Penname: janefanatic [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 25 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I love Jane Austen (as you can probably tell from my name) and absolutely detest Jane Eyre (the Bronte sisters were just a bit too gothic for my taste). I enjoy reading the works of others; it pleases me to see so much talent in a non-professional area.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 313586
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Yay! I love how they think they're so badass, but really, their both confused teenagers like every other high schooler with a first love...

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Damn it! I am desolate... I feel that achy thing in my chest like I just broke up with my boyfriend. CAN'T YOU SEE WHAT YOUR STORY IS DOING TO ME?!?! I need to stop getting so attached, and I will... after I finish your story! Please update soon; if you don't, I'll be forced to spend my summer break heartbroken for your fictitious characters, and you can't be that mean, right?

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

This is your best chapter so far. The characters have been developed, have grown, the plot is more than "point A to Point B to point C", and your descriptions are just enough to paint a picture, not enough to detract. I'm glad that Alice visited, because I found myself just as wounded as Edward at her "betrayal" of friendship by hanging with Rosalie (who is just delightfully heinous!). Of course, none of this is stopping the fact that you clearly are an EVIL human being for leaving us with this cliffhanger!! I want the next chapter, and I want it NOW!! Okay, temper tantrum aside, please update soon? PLEEEEEAASSE??????

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 75650
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Now that She's Home

Thank you for the update! I have to admit, I'm a little nervous about the coming chapter...



Author's Response:

you aren't alone, trust me, pleanty of people are a little nervous about next chapter, none more than Edward!!!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

Thank you for Bella's response to finding out their mated status! I was afraid she would run again like after their kiss, but you seem to have a knack for understanding when drama is necessary for the story's sake, and when it's superfluous. I like that this story is both character and event-driven; it's a perfect mixture. Thanks for updating, I hope your Summer (Or Winter, if you're on the Australia side) is going well!



Author's Response:

wow, thanks for the huge compliments!  wow, they are awesome! 

I am in the States so it's summer here!  Hope yours is good too!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Darkest Before the Dawn

Whew. Your first sentence frightened me! Maybe they can go ice skating together? He can skate backwards and she can just be pulled by him (so klutzy Bella won't make an appearance). And I love indoor picnics during the winter! After a snowfight, just coming back in and cuddling in front of the fire, drinking hot chocolate and reading to each other... I'm such a romantic! These are just a couple of ideas, I'm sure others will send you some more too. 



Author's Response:

Thanks I like the ideas!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76008
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

Ugh. I wouldn't be able to handle that; how does she stop herself from passing out? Oh and I was very intrigued by Carlisle in this chapter. Please update soon?



Author's Response:

well, she has lots on her mind, and there are rather a lot of talented vamps who may be keeping her conscious. Yes i loved the carlisle snippets :) he is truely one of my fav characters! I want to write a story just about him, but i dont know if people would read :) i shall be updating tomorrow evening, thank you very very much for your kind words and support :) xx

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two

Okay, a new character has been introduced into the mix! Aro... he's so deliciously evil. I think what makes him so frightening is the fact that he doesn't appear to be insane; he's quite rational, rather. Especially in conjunction with Jacob's blatant psychopathism. That's why Aro wins (so far) in terms of real "villainness". Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I know Aro is one of my favorite characters too :) I only hope that I can capture his essence in the story :) hehe I love your review its nice and makes me happy, thank you very very much xx

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

Release the Kraken! Er.... Monster! I'm very excited about this next chapter. I am glad you told us about Carlisle's feelings for Bella; and why he thought of her as Esme's reincarnation of sorts, but I can't help but think that, because it is from Edward's point of view, the "However his thoughts were always platonic" might just be a case of wishful thinking. I imagine it would be hard to have platonic feelings for someone who you thought was a reincarnation of the love of your life! I was glad to see some more of Aro; he seems more insane, less calculating, for some reason. Then again, that could just be Edward's interpretation of him! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

so sorry the reply is so late :/

oh his thoughts are platonic seriously, he would never think of another woman the way he did for esme, and he does see her as the reincarnation however its more like esme's daughter than actual esme, if that makes sence.

Aro is nuts, but I love writing for him, its great haha

thanks for your review xx

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude

IT LIVES!!! Thanks for updating; it's been a while, but I understand that the outside world does take over from time to time. I enjoyed this chapter; it feels more like a teaser than anything else though. I'm intrigued by the development of Bella; perhaps she will be one of the few who access their latent gifts as humans? I could definitely envision a human Bella busting some vampire ass when she suddenly realizes that she is talented, in some manner or another. Thanks for sharing! Don't abandon us!



Author's Response:

Sorry that you feel its a teaser, I have revised the story line and tried to cut the fillers but then its gonna be over in like 5-6 chapters so I'm not sure if people will be too thrilled with that idea :/ I would never abandon this story or you guys xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 361007
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Surprise

Wow. Edward neither confirmed nor denied the drug use. Does that mean something? I had forgotten until now the earlier chapter where his heart was racing and he was pale and sweaty when Bella followed him to his dorm room. Was that from the same thing as this chapter?

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Air & Water

Nice Lord of the Rings reference!! 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: The Past Laid Bare

What a wonderful chapter! I'm glad to hear a bit more about Bella's situation with Aaron and that time. And she's starting to trust herself in this relationship!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: That's How You Know

EEEEEEHHHH!!!!!! (High pitched squeal)!!! Thank you so much for sharing! I'm super excited about the next chapter! And would it be weird to say that I'm proud of Bella? The fact that she knows how devastating it would be for Edward if she told him only to take it back later, just proves that if she doesn't love him yet, she's absolutely on her way to it! And I loved the Rosalie/Emmett interaction. A lot of people think Emmett's just an idiot ignoramus, but I love that he has clearly thought (long and hard) about his plans after graduation and how they effect Rosalie, too. 



Author's Response:

It is absolutely NOT weird to be proud of Bella. That just means I'm writing this well enough for you to get invested in the character!  Emmett is not an idiot by any stretch of the imagination.  He just figures there's enough people taking life seriously around him and offers up the comedic relief!  And what we saw in this chapter is just the tip of the iceberg of what he's been thinking about for his future with Rosalie. :)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: No Turning Back

Gah! Update sooner! Update sooner!! UPDATE SOONER!!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: New Start

Can I just say how much I appreciate the chapter descriptions you put on the home page? It's awesome! And what's more, it makes me remember how much I love the beginning of this story, so instead of just reading the updates, now I've just decided to start again from the beginning! Oh, and I've read up to the current chapter (09-18-10) but you can only comment once per chapter, so I figured 22 was fair game! Thanks for your characters, and the story that they make!



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad you've fallen in love with WTB so much. It's really been a great story to write and share with all of you.

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings

YAY!!! I loved this chapter so much!!! And thanks for including the song... it made me squeal when I saw the reference!



Author's Response:

You are welcome!

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Will It All Away

A sentence I've never imagined myself saying: Good GOD I fucking HATE Emmett. What the FUCK is wrong with him?! And does he even understand what he's done? I've been crying for the past four chapters, and it doesn't look to be stopping anytime soon...

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Searching for a Reason

Rose gave it away last chapter: Something like, "and with Emmett blaming himself and snapping at everyone without remembering he did it". I still want to punch Emmett in the 'nads, but less so now that I know he really didn't mean what he said to Bella. What a fucktard!! I normally don't curse, so that really shows how angry I am at him. I absolutely LOVE your story, but it has made me cry more than anything else for the past several chapters. I want what Emmett said to become public knowledge, and for SOMEONE to punch him. In the 'nads. And for someone to FORCE Bella to believe that it was not her fault in any way that she ensured that Edward went out and had FUN for the first time in his life. It's NOT what hurt him!! So, basically, I want an HEA. NOW. That being said, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful writing with us! I feel like we've gotten to know Jasper so much better in the past few chapters; you have a real gift in making characters real, with actual personalities and development. You rock!



Author's Response:

Emmett's words will become knowledge very soon.  First to a few and then to all.  He will not be walking away unscathed.  Bella will be finding out very soon that it wasn't her fault - And Edward will find out his brother made his Angel think the best times in his life were the worst.  It's all counting down to Bella cracking and she has no idea it's coming.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the Jasper sections!  I wasn't sure I could do him justice in that first scene, but he pretty much writes himself at times. LOL  He is far from done making sure his friend Bella isn't hurt any further.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

Thank Goodness for Esme!!! A quick piece of advice for Bella; whenever she is considering Emmett's advice over Esme's... don't. Just don't. The heartbreak playlist is pretty awesome, I must say! Although we did get our Elvis fix in Hawaii, I must request the addition of "Heartbreak Hotel" to the mix, as it's the quintessential heartbreak anthem! Thanks for sharing; this chapter gives me great hope for the future!



Author's Response:

LOL  Then at some point, I'll make sure to have Bella tell Numb to toss that song in there!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

I'd be much obliged!

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Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: One is the Loneliest Number

Thank goodness Bella knows about the pregnancy!! I am so relieved that she knows. I thought maybe she would overhear Emmett and Edward talking about it or something, and misinterpret or react negatively, but now she knows! My sister just had a baby a little over a week ago, so I'm all gaga over babies right now! I cannot wait for the party net chapter! Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

I understand this completely. When Bella thinks, she does so in two different ways; there's the over-analytical method, and then there's the emotional, "irrational" thinking. Like, when she sees Edward looking at her with adoration, but she knows that there's a chance that she's only seeing it because she wants so badly for it to be real. I know some people would be frustrated by the disparity of seeing something but not believing, but I think you've captured this strange dichotomy perfectly. Sometimes you want something so badly that it seems to be there; like when you imagine that the cute boy at the café is flirting with you because you've had a crush on him forever, when really he's just being polite. Or when you know, scientifically, that you cannot possibly make someone sicker by virtue of being in their presence, but you feel culpable, and there's no logical argument that can really persuade you otherwise. Thanks for this intriguing further glance into Bella's psyche. It's been great!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Life After You

I love Bree even more after this chapter! I enjoyed this chapter particularly because it showed everyone's maturity (or lack of maturity) in the handling of Emmett's confession. Your story is so true to reality in that therapy takes time, forgiveness doesn't just appear when you want it to. Your characters emphasize that resentment can't dissipate when you tell it to. I hope everyone forgives Emmett (eventually. As in, a LONG time from now). Although, I wouldn't mind it if someone (The Chief? Jacob?) never did. There is no such thing as a tabula rasa!



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying Bree.  I had no idea when I first introduced him that he would turn into such an integral party of the story. But he has and I love every scene he's in!  So glad to know you guys are enjoying him too.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 171894
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Composition

I do the same thing with scents! I have happy, confidence-boosting, calming, and make-me-happy scents!

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 87614
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I liked the ending! It was a curveball, but because you went from OOC Edward and Bella to canon Edward and Bella, it wasn't a jarring change; after all, these are the versions we are most familiar with! Thanks for sharing. I like that she's gonna change the names to Victoria and James: Karma's a bitch to those who are bitchy!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I'm really glad you liked my story.

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 16968
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
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Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: A Moment of Bliss

**CRICKETS** I'm scared!

Lost and Found by nitareality Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Frustrated student Bella has a big problem. She lost BOB and he's being held in the lost and found, in RA Edward's room. Can Allice and Rose help Bella recover her BOB without sacrificing her dignity?

Comic Smut

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6775 Read Count: 1672
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

That was adorable! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3987]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 989775
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was a wonderful chapter! I thought it was a perfect ease into the world of BD/SM; not too much, not too scary, but enough to warn off squeamish newbies (whether that be readers or Bella herself, it works regardless). Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay! I'm glad one session has not ended in tears!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

HAHAHA!!! I can picture Bella's confused face: "Um.... eight?"

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I'm kind of confused. I thought what Bella did was pretty much the best thing she could do. I mean, it would have been best for Jasper to hear about his douchey brother directly from Alice, and Bella was trying to ensure that happened. I guess she shouldn't have given her that much time in which to do it, but this punishment is ridiculous! Everyone's fears (including Alice's) were completely logical. I don't think anyone could really blame Bella for anything, and I'm getting upset on her behalf, and I kind of wish she were more angry than she was! 



Author's Response:

the next chapter is for you - warrior bella will arrive in full force.

thanks for the review

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wow. I'm so proud of how far Bella and Edward have come since the beginning!

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 49715
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This chapter had my emotions all over the place! I feel so terrible for Charlie; I hate that he had to think his daughter was dead, and when he tells Bella she doesn't know fear, it gave me tears in my eyes. I felt Edward's guilt for taking her from her father, and his further guilt for not regretting it; knowing he'd do it again because he needs her. And poor Bella! There's nothing quite like getting yelled at by your daddy, even when you deserve it, but when it's unwarranted? That's terrible! I would have been less mature about it; I probably would have started crying and saying something stupid, like "it's not my fault, daddy! He MADE me!" and then Edward would have taken the phone, and it would have sucked. I guess this just means Bella is a better person than I!



Author's Response:

Awww she's not a better person, she's just doing her best to keep her father safe and in her life.  If she'd reacted that way, she would have lost her chance to keep on talking to him.  But she was definitely feeling terrible and Edward hated having caused that to come down on her like that! 

Charlie was definitely in the right to feel the way he did.  He doesn't know her circumstances and sadly he can't.  Hopefully she can see him again someday :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Can you fall in love in 10 days? Can you push someone to the edge of insanity in 10 days? Edward is a bachelor risking fifty grand on the line and Bella is a writer for a prominent woman’s magazine. Loosely based on How To Lose A Guy In Ten Days. AU, AH, & OOC. Canon pairings.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer. I own nothing.

Banner by: moonlit-wishes

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86564 Read Count: 10489
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

TELL HIM, TELL HIM!!!!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aww! That's too adorable! I'm excited about the Mariners game, but I hope there aren't any more foul balls...

 

Any chance we can read Bella's article later?



Author's Response:

Yeah, you'll be able to see Bella's article in the nnext chapter. :)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved it!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

"I love you too, Eddie!" Haha! Perfect ending! Thanks for sharing with us.

Summary:

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Thanks to Twihard Fics for the banner.

Edward Cullen is a man of routine. When a homeless girl knocks that routine off track, Edward discovers there is more to life.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14418 Read Count: 1976
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Peanut Butter Sandwich Man

Goodness!!! I have tears in my eyes as I'm writing this. This was amazing!! I loved everything about it; the math (counting), the small character insights (Jessica and Mike backstory), Alice, Rosalie, the time frame; everything was perfect. I love the flawed characters and how perfect it made them. Perfectly human. Homelessness is a huge problem in this country, along with the foster care system and adoption; did you know that while the US adopts more international children than any other country, we still have a huge surplus of unadopted children (mostly african-american males) unmatched by any other so-called developed country? Sorry, this wasn't meant to be a rant; thank you for shining some light upon the hardships of foster care and homelessness (all in the form of a beautiful story)!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I am honored that my story touched you.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, I have no words for how much I loved this, but I'll try anyway! It was marvelous! Thank you so much for sharing with us. All of Alice's "mistakes" and "what would have happened"s were heartbreaking! I particularly felt the pang of her near-adoption, and the fact that she would have been Bella's sister-in-law if she'd stayed...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, although some of Alice's mistakes were painful, they did lead her to her happy ending.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 186460
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, never apologize for being NFC SOUTH!!! That is always and forever my division! Yeah, Roethlisberger wouldn't have been there... It would have been hilarious to have him be out on the field, with the announcers saying, "And here is... wait. What the hell is he doing here??"



Author's Response:

Hahah well good, glad you see my point, silly :)  You make me laugh!  That would be rather odd!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Kick Off

I loved it! And yes, of course Edward should focus on the game when he's on the field! I bet Bella, as a sports fanatic, would be pissed if he got distracted during a game because of her!



Author's Response:

:) Thank you! I think you're quite right, it wouldn't make him a true athlete if he couldn't put his excitement over her aside for the game!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down

Even though this chapter was full of UST, I can't stop thinking about how sweet it is! You've really gotten the essence of school-boy crushes down, and all I can feel is that twinge in the ribcage that says, "I like him" while twirling its foot shyly into the ground... Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  They're a little past schoolkid age but yeah, they definitely are falling fast.  I'm glad you're enjoying the sweetness mixed with the hotness, I think that makes for a pretty good relationship :)  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

Aw, I wish you had chosen a different player to be the ass! I love Peppers; I've been a fan of his ever since he played basketball for UNC! Oh well; someone had to be the jerk, I guess, although I would always choose Roethlisberger; no one really likes him anyway!



Author's Response:

HAHAH well Roethlisberger would not be out on the field at the same time as Edward, so that wouldn't really work.  Sorry, I'm a Nole and a Buc and had to deal with Peppers a lot, so it was fun to make him a dick :) HEHE 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

I have nothing to say, except: HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

haha sounds good to me ;)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan

I loved Esme in this chapter! When she tricked Edward's confession, I couldn't stop giggling! 



Author's Response:

Haha thank you!  I thought it was a lot of fun to make her such a smart, all knowing mom.  So glad you liked her!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass

Man, I love football! I was imagining the game throughout the chapter, and I must tell you I am impressed with your great game descriptions. It was so easy to picture. Aaand, I am excited to the point of ridiculousness about next chapter! Insert squeal here!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love hearing that you guys enjoy the football aspect when I put it in.  I don't like when sports fics don't include the sport and I love meeting all these football gals in the fandom!  So great!

I am just as excited about the next chapter myself ;)  It's insane how much I can't wait to post it for you guys!  Soon, I promise!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

SQUEE!!! I loved this chapter SO much! Esme is my favorite. Of course, so is Alice, and Emmett, and Edward, and Carlisle, and Bella, and Jasper... Darn you for writing so many awesome characters! Now I can't find just one favorite. That was such a perfect blend of verbal diarrhea and graceful recovery; I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I'm so glad you love Esme...and the rest of them. hehe I have a hard time picking my fave in this story too, which is a refreshing change.  I'ms o happy you love the chapter.  So much fun writing it ;)  More soon!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review

I haven't laughed this hard in months!! I cannot emphasize enough how much I love your Charlie and Renée!! 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

Wow. This is the first time I've ever genuinely liked Lauren! I was almost as nervous about the interview as Bella was, but I loved it! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Good!  I wanted to write an atypical Lauren!  Glad you liked her :)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

SQUEAL!!!!!! This chapter was wonderful! I loved how Bella handled the Tanya debacle; it was very classy. But then Rose did what we all wanted to do the moment it was mentioned that Tanya was wearing white... I love how much Bella's confidence has grown since the beginning (if by beginning I mean chapter 2) and Alice is hilarious, as always. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Bella did keep her head, which wasn't easy, but she knew that a fight wasn't the way to go there.  Rose took it to the next level and Esme finished it off. hehe Perfect tag teaming I think :)   Bella's confidence in her relationship has definitely grown.  Which is good, now that they're out in the public eye.

So glad you liked it!  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

Oh, dip!!! Some shh is about to go down!!



Author's Response:

Heheh could be! ;)  Thanks for the review!  We'll see soon!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass

Would it be too much for me to tell you that I almost gave myselfa hernia from laughing so hard this chapter? Emmett clearly is an evil genius!



Author's Response:

Haha I love hearing that!  Don't wanna hurt you but love the laughs!  He's so awesome :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

Even with scary possibilites, there was still some humour injected (with Esme's tendency to overshare) regardless. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I generally have some humor in each chapter.  Gotta lighten it up :)  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

Charlie and Renée are effing hilarious!



Author's Response:

Hehe thank you!  I love writing that crazy pair :)

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

That game was so intense, it felt like the real thing!! I have basketball to tide me over, but even that's coming to a head about now! Soon it'll only be baseball... This is a terrible fate! Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love writing the football and hearing that you were involved with it!  Means so much!  Basketball is almost gone and baseball is still...just dragging along. haha I'm glad you're enjoying and I'll have more football for you soon!

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

banner

SIAU

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 20905
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This was a great chapter; everything just demonstrates how much Edward has grown up since the beginning of the story. He handled everything with Leah so maturely; it was obvious he really felt what was happening with her, and his desire to help was just so strong it took my breath away! All in all, this was a nice blend of drama, romance, angst, fun, and substantive lightness. I'm so glad Leah opened up about what happened; only when you openly deal with something like that can you move beyond it. Oh, and I loved the ending of this chapter, which Edward's silent vow to himself!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!  Almost done with the next one so we'll see how Edward's research goes.  :-)

Summary:

3 bloody oranges by Frankie

This love & vamps story is inspired by L'Amore delle Tre Melarance (The Love for Three Oranges), a fairy tale written in the 18th century by Gaspare Gozzi, to become later a Prokofiev ‘s opera. It was one of the favorite bedtime stories I requested from my grandmother. Of course in her version there were oranges, but no lemons at all ! In my version things might change. There will be passion, there will be danger, and a surprise at the end.

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8677 Read Count: 912
[Report This] Published: 23 Apr 2010 Updated: 03 May 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Princess Isabella

Is English not your native tongue? If so, you are doing a remarkable job! If not, the same!



Author's Response:

I am Italian and live in Rome. And thanks for the great compliment (I have also good editors, I have to admit).

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The end ... is the beginning

Hah! What a lovely end for these two! I particularly relish the expressions on the elders' faces if they were told their shapeshifting powers came from a diluted vampire line!



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you liked it! And the prejudiced attitude of the Quileutes in the Saga pissess me off, so I had my little revenge here.

Thank you for reading!

Summary:

Bella goes out for a girl's night out and ends up having a one night stand.

stories/7252/images/The_One_Night_Stand.jpg

Thank you to mkystich for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2526 Read Count: 1120
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aaaaaah!!! That ending is too mean! And hilarious...

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 293923
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

If this is an indication of your unbeta'd chapters, then you've got nothing to worry about! You've hardly made any errors, and pausing your updates would just hurt out feelings! I think this is great; I love the flashbacks. I'd love to hear what Bella would say to Rose and Alice if she explained the trials of high school!



Author's Response:

I've decided not to pause the updates! I'm glad you don't mind my writing.

The future will tell if Alice and Rose will find out about Bella and Edward's past!

Thank you for you review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

Thanks for the update! I don't think Bella went too easy on him, she's always been a forgiving character. I'm excited to see Bella's tattoo! As well as the "meet the parents" debacle that's sure to occur.



Author's Response:

Good, I was hoping I didn't make her too easy ;)

You'll get to see both the tattoo and Edward's parents next!

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

I'm excited for the shopping trip with Esme. And at the top, you said, "A/N: So, we are already on chapter 5. Maybe I'm too quick in the updates? ;)" and I have to say, there's no such thing on being too quick at updating!



Author's Response:

Congrats, you're the 120th review,

if you didn't get my message, contact me and I'll try again!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

I love her present! And when I found the photo of her on your "goodies" page, I squealed because of how adorable she is! I wanted to say that I'm really glad that Bella stood up to Edward and defended her choice of names (Elsa is a wonderful name!) when he made fun of it. Edward needs some of that to keep on coming...



Author's Response:

I know, I want one of those dogs as well, but they're too hard to get ;(

Thank you so much!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

I was one of the reviewers that got erased! I can't particularly remember what I said to you but there was something in chapter 13 that made me guffaw (in public) and I wanted to share that with you. I was trying to be self-contained, but as always, as soon as you're in public and stifling laughter, that's when the extreme laughter (complete with snorts) comes...



Author's Response:

I wish I could remember (if I ever saw the review, that is) because that sounds funny. And I would've LOVED to see that! haha, so funny! Although, very embarrassing ^^

Thank you for sharing it with me now, because it made me laugh! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

Yay! I love the end: I love your tits! Oh, and you too.



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

I'm still here! Don't worry about your fanbase; just be glad that you have a following on more than one website! I loved this chapter. Poor Edward! I felt so terrible for him; maybe an EPOV outtake for this chapter is forthcoming? I would appreciate it. And also, what was Alice calling about? She sounded pretty determined to speak to Bella. Is it important news, or is it just Alice being Alice? She's always been a bit domineering... Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!! :)

I will definitely do a EPOV of this! I wanted to do it in this chapter, but BPOV meant much more. So, yeah. When I have the time, there will be an outtake on this!

Alice didn't call for a special reason. I just put that in as a 'distraction'.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

Yay! I'm happy with the way everything worked out in this chapter. There was drama during Thanksgiving, but no worse than we expected; Renée was terrible (do we get to read her letter next chapter?) but Bella wasn't devastated by it, and Esme and Rosalie were both awesome! I'm proud of Bella for what she said when Esme apologized for inviting her parents without asking; I half-way expected her to just lie and say it was fine, but she told the truth instead. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

Thanks for the update! It wasn't too short at all, although the ending was a bit abrupt. Is Bella being a little overharsh towards her mother from her letter? I can see how it could look like she's recommending a divorce, but it could also mean other things! When I read the letter, I didn't have any of the same negative reactions Bella did. But then again, Bella had to live through all of the carelessness and neglect of Renée, so maybe she's right to be upset. I'm not sure, but either way, thanks for updating! Oh, and one last thing, I am very proud of Edward for turning down sex when it's not the right thing for them! Way to step up for all of mankind!!



Author's Response:

You're welcome! ;)

I know the letter could mean different things, but I intended it to be a little harsh.

Thank you for the review!

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

Well, the only pregnancy story I have is my Mom's when she was pregnant with me. Her water broke three months before her due date, so she and Pop immediately rushed to the hospital. She stayed there for 5 weeks, on bed rest with her legs raised so she could keep as much amniotic fluid as possible. They were running out of fluid quickly, so the doctors recommended a forced feeding tube so she (and I) could gain weight. They anticipated that I would be 2 pounds 14 ounces, but when they had to perform the emergency C-section (when the fluid finally ran out) I was 3 pounds 14 ounces!! Even though I was over 2 months premature, they didn't have to put me in the incubator, because my lungs were fully functional. The doctor anticipated that I would be physically small and delicate, and possibly some cognitive impairment, but I am 5'10" with a high IQ! So, Mom and Pop said I was a miracle child!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sharing that! :) It was a really interesting story!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

Too mean! I'm glad that Edward let her try again after such a ...painful earlier attempt. And also pleased that Alice and Rosalie were such supportive girlfriends what with the tutorial and all, when they could have just laughed about it. But really, again I say that you are TOO MEAN! Now we're all just going to be chomping at the bit, anxious for a new chapter! Update soon!

On another note, whilst I am glad that your vacation day was rainy (it's selfish of me, but I got an earlier chapter! Yippee!), all in all, I hope the weather clears up for you and you enjoy the rest of your fabulous time off! 

Even though I'm mad at you over the cliffhanger. ;-)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! I hope I can make it up tomorrow with the new chapter (A). I'm glad you liked the rest of the chapter, though! :)

And I've had some sun today, so now I need to catch up on my writing! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

She's so darn stubborn! I hope everything is fine, though! Thanks for the chapter, I hope you give us an update soon! Okay, I have one critique, and it's just a pet peeve of mine, but the word "literally" was misused when Edward is describing the beach house. "It literally screamed Bella and I had no problems in understanding why she had chosen it" only makes sense if there is an actual speaker in the house that shouts out "Bella!" over and over again. It's just a tiny thing, but literally gets misused all the time, and it bugs me. You made me really happy in the club scene, though, when you used "ravish" correctly! I always see people mistake "ravage" for "ravish" and that drives me even more crazy than "literally"!! Thanks again for the update! Bella's greeting to Charlie made me snort, it was so funny! It wasn't pretty.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I will take your critic to my heart and replace the word literally with practically as soon as it gets back from the beta! Thanks for pointing it out!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

So, I want to say that they should just screw Renée, because she doesn't deserve any consideration after being such an ignorant asshat to Bella earlier, but if she doesn't hear from Bella but from someone else, there's a chance she might come up and make a visit to them just to yell and be a jerk. So... tell her, but not in person? I don't know. I always liked Renée in the books, so I don't want her to be a jerk character, but she's always been inconsiderate and rather immature. Thanks for the update! 

Summary:

When a controlling, pregnant pixie tells you to do something, you better damn well do it. This is how Bella finds herself driving over to Alice's old apartment to pick up a random shoebox that Alice decided she just couldn't live without. The only issue Bella has is that Alice's brother, Edward, just moved in to the apartment. The same Edward that Bella has been in love with since she was 13. The same Edward she drunkenly kissed at the Christmas party 3 weeks ago and has been avoiding ever since....yeah, this should be fun.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4055 Read Count: 1379
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2010 Updated: 16 May 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Well, that was unexpected

I loved it! And I think it was at LEAST 20% plot! ;-)



Author's Response:

LOL, good to know. It definitely has more plot than my other oneshot :P Thank you for the review.

Summary:

2wos

Two women, strangers seperated by countries, until fate intervened; and changed two families lives forever.

AH - ONE-SHOT STORY FOR MY BFF DLPASH ON HER BIRTHDAY (SAT, MAY 22). LOVE YOU GIRLIE, WISH I COULD DO MORE TO SHOW YOU HOW IMPORTANT YOU ARE TO ME.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3724 Read Count: 893
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2010 Updated: 19 May 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, I loved this! Sweet and simple, it was the perfect length. Thanks for sharing!

Superhuman by lacedlove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

His love came to her just when she needed him the most...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1080 Read Count: 252
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 27 May 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful! Sexy but also sweet! Thanks for sharing.

Anomaly by outerbanxious Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Edward is heartbroken and dragged back to Forks by his family for the first time since leaving Bella in the woods fifty years ago.  He thinks she's dead.  What he finds in the woods while hunting may just be the surprise of his existence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3880 Read Count: 634
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2010 Updated: 30 May 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anomaly

Very wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25334
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

LOVE!! Did Edroar even take the letter? I love your characters; Jessica is so unintentionally hysterical! I am beginning to suffer from LCI myself...

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

HAHAHAHA!!! Mike's Tootsies, indeed. I loved this chapter for its character development. Edward is still Edroar, that's for sure, but he opened up a tiny bit. And that's enough. I wanted to thank you for Jake's book; it made me cry, but just like with Bella, it was a good cry? I'm suspecting Edward and Carlisle's respective fury and numbness have the same root cause: the loss of a mother and wife (again, respectively... Not the same for them both). With this in mind, I have no idea how he'll respond to Jake's book. It might be too close to home for him? 

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Ooh... I'm excited about Bella's metaphorical cookies coming out next chapter! Thanks for sharing with us!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 THE BOX

Everything about this chapter was exquisite. The tone devolved beautifully as the scene progressed, so the bordello-like, lust-filled haze of content confusion was made clear to the reader even as it was felt by the character. Space cakes, huh? With the Electric popsicles and now the space cakes, I'm gonna hazard a guess that our beloved masseuse (therapist) is building up an internal supply of LSD or some other hallucinogenic drug. How will this effect her LCI? (Laughter Control Issues; I very well may have forgotten the real acronym).

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

Oooh!!! I'm ridiculously excited about this upcoming chapter!! I reread this one about four times, just to get over the squee factor and read up on the actual details. I love the extremely observant Bella being completely obtuse, as she was quite often in this (and the previous) chapter! Thanks for sharing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gbb

Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12697
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Operation Spock Knows Best

AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! 

-Okay, let's ignore that CLIFFHANGER for a moment... I loved the reunion scene! Using Star Trek to win Edward back was just so perfect! But I am really feeling some sad love for poor neglected Mace. Or at least I was, before the end of this chapter. Any chance of an MPOV outtake? If I beg with puppy eyes? Pllleeeeeeaaaaasssssseeeeee????

Okay, now we return to our regularly broadcasted program- AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! EDWARD!! NNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

I am so sad. No, really. I feel a deep fondness and sorrow for Mace. And now he's gone. Is it bad of me to hope Bella is pregnant? Because then Mace can live on (kinda)... Thanks for your update; hopefully next chapter will give me good news to cure me of this despondency! 



Author's Response:

THank you so much for your review :)  I am glad you cared for Mace, I really loved him!! :(

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: In the Wake of Delusion

Clever chapter title! I loved Edward in this chapter; he was so accepting. I am SO sad that the story is ending... but I'm happy too, because E&B (And Hippy Alice/Jasper) totally deserve a happy ending. Oh, I mean, if it is a happy ending. I don't think you're mean enough to make us cry (AGAIN), are you?

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 248113
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Love!! I liked the flashback of sorts to when they first began seeing each other, and Edward's attempts at redoing and fixing his earlier mistakes. Thanks for sharing!!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 209484
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Wow. That answered some questions. Normally an Amber Alert would be widespread on the news, especially if it's a cute white kid from a "nice" family. The mixed up description explains some, but not all of the issues there. Thanks for updating! I am scared but excited for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Again, I love Tanya! And I adore what you've done with Irina. We were all prepared to hate her, pitchforks at the ready, and then she turns out to be a hurt kid, if you can call a 20-year-old a kid. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Thanks for the update! I love Jack! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. 


Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing. 
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Thanks so much for the update! I loved your Tanya. The fact that she just comes out of nowhere blunt and completely honest, just thrills me! She definitely wins the "best introductory line" award. Seriously: "Ms. Swan, let's cut the introductory bullshit and get right to the chase." that's just awesome.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday. On Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.


Now, my ever awesome Beta, Monica, has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Aaaah!! I'm super excited! I hope the family won't be terrible to Bella; if my child were gone and returned with a new mother, I'd probably be jealous and subconsciously blame her, or hold her somehow accountable. Not fair, I know, but it's hard to be grateful when you've missed out on your son's childhood!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Jack's not the only one who's nervous!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

AAAAHHHHH!!!! I'm so nervous about this meeting! First off, let me say that I'm very glad Rosalie had such a positive reaction. In all of the books, she's always had a "family first" attitude, and it continues in your story, where she is grateful to Bella for returning Jack, not resentful of her keeping him. Thanks so much for sharing! And next up, I want to see Edward's reaction to Jack (and Bella; I mean, "Well, hello there" sounds like a flirtation if ever I heard one), but I also want to see Victoria face some heat. And by heat, I mean whatever that bitch has coming to her, I hope it's painful. And harsh. Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

GAH!!! Tell Edward!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Summary:

After being best friends for so long, will Edward and Bella finally understand that they share an unbreakable love?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1439 Read Count: 122
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 21 Jul 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I loved this! The switches in perspective were great; I like that it switched from 3rd-person to Bella; Bella to Edward to Bella is just a little bit overdone! Thanks for sharing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella is a rising fashion photographer. She isn't as lucky in her love life as she is in her professional one. She's hired by Edward, an American model with great popularity in Europe, to take some pictures for his book. Will he be just what she needs, or just another thorn in her side?

Banner made by me. 

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Note: This is an O/S that as of now I have no intention to continue.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8595 Read Count: 1953
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Domino Effect

Whew. That was intense! Thank you for sharing; it was really astonishingly effective. Great description!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much... I was afraid I wouldn't be able to write in this voice but if liked it and thought it was intense it means I managed...

 

Thank you 

 

Ange xxx

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 76113
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for sharing! I love James and Laurent. I always felt bad for Laurent and Victoria in canon (not so much James, he was just a bit too sadistic), because they didn't know about an alternative diet until they were already too far gone. And in Victoria's case, I'd probably want revenge against whoever killed my mate, too! I like the idea of a great "fuck you, bitches, I own you all!" entrance to the reunion. Not literally, but I love the revenge of the successful former nerds!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I hope you will read the rest of this as I add the rest of it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61535
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Nothing about this chapter is a fail! I think it's a very important chapter, and it just emphasizes how seriously damaged Bella's psyche was by James, and she has every right to be particularly vulnerable considering the reunion fiasco. The betrayal of the man she loved is fresh on her mind, so who would blame her for believing (even a little bit) the woman who answered her boyfriend's phone? Thanks for sharing. 

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 309894
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

Hah!! I love the end of this chapter. The fact that Emmett bothered to ask Bella for permission to do the underwear modeling was just... adorable? It's kind of weird to use the word adorable to talk about Emmett in undies (because you're right, those Calvin Klein ads ARE killer!) but it's just his big-brother trait coming out.



Author's Response:

Check out the outtake I will post tonight titled The He-Man Incident.  Takes place when Bella is 5 and Emmett is almost 11.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Wild Turkey & Jedi Training

Hm... maybe they're going to give Emmett a prize for being the most enthusiastic guest over the age of 6? Or offer him a job? Yes. I bet that's it. 



Author's Response:

All the guesses have been great. The real plot will probably be anti-climactic after all this!  lol  Thanks for the review!