getting to hear Edward.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
It's gonna be tough but I think they can handle it...I hope. At least they are both on the same page.
I hope they can make it work. Glad the extra people are out of the picture and while I know you said their may be others involved physically for Bella, I hope you change your mind. It would have been different if both were in denial or hadn't recognized and confessed their mutual feelings for each other. But now that they have, I'm hoping Bella and Edward are together in all ways and will weather the storm.
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
This was wonderful!!! Power to Bella!! I actually thought it was so sweet the way Edward confessed about his Bella Bounty Box! I also loved how they sneeked kisses and mmm mmm in her bedroom. Young love is so precious!
Don't know what will happen during the break, how much more they will progress or if they are found out but I'm sure when you get the chance, you'll let us know!
Thank you for writing this. You have no idea how much I will miss waiting for the next update!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
That was so sweet! I really hope they can have a real relationship but it's going to be difficult. I think once they figure out what they are then try need to talk to the parents. I think Esme may have an idea but I guess we shall see.
Thank goodness for writers block....love this story!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Good for them! What Edward had to say to Rose and Emmett was exactly right. Maybe this is what it takes for Emmett to realize it isn't incest, there is no DNA or bloodline involved. They are simply related by marriage and if but for the fact....
I think it deserves a 10 because it moves the story along. Great job!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Sweet...glad they have family support!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Loved it! Romantic, sexy Edward! The fantasy of women everywhere!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother
Good for Bella! Standing up to the sheep of UDub!
Great chapter!!