Oh awesome! I'm so glad she is moving out.  Charlie is severely getting on my nerves.  I want to go punch him.  I can only imagine the intensity of the anger Edward and Bella are feeling.

Great story so far.  Can't wait to read the rest of it!

Oh man! I can't believe this is where I have to catch up with the story.  It's going to kill me waiting for the next chapter.  Let's just hope that both idiots wake up and realize they love each other (or at least are on the way there).

Awesome story! I started reading about 2 days ago, and would have been caught up a long time ago if it weren't for work and sleeping.  Oh, if reading delicious lemony Twilight FF payed the bills, I'd be one richer-than-Bill-Gates woman.

Can't wait for your next installment. Keep up the great work!

Awww they're so sweet!! I love the stories where Edward sees her as this goddess/angel that he just can not get enough of (both physically AND emotionally).  Makes me kinda sad, because I've yet to witness the existence of a man like that in the real world. Hopefully there's one out there for me.  But anyway.  I'm kinda mad at Carlisle.  He ought to know his son has enough sense not to get ensnared by a gold-digger (cue Kanye).  And Renee!! Ugh.  She just makes me furious. One second Bella's a two-bit whore and all of a sudden everything's peachy-keen because she married rich.  Women like that are disgusting.  I don't care if I'm stuck in a matchbox apartment with a 15 year old car forever, as long as I love the man I marry, and he loves me.  I mean, what use is all the money is you're miserable anyway?

I think I have teared up at nearly every chapter since Edward left.  Especially the letters.  And man I really wanted her to slap Aro when he shoved everything off her desk.  But one, that wouldn't be Bella.  And two, he probably would have knocked her to the floor and hurt the baby.  So good for her not acting on my instincts, haha.  I'm nervous as to how the whole Lauren-walking-into-the-office-and-huffing-out scenario is going to play out.  I don't think you're the type of author to throw something like that in there without it having some sort of future meaning.  I hope I'm wrong though.  Can't wait for the next update! 2 days and counting :)

Oh that was so good!! Definitely had some tears with Edward and Cherie.

I'm going to be so sad to see this story end.  I know real life is crazy and hectic, but I really hope you're going to continue writing.  I've gotten so much joy from your stories.  I love to read and you are a gifted author.  Amazing work! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here.

While your "The Story of Us" thing is really sweet, I'm not gonna lie, it scared me a little.  It reminds me of "The Notebook" and the fact that she couldn't remember the love of her life and he had to re-read her the same story every single day for just a few fleeting minutes of recognition before her memory was lost again.  I highly doubt that you're going that route (and greatly hope you don't), but it just reminded me of that story slightly.

Oh! How is Edward going to ask permission from Charlie? Or will he?  Will he ask her while in Forks, or wait til New Year's Eve?? I can't wait to find out!!

I love that you add pictures to your author notes.  I especially appreciated the one of your floor plan for the condo.  I'm such a visual person, so it really helps.  I can imagine things, but I'm usually a little off.  LOVE the guest room bed set btw.  It's gorgeous.  And I was so engrossed in the story that I forgot to write this on the appropriate chapter, but I cried like a baby after their fight, when Rose and Emmett showed up at Edward's.  Everything Emmett had to say just absolutely struck my heart.  That was such a great moment.  Many kudos for that one.

Gah! This is why I hate reading incomplete stories! It's so good, and I want to keep reading, but there's nothing left!  Can't wait for you to update.  I'm so hooked on this story.

I loved Alice and Esme being down to Earth royals, and not so stuck up.  And their little giggle conspiracy thing coming back from the garden is so very telling that Edward is "Tony" especially with the way Alice was acting when Bella started humming the song from Italy.  But how will Edward and Bella act?? Will Edward turn from his lothario ways? And hopefully Angela will get to go to England with Bella and meet and fall in love with Lord Benjamin or something like that.  Oh I'm so excited for your next update!

What a splendid Saturday surprise!!  Waking up to a new chapter notification 2 days early was awesome.  Can't wait for the wedding and wedding night ;-)  Oh what a fun week this will be!

I don't think I ever mentioned it, but I love you characterization of Jacob.  I'm so glad he's her brother instead of some random, misguided lover.  I know SM said that in the books Bella really did fall in love with Jacob, but I NEVER got that impression.  He really was more like a brother to her.  Her heart always belonged to Edward.  So bravo, this is the first time I've ever read Jacob as her brother, and I think it's the best way to have him characterized.  You're awesome :-)

Oh I've been desperately hoping for an EPOV!! So excited to read the next chapter :)

Loving your story so far! Not so fond of how manwhorish he is though.  Now don't get me wrong, I know you've got some plan for him and Bella, and I've read many a "manwhoreward" story, but he isn't usually so blatant and jackass-y about it, especially to her.  I'm EXTREMELY interested to know what's going on in his man brain.  Hope it's something juicy... We shall see ;)

Ugh. I always hate Jake, and your story is definitely not winning him any brownie points.  Actually I really just want her to slug him.  Or have Emmett do it.  Or Emmett AND Edward AND Jasper, oh AND ALICE.  That would be brutally fantastic.  And I really want to hate Tanya, but she seems to be a genuinely nice person. Grr.  I'm not much of a patient person.  I really just wish B & E would get together already.  But at least it's an interesting journey to get there.  Can't wait to keep reading :)

::sigh:: I just love Edward :)

Can't wait til the next update! LOVE your story!

Fabulous V-Day present!!!

Thanks for posting! New chapters of this story always make my day :)

"It finally seems like everything in my life is perfect, like nothing can bring me down."

Awww man, why did he have to say that??? It's like the kiss of death.
Awesome story so far by the way.  I started reading a couple hours ago and only have 10 more chapters to catch up to where you are currently.  Can't wait to read the rest :)

Sorry to hear about your RL drama.  I hope it gets better soon.

But also, just in case I haven't told you before, your updates are so awesome! I literally grin when one hits my inbox :)  You're such a fantastic writer.  Your stories actually have plot and purpose.  They're such a joy to read. So thank you so much for writing, and for updating even when you don't really feel like it, or don't have the time or energy.  I know it might sound weird or strange, because it is just fanfiction, but your stories mean a lot to me and I'm sure other people. So thanks again :)

Not gonna lie, I definitely teared up at the end with the birth. 

Love love love your stories. Can't wait til we have some more of your fabulous writing.  Good luck working on your second novel! And congratulations :)

Been thinking this for a while, but forgot to comment: definitely thinking the mysterious flower creepo to be none other than mister Victor James. The sleazeball. Just 'listening' to him speak makes my skin crawl. ugh. He better get what's coming to him. And a sexual harassment suit against him as well. I can't believe she doesn't report him to somebody! Rose at least. She'd get him where it hurts ;)

Oh I love this story already! I love doting dad Edward. Definitely need a man like that for my kids :)