OMG, what an evil place to leave us hanging.  WTF did Renee do to Bella?  Of course everything she's done to her so far is horrible, but for Carlisle to be that sick over it, it has to be bad.

I worry about Lauren and Jessica.  I don't know if Bella can handle their bitchiness.  Espeically if Rose is still pissed at her and jumps into their little clique.

I love Carlisle.  Him talking about slutty nurses and wanting to talk dirty with Esme on the phone was greatness.  In so many stories we only see the serious doctor and parent.  It's nice to see the playful husband too.

LOL, I never thought of Charlie and Carlisle fishing to get out of party prep.  I love it.  I just knew something would happen with daughter slut 1.  Yay, Rose for coming to the rescue.  Poor Em just broke my heart stadning there looking broken and torn.

Ok, so Eddie realizes he would die fighting to protect Bella.  I wonder how long it will take him to realize that is love for a woman, not love or a sister or relative.

I knew it was not going to be good when I read that Phoenix was playing.  Renee is really a stupid bitch, isn't she.  WTF was she thinking abusing Bella like that?  I was wondering what the hell was going on when everyone was letting Renee abuse her.  I breathed a sigh of relief when I realized why.

Great job with keeping me on my toes throughout that chapter.

Thank god no one was at work when I read this.  I couldn't keep my mouth shut.  Words like bastard and asshole were flying out.  Of course I literally cheered when Edward got his turn at Phil.  Edward is so sweet and caring towards Bella.  I can't wait for the ah ha moment when he realizes exactly what he's feeling for her.

ROFL.  I love Alice.  Her jumping on Jasper like that was total win.  I wonder how long it will take for Edward to realize he wants a realtionship with Bella and allows Jasper and Alice to go ahead.

I knew Bella wouldn't get out of court without some of Renee's past abuse coming out.  Thanks for the heads up about the chapter and also the B/E alone time.

Great job :)

LOL.  I love that Charlie and Carlisle gave them a hard time.  Nice to see Edward doesn't crack too much under pressure.  Jasper puking on the fence was priceless.  Can't wait for Bella's reaction to the invitation.

Congratulations on the baby.  Hope your delivery is quick and your epidural (if you opt for one) is good ;)

I assumed that was the reason Alice was acting like that.  Leave it to Em to ruin the pixie's plot to get him and Rose talking again.  It's nice to see Vicky from someone else's POV.  Vicky had seemed to good to be true.  Has she been hiding her inner vixen all this time?

Tanya is a crazy bitch.  Are we gonna get a tiny Rose POV to see exactly what was said to Tanya?  Did Rose take out some of her frustration over life on Tanya?  Seeing how psycho Tanya is I fear that she is going to try to do something bad to Bella.

The date was perfect.  Great idea for the dinner cruise.  The thought of her worrying about the prices never crossed my mind, but that would definately be a Bella thing.

Okay, that kiss had to be the most honest and perfect first kiss for this couple.  Between Bella's ignorance of all things sexual and nervousness that was the only way for that to end.  Loved it.  I died laughing at the last line from Bella and got some strange looks from my kiddos.

Thanks for the bit of fluff before the angst kicks bakc up :)

I'm loving Edward more and more.  He seems to be the perfect person to care for Bella and help her through all of the crap.

I never expected that from Rose.  I kept expecting her to be raped by Royce or something.  Losing a child is never easy but deciding to deal with it alone is horrible.  I feel so bad for Em right now.  It seems like the Swans just can't catch a break.

I can't wait for Bella to call Charlie Dad or Daddy.  I might actually tear up when that happens.

I get this strange feeling that Vicky is not taking the break up with Emmett very well.  Is she going to be bunny boiling, Fatal Attraction psycho about it?

I love that Edward pours his feelings into his kiss but is still mindful not to do something that will set Bella off.

That Mystery POV worries me.  Is that one of Renee's exes that thinks Bella coudl be his daughter?  I'm afraid that guy showing up could really screw with Bella's head. 

Christmas was great!  Everyone's gifts were perfect. I love seeing Rose open up more and Bella slowing warming up to her.

I was really shocked at Edward's reaction to his gift from Bella in front of everyone.  I guess the gift made him not care that her brother and father were both present for their display of affection. LOL

I teared up a bit when Bella called Charlie Dad.  That was so sweet and definitely the best Christmas gift she could've given him.

I'm dying to see how your Charlie handle's "the talk" with innocent little Bella.

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Okay, Edward, WTF?  You'll stick it in skanky Stanley without wrapping it up but you keep blowing Bella off.  Can't wait to find out more from dear Eddie to see if he really did screw Bella at that party and what he really thinks of her.

I'm glad Eddie could show a little shame at his sexcapades with Skanky Stanley. 

OMG, after that stunt I don't know if Crowley would even be able to look at Bella again.  He just doesn't seem like the exhibitionist type.

I love that Edward left Bella hanging at the end.  Can't wait to see her revenge for that stunt.

Loved Nipslip.  Too bad Jakey is happily attached.  Bella sure could've used a little something-something to face Cullen.

LOL.  Sheer genius having Edward looking so happy with some random chick and ignoring Bella.

You've got me wondering if he did anything with the slag at the bar.

Cullen definitely is good fighting fire with fire.

It's about damn time and holy hell.  Okay, Edward seemed to enjoy that a bit more than he should've.  I can't wait for Bella's thoughts on it.

Possessiveward is total win!  I'm dying to know what' going through Bella's head because all of that from Edward just had me thinking he's falling for her.  I wonder what Daddy C would say about Edward falling for a gril.  Especialy one from Forks.

They are falling hard.  Too bad I have a feeling there will be some major heartache before they can be happy.

Awe, Alice and Jasper are so sweet. Glad they finally got their shit together :)

I can't wait to see how Edward came to that conclusion.  I love that he and Bella are gonna put aside the bullshit and try to be together.  I'm a bit sad that there is no lovely "Next" button for me to click on.  I've enjoyed reading this story and can't wait for the next chapter :)

I never did quite buy into the whole her menstrual blood had no interest for the vamps.  Hello, they gladly drink the blood of any animal.  This was quite an interesting look into that aspect and Edward's self control. 

See, now that's how that scene should've gone.  I think you did a great job keeping Edward in charcter through all three of these installments.  Great job.  I will definitely be checking out In Pursuit of Normalcy.

NOOOO!!!! I've spent the last two days totally absorbed in this story. My family has been neglected because I couldn't stopped reading. I have completely fallen in love with your B&E. I've cheered for them and cried with them. I've been so absorbed that I couldn't even stop to leave reviews. I had to keep going. I about died when I got to the end of this chapter and there was no lovely little NEXT link. Please tell me there will be an update coming soon.

I'm pissed at Riley. How dare he do that to Bella. I'm glad he did because she would have never let him go if she knew the truth of the situation, but still. How can you think you could build a relationship based on lies. That garbled voicemail that Edward received broke my heart. I know he still would have been pissed at Riley if he received the full message but at least he would not have been livid. I'm so glad he decided he would fight for her rather than back down and wait for her.

I'm so proud of Bella for listening to Riley and not letting him get to her. The growth she showed in this chapter was amazing. I think the fact that survived facing Riley she should be able to survive just about anything :)

Again, totally loving this story and I'm DYING for an update. I'll be telling all friends to read this NOW! It is now time for me to go back and re-read and savor each chapter and leave you the reviews I should have the first read-through.

Obviously Edward wasn't a vampire when he and Bella first dated.  I'm very interested to find out what happened.

Well, that discussion went pretty well.  I knew Edward would love her no matter what she looked like.  I'm still waiting for Jake to blow up when he realizes there's been a famp in his kids' house.

Tia's quite the little spitfire.  Can't wait for Bella to wake up and see what happens.

I knew Jake would freak out.  I just couldn't believe he hit Bella.  That was uncalled for.  He's lucky the other guys were there to hold Edward back.  Of course Seth seemed ready to rip his dad apart.

How sad that she received the final papers on her divorce on Valentine's day.  Edward did an awesome job making her Valentine's day good.  Awe, Bella told him she loves him.  Even though she was asleep it was still sweet.

Of course they are boyfriend/girlfriend :)

It really sucks when you want your mom and dad to be together.  I guess Leah hasn't quite grasped the reality that Jake imprinted on that other girl and not Bella.  Of course she might not comprehend that until she phases and actually imprints.

A restraining order for Bella against Jake makes very good sense.  I wonder how Bella will react to the plane.  I can't see her thinking wow, Edward can take care of us.  She'd be more like, WTF?  I'm really not good enough for him.  *sigh*  Good luck ever winning that battle, Eddie.

Jake is really starting to scare me.  I'm glad Sam is thinking with a clear head and stepped in.  Yeah, I can see Leah being the only obstacle in  the way of the plan.  Poor stubborn girl just wants her family to be together and normal.  Maybe she will back down when she hears that Jacob could kill her mother.

I really should be working but I can't stop reading.

Well, there you go.  The only choice is to change her.  Seth and Leah won't want to be without their mother.

Nothing better than quality family time with the Cullens :)

I just knew Ben and Tia would be Leah and Seth's imprints.  That is awesome.  It's kinda cool that all of their venom will change her.

Holy hell.  I knew Bella was gonna be a bad ass bitch, but damn!  That was a perfect way for her to wake up and protect her whole family.  Awesome!

I love that Claire is a wolf too :)

Just to get a visual in my head, what size did you picture Bella as when she was human?

Yay Bella for having such awesome control of your shield.  I wonder if the twins want to hurt Emmett for teasing their mom and Edward so openly about sex.  I can see Seth laughing about it, but I can totally see Leah going all "TMI for the kids" and covering her ears with her hands.

Wow, Jake really is a sick bastard.  I think Bella liked it better when he forgot or ignored their anniversary.

Don't mess with momma bear's cubs.  She will literally rip you apart.

I'm glad the entire family gave their opinions about Bella and the twins going off alone.  She should realize that number one Edward, Tia, and Ben would never be somewhere the three of them wouldn't.  And the rest of the Cullens are a package deal with Tia and Ben.

It sounds like poor Bella has never really had the loyalty of a true family before.  Even Charlie hasn't been there for her like the Cullens are now.

OMG, I LOVE ESME!!  That was awesome.  I have a feeling we are about to have one hell of a showdown with Jake.

Yay! Everyone is happy and in love and grandparents :)  I love a happy ending.

And you are so right what Bella said...Once you have been a fat chick you never want to draw attention to your body ever again.

Damn they are fucked up!  I love it.  Can't wait to see where this goes.

You know what, I say new plan.  Take Mike's money and kill him instead of Bella.  Yeah that sounds good.  He's a douche.

Edward's a goner.  I don't know if he'll be able to kill Bella.  I wonder how Bella would react to the real Edward.  Would she be repulsed or could she be as screwed up as him and his friends and get off on killing too?

Bella is really getting to our Eddie.  I knew ignoring Alice's call was going to be a mistake.  Wonder if Bella will get to Alice like she has gotten to Edward.  I still think they need to turn the tables on Mike.  So is there a life insurance policy on Mike too? *evil grin*

Holy shit!  WTF is Edward going to do?  If it wasn't for Jacob being involved I would say that Em and Alice would happily help him plan Mike's murder.  I think Jacob is the big snag in everything.

So, Bella is okay around dead people.  I still think it would be awesome if Bella could fit right into their morbid lives of death and mayham.

Of course Alice would see comforting Jasper over Bella's death as a total win for her.  She's such an evil pixie.  God I love her.

Hmm, does Bella think Mike caught her and Edward sneaking glances and smiles to each other during the funeral?  Was that part of the sudden change? Or was it because he was so sweet to her one moment and then is gone the next?

It's killing me to see Edward fall so hard for Bella, battle with himself over having to kill her, and then to see her do that to him.  This story is so freaking addictive.

Edward is one messed up dude.  He loves Bella and doesn't want anyone else to touch her or hurt her, but he get gets off on the though of killing her.  God I love him!

Thank god I don't have to wait for an update.  That ending has me wondering WTF Bella did.  Did she kill Mike or Lauren or both?  Pretty please :)

I haven't quite figured out what Bella is thinking and feeling about Lauren's death.

Mike you are dead.  I have a feeling his death is going to be long and very painful.

Mike's torture was a thing of beauty.  Edward was an artist :)  Bella's first reaction to Mike really had me worried.  I thought for sure she was going to freak out and Edward was going to have to kill her.  I was like hell yeah when she actually finished him off.  Your Bella never ceases to surprise me.  Can't wait for the aftermath :)

What an evil put freaking perfect ending to this awesome story.

I would like to believe that Edward and Bella survived but as far as anyone other than Em, Rose, and Jasper are concerned they are dead.  Of course that is for their own protection against Alice.

You ladies did an awesome job putting together this deliciously dark and evil story.

I love Esme.  Now you've got me wondering what exactly is up with Edward.  Seems like he and Esme have a few secrets that even Ali doesn't know.

I'm loving your sarcastic Bella.

I liked how Edward handled Bella after Em pissed her off.